Line #115 FanFic/DuelNature


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3	''Duel Nature'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic by Eakin, centering around Twilight after she's nearly mugged on the way home from a late night of studying. Though she escapes unharmed, she dedicates herself to training in self defense. Her natural affinity for magic serves her well, and before long she's the reigning champ among the royal guard. Then, one fateful night, she grudgingly accepts a challenge from Princess Luna herself.
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5	[[HowMuchMoreCanHeTake It escalates into a death match.]]
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7	Furious with both her sister and her student, Princess Celestia decides to punish Twilight for [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking attempted regicide, wanton property destruction, and vandalizing a folding chair]] by sentencing her to six months of community service as Luna's personal bodyguard in the hopes that the two of them learn to get along again. On a trip down to the tropical town of Pensacolta, the pair get swept up in a plot to bring back an ancient evil Celestia and Luna [[SealedEvilInACan sealed away]] long ago.
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9	It can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/31925/Duel-Nature here]].
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12	!!Duel Nature provides examples of:
13	* ActionGirl: Twilight's really kicked her competence in this fic into gear. She becomes the queen of the sparring ring and even puts up a pretty impressive fight against the setting's resident [[PhysicalGod Princess of the Night]].
14	* AHandfulForAnEye: When cornered on a roof, the pegasus that's been stalking Luna [[spoiler: flaps her wings hard enough to blow sand and dust into Twilight's eyes, giving her time to get away]].
15	* AndThenWhat: [[spoiler: The fact that Twilight doesn't know what she wants out of her life is symptomatic of how badly it's spun out of control for her over the TimeSkip. Reinolds points out for her that, just because the immortal Princesses might have grand plans for her future, doesn't mean that going along with them would make her happy.At the end of the story she decides to spend a few months WalkingTheEarth in self-discovery.]]
16	* AntiMagic: Equestrians long ago developed [[InescapableNet nets]] that could [[PowerNullifier do this]] to any spell casters that got wrapped up in them.
17	* AttackItsWeakPoint: [[spoiler: Channel enough energy into the brain through the base of a unicorn's horn and you can put them into a coma. Even when the recipient is a [[PhysicalGod Physical Goddess]], they'll still be unable to sense magic around themselves afterwards.]]
18	* BadassBoast: Luna throws these out almost as a matter of course, but when she's mad she really takes it to the next level:
19	-->"'''''CAPTAIN, WE ARE PRINCESS LUNA OF THE NIGHT, MAIDEN OF THE STARS AND MOON, AND RULER OF THIS LAND! IN TIMES OF WAR AND STRIFE, [[YourSoulIsMine WE HAVE TORN THE VERY SOULS FROM OUR ENEMIES' BODIES]] [[EmptyShell AND LEFT THEM AS NOTHING BUT LIFELESS HUSKS.]] [[HurlItIntoTheSun WE HAVE THROWN THOSE WHO OPPOSED US INTO THE FURNACES OF DISTANT STARS]] TO [[KillItWithFire BURN ALIVE FOR ETERNITY.]] [[MindRape WE HAVE ENTERED THE MINDS OF OUR FOES AND INFLICTED UPON THEM THE EXPERIENCE OF SUFFERING FOR DECADES]], WHILE ONLY MOMENTS PASSED IN REALITY. NOW WE ARE GOING TO GIVE YOU ONE FINAL CHANCE, DO NOT THROW IT AWAY SO LIGHTLY. [[PunctuatedForEmphasis MOVE! ASIDE! NOW!]]'''''"
20	* BadassBookworm: Twilight is this in canon but this fanfic takes it up a notch with formal training.
21	* BerserkButton:
22	** Twilight knows all of Luna's, and uses them liberally in her attempt to defeat her. [[spoiler: This backfires spectacularly.]]
23	** Luna inadvertently manages to find Twilight's when she suggests that [[spoiler: in the grand scheme of things, her relationships with her friends aren't important]] during an ill-fated attempt to cheer her up.
24	* BigDamnHeroes: Reinolds stepping in to [[spoiler: stop Luna from murdering Twilight in a fit of rage.]]
25	* BodyguardingABadass: Twilight's new job-slash-punishment is guarding a goddess.
26	* BoxingLessonsForSuperman: Magic training for Twilight.
27	* BreatherEpisode: Chapter 6: Pep Talk. A non-canon comedic interlude before the three month TimeSkip.
28	* BrokenBird: Twilight doesn't take being suspended from her position as Celestia's pupil and sentenced to guard the pony who [[spoiler: tried to outright murder her]] very well.
29	* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: Twilight jams a magic {{BFS}} that was designed for the sole purpose of defeating the Ouroboros through it's chin and accomplishes nothing more than forcing it into a few days dormancy. [[spoiler: Fortunately this is enough time for Celestia and Luna to put it back in its can.]]
30	* CharacterDeath:
31	** Poor, poor, [[spoiler:Bronze Bell; he's shanked by Gumdrops]].
32	** [[spoiler: Gumdrops herself is crushed flat by the Ouroboros.]]
33	* ChainedHeat: Celestia hopes to invoke this between Twilight and Luna, with a royal decree instead of a literal chain. [[spoiler: It works. By the end of the story, Twilight's relationship with Luna is stronger than ever.]]
34	* ChairmanOfTheBrawl: Twilight uses a chair during her fight with Luna.
35	* ChekhovsSkill: Twilight learns to make large ice platforms on open water so she can jump across them to a boat, more or less for her own amusement. The ability comes in handy when she needs to [[spoiler: put a wall of ice between herself and some bloodthirsty seaponies]]
36	* CombatPragmatist: Twilight's developed in this direction and it serves her well once she's in life-or-death situations outside of the ring. She even has her very own copy of ''Dirty Tricks and Unsportsmanlike Conduct: A Combat Pragmatist’s Guide''
37	* CombatTentacles:
38	** [[spoiler: Seaponies. Watch out, or they'll grab you and drown you.]]
39	** Luna is able to use shadows to grab things (particularly Twilight during their fight)
40	* ComedicSociopathy: Luna wonders whether ''lighting something on fire'' will get her out of a socially awkward situation
41	* CurbStompBattle: Luna expects her sparring match against Twilight to be quick and easy. [[spoiler: It's not.]]
42	* DarkIsNotEvil: Luna. Sure, she's a [[PhysicalGod Physical Goddess]]. Sure, she's prone to [[UnstoppableRage minor temper tantrums]]. Sure, she'll [[spoiler:[[JackBauerInterrogationTechnique threaten to murder you]] if you you don't give her the information she's asking you for]], but she's really not that bad once you get to know her.
43	* DisproportionateRetribution: Everything Celestia heaps on Twilight for her actions during the fight are, technically, punishment for breaking a folding chair. In reality, they are punishment for other things (pride, slander, breaking a friendship, etc.) but this is the only official thing she can be charged with.
44	* DragonInChief: Gumdrop Giggles to [[spoiler: Bronze Bell]]. Both because the latter is more of an AntiVillain and because [[spoiler:she murders him when he tries to back out of their EvilPlan.]]
45	* DrillSergeantNasty: According to her, Captain Reinolds pushed Twilight pretty damn hard during the first few months of her training.
46	* DurableDeathTrap: All the local TempleOfDoom {{Booby Trap}}s still work just fine. Justified in that the temple enchantments were made specifically with RagnarokProofing in mind.
47	* ElementalPowers:
48	** Twilight's got a whole arsenal of them on tap.
49	** Luna uses the PowerOfTheStorm.
50	* EnragedByIdiocy: Twilight's reaction to learning the truth about the royal guard during the BreatherEpisode.
51	-->"Thank you for the offer, Captain. But now I think I would rather risk having a goddess unmake me from existence with the raw energies of creation than continue this discussion."
52	* {{Expy}}: [[Series/CSIMiami Horatio Mane]], with the expected QuipToBlack dialogue.
53	* EyeScream: Luna stabs [[spoiler:Ouroboros]] in the eye with her horn
54	* FalseCause: The royal guard patrols the city, and the crime rate is low. Of course, it was low before they started patrolling, too, but Twilight can't convince anypony of why that matters.
55	* FateWorseThanDeath: Rarity tries to roleplay an attacker doing the most vicious and terrible things she can imagine to help Twilight practice.
56	-->"I'm an attacker! I’m going to ''trim your mane!'' In a manner that’s ''not at all fashionable!''"
57	* FlashStep: Twilight's teleportation is equivalent to this over short distances. Unfortunately for her, [[spoiler:Luna knows how to shut it down.]]
58	* ForcedTransformation: Trying to mug the Element of Magic? Don't be surprised when you end up as a potted plant.
59	* ForScience: [[spoiler: Bronze Bell doesn't want to release the Ouroboros to use its power for personal gain. He wants to talk with it because it has seen thousands of years of history; the ultimate primary source!]]
60	* GetOut: After their fight, Luna tells Twilight that their friendship is over and she never wants to see her again. Celestia has other ideas.
61	* GoneHorriblyRight: Twilight's attempt at psychological warfare during her sparring match with Luna was supposed to upset Luna and make her unable to fight properly. She succeeded [[spoiler:and was almost murdered for it because Luna was ''that'' upset]].
62	* GoodCopBadCop: Luna threatens to murder Ample if she doesn't tell her what she wants to know, but she was bluffing. Probably.
63	* GotVolunteered: Reinolds teaches Twilight how to fight because he suggested it, and Celestia made sure of it.
64	* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Ample Booty, criminal and former mook, helps Reinhold in the climax and later joins the Royal Guard.]]
65	* IShallTauntYou: Twilight's plan to throw Luna off her guard during their fight involves taunting her so she will be to upset to fight tactically. [[spoiler: [[DoNotTauntCthulhu It works, but also ends up making things much, much worse for her]].]]
66	* ImprovisedTraining: Nothing hones speed, agility, and reaction time like playing tag with [[GenkiGirl Pinkie Pie]].
67	* IncrediblyLameFun: Twilight and Luna start to re-bond with one another when Celestia orders Luna to [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment rework Equestria's 740,000-page tax code]] as part of her punishment. The two end up laughing uncontrollably while telling jokes about asset depreciation formulas.
68	* INeedAFreakingDrink: Luna's revelation that the theories he's developed over fifteen years of study are completely wrong, that he's identified an artifact of world-shaking power as an ashtray, and that the ancient religious document he's spent the last month trying to decipher [[spoiler: is actually an ancient takeout menu]], prompts Buried Secrets to start taking pulls from a hip flask in the middle of the afternoon.
69	* {{Invisibility}}: A trick most duelists know, but not considered useful since anyone worth hiding from will be able to 'see' the magic you're using to hide yourself [[spoiler:unless you've blinded that particular sense beforehand]]. If you do use it, it helps to throw in some {{Ventriloquism}} so you can still talk to the pony you're hiding from.
70	* IMeantToDoThat: Luna's entrance into the gymnasium.
71	-->"YES! The gymnasium wherein our elite guard ponies hone their abilities! That is, of course, the building that we knew we were visiting when we came in through the roof. It is exactly the building which we were entirely meaning to visit, and [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial certainly not one that we chose at random!]]"
72	* ItAmusedMe: Luna's motivation for challenging Twilight to a duel boils down to "it beats making awkward small talk".
73	* JustToyingWithThem: Luna does not take Twilight seriously in the first part of their duel. When Twilight realizes this, she's not pleased.
74	* LargeHam: Luna is in full "'''ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE'''" form in the first half of the story.
75	* LivingForeverIsAwesome: Luna's opinion is that a mortal pony's lifespan is far too short to accomplish anything of true merit and only by living ''through'' eras, rather than digging through their remains, can one understand them. This opinion makes her InnocentlyInsensitive to the mortal ponies around her.
76	* LivingShadow: Luna has one [[spoiler: and she can use it to strangle ponies.]]
77	* LovableNerd: Bronze Bell is a history nerd, who's quickly smitten by the equally endearing Twilight Sparkle. A shame they both have NoSocialSkills.
78	* {{Macguffin}}: There are three artifacts maintaining the seal of the SealedEvilInACan. Luna implies that trying to use them to release the monster and control it is doable, but would be a Very Bad Thing.
79	* MagicallyBindingContract: The Oath of Binding that Luna uses to confine Ample in a single room takes the form of a magically enforced promise not to leave. However, one can use ExactWords and escape with LoopholeAbuse.
80	* MalevolentArchitecture: The underwater temple will try to kil anyone who enters it. Of course, it was designed that way intentionally.
81	* MeaningfulName:
82	** Whenever Luna decides to go incognito, she usually picks names like "Selene" or "Artemis" or "Phoebe." When Twilight points out that her cover would be a lot better if she didn't always pick names associated with the moon, Luna reveals that this is actually an InvertedTrope
83	-->''"We would have you know that they were not associated with the moon before we started using them as identities in ages past. We are hardly to blame for ponies leaping upon such associations at the merest whiff of deific power," said Luna. "Honestly, we move ONE MOUNTAIN..."''
84	** Golden Heart invokes this trope. [[spoiler: [[MeaningfulRename Amble Booty chooses it because she wants to live up to it]].]]
85	* NamesToTrustImmediately: Among the royal guard of Canterlot there's a recruit named "Golden Heart". [[spoiler: Ample Booty wants to live up to this name.]]
86	* MetaPhorgotten: "It’s always extra satisfying to kill two birds with one god-summoning blood magic ritual, ya know?"
87	* MilesGloriosus: Reinolds uses an [[SecondHandStorytelling altered version]] of the story of Twilight's fight with Luna, where he plays a much bigger role than he really did, to pick up mares at a local bar. One night Luna's actually there and calls him out on it, [[spoiler: accusing him of selling himself short and understating how awesome he actually was because she's there as his [[IncrediblyLamePun wingmare]] and they planned the whole thing out in advance.]]
88	* MinoredInAsskicking: If Twilight was already like this in the show itself, she's stepped up to a Friendship/Ass Kicking double major here.
89	* {{Mooks}}: Gumdrop's opinion of her own crew. She's rather unconcerned about losing a few here and there to [[spoiler: deathtraps and hungry seaponies]] if that's what it takes.
90	* MyDefenseNeedNotProtectMeForever: Reinolds doesn't need to block Luna's magic forever, [[spoiler: only until Celestia shows up.]]
91	* NeckLift: After Twilight taunts Luna just one too many times (by stomping on several of her [[MyGreatestFailure greatest failures]]), she lifts Twilight using a tendril of pure shadow.
92	-->'''Princess Luna:''' ''([[TranquilFury in a deadly calm tone]])'' "Please, Twilight, tell us again how weak and pathetic we are. Do go on some more about how inferior we are to the perfect and wonderful Celestia. Or perhaps you’d like to make a speech about the wonderful power of friendship. You always seem so fond of those."\
93	''The black tentacle tightened its grip and the only sound that escaped Twilight's lips was a raspy, choked-off gasp.''\
94	'''Princess Luna:''' "No? But you were so very chatty before. What a pity. Now, how about we do a little experiment together? Usually a choking pony will turn purple. I'm sure you knew that, Celestia tells us that you very much enjoyed studying physiology at her Academy. But you are already purple. I wonder what color you will turn? Any hypothesis?"\
95	''The tentacle squeezed Twilight's throat closed entirely. Panic seized her. An abstract, detached portion of her mind reminded her that she’d read just last week that depriving the brain of oxygen would lead to unconsciousness in 8.3 to 12.1 seconds, on average. Sure enough, she felt darkness creeping in around the edges of her vision. She had to get free. But how?''
96	* NoodleIncident:
97	** The consequences of breaking a Pinkie Promise. All that's know for sure is that the last colt who broke one [[spoiler: woke up in a foreign city covered in cake batter with no memory of the last three days, and that he'd suddenly developed a crippling fear of confetti]].
98	** The story ends just as Luna is beginning to tell Twilight about the Zombie Gerbil Horde that attacked after a careless librarian placed a necromancy primer in the children's section. Then the author went and wrote that [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/76785/the-late-afternoon-of-the-zombie-gerbil-horde story as well]].
99	* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: Whenever one of the royal sisters does something particularly embarrassing, the other will remind them of it for decades.
100	* ThePowerOfFriendship:
101	** Twilight and Luna were decent friends before their duel and Celestia believes that ChainedHeat will make them better friends. [[spoiler: It does.]]
102	** [[spoiler:Gumdrop Giggles defies this by murdering Bronze Bell when he tries to convince her that unleashing [[SealedEvilInACan Ouroboros]] isn't worth losing one another.]]
103	* PowerOfTrust: Twilight's faith in Bronze Bell inspires him to try to decipher the location of the TempleOfDoom. [[spoiler: He gives them a fake location, but they find it anyway.]]
104	* ProperlyParanoid: Twilight suspects foul play after bad stuff starts happening around her and Luna. Although as a bodyguard, it's her job to be.
105	* PunchPunchPunchUhOh: Twilight is more than a little outmatched during her head-to-head fight with Luna. The she decides to start pressing Luna's BerserkButton...
106	* RankScalesWithAsskicking: Luna might be an underappreciated figurehead politically, but cross her and [[CurbStompBattle she will destroy you]].
107	* RansackedRoom: This happens to Twilight and Luna's hotel room and tips them off to the EvilPlan.
108	* RevealingCoverUp: The baddies' assumption that Luna and Twilight are in Pensacolta to stop them, rather than just on vacation, is what drives them to [[spoiler: try to assassinate them and break into their room]]. Which of course leads the two to try to stop them.
109	* RoofHopping: Gumdrop Giggles crosses rooftops the old fashioned way. Twilight teleports instead.
110	* RooftopConfrontation: Twilight spots a suspicious pony on a rooftop and they engage in a brief fight.
111	* RoyalWe: Luna refers to herself as "we" most of the time. She tends to drop it when she's trying to be sincere.
112	* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Lyra and Bon-Bon have come to Pensacolta for a nice, uneventful beach vacation. The first thing they see upon stepping out of the train station is Twilight, Reinolds, and Luna tracking down a {{Macguffin}} to save the city from the resident SealedEvilInACan.
113	-->"[[GenreSavvy Buck this. We’re vacationing at a ski lodge this week]]."
114	* SealedEvilInACan: The Ouroboros was trapped by the royal sisters ages ago and now someone wants to wake it up.
115	* ShipperOnDeck: Luna thinks Twilight should take a night off and go on a date with Bronze Bell. [[spoiler: She never gets the chance.]]
116	* ShipSinking: [[spoiler: In the chapter named ''Ship Wrecked'', Bronze Bell is revealed to be a villain, thus sinking his ship with Twilight.]]
117	* ShoutOut: Quite a few, including ''Film/{{Aliens}}'', ''WesternAnimation/BatmanBeyond'', ''Franchise/IndianaJones'', ''Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda'', ''Series/{{Firefly}}'', ''Series/CSIMiami'' and ''VideoGame/WorldOfWarcraft'' and even ''Webcomic/TheOrderOfTheStick''
118	* SoProudOfYou: [[spoiler: At the end of the fic, Celestia tells Twilight that she has done such a wonderful job as a bodyguard and learned so much from the experience that she doesn't have to fulfill the second half of her 'community service' sentence.]]
119	* SpecialPersonNormalName: The sociopathic stalker and crime lord? [[spoiler: Gumdrop Giggles]]
120	* {{Spoiler}}: In-universe. Twilight acquires an advance copy of ''Daring Do and the Spear of the Windigos'' and teases one of her friends with tiny bits of advance knowledge. She also spoils the story for the BigBad by accusing him of ripping off the plot.
121	* SpitTake: Invoked by Luna on Celestia in her advice to Twilight. "We recommend waiting until she has just taken a mouthful of tea for maximum effect."
122	* TheTease: According to Luna, her sister is "utterly, utterly shameless and heavy-hoofed" when she hears somepony has a crush on her.
123	* TeleportSpam: Twilight's strategy for beating Luna in their head-to-head showdown is repeatedly casting short range teleports. It keeps her just ahead of Luna's attacks.
124	* TempleOfDoom: One of the three {{Macguffin}}s is stored in one of these. The temple's name literally translates as "Building of Horrible Death".
125	* TemptingFate: Luna insists that a few seaponies don't present a significant challenge, and will be dispatched easily. Cue the appearance of something much bigger...[[spoiler: which is dispatched easily. The resident [[PhysicalGod Physical Goddess]] is more than capable of [[Film/{{Aliens}} nuking it from orbit]] without effort.]]
126	* ThereWasADoor: In the first half of the fic, Luna makes a dramatic entrance by crashing through the window ceiling of the Sparring Dome.
127	* TimeAbyss: Luna is a thousand times Twilight's age, if you believe her claims. She also likes to curse in dead languages and make fun of archaeologists' woefully inaccurate assumptions about ancient civilizations.
128	* TimeDissonance: Luna's dismissive attitude towards mortals and their accomplishments drives Twilight nuts, eventually [[spoiler: and leads to her giving Luna [[WhatTheHelloHero verbal hell]] for disparaging the work ponies trying to accomplish great things with their limited time..]]
129	* TimeSkip: The three months that happened before the fittingly-named 'Three Months Later' chapter.
130	* UnfortunateNames: Ample Booty. She's good at finding treasure, OK?
131	-->"Hey, when you grow up poor and your name is 'Ample Booty' you've basically got two possible careers. Trust me when I tell you that 'pirate' is better than the other one."
132	* {{Unishment}}: Rainbow Dash thinks that Twilight's sentence might be this when she learns that Twilight got to read an advance copy of ''Daring Do and the Spear of the Windigos''.
133	-->"You beat up a Princess and they punish you by letting you read the book I’ve been dying to get my hooves on for nearly a year? If I punched Princess Celestia, like, right now, could I get in on this too?"
134	* UnnecessaryRoughness: Both Twilight and Luna get far too serious about their duel, once the gloves really come off.
135	* UnskilledButStrong: Twilight, before she starts training, had immense magical ability but little skill in its combat potential. Reinolds quite explicitly points out that staying that way is a good way to get yourself killed in a real fight.
136	* WartsAndAll: [[spoiler: Twilight comes to terms with Luna's eccentrics and immortal mindset and the two become friends.]]
137	* WeaksauceWeakness: Luna's protection spells were designed specifically to be used in formal magical duels, and can stop every kind of energy or power that Twilight can throw at them. However, [[spoiler: since physical contact between duelists was strictly forbidden when Luna learned to duel, they do nothing to block a pony's body.]]
138	* WhamEpisode: Chapter 5. By the end of it, Twilight's been [[spoiler: publically humiliated, suspended from school and sentenced to spend the next six months taking orders from the pony who's made it clear she wants nothing to do with her and nearly killed her.]] Opinions vary on whether this was excessive or Celestia gets a pass because she [[OmniscientMoralityLicense knew it would turn out okay]].
139	* WhamLine: [[spoiler: "I never thought the day would come when I would be ashamed to call you my student"]] is the moment Twilight realizes exactly how badly she just messed up.
140	* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotSymbolic: InUniverse. Professor Buried Secrets thinks the story of the great sea serpent Ouroboros is an allegory for piracy and colonialism, while the three artifacts that were used to seal it away represent the balance of power between three separate branches of government. Luna corrects him that, no, there [[AllMythsAreTrue actually was a gigantic sea serpent]]. She would know since she was there and sealed it herself.
141	* WhatMeasureIsAMook: Trapped in an [[spoiler: underwater temple that's filling with water and hungry monsters]], Twilight tells herself that the smart thing to do would be to teleport away and leave Ample to die. In the end she [[spoiler: finds she can't go through with it and rescues her.]]
142	* WhatTheHellHero: Celestia scolds Twilight and Luna for what happened during their duel. Twilight's is quick and brutal, while Luna's degenerates into a three-hour-long screaming match with her sister.
143	* WizardDuel: Luna vs. Twilight engage in a formal magical duel. There are no rules other than "don't kill your opponent".
144	* YouFightLikeACow: Rarity considers insults the most important type of self-defense technique. In fact, she considers it the ONLY important type of self-defense technique.

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