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1->'''Raonar''': Zevran Arainai. I suppose I shouldn't be surprised that you managed to turn a codex of poisons and their antidotes into something that sounds like a porn novel.\
2'''Alistair''': Wait... [[BigWhat What]]?
3-->--
4->'''Alim''': This is probably the point where I explain your folly. But you know what? I am a sadistic demon hater. So I'll just say one thing.\
5'''Pride Demon''': ...\
6'''Alim''': You lose.\
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8[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6072033/1/Dragon-Age-The-Crown-of-Thorns This]] fanfic is what happened when a certain [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2410827/Karmic_Acumen fanfic author]] took the massive plot of ''VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins'' and mixed it with equally massive servings of RuleOfCool, RuleOfFunny and RuleOfDrama, making sure to provide a healthy dose of CharacterDevelopment for everything to meld seamlessly into what is one of, if not the longest of ''Franchise/DragonAge'' fanfictions on the internet.
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10And the HiddenDepths of the characters have yet to be explored fully.
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12Alternatively, this story is what happens when you take a human noble lady, a female city elf, a male dwarven commoner, a Dalish young man and a male elven mage and, along with the resident HeroicBastard Alistair and the rest of the canon companions, place them under the command of a dwarven prince who, depending on how one looks at him, can qualify as a WisePrince (GuileHero). His first act was fundamentally changing the events of the Dwarven Noble origin story, although [[WhamEpisode not in a way that anyone would expect]].
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14The story is already longer than 60 chapters and passed the 700,000 words mark a while ago...and it's only about half-done.
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16!!Provides Examples Of:
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21* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Raonar can turn any sword he currently uses into one, and he can even [[spoiler:cut from a distance.]] Alim can turn even other peoples' weapons into this.
22* ActionHero: Alim and especially Faren (particularly when he's in Dark Wolf mode).
23* ActionGirl: Gwen and Kallian, of course, plus Leliana.
24* AngstComa: The DN falls into one that lasts just about 12 hours when he [[spoiler:suddenly learns his father died and he thinks it's his fault.]]
25* ArtisticLicenseMedicine: [[spoiler:Raonar at once point treats his brother Trian's blood loss by cutting open their palms and fusing them together with magic.]]
26* AscendedExtra: [[spoiler:Trian Aeducan]] is this hands down. [[spoiler:Gorim Saelac]] and [[spoiler:Frandlin Ivo]] also qualify.
27* AuthorFilibuster: A really large, detailed rant at the end of Chapter 48 involves the author railing and raging at anyone who likes Bhelen.
28* BackToBackBadasses: [[spoiler:Faren and Raonar during the proving, for a short while at least.]]
29* BadassAdorable: The protagonist and Kallian Tabris imply that Faren qualifies as this. Granted, they do it mostly to tease him, but it holds truth anyway.
30* BadassBoast: One would expect the protagonist to get these, but it looks like Faren [[spoiler:The Dark Wolf]] wins this.
31%%* BadassCrew
32* BadassLongcoat: Alim becomes this [[spoiler:after they first get to Denerim]].
33* BadassNormal: Gwen and Theron... [[spoiler:for now anyway.]] Oghren and Sten fit here as well.
34* BattleAura: Wynne, when she draws upon her Spirit of faith.
35** [[spoiler: Raonar can go from just glowing eyes to shining white from his whole body, all the way to looking a lot like an ascended being from Franchise/{{Stargate|Verse}}, since that's what Honor more or less is. Unfortunately, the more power he uses, the more painful and likely to cripple him it gets.]]
36** As a partial subversion, [[spoiler:Alim never used a battle aura, even though he's the most powerful of all characters in the story. He does sometimes get DramaticWind though.]]
37* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: Kallian and Raonar get some of these.
38* BerserkButton: For some, they are clearer than others.
39** For Raonar: Desecrating either his mother's or dead girlfriend's memory does not end well. Likewise, don't pick on Faren or harm children. It is heavily implied that the Grey Wardens' near-inability to have children is something that he isn't very happy about. As such, he seems to go into PapaWolf mode regardless of what child is being threatened/harmed, to the point where he [[spoiler:snaps at Isolde for leading to Connor's possession and, later, at Alim for being scarier than the demon itself when he entered the fade to slay it, thus almost traumatizing the kid.]]
40** For Faren: Threatening his loved ones in any shape or form.
41** Oghren can make his own whenever he wants to go into berserker rage.
42* BewareTheNiceOnes: See above. [[spoiler:Do NOT desecrate the memory of any of Raonar's loved ones. Even being a demon won't save you.]] Also [[spoiler:do NOT deliberately harm Faren. Ever. Although, true enough, a TranquilFury seems to be the response in this case.]]
43** For Faren, [[spoiler:anything endangering Rica, Kallian and, probably, Raonar qualifies.]] Ironically, [[spoiler:Raonar himself was on the wrong side of this for concealing the fact that he always knew Rica was Bhelen's concubine.]] Since he [[spoiler:hates Bhelen's guts,]] Faren was not pleased.
44* BigBrotherInstinct: Raonar, the DN, develops this for Faren, the DC, especially after [[spoiler:being trapped in the Fade]]. That young Brosca [[spoiler:doesn't mind is a massive understatement]].
45* BigBrotherMentor: Again, Raonar is this for Faren. Also, recent chapters, as well as a [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6501419/1/Premeditated one-shot]] by the same author reveal that [[spoiler:Trian was this to the DN when they were younger, before their falling out]].
46* BigDamnHeroes: At one point, Sten, of all people, [[spoiler:enters the DN's mindscape, via a spell Alim learned from the Spirit of Duty, and helps the exiled prince fight off the Archdemon's psychic attack that would have probably lobotomized him otherwise.]]
47** Something similar happens several chapters later.
48** For that matter, the protagonist himself pulls one off in chapter 4, when he [[spoiler:saves Trian's hide]].
49** Faren also has one in chapter 4, when he [[spoiler:takes out the entire mercenary backup party sent to dispose of Trian]]. He even has a [[ChekhovsGun health potion for the DN]].
50* BlatantLies: Oh boy, does [[spoiler:Bhelen]] try to feed Faren bull_hit.
51* BlessedWithSuck: Raonar is a [[spoiler:MagicKnight]] because he [[spoiler:harbors a tear in the veil.]] Unfortunately, while he did get some of the [[spoiler:spirit warrior abilities form Awakening]], this seems to have caused at least as may problems, some of them rather serious.
52* BlueBlood: Raonar, Gwen and Alistair.
53* BothSidesHaveAPoint: The DN appears to feel this way about every fight/quarrel in existence.
54* BreakTheHaughty: [[spoiler:Trian gets put through this, with spectacular results.]] Soon, [[spoiler:Bhelen will probably get his share too.]]
55* BreakingSpeech: [[spoiler: The one the protagonist gives to Bhelen is not only devastating psychologically to the point where the latter can barely think or speak at all, it actually goes on for about two or three chapters.]]
56* BrutalHonesty: The DN uses this when [[spoiler:talking to Cailan and Loghain in Ostagar and when giving Isolde a tongue-lashing.]] Also, [[spoiler:he uses it on Trian when they finally meet again.]]
57* CallBack: There are several, although two are the most prominent.
58** The first one is in regards to a major event in the backstory of House Aeducan, [[spoiler:namely a 10 year-old Trian almost dying/getting paralyzed for life after taking the brunt of a fallen bookcase to protect the 7 year-old DN.]] a young [[spoiler:Cailan Theirin]] was present at that -and he even mentions it himself [[spoiler:in Ostagar]]-, as was [[spoiler:Maric.]] This is part of what causes the clusterfuck in this version of the DN origin and is invoked during the later chapters.
59** It is revealed that [[spoiler:Duncan relayed to Raonar the events of Dragon Age: The Calling.]]
60* CallingTheOldManOut: [[spoiler:Raonar does this to Endrin's face and, later, in a letter.]]
61* CatapultNightmare: The DN goes through this after his first serious [[spoiler:psychic clash]] with the Archdemon, brought about indirectly by learning that [[spoiler:his father was dead.]]
62* CharacterDevelopment: None of the characters go by ignored.
63* ChekhovsGun: The letter that King Endrin got, as stated by the protagonist, even though [[spoiler:the time for its full effects to be shown hasn't arrived yet.]]
64** The dagger that Faren got from Raonar, the same as the one offered by the weapon merchant in the DN origin, [[spoiler:not only enables Faren to help out with the death faking, but, much later, almost kills Raonar himself, leading to the discovery of yet ''another'' troublesome side effect of the tear in the Veil.]]
65** The potion given to [[spoiler:Faren]] by the [[spoiler:DN]] in the first chapter is the same one [[spoiler:the former feeds to the latter in chapter 4]].
66* ChildrenAreInnocent: The limitless potential that the protagonist sees in the younger generation is one of the main reasons he hasn't given up on the world or become a full-fledged KnightInSourArmor, although he does qualify as a DeadpanSnarker from time to time.
67** Amalia, the Kitty demon-bewitched daughter of that man who knows Shale's activation word, manages to [[spoiler:bring Raonar out of a HeroicBSOD after the ColdBloodedTorture and MindRape he suffered at the hands of that desire demon, before his BerserkButton was pushed and he went into an UnstoppableRage that nearly ended with him becoming an abomination.]] Amalia just asks him (and pushes him until he gives a straight answer) if he needs a hug and he straight-out says he does (eventually), getting some evidence that there is something worth fighting for, unlike what being raised in Orzammar would make one believe.
68* ComesGreatResponsibility: For some reason, the stronger Raonar and, by extension, everyone else gets, the bigger problems they have to deal with.
69* ContinuityNod: [[spoiler:In the game, Gorim is crippled en route to Denerim. Here, he remains in Orzammar, but ends up similarly disabled because of an assassin he intercepted.]]
70* CosmicPlayThing: Raonar feels this way but only gets annoyed when other people suffer because of it.
71* CrapsackWorld: May or may not become a DefiedTrope. Orzammar seems to be the third kind [[spoiler:after the succession arc]], ergo Immutable CrapsackWorld. However, the primary protagonist vehemently refuses to settle for anything less than type four/mutable,[[spoiler: [[{{Determinator}} even when saddled with a stigmata-like skewered arm and heart that defies any sort of healing.]]]]
72--> [[spoiler:"Everything I've done turned out for the worst, and that can ''only'' mean that I just haven't been doing a fucking thing right. It can ''only'' mean that. The only alternative is that Orzammar is determined to commit suicide, that no matter how much I or anyone else struggles, nothing can make any difference anymore, and I just can't accept that. I ''won't''. I ''refuse''!"]]
73* CrashingDreams: Oh boy, Kallian.
74* CrazyPrepared: Raonar. He takes everyone and everything he can think of into account, and then some. It's why they all [[spoiler:survived Ostagar]], among other things. Alim has shades of this as well, although he doesn't need to bother since he knows the commander has things covered.
75* CulturedWarrior: Raonar, Alistair (or so he says given his tutoring), Gwen (probably) and Sten, even though he doesn't quote the Qun much.
76* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:Faren against the strongest form of the Sloth Demon.]]
77** Also, [[spoiler:the fight against Uldred and his minions. Simply put, the main cast doesn't wait for him to transform]].
78** [[spoiler:"The Dark Wolf" versus Seweryn during the Grand Proving]].
79** [[spoiler:"Duran" against Wojech Ivo during the same event]].
80* CursedWithAwesome: Raonar [[spoiler:feels this way about his intelligence because he knows that, if he ever got to rule, the schemers in Orzammar would just learn from him how to be more subtle, and that is the last thing he wants.]]
81* DeadpanSnarker: Several of the main characters.
82* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:Raonar makes one with a Pride Demon in Chapter 48, then uses a LoopholeAbuse to get his part of the deal without consequences. Granted, he does almost die in the process, but it was all according to plan in the end.]]
83* DeathFakedForYou: The major diverging plot point compared to Canon. [[spoiler:Raonar fakes Trian's death and paints himself the murderer on purpose. The eldest is none too pleased because it happens against his will, and so totally out of the blue (for him anyway) that he has no idea what the frak happened when he is confronted with the situation.]]
84* DefeatMeansFriendship: Averted. Raonar and Faren [[spoiler:gain each other's trust by having a duel that the former starts out of the blue, right in the middle of Dust Town's slums. It is an aversion because they end up having too good a time and, after reading each other's hearts by exchanging blows, so to speak, they both collapse to the ground and start laughing their hearts out because of how great they're both feeling.]] All in front of Gorim too...
85* {{Determinator}}: The DN was forced to become this by all the crap he's had to put up with. Sten seems to be this as well.
86** As a better explanation for the DN, he keeps [[spoiler:pulling one gambit after another even though the fact he grew up in a Deadly Decadent Court could have long ago turned him into a self-centered cynic. He also displayed a high physical resilience in the deep roads, up until he stumbled upon a certain someone else and finally decided to allow himself to faint after two days of no sleep, fighting, getting repeatedly injured, tried for fratricide that never happened, dragged through streets in chains, spat on and generally not having a very nice time.]]
87* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: [[spoiler: In one of the earlier chapters, Raonar is about to die and he momentarily links minds with the Archdemon, at which point the dwarf basically tells it to go screw itself.]] It comes back to bite him and everyone else in the rear later. Hard.
88* DisproportionateRetribution: Most of the characters feel that the DN protagonist lashes out at Isolde a bit too strongly, although, true enough, she did outright accuse him that he doesn't mind killing children. Nevertheless, he makes her cry and even [[spoiler:deliberately makes her think he is going to/did kill Connor.]] Fortunately, he'd only gone upstairs to give the kid a hug and a SoProudOfYou, plus [[spoiler:talk to the demon possessing him face to face.]]
89** When Connor [[spoiler:is finally exorcized,]] the DN gets quite angry at Alim's [[spoiler:impersonation of the Grim Reaper]] and, instead of congratulating him and whatnot, drags the mage over to give him a WhatTheHellHero rant in private. Alim counters it by calling him out on how he reacted too harshly, showing off his own GuileHero traits by perceiving one of Raonar's biggest regrets.
90* DoomedByCanon: Subverted. The game automatically killed off, more or less, all potential wardens except for the player character. Here, all of them become Wardens, although two of them get the chance only because of the protagonist's direct action.
91** [[spoiler:Trian survives ''and'' becomes a WisePrince.]]
92** Played straight by [[spoiler:King Endrin, Cailan and Duncan.]] Still, [[spoiler:Cailan at least gets to have a death scene that could be seen as sad by some, while Duncan has a DyingMomentOfAwesome that takes ''half a day''.]]
93* {{Doorstopper}}: 650,000 words and still only about half done. No one seems to be complaining.
94* DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent: [[spoiler:Frandlin Ivo]] of all people. [[spoiler:He starts off by wanting to gain glory and, eventually his own command. Then Bhelen comes along and either threatens or bribes him and his family. He joins his scheme against the DN, despite wanting to be a good guy. Then he joins the DN's expedition, where he fights to the best of his ability just so he can get him over to where he gets framed or murdered with his elder brother. But wait, the DN always knew of his involvement, and after a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre, Frandlin joins him... and his role is to ''continue'' to work for Bhelen by framing the DN for Trian's murder, all the while concealing the fact that the heir apparent is very much alive and well. So, to sum up, Frandling Ivo is working for the Ivo family, Bhelen and the dwarven noble protagonist (and, by extension, Lord Harrowmont and Prince Trian), with the main motivator being his own wishes: to be a good guy and continue to have a choice in his actions.]]
95* DramaticPause: The protagonist does this on purpose sometimes, because he ''likes'' being dramatic once in a while.
96* DramaticShattering: In Orzammar, the only reason anyone realizes that [[spoiler:Raonar is pissed off at how Faren was slammed with Leske's betrayal]] is because the prince [[spoiler:grips on his glass of wine hard enough to crush it in his bare grasp, blood and all]].
97* DramaticWind: Alim makes his own sometimes.
98* DualWielding: Faren uses two daggers, sometimes linking them with a 3 meter-long chain to use them as mid-range weapon. He also gets some hidden wrist blades.
99* DudleyDoRightStopsToHelp: Played perfectly straight by Raonar. You'd think that a politician that spawns one gambit after another and who has the whole world on his shoulders would be a bit less eager to go into potentially deadly situations with just his dog as help. Turns out that [[spoiler:he doesn't think too hard on whether or not to totally go out of his way in the ''opposite direction'' (about a day's journey too) and check on Honnleath and if anyone was still alive there,]] even though [[spoiler:he'd finally seen the first human after roaming the Korcari Wilds for weeks, during which time he almost got killed several times, nearly dyed of starvation and refused a [[DealWithTheDevil deal with Flemeth]] that she would not outline until agreed upon. And his armor was so rusted and worn that it didn't even survive the trip to the golem village, although, true enough, the demon shattered most of it.]] Raonar does reason that it's important to assess whether the horde really reached so far west in such a short time or if it's just a group of stragglers. One would think this is just him looking for justification, but that wouldn't fit with his BrutalHonesty [[HonestyIsTheBestPolicy policy]] that he uses on everyone, including himself, meaning that he manages to play this trope AND avert HonorBeforeReason altogether (after all, he ''had'' [[spoiler:gained some nifty magical abilities to tip the scales).]]
100* DyingMomentOfAwesome: Duncan, when he and the DN [[spoiler: get cornered in Ostagar. Not only does he haul the protagonist off the fortress's ledge and shield him with his body from the fall, smashing his back (and ending up paralyzed and with bad internal injuries) in the process but, later, after said dwarven noble carries him away from the battle (and Duncan had been telling him to leave him behind), Duncan pushes him out of the way of a blight wolf's sneak attack and takes it himself. And he ''still'' survives enough to tell him that ''only'' Grey Wardens ca kill Archdemons, although he doesn't manage to explain why and how it's done.]]
101* DynamicEntry: Faren [[spoiler:interrupts the NoHoldsBarredBeatdown that the final form of the Sloth demon was administering to ''everyone else at once'', including the protagonist and resident OneManArmy blood mage Alim Surana, with a FlashStep and a roundhouse kick to the face, followed immediately by another FlashStep and a descending axe kick that drove the demon into the 'ground' so hard that it left behind a huge crater and blew a huge dust cloud into the air. And it all happened in little over an instant.]]
102* EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler:Trian.]] And he feels really bad about it because he thinks he doesn't deserve it.
103* EccentricMentor: Maybe not old enough to qualify, but the DN makes a point of acting like this. He even [[spoiler:deliberately lets/encourages the other members of the party to think he's a kinslayer just so the shock of the later revelation can be strong enough to make them grow past the point where they assume so many erroneous things so easily.]] And he is perfectly honest the entire time.
104* AFatherToHisMen: The DN acts like this in the origin story and, later, when he assumes position as warden commander, although one could say it's more of a brother to his men, since he's not that old.
105* FireForgedFriends: Raonar and Faren, although the Battle of Ostagar more or less makes all seven Grey Wardens qualify for this.
106* FlashStep: Yes, this of all things. [[spoiler:Faren and the Sloth Demon both use this when they have it out one-on-one.]] ItMakesSenseInContext...
107* {{Foreshadowing}}: At this point, anything mentioned in the fic can be seen as a ChekhovsGun or Gunman or whatever else. [[spoiler:Alim's 'rose' is just one of the minor examples.]] Also, readers should know that pretty much everything Raonar does, however minor, is part of some contingency plan.
108* FromACertainPointOfView: Raonar makes sure he can say this about ''every single statement he makes''.Ever. Anything he doesn't want to lie about is phrased as a question or hypothesys. It's what allows him to actually remain the arguably most honest and upfront of all characters in the story, even though he still manages to mislead and make people believe whatever he wants them to. Of course, it helps that the things he is willing to do [[spoiler:for the sake of others and his ideals,]] like his [[spoiler:ZeroApprovalGambit,]] are generally outside the realm of what people consider possible.
109* FromBadToWorse: Even though what the main cast does never stops being awesome, things seem to be getting more and more complicated and, for Raonar at least, [[spoiler:bad enough that he's ''bled from his nose and eye sockets'' two times already.]]
110** Looks like the most recent [[spoiler:psychic clash]] between the protagonist and the Archdemon concluded with the latter [[spoiler:becoming more self-aware and smarter,]] whatever that implies.
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114* GambitPileup: Orzammar is this, to a small extent, by nature. It gets more complicated...
115* GambitRoulette: Raonar lampshades this trope during his TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Bhelen.
116--> "And that so-called plot of yours, Stone's mercy, it was so incredibly outlandish that a five year-old could have poked holes through all of it. "You're my elder, I'll respect whatever decision you make" you said when you tried to [[spoiler:goad me into killing Trian]]. If that's the driving force behind your actions, isn't [[spoiler:Trian]] your elder too? Makes your words a huge red flag, doesn't it? The only reason I so quickly made you think I agreed to the whole [[spoiler:kinslaying]] was because I didn't want to risk bursting into laughter if I accidentally made you say something like 'Of course I'll [[spoiler:help you kill our brother,]] you've always been there for me'. And just what the hell were you thinking when you sent that stupid scout spy? What was he supposed to do, start a violent confrontation when I finally ran into [[spoiler:Trian]]? Just how stupid do you think soldiers are to listen to the ravings of a lunatic? And speaking of armies, how in hell were [[spoiler:Frandlin]] and that idiot supposed to have any credibility when it came to [[spoiler:framing me]] if my soldiers were right there, especially since Dugan, that idiot, and his ambush were so obviously not part of your initial plan? Do you even realize how many sodding coincidences your so-called plan actually relied on, even not counting how big the possibility was of any of your 'moles' getting killed in that expedition? Or how the chance of you actually timing your arrival properly was so absurdly infinitesimal! You speak of politics and planning, but don't you even know that any plan which relies on more than 2 or three things going right is doomed to fail! I put more effort into making that scheme work than you did!"
117* GenreSavvy: Quite a few people, especially Raonar, Alim and Faren, show shades of this.
118-->[[spoiler:'''Raonar''': Truly, the most appropriate punishment for a smug villain is a death proportionally anticlimactic to all the damage he caused.]]
119*** Made even better by the fact that [[spoiler: during the entire rant, Raonar is holding Uldred's head as if in Hamlet. [[LampshadeHanging The story itself even mocks it]] .]]
120** When preparing to [[spoiler:face Uldred]]:
121--> [[spoiler:'''Raonar''': "From what I understand after discussing with Alim, Uldred will likely be a sort of abomination by now. There will probably be a whole bunch of other, gooey guys like the ones we encountered before too. Now, on a related note, Gwen will be able to confirm that this Uldred was at Ostagar and we have since learned that he was in league with Loghain Mac Tir. Alistair, you can start adding that to your "List of reasons I hate Loghain" later. Anyway, my point is that that mage seemed to have a stick up his rear even then, before the battle, so he'll probably want to enter some stupid villain's monologue. Now, if this were a story, we'd probably end up fighting him and whatever demon he consorted, plus a few mind-controlled mages if anyone screws up reading the Litany."]]
122** When commencing the above fight:
123--> [[spoiler:Now, from all the books he'd read, about adventures and epic battles, Raonar knew this was the point where the big bad turned into some wicked beast that the heroes would have to valiantly fight and defeat. It would eventually drag out into a battle of epic proportions, during which everyone would be able to test their mettle, find out some sort of special meaning in life and maybe even state an aesop or two. Bonus points if the room got wrecked in the process. Unfortunately, no one in the group was even inclined towards that kind of fight right now since they had seen more than enough of themselves during that experience in the Fade.]] *Cue CurbstompBattle*.
124** For the DN it's justified because of [[spoiler:all the books and stories he read while growing up.]]
125* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: Raonar juxtaposes a backhand to a long and tight CooldownHug in order to snap Faren out of his HeroicBSOD.
126* AGlassInTheHand: See DramaticShattering below.
127* GlowingEyesOfDoom
128** [[spoiler:Raonar's eyes glow white when he draws upon magic.]]
129** [[spoiler: Alim's eyes can go red or light blue, depending on whether he uses blood magic or a spell of true sight.]]
130** [[spoiler: Faren's irises sometimes shine gold instead of the normal hazel, when his magic immunity shrugs off some spell or another.]]
131* GoodIsNotDumb: The DN is a morally upright strategist in a DecadentCourt. Stuff happens.
132* GoodIsNotNice: Sometimes.
133* GuileHero: Raonar and Alim
134* HannibalLecture: Raonar performs a few. Examples include his [[spoiler: speech to the assembly after he was arrested and brought to trial]] and [[spoiler: his discussion with Bhelen when the latter comes to see him in his cell.]]
135* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Frandlin Ivo]] pulls one after getting a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech ''and'' a YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech. He is currently a triple / quadruple agent, depending on whether or not readers see his ''own'' interests as separate from those of [[spoiler:his house, Orzammar at large, Bhelen and, of course, the dwarven noble protagonist.]]
136* HeelRealization: [[spoiler:Trian]] has a very serious one. It takes weeks / months to sink in and pushes him into a depression that lasts nearly as long, to the point where he's unable to sleep unless he collapses from exhaustion, this being the reason why he begins to abuse his own body through frantic workout. And this is ''while'' [[spoiler:Gorim]] was trying to offer some emotional support. Eventually, he manages to get better when he [[spoiler:discovers his talent for sculpting]] but [[FromBadToWorse crap hit the vents]] again soon after. Ironically enough, the [[spoiler:nearly fatal accident]] he sustained during this period ended up improving his mood, though [[spoiler:it really was mostly Gorim's doing (the mood lifting, not the accident).]] Quite the mother hen that one.
137** [[spoiler:King Endrin Aeducan]] doesn't really need one, since he seems to know all along that the crap he's pulling is wrong, but he does it all anyway. Still, he only really laments it during his [[spoiler:deathbed scene, when he thinks Trian is a hallucination.]] He eventually does play it straight when he sees just ''how'' wrong he was when the fact [[spoiler:Trian is alive and right there, holding his hand,]] sinks in. Too bad he turned it all into an [[spoiler:excuse to die sooner instead of living, like his sons had respectively ordered / begged him to.]]
138* HeroicBSOD: The protagonist gets several.
139** Faren goes through one after they escape Lothering, although the one caused by [[spoiler:the Fade nightmare]] is close to an outright AngstComa that he goes through while ''still standing''.
140* HeroicRROD: The dwarven noble falls into a coma and his mind and body begin to break down, literally and figuratively, after [[spoiler:the second psychic clash with the Archdemon.]] The only reason he doesn't die is because [[spoiler:Alim, Sten and Leliana go BigDamnHeroes at the telepathic level]], of all things.
141* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Raonar does seem to have a small case of this, but it's more frustration at being proven right all the time, even in things he hopes he'd be wrong about.
142** Faren plays this very straight though, not understanding [[spoiler:why Raonar sent him away so he could live while he stayed behind in Ostagar to try and help Duncan. He also doesn't understand why the prince bothered with a no good thug like him in the first place.]] Kallian only partially manages to help him get over it, and he does seem to be slowly growing out of it as he sees that people believe in him.
143*** And then there's the nightmare...
144** As in the game, Alistair thinks very little of himself and is wracked with guilt, though not as badly as in Canon.
145** Oddly enough, Kallian herself sometimes thinks like this, starting after she learns that [[spoiler:she was supposed to die in the Joining but Alim and Raonar managed to help her cope with the blood. Basically, she doesn't always feel like she deserves to be in the Order.]]
146* HilarityEnsues: This happens when you [[spoiler:tell Zevran to write a codex about poisons and their antidotes.]]
147* HonestyIsTheBestPolicy: While he may phrase his words as questions and hypotheses when manipulating people, none of Raonar's actual statements were ever lies. This is why [[spoiler:he's so good at getting his way, since he doesn't have to worry about revealing anything because so-called enemies, particularly Orzammar nobles, always assume he's lying so they'll not realize the truth until it is too late for them.]]
148* HotBlooded: Gwen is afflicted with this, though it [[spoiler:tones down after her dream.]]
149* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: Theron only ''slightly'' plays this for laughs in a chapter. The extent of the IKnowYouKnowIKnow has to be seen to be believed though.
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151-->[[spoiler:So, basically, Theron knew that Raonar and Alim knew some things they didn't, and he also knew that Raonar knew that he knew this, but did not bother pointing it out or taking measures to prevent the tattooed elf, in the future, from coming to know of everything else Alim came to know, as long as said mage did not come to know of the hunter's knowing of what he thought everyone else did not know, meaning that Theron did not have to bother getting into the habit of finding lounging spots any way farther, since Raonar either did not have anything specifically against it or knew he was not going to inform the others of his knowing that Alim, who did not know that he knew of his knowing of things that only Raonar knew more about, knew more than what he thought he knew the others did.]]
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153-->[[spoiler:Theron had continued to not-truly-eavesdrop on them occasionally, wondering when the crooked dwarf would come forth and inform Alim that, despite what he thought he knew, what he really knew was less than he believed, considering that he thought he knew for sure that no one besides the commander knew what he knew, and that, by extension, no one else knew he knew of those things, when in fact Theron had always known them without his knowing, Alim having been prevented from coming to know that the Dalish elf had always known of his knowing, as well as of Raonar's knowing that the latter knew whatever Alim knew of what he believed only the two of them knew, plus that Alim did not, in fact, know that Theron knew of his supposed knowing that no one besides the exile knew of his knowing of those things (a conviction which was false).]]
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155* InformedAttractiveness: The fic will try to tell you that Raonar is "objectively" handsome and that no woman could possibly resist his looks. Except, the only people in the fic who ever display any attraction towards Raonar are [[LovableSexManiac Zevran]] and [[ImpliedLoveInterest Leliana]].
156* InformedFlaw: One of the [[AuthorFilibuster many]] reasons the author thinks that Bhelen would make a poor king is that apparently, Bhelen would piss off the Assembly so much that nothing would get done. Yet, in the first act, Bhelen apparently has enough political clout to have half the Assembly in his pocket and frame Raonar for murder.
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158* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: [[spoiler:Trian.]] Yes, for real.
159* KeepingSecretsSucks: Raonar and Alim are revealed to [[spoiler:know more about the Blight, the Archdemon and Grey Wardens in general than everyone else.]] As such, they are probably under a lot more stress than the others, even setting aside the responsibilities of the first and second in command, respectively, that they have. Still, this may be an aversion because, as revealed by the latest chapters, they likely would just come out and tell what they are, or bluntly order the others not to ask questions, if said others did find out they were being kept in the dark. Oddly enough, everyone is so used to not being told everything by the commander that they don't bother with it, actually trusting him to know what he's doing.
160** Of course, to this are added the secrets that the Grey Warden Order has to protect even at the cost of human lives, although no situation has arisen where this was necessary (and it's unlikely Raonar would fail to come up with a creative resolution).
161* KnightInSourArmor: Raonar might not act the part, but the fact is that he knows (and always knew) that his home nation is a rotten pool full of liars and that the rest of the world isn't that different either, confirmed by the betrayal of Ostagar and everything else. The only reason he lived so far and even shone brighter than all others of his kind (and even manages to inspire people to be more than they are) is because he still sees hope for the future. All he wants is to see worthwhile things go on existing (and he makes sure to notice them, however rarely they show up, because he lives in the present as much as he can). Of course, it helps his disposition that some adults his own age ([[spoiler:Gorim, Frandlin Ivo and especially Trian]]) are true of spirit as well.
162* LampshadeHanging: Just enough.
163* LightningBruiser: Faren, especially [[spoiler:while curbstomping the sloth demon.]]
164* LoopholeAbuse
165* LotusEaterMachine: The dreams they are trapped in during the Circle Tower quest, naturally.
166* LoyalAnimalCompanion: The two mabari war hounds and the wolf to their respective masters.
167* MagneticHero: Apparently, the protagonist is a lot less enthused by it than one would expect, to the point where, in chapter 51, he actually [[spoiler:outright tells Alim that it scares him how strong a loyalty (and how fast) he can instill in others. The reason is that, despite his best efforts, he and the others end up in life and death situations where the other members of the group might choose to sacrifice their health or lives in his stead, for one reason or another.]] Made even more complicated by the fact that the protagonist appears to actually [[spoiler:put active effort into ''discouraging'' his potential close friends from becoming too devoted.]] It's one of the few things he fails at, and it bothers him. A lot.
168* MessiahCreep: The protagonist [[spoiler:doesn't want to be king because he knows he'll be considered something on this level when he shows how things really are. The reason is because he wants Orzamamr to become '''less''' dependent on single figures and think for themselves.]]
169* MistakenForGay: Happens to Raonar, both in-story and out of it. Apparently, his feelings for Faren were misunderstood.
170** More recently, new arrival Oghren is wondering the same thing, only about the latter.
171* MoreDakka: Dear Scott, Alim combines this with ImprobableAimingSkills during the battle of Ostagar, when he goes apeshit on the darkspawn horde and becomes a weapon of mass destruction [[spoiler:by using the power of all the freshly spilled blood on the battlefield, and then some.]] It is later revealed that [[spoiler:he was aiming for a HeroicSacrifice, burning out his life force, hence his [[SuperMode mega powerup]], but survived indirectly thanks to a deal he made with the Spirit of Honor, although said deal is only specifically revealed many chapters later.]] See StormOfBlades below.
172* MundaneUtility: Alim uses magic to improvise portable freezers and to keep the party camp warm at night during winter. Also, dwarves use enchantment to make things like self-filling basins of self-purifying water.
173* MurderIsTheBestSolution: Bhelen really seems to think killing everyone who gets in his way is the best solution, as he does in the game. This is probably the reason why the dwarven noble repeatedly calls him an idiot while having a higher opinion of Trian.
174* [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg My Enemies and Zoidberg]]
175-->[[spoiler:"Greetings, my fine lords and ladies of the Assembly." He smiled his warmest smile and looked at Bhelen. "And hello to you too, little brother."]]
176* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Oh boy, Faren's Fade nightmare was him murdering the few people he cherished most. After Raonar backhands him out of his HeroicBSOD, he lapses into a strong case of this before the motherload of all [[BearHug bear hugs]] brings him out of it and makes him realize it was all AllJustADream. This is followed by TearsOfJoy and [[TookALevelInBadass taking a level in badass]] soon after.]]
177** [[spoiler: Trian also goes through this phase, eventually, but it lasts months and gets worst when he thinks his brother is dead. Fortunately, said brother shows up literally at his doorstep the very same instant he finished writing in his journal the apology he thought he'd never be able to give him in person.]]
178** Endrin is something of a special case because [[spoiler:he knows full well what he's doing is wrong from the get go, but he still discards his second son because of wanting to prevent a so-called scandal. As if the firstborn being murdered by the second son wasn't already scandal enough.]]
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182* NeverGotToSayGoodbye: It is more or less obvious that the DN feels this way. Meanwhile, King Endrin ''inverts'' this by [[spoiler:actually wanting to die before getting a chance to see his second eldest son again, because he's too ashamed and afraid to face him after everything that happened]]. And he does just that, despite the fact that [[spoiler:Trian was ''right there'' and was practically begging him to not give up.]] MyGodWhatHaveIDone indeed.
183* NobleWolf: Anor, the wolf who partners with Theron. He is [[spoiler:found wounded in the Korcari Wilds while the would-be wardens are looking for the treaties. They heal him.]] A couple of days later, he [[spoiler:saves their lives by gathering his pack and taking out some darkspawn stragglers that had followed them when they retreated from the hopeless Ostagar battle.]]
184* NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization: In chapter 51, Alim entangles Morrigan and forces a kiss on her when she tries to get away from him. Of course, the fic doesn't think that Alim is doing anything wrong because she "enjoyed" it, and apparently she wasn't "persuasive" enough when she tells Alim to let her go.
185%%* OhCrap: Happens a few times.
186* OneManArmy: Alim during [[spoiler:the battle of Ostagar.]]
187* TheParagon: Three guesses who.
188* PerpetualMotionMonster: The Darkspawn.
189* PlayingBothSides: Subverted. [[spoiler:It looks like the wardens are going to play both sides when the DN goes to Orzammar in disguise and has Gwen assume nominal leadership, but what really happens is that they play neither side.]] The result is [[spoiler:them practically forcing both candidates in a position where they '''have''' to do everything in their power to assist the order. Of course, since Harrowmont is in on everything, this means that Bhelen is being manipulated thoroughly.]]
190* PoorCommunicationKills: Averted. [[spoiler:Trian buys into Bhelen's otherwise obvious ploy not because he and his other brother can't understand each other, but because the DN ''deliberately'' gave the eldest reasons to hate him while repeatedly foiling plots against him]].
191* PowerPerversionPotential: Raonar alludes to this during a certain discussion with Alim about his blood magic.
192* RazorWind: The DN's ranged sword attacks could qualify as this, more or less.
193* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Raonar is a master of this. It's good for the world that he doesn't do it often and mostly with the goal of helping the one on the receiving end. Unfortunately, he sometimes goes too far.
194** Isolde also gets one.
195** As does Bhelen, [[spoiler: ending with Raonar refusing to become a kinslayer and offering Bhelen a chance to kill him in front of the entire council.]]
196* RecurringDreams: Raonar's near death experiences involving his [[ShoutOut Fortress Of Solitude]], essentially his mindscape, collapsing could be this, or visions, or some sort of retreat into one's self...
197* SaidBookism: Sometimes the author will use the word "said". For the most part, it is this. The author also likes to add bizarre modifiers to his dialogue tags. At one point, Duncan says something "aristocratically".
198* SensitiveGuyAndManlyMan: Both played straight and averted by Faren and Raonar ''at the same time,'' whenever only the two of them are present, with the castless thug/criminal/rogue, oddly enough, being the sensitive one. Faren turns out to be ''very'' emotionally vulnerable after his Fade nightmare, so Raonar deliberately begins to exhibit more strength of character and equal doses of care and bluntness, even snarky humor, for the younger dwarf to draw upon. BigBrotherMentor indeed.
199* SerialEscalation: The sheer length of the fanfic is one thing, but there never seems to be any shortage of new plot twists and ways to slam readers with another development involving [[spoiler:yet another scheme, possibly in regards to the Archdemon and the Fade.]]
200* ShipperOnDeck: The DN sometimes subtly (and sometimes not so subtly) nudges the romances between some members of the party forward. Being Faren's BigBrotherMentor allows him to quite easily help him out, while his approach to the relationship between Gwen and Alistair takes the form of the [[ThePlan many plans]]. So far, his efforts have been successful and, though he was called out on his Matchmaker's complex, it wasn't in bad spirit, since [[spoiler:his machinations didn't step on anyone's toes, probably because he never actually invaded their privacy (read:steered Faren and Alistair in such ways that ''they'' ended up asking him for advice).]]
201* ShoutOut: A few, although some could be considered aversions.
202** At one point, [[spoiler:Raonar is having a BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind and considers summoning lightsabers, but decides against it.]]
203--->[[spoiler:'''Eight swords of transparent, shimmering crystal appeared around him, all of them floating according to his intent. Double-edged and long they were, reflecting the entirety of that 'place' as they flew into position, as a wall of death in front of him. He considered making them look like energy weapons, long, scorching cylinders of blue, green, yellow, violet and red plasma, but between the idea itself and the humming noise they would make when swung, he felt like that would be too much of a cliche for some reason.]]
204** While in the Deep Roads, while fighting [[spoiler:Pride]], Raonar channels focused magical energy into a "[[Manga/{{Naruto}} palm-sized ball of energy, vaguely blueish, spiraling under his intent, compressed to the limit, this somehow only accelerating the movement.]]"
205** Again, while in the Deep Roads, this exchange, similar to one between Gimli and Aragorn in ''Film/TheLordOfTheRingsTheTwoTowers'', occurs:
206--->'''Faren''': "[[FastballSpecial Toss me.]]"
207--->'''Shale''': "I beg your pardon?"
208--->'''Faren''': "I can't jump that far so I want you to toss me."
209--->'''Shale''': "...As it wishes"
210--->'''Faren''': "Wait... don't tell the [[{{LovableSexManiac}} Antivan.]]"
211--->'''Shale''': "[[BlatantLies Not a word.]]"
212* ShowyInvincibleHero: Alim Surana qualifies as this, especially after chapter 48.
213* ShutUpHannibal: [[spoiler:Faren shuts the sloth demon up with a dagger through the mouth.]]
214* SoProudOfYou: [[spoiler:Faren gets one from the DN. The fact that the latter deliberately timed it to show up more or less out of left field made the effect all that more acute.]]
215** [[spoiler:Connor Guerrin, Arl Eamon's and Isolde's son, also gets one.]]
216* SortingAlgorithmOfWeaponEffectiveness: Unlike the game, it is subverted at least as often as it is played straight.
217** [[spoiler:The dwarven noble gets Maric's Blade, one of the mightiest weapons in Thedas, ''before'' leaving Ostagar]] and has had it ever since.
218** Similarly, it is heavily implied that [[spoiler:Raonar's initial sword, which he had as early as the very first chapter, and the one that ends up in Melec's hands]], is seriously badass, though no details have been given yet. The same goes for his set of armor.
219** The dagger [[spoiler:gifted to the dwarven noble by the weapons merchant in the first chapter]], and which [[spoiler:Faren got later that day]], is not only infused with electricity enchantments, but it can even pierce cleanly through ''silverite massive armor'' without getting worn.
220** Gwen started off with [[spoiler:a silverite greatsword and heavy armor of similar material]]. As if those weren't good enough, she got [[spoiler:Yusaris, the greatsword Dragon Slayer, and Sophia Dryden's massive Warden Commander armor soon after]].
221** Alistair gets [[spoiler:Duncan's Shield]] ''the first time the party gets to'' ''[[spoiler:Denerim]]'', and this is actually quite a bit after he gets [[spoiler:Duncan's sword, the exact instance being upon ''first'' arriving to Redcliffe]].
222* SpiritAdvisor: [[spoiler:Honor might be an aversion, since he never really taught Raonar anything except the basics of controlling the unstable magical flow of the tear in the veil. The DN's moral and intellectual evolution has remained independent from the spirit's influence. In fact, this being Honor, he'll never really try to overstep his bounds. It would not be honorable after all.]]
223* StealthMentor: As outright stated, [[spoiler:Raonar became this for Trian. It works [[TookALevelInKindness very]] [[WisePrince well]].]]
224* TheStoic: Theron (mostly) and Sten.
225* StormOfBlades: [[spoiler: Alim uses something like this during the battle of Ostagar]] but it qualifies better as a storm of needles. Made of blood. And that's just one of the things he does.
226* StrokeTheBeard: The DN does this often, especially when he's plotting something.
227* SuperMode: [[spoiler: Raonar has one, although it can end with him getting his limbs destroyed if he's not careful.]] It [[spoiler:definitely doesn't guarantee victory either.]]
228** As in the game, Wynne can use her magic to push anyone into something of the sort, with no risks.
229** Of course, Wynne has that spirit inside of her, so calling upon it automatically counts as a super mode, especially considering the nimbus effect.
230* SupernaturalSensitivity: The Grey Wardens can sense the darkspawn and each other. The range varies from several hundred meters to several miles. Raonar and especially Kallian have wide ranges, though it's as much a curse as it is a blessing.
231** Alistair senses use of magic, being a templar.
232** The dwarven noble protagonist gains the same ability as above after he trains with him.
233** [[spoiler:The DN]] also seems to have developed a psychic awareness in the aftermath of his most recent psychic clash with [[spoiler:the Archdemon]]. He can [[spoiler:sense ''anyone'' now, like a radar, not just darkspawn and Grey Wardens.]]
234** Alim seems to have been given some sort of [[spoiler:spiritual implant, so to speak]] that lets him [[spoiler:keep track of the protagonist and his state of health]].
235** Oghren and Raonar exhibited the dwarven Stone Sense on one occasion.
236* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial:
237-->[[spoiler:Trian Aeducan was a prince. The Crown Prince of Orzammar, last, proud city of the Dwarves. He had been drilled on protocol as he grew up and knew well all the manners suited to one of his status. As such, he most assuredly did ''not'' start gobbling up the absurdly delicious food like some starved, uneducated peasant, knowing that no one was there to see. He remained perfectly civilized and satisfied his immense hunger steadily and with the utmost temperance, never exceeding the top speed that spoon-feeding can manage without spilling the contents everywhere. He was the epitome of aristocratic grace each and every moment of it. Really.]]
238* TakeAThirdOption: Or, in Raonar's case, '''make''' one.
239* TeamDad: Raonar is ''very'' protective of his subordinates, even as he holds them in line strictly, isn't that right [[spoiler:Zevran]] and [[spoiler:Wynne]]?
240* TeamMom: Wynne tries to act the part a few times. [[spoiler:She isn't entirely successful, given that she gets landed with a direct lecture from Raonar. Fortunately, the latter is quite reasonable... mostly.]]
241* TearsOfJoy: [[spoiler:Faren goes through a heavy dose of this after his nightmare.]]
242** [[spoiler:Trian also breaks down because of relief when he and his brother make peace at last. Granted, the former is mostly just happy to know the DN is alive.]]
243* TearsOfRemorse: Same as above, during the same respective sequences. It really looks like the protagonist has the uncanny ability of bringing people to tears, no matter who they are.
244* TemptingFate: Raonar does this by accident in [[spoiler:chapter 23 and is called out on it by Faren later]]. He avoids doing it afterwards.
245* ThirdOptionAdaptation: [[SchrodingersPlayerCharacter Which Warden origin is the main character(s)?]] All six of them.
246* TookALevelInBadass: The only one of the six Origin wardens that hasn't, so far, received one is[[spoiler: Gwen.]]
247* TookALevelInKindness: [[spoiler:Trian.]]
248* TranquilFury: The DN goes into one when [[spoiler:he gets to see what nightmare the Sloth Demon put Faren into]].
249* TrueCompanions: The Wardens and their group, although Morrigan is still her cold self and Sten is mostly devoted to the DN and not so much towards everyone else. Shale is... well, Shale, and Oghren [[spoiler:just recently joined up.]]
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253* UndyingLoyalty: [[spoiler:Gorim, of course.]] Sten also has shades of this.
254* UnexplainedRecovery: [[spoiler:Alim]] said that he got better in chapter 17 when [[spoiler:Hawke states that no one could have survived casting the blood magic vortex spell that broke Darkspawn lines when they were betrayed by Loghain.]]
255* UnstoppableRage: A certain desire demon pushes Raonar into this, even though rage almost never manifests itself in him, so it was quite the feat.
256** Faren averts this by being susceptible to a CooldownHug.
257* UnresolvedSexualTension: Gwen-Alistair, Alim-Morrigan and Faren-Kallian have yet to consummate their respective relationships.
258* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlFriend: [[spoiler:Jarvia was responsible for destroying Faren's last good thing in Dust Town, namely his friendship with Leske. Kallian took matters into her own hands.]]
259* WarriorPrince: Alistair and Raonar.
260* WhamLine: Oh yeah, the protagonist did it.
261-->[[spoiler: '''Raonar:''' Ladies and gentlemen… I have just made the Archdemon smarter, and if it was not self-aware before, it definitely is now.]]
262* WhatTheHellHero: The DN gets some of these. [[spoiler:One of them leaves him with broken ribs and a snapped jaw. He expected it and let it happen, but it still hurt because healing magic didn't work on him until recently.]] And even now it's not a given.
263* TheWisePrince: Raonar, obviously. Alistair also seems to be turning into this, as is [[spoiler:Trian.]]
264* XanatosGambit: [[spoiler: Whether or not he fools Bhelen into thinking he bought into his lies, the evening prior to the mission the dwarf noble has a final talk with the king and Trian, exposing Bhelen's machinations. If Trian/Endrin believe him, perfect. If they don't, he intends to give up on the shield search half-way and intercept whatever mercenaries are hunting Trian. Either way, regardless of everything else, and in case Trian gets himself killed, the DN warden makes sure Baizyl Harrowmont in his army just in case someone needs to vouch for him (someone with much more credibility than Frendlin Ivo). In any event, there is no way he can be framed and no greater danger for him to get killed than the one posed by the darkspawn.]] True to form, he wins. [[spoiler: He still went with the exile on purpose]].
265* XanatosSpeedChess: It was [[spoiler:started years prior the actual start of the story, between two certain people and is still in effect, although only one of them knows it.]]
266* ZeroApprovalGambit: [[spoiler:What Raonar does before leaving Orzammar, unsure if he'll ever get to return, what with the danger of imminent death and all.]]
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