History YMMV / WhiteDevilOfTheMoon

7th May '16 1:43:34 PM legomaniac90
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* WriterOnBoard: Bissek goes out of his way to give the Senshi the short end of the stick, using an altered canon that incorporates elements cherry-picked from both manga and anime canon with the goal of making the Senshi look as weak, useless, and morally bankrupt as possible. The whole issue with Serenity killing herself, for instance, is taken from the manga, while the Senshi themselves display abilities only on par with their heavily-nerfed anime counterparts. The villains that the Senshi struggled with for over a year are also trivially dispatched within weeks of the TSAB showing up. And let's not even get started on the Picoha omake.

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* WriterOnBoard: Bissek goes out of his way to give the Senshi the short end of the stick, using an altered canon that incorporates elements cherry-picked from both manga and anime canon with the goal of making the Senshi look as weak, useless, and morally bankrupt as possible. The whole issue with Serenity killing herself, for instance, is taken from the manga, while the Senshi themselves display abilities only on par with their heavily-nerfed anime counterparts. The villains that the Senshi struggled with for over a year are also trivially dispatched within weeks of the TSAB showing up.up (granted, the Senshi took out the same number of Dark Generals as the TSAB, and Nephrite only lost to Vita via a GroinAttack he didn't expect). And let's not even get started on the Picoha omake.
15th Dec '15 4:19:21 PM infernape612
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* CriticalResearchFailure: [[spoiler: In the final chapter, one of the [[{{Mooks}} youma]], who happens to be capable of VoluntaryShapeshifting, uses Reinforce's form to get close to Hayate and Signum. Unfortunately for her, she exposes herself by addressing them as "you two" while Signum was in a unison with Rein Zwei. Rein Zwei called her out on it, and Signum took her out.]]
30th Oct '15 12:30:14 PM Anddrix
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* WriterOnBoard: Bissek goes out of his way to give the Senshi the short end of the stick, using an altered canon that incorporates elements cherry-picked from both manga and anime canon with the goal of making the Senshi look as weak, useless, and morally bankrupt as possible. The whole issue with Serenity killing herself, for instance, is taken from the manga, while the Senshi themselves display abilities only on par with their heavily-nerfed anime counterparts. The villains that the Senshi struggled with for over a year are also trivially dispatched within weeks of the TSAB showing up. And let's not even get started on [[DudeNotFunny the Picoha omake]].

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* WriterOnBoard: Bissek goes out of his way to give the Senshi the short end of the stick, using an altered canon that incorporates elements cherry-picked from both manga and anime canon with the goal of making the Senshi look as weak, useless, and morally bankrupt as possible. The whole issue with Serenity killing herself, for instance, is taken from the manga, while the Senshi themselves display abilities only on par with their heavily-nerfed anime counterparts. The villains that the Senshi struggled with for over a year are also trivially dispatched within weeks of the TSAB showing up. And let's not even get started on [[DudeNotFunny the Picoha omake]].omake.
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12th Oct '15 11:22:31 AM Tir
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* UnintentionallySympathetic: Picoha came off [[BrokenBase to some]] as a girl who tried to protect her own timeline and got written out of existence in the process.

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* UnintentionallySympathetic: Picoha came off [[BrokenBase to some]] as a girl who tried to protect her own timeline and got written out of existence in the process.process.
* WriterOnBoard: Bissek goes out of his way to give the Senshi the short end of the stick, using an altered canon that incorporates elements cherry-picked from both manga and anime canon with the goal of making the Senshi look as weak, useless, and morally bankrupt as possible. The whole issue with Serenity killing herself, for instance, is taken from the manga, while the Senshi themselves display abilities only on par with their heavily-nerfed anime counterparts. The villains that the Senshi struggled with for over a year are also trivially dispatched within weeks of the TSAB showing up. And let's not even get started on [[DudeNotFunny the Picoha omake]].
15th Nov '14 11:24:42 PM SithkingZero
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* StrawmanHasAPoint: At one point, Luna is stated to be far more sympathetic to Serenity committing suicide at the end of the Moon Kingdom, which rendered the sacrifices of Kamen and Mina pointless. While this is meant to show that Luna is out of touch with reality (and for the most part she is), the point she raises is perfectly correct: Nanoha had been a member of the TSAB and was trained to not sacrifice herself pointlessly, had known ''years'' of battles against the forces of evil, and held herself to such high standards that she literally worked herself into the hospital, and is judging a girl raised in a completely different environment with a completely different set of priorities up until that point by said standards, which aren't exactly fair to Serenity.

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* StrawmanHasAPoint: At one point, Luna is stated to be far more sympathetic to Serenity committing suicide at the end of the Moon Kingdom, which rendered the sacrifices of Kamen and Mina pointless. While this is meant to show that Luna is out of touch with reality (and for the most part she is), the point she raises is perfectly correct: Nanoha had been a member of the TSAB and was trained to not sacrifice herself pointlessly, had known ''years'' of battles against the forces of evil, and held herself to such high standards that she literally worked herself into the hospital, and is judging a girl raised in a completely different environment with a completely different set of priorities up until that point by said standards, which aren't exactly fair to Serenity.Serenity, a girl with no experience of how evil and cruel the world could be who just watched everything she had ever known and loved get murdered violently by eldritch abominations.
8th Nov '14 10:58:22 PM SithkingZero
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* StrawmanHasAPoint: At one point, Luna is stated to be far more sympathetic to Serenity committing suicide at the end of the Moon Kingdom, which rendered the sacrifices of Kamen and Mina pointless. While this is meant to show that Luna is out of touch with reality (and for the most part she is), the point she raises is perfectly correct: Nanoha had been a member of the TSAB and was trained to not sacrifice herself pointlessly, had known ''years'' of battles against the forces of evil, and held herself to such high standards that she literally worked herself into the hospital, and is judging a girl raised in a completely different environment with a completely different set of priorities up until that point by said standards, which aren't exactly fair to Serenity.
20th Apr '14 12:27:07 AM Raxis
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* PlotInducedStupidity: A lot of the early plot revolves around Fate and the Sailor Moon cast coming to the worst conclusions possible and being utterly unwilling to talk to each other clearly.
23rd May '13 5:34:04 PM jmcdavid
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* CriticalResearchFailure: [[spoiler: In the final chapter, one of the [[{{Mooks}} youma]], who happens to be capable of VoluntaryShapeshifting, uses Reinforce's form to get close to Hayate and Signum. Unfortunately for her, she exposes herself by addressing them as "you two" while Signum was in a unison with Rein Zwei. Rein Zwei called her out on it, and Signum took her out.]]
29th Mar '13 3:17:45 PM Austin
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* UnintentionallySympathetic: Picoha came off [[BrokenBase to some]] as a girl who tried to protect her own timeline and got written out of existence in the process.
* WriterOnBoard: Between Chibi-Usa bashing, liberal use of {{Conflict Ball}}s to force the Senshi into a HeroAntagonist role, and a massively one-sided LoveTriangle among many other such signs, the author ''very obviously'' favors the Nanoha characters over the Senshi, who are portrayed as massively incompetent and wrong about ''everything'' even when they're ''not'' hideously out of character (RE: Luna). He gives them occasional lipservice in his authors notes, but in-fic the Senshi behave and perform like a squad of Mooks and struggle to take out a single [[MechaMook drone]] that mages of their rank should be able to slaughter by the dozens early in the fic.
** Definitely a YMMV topic. Much like PowerCreepPowerSeep fans of one show will tend to feel that their show's characters are being maligned while the other show's characters are being [[MarySue Mary Sue'd]].
** Power is rarely the issue (I kind of agree with how the power stands up). It's usually ''plot elements'' that, when the two series are compared, the situation is usually resolved very quickly (often [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot to the detriment of any possible dramatic or emotional tension]]), and overwhelmingly in favor of Nanoha's series.
** One blatant example in the final chapter: what happened to the DD Girls, the ones who in the Sailor Moon anime [[spoiler:killed all the Inner Senshi]]? All but one died because [[spoiler:they just happened to be in the path of Nanoha's first Divine Buster (Nanoha was trying a DungeonBypass)]].

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* UnintentionallySympathetic: Picoha came off [[BrokenBase to some]] as a girl who tried to protect her own timeline and got written out of existence in the process.
* WriterOnBoard: Between Chibi-Usa bashing, liberal use of {{Conflict Ball}}s to force the Senshi into a HeroAntagonist role, and a massively one-sided LoveTriangle among many other such signs, the author ''very obviously'' favors the Nanoha characters over the Senshi, who are portrayed as massively incompetent and wrong about ''everything'' even when they're ''not'' hideously out of character (RE: Luna). He gives them occasional lipservice in his authors notes, but in-fic the Senshi behave and perform like a squad of Mooks and struggle to take out a single [[MechaMook drone]] that mages of their rank should be able to slaughter by the dozens early in the fic.
** Definitely a YMMV topic. Much like PowerCreepPowerSeep fans of one show will tend to feel that their show's characters are being maligned while the other show's characters are being [[MarySue Mary Sue'd]].
** Power is rarely the issue (I kind of agree with how the power stands up). It's usually ''plot elements'' that, when the two series are compared, the situation is usually resolved very quickly (often [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot to the detriment of any possible dramatic or emotional tension]]), and overwhelmingly in favor of Nanoha's series.
** One blatant example in the final chapter: what happened to the DD Girls, the ones who in the Sailor Moon anime [[spoiler:killed all the Inner Senshi]]? All but one died because [[spoiler:they just happened to be in the path of Nanoha's first Divine Buster (Nanoha was trying a DungeonBypass)]].
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5th Mar '13 1:53:15 AM Valiona
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* MoralEventHorizon: Precia crosses this in Fate's eyes when she [[spoiler:attacks Alicia for refusing to stand aside and let her continue to torture Fate]].

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* MoralEventHorizon: Precia crosses this in Fate's even [[LoveMartyr Fate]]'s eyes when she [[spoiler:attacks Alicia for refusing to stand aside and let her continue to torture Fate]].Fate]].
* UnintentionallySympathetic: Picoha came off [[BrokenBase to some]] as a girl who tried to protect her own timeline and got written out of existence in the process.
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