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* {{Anvilicious}}: [[BuxomIsBetter Being well-endowed is nothing to be ashamed of!]] The comic had already covered the topic in-depth with Monica. When Atsali started to angst about her figure with the people around her [[SoapboxSadie ranting arguments that had already been covered before,]] it felt like overkill.
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* BrokenBase: The shift from Monica's story and the supernatural slice-of-life theme the comic had been carrying so far to the teenage antics of Atsali and her entirely new cast of supernatural high school buddies has bewildered longtime readers.
* HypeBacklash: So this is the comic everyone's been talking about, huh, let's check it ou--why is everyone talking about bras?
* HypeBacklash: So this is the comic everyone's been talking about, huh, let's check it ou--why is everyone talking about bras?
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* BrokenBase: The shift from Monica's story and the supernatural slice-of-life theme the comic had been carrying so far to the teenage antics of Atsali and her entirely new cast of supernatural high school buddies has bewildered some longtime readers.
* HypeBacklash: So this is the comic everyone's been talking about, huh, let's check it ou--why is everyone talking about bras?readers.
* HypeBacklash: So this is the comic everyone's been talking about, huh, let's check it ou--why is everyone talking about bras?
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Some Anvils Need To Be Dropped got cut.
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* {{Anvilicious}}: [[BuxomIsBetter Being well-endowed is nothing to be ashamed of!]] Granted, SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped, but the comic had already covered the topic in-depth with Monica. When Atsali started to angst about her figure with the people around her [[SoapboxSadie ranting arguments that had already been covered before,]] it felt like overkill.
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* {{Anvilicious}}: [[BuxomIsBetter Being well-endowed is nothing to be ashamed of!]] Granted, SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped, but the The comic had already covered the topic in-depth with Monica. When Atsali started to angst about her figure with the people around her [[SoapboxSadie ranting arguments that had already been covered before,]] it felt like overkill.
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* NightmareFuel: Anything to do with the boiler room [[spoiler: and Shelly's demon]]. Especially [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/see-me/ this]] [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/she-followed-you/ sequence.]] This is exacerbated by the fact that at the end of the last page, [[OurDemonsAreDifferent Tina]]'s hand is drawn so that it follows you around the room -- no matter where you're standing, she's always pointing at the reader.
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* NightmareFuel: NightmareFuel:
** Anything to do with the boiler room [[spoiler: and Shelly's demon]]. Especially [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/see-me/ this]] [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/she-followed-you/ sequence.]] This is exacerbated by the fact that at the end of the last page, [[OurDemonsAreDifferent Tina]]'s hand is drawn so that it follows you around the room -- no matter where you're standing, she's always pointing at the reader.
** Anything to do with the boiler room [[spoiler: and Shelly's demon]]. Especially [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/see-me/ this]] [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/she-followed-you/ sequence.]] This is exacerbated by the fact that at the end of the last page, [[OurDemonsAreDifferent Tina]]'s hand is drawn so that it follows you around the room -- no matter where you're standing, she's always pointing at the reader.
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* LesYay: [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/puts-up-with-you/ And the pixie with the rack puts up with you how?]] [[spoiler: The speaker is essentially Shelly's subconscious. Who refers to Monica as "the pixie with the rack." Yeah.]]
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* LesYay: LesYay:
** [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/puts-up-with-you/ And the pixie with the rack puts up with you how?]] [[spoiler: The speaker is essentially Shelly's subconscious. Who refers to Monica as "the pixie with the rack." Yeah.]]
** [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/puts-up-with-you/ And the pixie with the rack puts up with you how?]] [[spoiler: The speaker is essentially Shelly's subconscious. Who refers to Monica as "the pixie with the rack." Yeah.]]
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* StrangledByTheRedString: Many readers feel this way about [[spoiler: Monica and Georgette getting together due to their shared RapeAsBackstory.]] Making it worse [[spoiler: is the fact that Monica dumped her longtime UnderstandingBoyfriend Kevin for someone who hadn't appeared in the comic for ''years''.]] But nope! The writer insists they "belong together", so nevermind all that!
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* StrangledByTheRedString: Many readers feel this way about [[spoiler: Monica and Georgette getting together due to their shared RapeAsBackstory.]] Making it worse [[spoiler: is the fact that Monica dumped her longtime UnderstandingBoyfriend Kevin [[UnderstandingBoyfriend boyfriend Kevin]] for someone who hadn't appeared in the comic for ''years''.]] But nope! The writer insists they "belong together", so nevermind all that!that!
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* BaseBreaker: Castela. Either she's an adorably innocent little girl with an intriguing backstory, or she's the most annoying BrattyHalfPint ever to appear in fiction.
** The shift from Monica's story and the supernatural slice-of-life theme the comic had been carrying so far to the teenage antics of Atsali and her entirely new cast of supernatural high school buddies has bewildered longtime readers.
** The shift from Monica's story and the supernatural slice-of-life theme the comic had been carrying so far to the teenage antics of Atsali and her entirely new cast of supernatural high school buddies has bewildered longtime readers.
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* BaseBreaker: BaseBreakingCharacter: Castela. Either she's an adorably innocent little girl with an intriguing backstory, or she's the most annoying BrattyHalfPint ever to appear in fiction.
** * BrokenBase: The shift from Monica's story and the supernatural slice-of-life theme the comic had been carrying so far to the teenage antics of Atsali and her entirely new cast of supernatural high school buddies has bewildered longtime readers.
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* Anvilicious: [[BuxomIsBetter Being well-endowed is nothing to be ashamed of!]] Granted, SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped, but the comic had already covered the topic in-depth with Monica. When Atsali started to angst about her figure with the people around her [[SoapboxSadie ranting arguments that had already been covered before,]] it felt like overkill.
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* Anvilicious: {{Anvilicious}}: [[BuxomIsBetter Being well-endowed is nothing to be ashamed of!]] Granted, SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped, but the comic had already covered the topic in-depth with Monica. When Atsali started to angst about her figure with the people around her [[SoapboxSadie ranting arguments that had already been covered before,]] it felt like overkill.
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* Anvilicious: [[BuxomIsBetter Being well-endowed is nothing to be ashamed of!]] Granted, SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped, but the comic had already covered the topic in-depth with Monica. When Atsali started to angst about her figure with the people around her [[SoapboxSadie ranting arguments that had already been covered before,]] it felt like overkill.
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** The shift from Monica's story and the supernatural slice-of-life theme the comic had been carrying so far to the teenage antics of Atsali and her supernatural high school buddies has bewildered longtime readers.
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** The shift from Monica's story and the supernatural slice-of-life theme the comic had been carrying so far to the teenage antics of Atsali and her entirely new cast of supernatural high school buddies has bewildered longtime readers.
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* SpotlightStealingSquad: As of 2013, the focus of the comic seems to be shifting more towards Katherine, Atasli, and Castela.
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* SpotlightStealingSquad: As of 2013, the focus of the comic seems to be shifting more towards Katherine, Atasli, and Castela.Castela.
* StrangledByTheRedString: Many readers feel this way about [[spoiler: Monica and Georgette getting together due to their shared RapeAsBackstory.]] Making it worse [[spoiler: is the fact that Monica dumped her longtime UnderstandingBoyfriend Kevin for someone who hadn't appeared in the comic for ''years''.]] But nope! The writer insists they "belong together", so nevermind all that!
* StrangledByTheRedString: Many readers feel this way about [[spoiler: Monica and Georgette getting together due to their shared RapeAsBackstory.]] Making it worse [[spoiler: is the fact that Monica dumped her longtime UnderstandingBoyfriend Kevin for someone who hadn't appeared in the comic for ''years''.]] But nope! The writer insists they "belong together", so nevermind all that!
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** The shift from Monica's story and the supernatural slice-of-life theme the comic had been carrying so far to the teenage antics of Atsali and her supernatural high school buddies has bewildered longtime readers.
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* BaseBreaker: Castela. Either she's an adorably innocent little girl with an intriguing backstory, or she's the most annoying BrattyHalfPint ever to appear in fiction.
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** What Jin, Bud, and Brandi endured to become the Chimera. Those poor, poor girls.
** The recently revealed [[spoiler: [[RapeAsBackstory rape backstories]] for Monica and Georgette. Monica in particular had to endure her abuse while being imprisioned in a mental institution.]]
** The recently revealed [[spoiler: [[RapeAsBackstory rape backstories]] for Monica and Georgette. Monica in particular had to endure her abuse while being imprisioned in a mental institution.]]
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* SpotlightStealingSquad: As of 2013 the focus of the comic seems to be shifting more towards Katherine, Atasli, and Castela.
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* SpotlightStealingSquad: As of 2013 2013, the focus of the comic seems to be shifting more towards Katherine, Atasli, and Castela.
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** [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/georgettes-kiss/ Georgette returning to the comic after a long absence.]] Cue the entire fanbase's heads asploding.
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** [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/georgettes-kiss/ Georgette returning to the comic after a long absence.]] Cue the entire fanbase's heads asploding.asploding.
* SpotlightStealingSquad: As of 2013 the focus of the comic seems to be shifting more towards Katherine, Atasli, and Castela.
* SpotlightStealingSquad: As of 2013 the focus of the comic seems to be shifting more towards Katherine, Atasli, and Castela.
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* CompleteMonster: The Lanthian priests [[PosthumousCharacter died long before the start of the comic]] and haven't been shown in much detail, but what has been shown is rather horrific. Their overall goal was to overthrow the existing leadership of Lanthis, and while we haven't seen how justified such a goal was, their methods were so depraved that it doesn't matter what they were fighting against. For starters, they tortured, starved, and raped three young women with the intention of breaking them so completely that they could be made into easily controllable weapons. In the process of capturing said women, they used infants as human shields. Fan opinions of them range from disgust to even more disgust.
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* CompleteMonster: The Lanthian priests died long before the start of the comic and haven't been shown in much detail, but what has been shown is rather horrific. Their overall goal was to overthrow the existing leadership of Lanthis, and while we haven't seen how justified such a goal was, their methods were so depraved that it doesn't matter what they were fighting against. For starters, they tortured, starved, and raped three young women with the intention of breaking them so completely that they could be made into easily controllable weapons. In the process of capturing said women, they used infants as human shields. Fan opinions of them range from disgust to even more disgust.
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* CompleteMonster: The Lanthian priests [[PosthumousCharacter died long before the start of the comic comic]] and haven't been shown in much detail, but what has been shown is rather horrific. Their overall goal was to overthrow the existing leadership of Lanthis, and while we haven't seen how justified such a goal was, their methods were so depraved that it doesn't matter what they were fighting against. For starters, they tortured, starved, and raped three young women with the intention of breaking them so completely that they could be made into easily controllable weapons. In the process of capturing said women, they used infants as human shields. Fan opinions of them range from disgust to even more disgust.
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** [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/georgettes-kiss/ Georgette returning to the comic after a long absence.]] Cue the entire fanbase's heads asploding.
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* CompleteMonster: The Lanthian priests responsible for [[spoiler: turning Jin, Brandi, and Bud into the chimera.]]
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* CompleteMonster: The Lanthian priests responsible for [[spoiler: turning Jin, Brandi, died long before the start of the comic and Bud haven't been shown in much detail, but what has been shown is rather horrific. Their overall goal was to overthrow the existing leadership of Lanthis, and while we haven't seen how justified such a goal was, their methods were so depraved that it doesn't matter what they were fighting against. For starters, they tortured, starved, and raped three young women with the intention of breaking them so completely that they could be made into easily controllable weapons. In the chimera.]]process of capturing said women, they used infants as human shields. Fan opinions of them range from disgust to even more disgust.
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* LesYay: [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/puts-up-with-you/ And the pixie with the rack puts up with you how?]] [[spoiler: Keep in mind that the speaker is essentially Shelly's subconscious. Who refers to Monica as "the pixie with the rack." Yeah.]]
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* LesYay: [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/puts-up-with-you/ And the pixie with the rack puts up with you how?]] [[spoiler: Keep in mind that the The speaker is essentially Shelly's subconscious. Who refers to Monica as "the pixie with the rack." Yeah.]]
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* NightmareFuel: Anything to do with the boiler room [[spoiler: and Shelly's demon]]. Especially [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/see-me/ this]] [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/she-followed-you/ sequence.]] This is exacerbated by the fact that at the end of the last page, [[OurDemonsAreDifferent Tina]]'s hand is drawn so that it follows you around the room -- no matter where you're standing, she's always pointing at the reader.
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* NightmareFuel: Anything to do with the boiler room [[spoiler: and Shelly's demon]]. Especially [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/see-me/ this]] [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/she-followed-you/ sequence.]] This is exacerbated by the fact that at the end of the last page, [[OurDemonsAreDifferent Tina]]'s hand is drawn so that it follows you around the room -- no matter where you're standing, she's always pointing at the reader.reader.
* LesYay: [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/puts-up-with-you/ And the pixie with the rack puts up with you how?]] [[spoiler: Keep in mind that the speaker is essentially Shelly's subconscious. Who refers to Monica as "the pixie with the rack." Yeah.]]
* LesYay: [[http://wapsisquare.com/comic/puts-up-with-you/ And the pixie with the rack puts up with you how?]] [[spoiler: Keep in mind that the speaker is essentially Shelly's subconscious. Who refers to Monica as "the pixie with the rack." Yeah.]]
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* CompleteMonster: The Lanthian priests responsible for [[spoiler: turning Jin, Brandi, and Bud into the chimera.]]