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* HilariousInHindsight: The villain of ''Industrial Magic'', a vampire named Edward. The book was published a year before ''Twilight''.
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** [[WellIntentionedExtremist Aratron]] is a calm, cunning [[OrderIsNotGood Eudemon (Order demon)]] who strives to bring progress and order to the world. At one point, Aratraon spread deadly plagues so as to hasten humanity's progress and scientific discoveries in response to them. Discovering the rise of the monstrous UsefulNotes/GillesDeRais, Aratron subtly helps the heroes to stop his threat. Aratron takes advantage of a slip of the tongue by Savannah Levine to take her powers away [[StealthMentor in order to better train her now that she doesn't have them to go against Gilles]]. Aratron helps to co-ordinate attacks on the various members of Gilles's organization. Taking advantage of the death of one of Gilles's partners, Aratron suggests replacing him with a shapeshifter to be able to infiltrate his base and uses this to help the heroes right the balance and defeat Gilles for good.
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** [[WellIntentionedExtremist Aratron]] is a calm, cunning [[OrderIsNotGood Eudemon (Order demon)]] who strives to bring progress and order to the world. At one point, Aratraon spread deadly plagues so as to hasten humanity's progress and scientific discoveries in response to them. Discovering the rise of the monstrous UsefulNotes/GillesDeRais, Aratron subtly helps the heroes to stop his threat. Aratron takes advantage of a slip of the tongue by Savannah Levine to take her powers away [[StealthMentor in order to better train her now that she doesn't have them to go against Gilles]]. Aratron helps to co-ordinate attacks on the various members of Gilles's organization. Taking advantage of the death of one of Gilles's partners, Aratron suggests replacing him with a shapeshifter to be able to infiltrate his base and uses this to help the heroes right the balance and defeat Gilles for good.good.
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** [[BigGood Jeremy Danvers]] is the Alpha of the North American Werewolf Pack. [[FromNobodyToNightmare Rising from humble beginnings]], Jeremy helps to create a system to weed out threats to his kind being discovered and helped either cover up the crimes of the werewolves or discipline them to avoid detection. Jeremy instigates a coup against his abusive father and later helps to catalogue and discover "Mutt werewolves" and their personal lives to better take them on. In order to instill a sense of fear in the Mutts against The Pack, Jeremy drugged a feral one and had his son Clayton mutilate him in order to make Clayton into the bogeyman of the pack. Jeremy also helps to bring werewolves back into the greater magical community and create alliances that will help his people for decades to come. Taking Elena Michaels under his wing, Jeremy helps to groom her as his successor as Pack leader and steps down gracefully to her when the time comes for retirement.
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** [[TheDon Benecio Cortez]], the head of the Cortez Cabal is a powerful sorcerer renowned for making his mafiaesque cabal the most powerful one in the world through a mix of pragmatism and his genuine charming affability. Benecio always remembers the names of everyone in his office and charms them with his silver tongue, allowing him to manipulate their emotions for his own criminal ends. Desiring for his son Lucas to succeed him, after various attempts Benecio eventually succeeds in getting him to agree. When he learns Lucas is in danger from a vampire, Benecio tricks the heroes into thinking that he was safe in a party before using a doppelgänger to leave and then finishes off the vampire himself by eternally damning him. Willing to go to extreme lengths to protect those he loves and keep his organization on top, Benecio is one of Otherworld's most formidable allies.
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** [[TheDon Benecio Cortez]], the head of the Cortez Cabal is a powerful sorcerer renowned for making his mafiaesque cabal the most powerful one in the world through a mix of pragmatism and his genuine charming affability. Benecio always remembers the names of everyone in his office and charms them with his silver tongue, allowing him to manipulate their emotions for his own criminal ends. Desiring for his son Lucas to succeed him, after various attempts Benecio eventually succeeds in getting him to agree. When he learns Lucas is in danger from a vampire, Benecio tricks the heroes into thinking that he was safe in a party before using a doppelgänger to leave and then finishes off the vampire himself by eternally damning him. Willing to go to extreme lengths to protect those he loves and keep his organization on top, Benecio is one of Otherworld's most formidable allies.allies.
** [[WellIntentionedExtremist Aratron]] is a calm, cunning [[OrderIsNotGood Eudemon (Order demon)]] who strives to bring progress and order to the world. At one point, Aratraon spread deadly plagues so as to hasten humanity's progress and scientific discoveries in response to them. Discovering the rise of the monstrous UsefulNotes/GillesDeRais, Aratron subtly helps the heroes to stop his threat. Aratron takes advantage of a slip of the tongue by Savannah Levine to take her powers away [[StealthMentor in order to better train her now that she doesn't have them to go against Gilles]]. Aratron helps to co-ordinate attacks on the various members of Gilles's organization. Taking advantage of the death of one of Gilles's partners, Aratron suggests replacing him with a shapeshifter to be able to infiltrate his base and uses this to help the heroes right the balance and defeat Gilles for good.
** [[WellIntentionedExtremist Aratron]] is a calm, cunning [[OrderIsNotGood Eudemon (Order demon)]] who strives to bring progress and order to the world. At one point, Aratraon spread deadly plagues so as to hasten humanity's progress and scientific discoveries in response to them. Discovering the rise of the monstrous UsefulNotes/GillesDeRais, Aratron subtly helps the heroes to stop his threat. Aratron takes advantage of a slip of the tongue by Savannah Levine to take her powers away [[StealthMentor in order to better train her now that she doesn't have them to go against Gilles]]. Aratron helps to co-ordinate attacks on the various members of Gilles's organization. Taking advantage of the death of one of Gilles's partners, Aratron suggests replacing him with a shapeshifter to be able to infiltrate his base and uses this to help the heroes right the balance and defeat Gilles for good.
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* HilariousInHindsight: The villain of ''Industrial Magic'', a vampire named Edward. The book was published a year before ''Twilight''.
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* HilariousInHindsight: The villain of ''Industrial Magic'', a vampire named Edward. The book was published a year before ''Twilight''.''Twilight''.
* MagnificentBastard:
** [[GentlemanThief Karl Marsten]] is an [[AffablyEvil amoral, charming]] werewolf and thief who's famous for his daring James Bond-style jewel heists. Marsten infiltrates territory he desires, researches the weaknesses of the werewolves that already live there and then wines and dines them. Afterwards, he gives them a polite offer to leave the territory, and if they refuse he kills them. After joining up with Daniel Santos' attempt to destroy The Pack, Marsten is content to lie back and play both sides, and even backstabs the vile Thomas [=LeBlanc=] by playing off Thomas' sadism and causing the pack to give him the territory he desires. Widely considered one of the most dangerous enemies of The Pack for never giving anyone a chance to see his weaknesses, Marsten keeps this ability even in his eventual reform and becomes one of The Pack's most loyal allies.
** [[TheDon Benecio Cortez]], the head of the Cortez Cabal is a powerful sorcerer renowned for making his mafiaesque cabal the most powerful one in the world through a mix of pragmatism and his genuine charming affability. Benecio always remembers the names of everyone in his office and charms them with his silver tongue, allowing him to manipulate their emotions for his own criminal ends. Desiring for his son Lucas to succeed him, after various attempts Benecio eventually succeeds in getting him to agree. When he learns Lucas is in danger from a vampire, Benecio tricks the heroes into thinking that he was safe in a party before using a doppelgänger to leave and then finishes off the vampire himself by eternally damning him. Willing to go to extreme lengths to protect those he loves and keep his organization on top, Benecio is one of Otherworld's most formidable allies.
* MagnificentBastard:
** [[GentlemanThief Karl Marsten]] is an [[AffablyEvil amoral, charming]] werewolf and thief who's famous for his daring James Bond-style jewel heists. Marsten infiltrates territory he desires, researches the weaknesses of the werewolves that already live there and then wines and dines them. Afterwards, he gives them a polite offer to leave the territory, and if they refuse he kills them. After joining up with Daniel Santos' attempt to destroy The Pack, Marsten is content to lie back and play both sides, and even backstabs the vile Thomas [=LeBlanc=] by playing off Thomas' sadism and causing the pack to give him the territory he desires. Widely considered one of the most dangerous enemies of The Pack for never giving anyone a chance to see his weaknesses, Marsten keeps this ability even in his eventual reform and becomes one of The Pack's most loyal allies.
** [[TheDon Benecio Cortez]], the head of the Cortez Cabal is a powerful sorcerer renowned for making his mafiaesque cabal the most powerful one in the world through a mix of pragmatism and his genuine charming affability. Benecio always remembers the names of everyone in his office and charms them with his silver tongue, allowing him to manipulate their emotions for his own criminal ends. Desiring for his son Lucas to succeed him, after various attempts Benecio eventually succeeds in getting him to agree. When he learns Lucas is in danger from a vampire, Benecio tricks the heroes into thinking that he was safe in a party before using a doppelgänger to leave and then finishes off the vampire himself by eternally damning him. Willing to go to extreme lengths to protect those he loves and keep his organization on top, Benecio is one of Otherworld's most formidable allies.
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* HilariousInHindsight: The villain of ''Industrial Magic'', a vampire named Edward. The book was published a year before ''Twilight''.
