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* FamilyUnfriendlyAesop: One of the major themes of the series seems to be that human beings are not psychologically prepared to deal with a world in which magic is real. May cross into FantasticAesop.
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* DelusionConclusion: Lev Grossman has said that part of the reason he wrote the sequels was to refute all the theorists who were convinced that all the magic in the first book was actually a series of psychotic hallucinations and that Quentin had killed himself at the end. The fact that Quentin genuinely struggled with severe depression only encouraged such theorists.
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* OneSceneWonder: Either one of [[KnightOfCerebus the Beast's]] appearances in the first novel could count.

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** The message of the first book is either a unique and insightful take on the problem of getting everything you could possibly want, or just immature, unnecessarily dark, and {{Wangst}}y in the extreme.
** The magic system and school of Brakebills is either a nuanced and detailed approach to magic or an exhaustive extension of the aforementioned {{Wangst}} that drains readers of their will to continue reading. Summed up, the difficulty of learning magic means that it tends to take up rather a lot of space in the book, and Dean Fogg's attempts to justify the main characters' personal problems by claiming that magical potential is born from depression might be pushing it a bit much. Plus, the sheer ease with which the Physical Kids master and ''use'' battle magic can appear jarring to some readers after all the emphasis placed on the difficulty of magic, even if they have all graduated by this point.
** The main characters are either a mature look at how people might behave if given unimaginable power but no incentive to use it for anything other than petty time-wasting, or a bunch of feckless, self-pitying assholes with more personal problems than brain cells. Quentin is easily the worst-regarded of them, especially given that he devotes page after page to feeling sorry for himself for not having a purpose in life - even while more sympathetic cast members ''secretly'' grapple with things like chronic work-related stress, a troubled home life, or ''' ''the aftermath of being raped.'' ''' However, general consensus is that this improves as the series continues and the main characters actually start taking their responsibilities seriously.

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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Asmodeus is a big one. For the villains, [[spoiler:Martin]] is generally considered such for his intriguing and surprisingly sympathetic backstory, which isn't fully unveiled until the final novel, [[spoiler:long after his death.]]

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** Even among detractors of the series, Alice is often considered the most likable of the Physical Kids, partly for her intelligence and determination but mostly because she doesn't indulge in the dickishness that the others get up to - which might explain why she ended up getting a ComicBookAdaptation all to herself.
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Asmodeus is a big one. one in the second and third books [[spoiler: especially since she ends up being the one to avenge Julia's rape by hunting down and killing Renard.]]
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For the villains, [[spoiler:Martin]] is generally considered such for his intriguing and surprisingly sympathetic backstory, which isn't fully unveiled until the final novel, [[spoiler:long after his death.]]



* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Many events of ''The Magicians'' are simply told to the reader - rather than shown. As a result, there're chapters where they describe a weeks, or even months worth of happenings, but never actually show it to you - which can include things like CharacterDevelopment. This gets particularly bad when they encounter a talking bear who tells them the way to Ember's tomb... and rather than show us what he says most of the time, the text just summarizes what Humbledrum says, sometimes even summarizing things ''mid-conversation''.
** Reynard as well. In the third book, we see the lone survivor of the free trader group picking up a knife that can kill gods, and vowing to kill him. Unfortunately, it's only within the last two chapters that [[spoiler: the reader is told that Asmodeus went and killed Reynard... with Julia just ''knowing'' and explaining within the penultimate chapter what happened]] and the explanation is just [[spoiler: ...that he was gutted. That's it.]] This could be a novel in of itself, just mentioning what could have happened with Reynard on the loose and how he was tracked down.

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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Many events of ''The Magicians'' are simply told to the reader - rather than shown. As a result, there're chapters where they describe a weeks, or even months worth of happenings, but never actually show it to you - which can include things like CharacterDevelopment. This gets particularly bad when they encounter a talking bear who tells them the way to Ember's tomb... and rather than show us what he says most of the time, the text just summarizes what Humbledrum says, sometimes even summarizing things ''mid-conversation''.
** Reynard as well. Reynard's fate. In the third book, we see the lone survivor of the free trader group Free Trader Group picking up a knife that can kill gods, and vowing to kill him. Unfortunately, it's only within the last two chapters that [[spoiler: the reader is told that Asmodeus went and killed Reynard... with Julia just ''knowing'' and explaining within the penultimate chapter what happened]] happened - and the explanation is just [[spoiler: ...that he was gutted. That's it.]] This could be a novel in of itself, just mentioning what could have happened with Reynard on the loose and how he was tracked down.



* {{Wangst}}: A frequent problem. The debate is still out on whether this was intentional or not.
** Easily the worst offender is Quentin. Though magic is immensely difficult to learn and even harder to master, the payoff leaves a graduating wizard rich for life, capable of making their wildest dreams come true, and with no need to work at all. And with all the privilege laid at his doorstep, Quentin steadily becomes more and more self-pitying over his desire for [[IJustWantToBeSpecial purpose]] and [[AllergicToRoutine stimulation]], which only grows all the more galling as he turns into a [[TookALevelInJerkass progressively bigger asshole]]. Worse still, he's often teamed up with people who actually have real insecurities and traumas, including [[DarkAndTroubledPast Alice]], [[StepfordSmiler Josh]], and [[SanitySlippage Julia]], and it only ends up making Quentin look even more petty. Even Alice calls him on this tendency once it looks like he's going to start sulking over the fantasy world he wanted all along. Thankfully, he gradually begins to grow out of this routine over the course of the series, particularly once he finally starts getting off his ass and working instead of being washed about by the plot.

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* {{Wangst}}: A frequent problem. The debate is still out on whether how much of this was intentional or not.
** Easily the worst offender is Quentin. Though magic is immensely difficult to learn and even harder to master, the payoff leaves a graduating wizard rich for life, capable of making their wildest dreams come true, and with no need to work at all. And with all the privilege laid at his doorstep, Quentin steadily becomes more and more self-pitying over his desire for [[IJustWantToBeSpecial purpose]] and [[AllergicToRoutine stimulation]], which only grows all the more galling as he turns into a [[TookALevelInJerkass progressively bigger asshole]]. Worse still, he's often teamed up with people who actually have real insecurities and traumas, including [[DarkAndTroubledPast Alice]], [[StepfordSmiler Josh]], and [[SanitySlippage Julia]], and it only ends up making Quentin look even more petty. Even Alice calls him on this tendency once it looks like he's going to start sulking over the fantasy world he wanted all along. Thankfully, he gradually begins to grow out of this routine over the course of the series, particularly once he finally starts getting gets off his ass ass, takes some responsibility for his actions and working does some real work instead of being washed about by the plot.

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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Many events of ''The Magicians'' are simply told to the reader - rather than shown. As a result, there're chapters where they describe a weeks, or even months worth of happenings, but never actually show it to you - which can include things like CharacterDevelopment. This gets particularly bad when they encounter a talking bear who tells them the way to Ember's tomb... and rather than show us what he says most of the time, the text just summarizes what Humbledrum says.

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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Many events of ''The Magicians'' are simply told to the reader - rather than shown. As a result, there're chapters where they describe a weeks, or even months worth of happenings, but never actually show it to you - which can include things like CharacterDevelopment. This gets particularly bad when they encounter a talking bear who tells them the way to Ember's tomb... and rather than show us what he says most of the time, the text just summarizes what Humbledrum says. says, sometimes even summarizing things ''mid-conversation''.
** Reynard as well. In the third book, we see the lone survivor of the free trader group picking up a knife that can kill gods, and vowing to kill him. Unfortunately, it's only within the last two chapters that [[spoiler: the reader is told that Asmodeus went and killed Reynard... with Julia just ''knowing'' and explaining within the penultimate chapter what happened]] and the explanation is just [[spoiler: ...that he was gutted. That's it.]] This could be a novel in of itself, just mentioning what could have happened with Reynard on the loose and how he was tracked down.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Many events of ''The Magicians'' are simply told to the reader - rather than shown. As a result, there're chapters where they describe a weeks, or even months worth of happenings, but never actually show it to you - which can include things like CharacterDevelopment. This gets particularly bad when they encounter a talking bear who tells them the way to Ember's tomb... and rather than show us what he says most of the time, the text just summarizes what Humbledrum says.
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* {{Anvilicious}}: The first book hammers in the message "Getting everything you want doesn't make you happy" often, and rarely subtly. Many of the Brakebills students are depressed or insecure on some level, even while they're living a ridiculously overprivileged lifestyle of sex and drugs without having to work at all. Meanwhile, Quentin continues his descent into assholishness even after he's literally ended up in the fantasy kingdom of his dreams - to the point that [[WhatTheHellHero Alice eventually calls him on it]]. Even Dean Fogg points out that "wishing doesn't make it so," reasoning that magic seems based on the kind of "magical thinking" that children eventually have to grow out of, and even suggesting that wizards never really mature. Quentin arguably pushes the point [[{{Wangst}} too far]] by actively thinking himself superior to his fellow wizards when he briefly gives up on magic in the aftermath of [[spoiler: Alice's fatal transformation]]. Later books soften the impact by having the characters actually accomplish goals and walk away feeling satisfied, to the point that even Quentin ends the series on a [[EarnYourHappyEnding hard-earned happy note]].

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* {{Anvilicious}}: The first book hammers in the message "Getting everything you want doesn't make you happy" often, and rarely subtly. Many of the Brakebills students graduates are depressed or insecure on some level, even while they're living a ridiculously overprivileged lifestyle of sex and drugs without having to work at all. Meanwhile, Quentin continues his descent into assholishness even after he's literally ended up in the fantasy kingdom of his dreams - to the point that [[WhatTheHellHero Alice eventually calls him on it]]. Even Dean Fogg points out that "wishing doesn't make it so," reasoning that magic seems based on the kind of "magical thinking" that children eventually have to grow out of, and even suggesting that wizards never really mature. Quentin arguably pushes the point [[{{Wangst}} too far]] by actively thinking himself superior to his fellow wizards when he briefly gives up on magic in the aftermath of [[spoiler: Alice's fatal transformation]]. Later books soften the impact by having the characters actually accomplish goals and walk away feeling satisfied, to the point that even Quentin ends the series on a [[EarnYourHappyEnding hard-earned happy note]].



** The main characters are either a mature look at how people might behave if given unimaginable power but no incentive to use it for anything other than petty time-wasting, or a bunch of feckless, self-pitying assholes with more personal problems than brain cells. Quentin is easily the worst-regarded of them, especially given that he devotes page after page to feeling sorry for himself for not having a purpose in life - even while more sympathetic cast members ''secretly'' grapple with things like chronic work-related stress, a troubled home life, or ''' ''the aftermath of being raped.'' '''

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** The main characters are either a mature look at how people might behave if given unimaginable power but no incentive to use it for anything other than petty time-wasting, or a bunch of feckless, self-pitying assholes with more personal problems than brain cells. Quentin is easily the worst-regarded of them, especially given that he devotes page after page to feeling sorry for himself for not having a purpose in life - even while more sympathetic cast members ''secretly'' grapple with things like chronic work-related stress, a troubled home life, or ''' ''the aftermath of being raped.'' '''''' However, general consensus is that this improves as the series continues and the main characters actually start taking their responsibilities seriously.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Quentin, particularly in the first book. On the face of it, his search for purpose is perfectly understandable, and his inability to be satisfied with a stable routine should make him pitiable... but Quentin's habit of ''self''-pity ends up undermining his likability, especially once Quentin starts responding to his problems by treating people around him like shit.

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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Quentin, particularly in the first book. On the face of it, his search for purpose is perfectly understandable, and his inability to be satisfied with a stable routine should make him pitiable... but Quentin's habit of ''self''-pity ends up undermining his likability, especially once Quentin starts responding to his problems by treating people around him like shit. It doesn't help that he ends up getting people hurt, killed or worse thanks to his childish behavior: first, there's the accidental summoning of the Beast thanks to Quentin's prank on one of the teachers, an incident that featured Amanda Orloff being ''eaten alive''; then there's his dabbling in Fillory, which led to the final confrontation with the Beast, in which [[spoiler: Penny got his hands bitten off]] and Alice was forced to [[spoiler: sacrifice her life and become a Niffin just to stop Martin Chatwin once and for all]].
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** The main characters are either a mature look at how people might behave if given unimaginable power but no incentive to use it, or a bunch of feckless, self-pitying assholes with more personal problems than brain cells. Quentin is easily the worst-regarded of them, especially given that he devotes page after page to feeling sorry for himself for not having a purpose in life - even while more sympathetic cast members ''secretly'' grapple with things like chronic work-related stress, a troubled home life, or ''' ''the aftermath of being raped.'' '''

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** The main characters are either a mature look at how people might behave if given unimaginable power but no incentive to use it, it for anything other than petty time-wasting, or a bunch of feckless, self-pitying assholes with more personal problems than brain cells. Quentin is easily the worst-regarded of them, especially given that he devotes page after page to feeling sorry for himself for not having a purpose in life - even while more sympathetic cast members ''secretly'' grapple with things like chronic work-related stress, a troubled home life, or ''' ''the aftermath of being raped.'' '''



* StoicWoobie: Elliot, as Quentin comes to discern, has a very hard-won outward coolness.

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* StoicWoobie: Elliot, as Quentin comes to discern, has a very hard-won outward coolness.coolness despite the homophobic bullying that he suffered in his past. During his time at Brakebills, he seems to have the least complaints out of all the characters, and seems to coast by on smart-ass remarks and deadpan humor. However, once he graduates and loses the focus that kept his demons in check, he quickly begins spiraling into alcoholism. [[spoiler: It takes the discovery of Fillory and his eventual ascent to the throne to help him get his act together.]]
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** The main characters are either a mature look at how people might behave if given unimaginable power but no incentive to use it, or a bunch of feckless, self-pitying assholes with more personal problems than brain cells. Quentin is easily the worst of them, especially given that he devotes page after page to feeling sorry for himself for not having a purpose in life - even while more sympathetic cast members ''secretly'' grapple with things like chronic work-related stress, a troubled home life, or ''' ''the aftermath of being raped.'' '''

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** The main characters are either a mature look at how people might behave if given unimaginable power but no incentive to use it, or a bunch of feckless, self-pitying assholes with more personal problems than brain cells. Quentin is easily the worst worst-regarded of them, especially given that he devotes page after page to feeling sorry for himself for not having a purpose in life - even while more sympathetic cast members ''secretly'' grapple with things like chronic work-related stress, a troubled home life, or ''' ''the aftermath of being raped.'' '''

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* BrokenBase: The message of the first book is either a unique and insightful take on the problem of getting everything you could possibly want, or just immature, unnecessarily dark, and {{Wangst}}y in the extreme.
** The magic system and school of Brakebills is either a nuanced approach to magic or an exhaustive PlotTumor that drains readers of their energy. Every single Brakebills student is depressed, even when playing a sports game where they casually throw fireballs. Grossman tries to justify this by having someone speculate that you must be depressed to have magic,and that magic is incredibly hard/boring to use, but that second part varies page by page (Ex: Sometimes casting a spell is described as being similar to doing extremely esoteric math problems, other times people throw fireballs with a gesture.)Some people view this as being a mature portrayal, while others view it as shallow, heavy-handed and unrealistic.

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The message of the first book is either a unique and insightful take on the problem of getting everything you could possibly want, or just immature, unnecessarily dark, and {{Wangst}}y in the extreme.
** The magic system and school of Brakebills is either a nuanced and detailed approach to magic or an exhaustive PlotTumor extension of the aforementioned {{Wangst}} that drains readers of their energy. Every single Brakebills student is depressed, even when playing will to continue reading. Summed up, the difficulty of learning magic means that it tends to take up rather a sports game where they casually throw fireballs. Grossman tries lot of space in the book, and Dean Fogg's attempts to justify this the main characters' personal problems by having someone speculate claiming that you must magical potential is born from depression might be depressed to have magic,and that pushing it a bit much. Plus, the sheer ease with which the Physical Kids master and ''use'' battle magic is incredibly hard/boring can appear jarring to use, but that second part varies page some readers after all the emphasis placed on the difficulty of magic, even if they have all graduated by page (Ex: Sometimes casting a spell is described as being similar to doing extremely esoteric math problems, other times people throw fireballs with a gesture.)Some people view this as being point.
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a mature portrayal, look at how people might behave if given unimaginable power but no incentive to use it, or a bunch of feckless, self-pitying assholes with more personal problems than brain cells. Quentin is easily the worst of them, especially given that he devotes page after page to feeling sorry for himself for not having a purpose in life - even while others view it as shallow, heavy-handed and unrealistic.more sympathetic cast members ''secretly'' grapple with things like chronic work-related stress, a troubled home life, or ''' ''the aftermath of being raped.'' '''


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** Emily Greenstreet would seem to be a deliberate example of this, spending most of her appearance consumed with self-pity over the fate of her boyfriend and blaming everything that happened to her on magic - to the point that even ''Quentin'' is put off by her.
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** The magic system and school of Brakebills is either a nuanced approach to magic or an exhaustive PlotTumor that drains readers of their energy. Every single Brakebills student is depressed, even when playing a sports game where they casually throw fireballs. Grossman tries to justify this by having someone speculate that you must be depressed to have magic,and that magic is incredibly hard/boring to use, but that second part varies page by page (Ex: Sometimes casting a spell is described as being similar to doing extremely esoteric math problems, other times people throw fireballs with a gesture.)Some people view this as being a mature portrayal, while others view it as shallow, heavy-handed and unrealistic.

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* {{Anvilicious}}: The first book hammers in the message "Getting everything you want doesn't make you happy" often. Many of the Brakebills students are depressed or insecure on some level, even while they're living a ridiculously overprivileged lifestyle of sex and drugs without having to work at all. Meanwhile, Quentin continues his descent into assholishness even after he's literally ended up in the fantasy kingdom of his dreams - to the point that [[WhatTheHellHero Alice eventually calls him on it]]. Even Dean Fogg points out that "wishing doesn't make it so," and that magic seems based on the kind of "magical thinking" that children eventually have to grow out of, even suggesting that wizards never really mature. Quentin arguably pushes the point [[{{Wangst}} too far]] by actively thinking himself superior to his fellow wizards when he briefly gives up on magic in the aftermath of [[spoiler: Alice's fatal transformation]]. Later books soften the impact by having the characters actually accomplish goals and walk away feeling satisfied, to the point that even Quentin ends the series on a happy note.

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* {{Anvilicious}}: The first book hammers in the message "Getting everything you want doesn't make you happy" often.often, and rarely subtly. Many of the Brakebills students are depressed or insecure on some level, even while they're living a ridiculously overprivileged lifestyle of sex and drugs without having to work at all. Meanwhile, Quentin continues his descent into assholishness even after he's literally ended up in the fantasy kingdom of his dreams - to the point that [[WhatTheHellHero Alice eventually calls him on it]]. Even Dean Fogg points out that "wishing doesn't make it so," and reasoning that magic seems based on the kind of "magical thinking" that children eventually have to grow out of, and even suggesting that wizards never really mature. Quentin arguably pushes the point [[{{Wangst}} too far]] by actively thinking himself superior to his fellow wizards when he briefly gives up on magic in the aftermath of [[spoiler: Alice's fatal transformation]]. Later books soften the impact by having the characters actually accomplish goals and walk away feeling satisfied, to the point that even Quentin ends the series on a [[EarnYourHappyEnding hard-earned happy note.note]].



* {{Wangst}}: A frequent problem, especially for Quentin. Though magic is hard to learn and even harder to master, the payoff leaves a graduating wizard rich for life, capable of making their wildest dreams come true, and with no need to work at all. And with all the privilege laid at his doorstep, Quentin steadily becomes more and more self-pitying over his desire for [[IJustWantToBeSpecial purpose]] and [[AllergicToRoutine stimulation]], which only grows all the more galling as he turns into a [[TookALevelInJerkass progressively bigger asshole]]. Worse still, he's often teamed up with people who actually have real insecurities and traumas, including Alice [[note]]Her brother became a Niffin, her parents lost touch with reality, and she had to ''force'' her way into the Academy through sheer willpower[[/note]], Josh [[note]]Constantly afraid of being thrown out of the Academy due to his IneptMage tendencies[[/note]], and Julia [[note]] [[spoiler: who was driven almost insane by the memory wipe, ended up dealing with a series of unpleasantly sleazy hedge-mages in her attempts to learn magic, and her big attempt at recovering and putting her skills to good use ended with her being ''raped'']][[/note]], and it only ends up making Quentin look even more petty. Even Alice calls him on this tendency once it looks like he's going to start sulking over the fantasy world he wanted all along. Thankfully, he gradually begins to grow out of this routine over the course of the series, particularly once he finally starts getting off his ass and working instead of being washed about by the plot.

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* {{Wangst}}: A frequent problem, especially for problem. The debate is still out on whether this was intentional or not.
** Easily the worst offender is
Quentin. Though magic is hard immensely difficult to learn and even harder to master, the payoff leaves a graduating wizard rich for life, capable of making their wildest dreams come true, and with no need to work at all. And with all the privilege laid at his doorstep, Quentin steadily becomes more and more self-pitying over his desire for [[IJustWantToBeSpecial purpose]] and [[AllergicToRoutine stimulation]], which only grows all the more galling as he turns into a [[TookALevelInJerkass progressively bigger asshole]]. Worse still, he's often teamed up with people who actually have real insecurities and traumas, including Alice [[note]]Her brother became a Niffin, her parents lost touch with reality, [[DarkAndTroubledPast Alice]], [[StepfordSmiler Josh]], and she had to ''force'' her way into the Academy through sheer willpower[[/note]], Josh [[note]]Constantly afraid of being thrown out of the Academy due to his IneptMage tendencies[[/note]], and Julia [[note]] [[spoiler: who was driven almost insane by the memory wipe, ended up dealing with a series of unpleasantly sleazy hedge-mages in her attempts to learn magic, and her big attempt at recovering and putting her skills to good use ended with her being ''raped'']][[/note]], [[SanitySlippage Julia]], and it only ends up making Quentin look even more petty. Even Alice calls him on this tendency once it looks like he's going to start sulking over the fantasy world he wanted all along. Thankfully, he gradually begins to grow out of this routine over the course of the series, particularly once he finally starts getting off his ass and working instead of being washed about by the plot.



* TheWoobie: Quentin (at least in the early chapters), Alice, and at times Josh.

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least in the early chapters), Alice, chapters, comes across as chronically depressed and plagued with self-doubt, and may inspire genuine sympathy due to his childlike obsessions... up until he starts behaving like an asshole by way of compensating.
** Alice: her brother died after being accidentally transformed into a Niffin, her parents descended into solipsistic madness and lost interest in her, and when Brakebills turned her down, she ran away from home and ''walked'' the last few miles just to reach the academy. Plus, she clearly has even less confidence than Quentin. [[spoiler: Also, Quentin cheats on her, spends the next few chapters being an asshole to her and everyone else under the sun, and Alice has to round out her story by sacrificing her life to save everyone.]]
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* {{Wangst}}: A frequent problem, especially for Quentin. Though magic is hard to learn and even harder to master, the payoff leaves a graduating wizard rich for life, capable of making their wildest dreams come true, and with no need to work at all. And with all the privilege laid at his doorstep, Quentin steadily becomes more and more self-pitying over his desire for [[IJustWantToBeSpecial purpose]] and [[AllergicToRoutine stimulation]], which only grows all the more galling as he turns into a [[TookALevelInJerkass progressively bigger asshole]]. Worse still, he's often teamed up with people who actually have real insecurities and traumas, including Alice [[note]]Her brother became a Niffin, her parents lost touch with reality, and she had to ''force'' her way into the Academy through sheer willpower[[/note]], Josh [[note]]Constantly afraid of being thrown out of the Academy due to his IneptMage tendencies[[/note]], and Julia [[note]] [[spoiler: who was driven almost insane by the memory wipe, ended up dealing with a series of unpleasantly sleazy hedge-mages in her attempts to learn magic, and her big attempt at recovering and putting her skills to good use ended with her being ''raped'']][[/note]], and it only ends up making Quentin look even more petty. Even Alice calls him on this tendency once it looks like he's going to start sulking over the fantasy world he wanted all along. Thankfully, he gradually begins to grow out of this routine over the course of the series, particularly once he finally starts getting off his ass and working instead of being

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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Quentin, particularly in the first book. On the face of it, his search for purpose is perfectly understandable, and his inability to be satisfied with a stable routine should make him pitiable... but Quentin's habit of ''self''-pity ends up undermining his likability, especially once Quentin starts responding to his problems by treating people around him like shit.
* {{Wangst}}: A frequent problem, especially for Quentin. Though magic is hard to learn and even harder to master, the payoff leaves a graduating wizard rich for life, capable of making their wildest dreams come true, and with no need to work at all. And with all the privilege laid at his doorstep, Quentin steadily becomes more and more self-pitying over his desire for [[IJustWantToBeSpecial purpose]] and [[AllergicToRoutine stimulation]], which only grows all the more galling as he turns into a [[TookALevelInJerkass progressively bigger asshole]]. Worse still, he's often teamed up with people who actually have real insecurities and traumas, including Alice [[note]]Her brother became a Niffin, her parents lost touch with reality, and she had to ''force'' her way into the Academy through sheer willpower[[/note]], Josh [[note]]Constantly afraid of being thrown out of the Academy due to his IneptMage tendencies[[/note]], and Julia [[note]] [[spoiler: who was driven almost insane by the memory wipe, ended up dealing with a series of unpleasantly sleazy hedge-mages in her attempts to learn magic, and her big attempt at recovering and putting her skills to good use ended with her being ''raped'']][[/note]], and it only ends up making Quentin look even more petty. Even Alice calls him on this tendency once it looks like he's going to start sulking over the fantasy world he wanted all along. Thankfully, he gradually begins to grow out of this routine over the course of the series, particularly once he finally starts getting off his ass and working instead of being washed about by the plot.
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"Apparently?" "Someone?" "Everyone?" Be specific, because Quentin doesn't qualify as "everyone." Plus, Josh's insecurities during the game were due to fears of FAILING.


* BaseBreaker: The message of the first book is either a unique and insightful take on the problem of getting everything you could possibly want, or just immature, unnecessarily dark, and {{Wangst}}y in the extreme.

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* BaseBreaker: BrokenBase: The message of the first book is either a unique and insightful take on the problem of getting everything you could possibly want, or just immature, unnecessarily dark, and {{Wangst}}y in the extreme.



* {{Wangst}}: A frequent problem, especially for Quentin. Though magic is hard to learn and even harder to master, the payoff leaves a graduating wizard rich for life, capable of making their wildest dreams come true, and with no need to work at all. And with all the privilege laid at his doorstep, Quentin steadily becomes and more self-pitying over his desire for [[IJustWantToBeSpecial purpose]] and [[AllergicToRoutine stimulation]], which only grows more galling as he turns into a [[TookALevelInJerkass progressively bigger asshole]]. Worse still, he's often teamed up with people who actually have legitimate problems, including Alice, Josh and Julia - [[spoiler: the latter of whom actually ended up getting ''raped'' while Quentin was off doing his own thing]] - and it only ends up make Quentin look even more petty. Even ''Alice'' calls him on this tendency once it looks like he's going to start sulking over the fantasy world he wanted all along. Thankfully, he gradually begins to grow out of this routine over the course of the series.
** Also, Dean Fogg's supposition that wizards can use magic due to their inherent unhappiness and pain may be considered just a ''little'' bit [[{{Narm}} overdone]].

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* {{Wangst}}: A frequent problem, especially for Quentin. Though magic is hard to learn and even harder to master, the payoff leaves a graduating wizard rich for life, capable of making their wildest dreams come true, and with no need to work at all. And with all the privilege laid at his doorstep, Quentin steadily becomes more and more self-pitying over his desire for [[IJustWantToBeSpecial purpose]] and [[AllergicToRoutine stimulation]], which only grows all the more galling as he turns into a [[TookALevelInJerkass progressively bigger asshole]]. Worse still, he's often teamed up with people who actually have legitimate problems, real insecurities and traumas, including Alice, Alice [[note]]Her brother became a Niffin, her parents lost touch with reality, and she had to ''force'' her way into the Academy through sheer willpower[[/note]], Josh [[note]]Constantly afraid of being thrown out of the Academy due to his IneptMage tendencies[[/note]], and Julia - [[note]] [[spoiler: who was driven almost insane by the latter of whom actually memory wipe, ended up getting ''raped'' while Quentin was off doing his own thing]] - dealing with a series of unpleasantly sleazy hedge-mages in her attempts to learn magic, and her big attempt at recovering and putting her skills to good use ended with her being ''raped'']][[/note]], and it only ends up make making Quentin look even more petty. Even ''Alice'' Alice calls him on this tendency once it looks like he's going to start sulking over the fantasy world he wanted all along. Thankfully, he gradually begins to grow out of this routine over the course of the series.
series, particularly once he finally starts getting off his ass and working instead of being
** Also, Dean Fogg's supposition claim that wizards can use magic due to their inherent unhappiness and pain may be considered just a ''little'' bit [[{{Narm}} overdone]].overdone]].

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"Apparently?" "Someone?" "Everyone?" Be specific, because Quentin doesn't qualify as "everyone." Plus, Josh's insecurities during the game were due to fears of FAILING.


* {{Anvilicious}}: The first book hammers in the message "Getting everything you want doesn't make you happy" on nearly every page. Every single Brakebills student is depressed, even when playing a sports game where they casually throw fireballs, or in one case, simultaneously having sex and doing cocaine/ecstasy. Grossman tries to justify this by having someone speculate that you must be depressed to have magic,and that magic is incredibly hard/boring to use, but that second part varies page by page (Ex: Sometimes casting a spell is described as being similar to doing extremely esoteric math problems, other times people throw fireballs with a gesture.)Some people view this as being a mature portrayal, while others view it as shallow, heavy-handed and unrealistic. Later books apparently see some character growth.

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* {{Anvilicious}}: The first book hammers in the message "Getting everything you want doesn't make you happy" on nearly every page. Every single often. Many of the Brakebills student is depressed, even when playing a sports game where they casually throw fireballs, or in one case, simultaneously having sex and doing cocaine/ecstasy. Grossman tries to justify this by having someone speculate that you must be students are depressed or insecure on some level, even while they're living a ridiculously overprivileged lifestyle of sex and drugs without having to have magic,and work at all. Meanwhile, Quentin continues his descent into assholishness even after he's literally ended up in the fantasy kingdom of his dreams - to the point that [[WhatTheHellHero Alice eventually calls him on it]]. Even Dean Fogg points out that "wishing doesn't make it so," and that magic is incredibly hard/boring to use, but seems based on the kind of "magical thinking" that second part varies page children eventually have to grow out of, even suggesting that wizards never really mature. Quentin arguably pushes the point [[{{Wangst}} too far]] by page (Ex: Sometimes casting a spell is described as being similar actively thinking himself superior to doing extremely esoteric math problems, other times people throw fireballs with a gesture.)Some people view this as being a mature portrayal, while others view it as shallow, heavy-handed and unrealistic. his fellow wizards when he briefly gives up on magic in the aftermath of [[spoiler: Alice's fatal transformation]]. Later books apparently see some character growth. soften the impact by having the characters actually accomplish goals and walk away feeling satisfied, to the point that even Quentin ends the series on a happy note.



* BaseBreaker: The message of the first book is either a unique and insightful take on the problem of getting everything you could possibly want, or just immature, unnecessarily dark, and {{Wangst}}y in the extreme.



* JerkassWoobie: Quentin drifts strongly towards assholish behavior in some chapters, but he remains consistently pitiable because a lot of the assholish behavior is rooted in his own psychological issues.

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* JerkassWoobie: Quentin drifts strongly towards assholish behavior in some chapters, but even he remains consistently ends up pitiable because a lot of through the assholish behavior is rooted in sheer trauma he eventually brings down on his own psychological issues.head - especially once he finally gets over his need to blame something else [[spoiler: for the loss of Alice.]]



* {{Wangst}}: A frequent problem, especially for Quentin. Though magic is hard to learn and even harder to master, the payoff leaves a graduating wizard rich for life, capable of making their wildest dreams come true, and with no need to work at all. And with all the privilege laid at his doorstep, Quentin steadily becomes and more self-pitying over his desire for [[IJustWantToBeSpecial purpose]] and [[AllergicToRoutine stimulation]], which only grows more galling as he turns into a [[TookALevelInJerkass progressively bigger asshole]]. Worse still, he's often teamed up with people who actually have legitimate problems, including Alice, Josh and Julia - [[spoiler: the latter of whom actually ended up getting ''raped'' while Quentin was off doing his own thing]] - and it only ends up make Quentin look even more petty. Even ''Alice'' calls him on this tendency once it looks like he's going to start sulking over the fantasy world he wanted all along. Thankfully, he gradually begins to grow out of this routine over the course of the series.
** Also, Dean Fogg's supposition that wizards can use magic due to their inherent unhappiness and pain may be considered just a ''little'' bit [[{{Narm}} overdone]].



* {{Wangst}}: In the first book, a bunch of teenagers learn that they have magic, will be basically rich for life, and basically make their wildest dreams come true. While magic is hard to learn, during their training they're able to casually do things like throw fireballs during a sports game. They drink heavily, do a variety of drugs, and have tons of sex (sometimes all at once!) Every single character reacts universally depressed through all of this. This is a BaseBreaker: Some view it as wangst, others don't.
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* Anvilicious: The first book hammers in the message "Getting everything you want doesn't make you happy" on nearly every page. Every single Brakebills student is depressed, even when playing a sports game where they casually throw fireballs, or in one case, simultaneously having sex and doing cocaine/ecstasy. Grossman tries to justify this by having someone speculate that you must be depressed to have magic,and that magic is incredibly hard/boring to use, but that second part varies page by page (Ex: Sometimes casting a spell is described as being similar to doing extremely esoteric math problems, other times people throw fireballs with a gesture.)Some people view this as being a mature portrayal, while others view it as shallow, heavy-handed and unrealistic. Later books apparently see some character growth.

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* Anvilicious: {{Anvilicious}}: The first book hammers in the message "Getting everything you want doesn't make you happy" on nearly every page. Every single Brakebills student is depressed, even when playing a sports game where they casually throw fireballs, or in one case, simultaneously having sex and doing cocaine/ecstasy. Grossman tries to justify this by having someone speculate that you must be depressed to have magic,and that magic is incredibly hard/boring to use, but that second part varies page by page (Ex: Sometimes casting a spell is described as being similar to doing extremely esoteric math problems, other times people throw fireballs with a gesture.)Some people view this as being a mature portrayal, while others view it as shallow, heavy-handed and unrealistic. Later books apparently see some character growth.



* Wangst: In the first book, a bunch of teenagers learn that they have magic, will be basically rich for life, and basically make their wildest dreams come true. While magic is hard to learn, during their training they're able to casually do things like throw fireballs during a sports game. They drink heavily, do a variety of drugs, and have tons of sex (sometimes all at once!) Every single character reacts universally depressed through all of this. This is a BaseBreaker: Some view it as wangst, others don't.

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* Wangst: {{Wangst}}: In the first book, a bunch of teenagers learn that they have magic, will be basically rich for life, and basically make their wildest dreams come true. While magic is hard to learn, during their training they're able to casually do things like throw fireballs during a sports game. They drink heavily, do a variety of drugs, and have tons of sex (sometimes all at once!) Every single character reacts universally depressed through all of this. This is a BaseBreaker: Some view it as wangst, others don't.

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Adding entries. The magicians is a fairly polarizing series—you either hate it or love it. Some of the main points detractors have with the books aren't in YMMV, so I've added them.


* Anvilicious: The first book hammers in the message "Getting everything you want doesn't make you happy" on nearly every page. Every single Brakebills student is depressed, even when playing a sports game where they casually throw fireballs, or in one case, simultaneously having sex and doing cocaine/ecstasy. Grossman tries to justify this by having someone speculate that you must be depressed to have magic,and that magic is incredibly hard/boring to use, but that second part varies page by page (Ex: Sometimes casting a spell is described as being similar to doing extremely esoteric math problems, other times people throw fireballs with a gesture.)Some people view this as being a mature portrayal, while others view it as shallow, heavy-handed and unrealistic. Later books apparently see some character growth.




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* Wangst: In the first book, a bunch of teenagers learn that they have magic, will be basically rich for life, and basically make their wildest dreams come true. While magic is hard to learn, during their training they're able to casually do things like throw fireballs during a sports game. They drink heavily, do a variety of drugs, and have tons of sex (sometimes all at once!) Every single character reacts universally depressed through all of this. This is a BaseBreaker: Some view it as wangst, others don't.
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* OneSceneWonder: Either one of [[KnightOfCerberus the Beast's]] appearances in the first novel could count.

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* OneSceneWonder: Either one of [[KnightOfCerberus [[KnightOfCerebus the Beast's]] appearances in the first novel could count.
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: [[spoiler:Martin Chatwin]] had very good reasons to do what he did, and it's easy to see what drove him to become [[spoiler:Fillory's tyrannical god-king. He became the parental figure to his younger siblings at age 12, and his fairytale adventures in Fillory were his main avenue of escape from the pressure. Doubly so when Martin became the victim of sexual abuse at the hands of the only adult the Chatwins had confided Fillory's existence to, but with Martin's increasingly lost innocence and purity, Fillory became less and less open to him. He grew to hate himself, hate the real world, and hate Fillory's gods for barring him entry to the one place he was safe, all for the crimes of being raped and growing older. When he [[DealWithTheDevil strikes up a deal]] with the eviler half of Fillory's pantheon, he trades away his humanity for power and becomes the worst sort of god: one born from the mind of a broken, bitter, and empty child, who is now literally incapable of maturing. Is it any surprise he turned into a monster?]]


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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Asmodeus is a big one. For the villains, [[spoiler:Martin]] is generally considered such for his intriguing and surprisingly sympathetic backstory, which isn't fully unveiled until the final novel, [[spoiler:long after his death.]]


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* JerkassWoobie: Quentin drifts strongly towards assholish behavior in some chapters, but he remains consistently pitiable because a lot of the assholish behavior is rooted in his own psychological issues.



* StoicWoobie: Elliot, as Quentin comes to discern, has a very hard-won outward coolness.



** JerkassWoobie: Quentin drifts strongly towards assholish behavior in some chapters, but he remains consistently pitiable because a lot of the assholish behavior is rooted in his own psychological issues.
** StoicWoobie: Elliot, as Quentin comes to discern, has a very hard-won outward coolness.

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** JerkassWoobie: Quentin drifts strongly towards assholish behavior in some chapters, but he remains consistently pitiable because a lot of the assholish behavior is rooted in his own psychological issues.
** StoicWoobie: Elliot, as Quentin comes to discern, has a very hard-won outward coolness.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: At the end of the Brakebill welters tournament, Quentin experiences a revelation about things that don't matter, throws the match, picks Alice up, and jumps with her into a pool of water of unknown depth. None of this is ever mentioned again.
* CompleteMonster: [[Literature/ReynardTheFox Raynard The Fox]] from ''The Magician King'' is a hulking mass of muscle, red fur and sharp teeth, summoned by a sect of magicians who believe they are calling upon a benevolent goddess. When summoned, Raynard promptly proceeds to take the "sacrifices" he sees as his. Setting upon the magicians, Raynard kills many of them horribly and painful, mortally wounding one and sneering over the young man's dying attempt to offer himself to let the final two live. When one promises her life in exchange for the other's, Raynard [[ExactWords chooses to interpret it in a dark way]]: he promptly brutally rapes her in front of her friend and tears her humanity out when finished.

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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: At the end of the Brakebill Brakebills welters tournament, Quentin experiences a revelation about things that don't matter, throws the match, picks Alice up, and jumps with her into a pool of water of unknown depth. None of this is ever mentioned again.
* CompleteMonster: [[Literature/ReynardTheFox Raynard The Reynard the Fox]] from ''The Magician King'' is a hulking mass of muscle, red fur and sharp teeth, summoned by a sect of magicians who believe they are calling upon a benevolent goddess. When summoned, Raynard Reynard promptly proceeds to take the "sacrifices" he sees as his. Setting upon the magicians, Raynard Reynard kills many of them horribly and painful, painfully, mortally wounding one and sneering over the young man's dying attempt to offer himself to let the final two live. When one promises her life in exchange for the other's, Raynard Reynard [[ExactWords chooses to interpret it in a dark way]]: he promptly brutally rapes her in front of her friend and tears her humanity out when finished.



* NightmareFuel: When time stops still in the middle of class and The Beast appears, though they can't move, everyone is still aware of what's happening, which means that Amanda Orloff was perfectly conscious the entire time she was being eaten alive ''one bite at a time'', and probably a few people had no choice but to watch it all. The Beast counts as this in general.

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* NightmareFuel: When time stops still in the middle of class and The the Beast appears, though they can't move, everyone is still aware of what's happening, which means that Amanda Orloff was perfectly conscious the entire time she was being eaten alive ''one bite at a time'', and probably a few people had no choice but to watch it all. The Beast counts as this in general.

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* CompleteMonster: Literature/ReynardTheFox from ''The Magician King'' is a hulking mass of muscle, red fur and sharp teeth, summoned by a sect of magicians who believe they are calling upon a benevolent goddess. When summoned, Raynard promptly proceeds to take the "sacrifices" he sees as his. Setting upon the magicians, Raynard kills many of them horribly and painful, mortally wounding one and sneering over the young man's dying attempt to offer himself to let the final two live. When one promises her life in exchange for the other's, Raynard [[ExactWords chooses to interpret it in a dark way]]: he promptly brutally rapes her in front of her friend and tears her humanity out when finished.

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* CompleteMonster: Literature/ReynardTheFox [[Literature/ReynardTheFox Raynard The Fox]] from ''The Magician King'' is a hulking mass of muscle, red fur and sharp teeth, summoned by a sect of magicians who believe they are calling upon a benevolent goddess. When summoned, Raynard promptly proceeds to take the "sacrifices" he sees as his. Setting upon the magicians, Raynard kills many of them horribly and painful, mortally wounding one and sneering over the young man's dying attempt to offer himself to let the final two live. When one promises her life in exchange for the other's, Raynard [[ExactWords chooses to interpret it in a dark way]]: he promptly brutally rapes her in front of her friend and tears her humanity out when finished.
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*CompleteMonster: Literature/ReynardTheFox from ''The Magician King'' is a hulking mass of muscle, red fur and sharp teeth, summoned by a sect of magicians who believe they are calling upon a benevolent goddess. When summoned, Raynard promptly proceeds to take the "sacrifices" he sees as his. Setting upon the magicians, Raynard kills many of them horribly and painful, mortally wounding one and sneering over the young man's dying attempt to offer himself to let the final two live. When one promises her life in exchange for the other's, Raynard [[ExactWords chooses to interpret it in a dark way]]: he promptly brutally rapes her in front of her friend and tears her humanity out when finished.
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Martin Chatwin, who's prepared to murder, mutilate, torture and consume his enemies just to keep his stranglehold on Fillory. And these "enemies" are almost entirely helpless- especially Professor March's class, who remained frozen in time while awake and conscious just because Martin felt like screwing with them. And when one of them dares fight back, he eats her alive. ]]
** [[spoiler: Reynard the Fox in the sequel. He casually murders a room full of people then rapes the heroine as her friend watches on helplessly.]]
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** FromBadToWorse: At the end of the first book, Quentin finally gets a solid reason to be a woobie and suffers an extended HeroicBSOD after [[spoiler:Alice dies fighting the Beast]]. Qualifies as a Tearjerker as she is gone before he can tell her what he's realized - [[spoiler: that he really loves her]].

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** FromBadToWorse: At the end of the first book, Quentin finally gets a solid reason to be a woobie and suffers an extended HeroicBSOD after [[spoiler:Alice dies fighting the Beast]]. Qualifies as a Tearjerker as she is gone before he can tell her what he's realized - [[spoiler: that he really loves her]].
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* FamilyUnfriendlyAesop: One of the major themes of the series seems to be that human beings are not psychologically prepared to deal with a world in which magic is real.

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* FamilyUnfriendlyAesop: One of the major themes of the series seems to be that human beings are not psychologically prepared to deal with a world in which magic is real. May cross into FantasticAesop.
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* UnfortunateImplications: Apparently, [[spoiler: getting very physically, very brutally raped by a ten-foot fox-deity on the much darker side of the TricksterArchetype spectrum is one way of gaining the power to turn into a beautiful, otherworldly demi-goddess.]]

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* UnfortunateImplications: Apparently, [[spoiler: getting very physically, very brutally raped by a ten-foot fox-deity on the much darker side of the TricksterArchetype spectrum is one way of gaining the power to turn into a beautiful, otherworldly demi-goddess.]]

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