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* ShockingSwerve: Jay's identity. [[spoiler: It's Jill.]]
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* GodModeSue: John goes dangerously close to this many times.
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* FridgeHorror: [[spoiler:The person who was responsible for the death of Gatrie as well as the cause of great amounts of torment for John early in the story just happened to be a time-travelling ex girlfriend who was also once a friend of Gatrie's and mourned his loss. She also happens to be the same person who killed John in the story. AxCrazy much?]]
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Crowning Moment of Heartwarming]]: The author's note for chapter 76 may very well qualify.
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* DracoInLeatherPants: Petrine's portrayal is a rare subversion in that somehow, Foxwolf Jackson turned Petrine into one of the most likeable characters in the entire fic ''while keeping her in character''. [[spoiler:Her death also came as something of a PlayerPunch and a TearJerker to a lot of readers.]]
* RonTheDeathEater: Shinon is also an intresting subversion in that he's still kept in character but made to be an incredibly despicable bastard.
** [[FantasticRacism Although it's]] [[ColdSniper not exactly]] [[JerkAss much of]] [[OnlyInItForTheMoney a jump]]...
** Chapter 73 takes this and pretty much [[UpToEleven runs with it]], with him [[spoiler:[[NeverLiveItDown mercilessly mocking John's crossdressing incident]], almost killing [[CuteShotaroBoy Rolf]], and perhaps worst of all, [[PlayerPunch insulting Petrine right to John's face]]. YourMileageMayVary on whether or not his death at the end of this chapter [[AlasPoorVillain subverts this]] or [[KarmicDeath gives it a satisfying climax]].]]
** The Black Knight, as well, is depicted as a psychotic killer with a hatred for Greil's family. To really make the point, the author has him quote Sephiroth, of all people. His motivations in canon were more complex than that.
* RonTheDeathEater: Shinon is also an intresting subversion in that he's still kept in character but made to be an incredibly despicable bastard.
** [[FantasticRacism Although it's]] [[ColdSniper not exactly]] [[JerkAss much of]] [[OnlyInItForTheMoney a jump]]...
** Chapter 73 takes this and pretty much [[UpToEleven runs with it]], with him [[spoiler:[[NeverLiveItDown mercilessly mocking John's crossdressing incident]], almost killing [[CuteShotaroBoy Rolf]], and perhaps worst of all, [[PlayerPunch insulting Petrine right to John's face]]. YourMileageMayVary on whether or not his death at the end of this chapter [[AlasPoorVillain subverts this]] or [[KarmicDeath gives it a satisfying climax]].]]
** The Black Knight, as well, is depicted as a psychotic killer with a hatred for Greil's family. To really make the point, the author has him quote Sephiroth, of all people. His motivations in canon were more complex than that.
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** The Black Knight, as well, is depicted as a psychotic killer with a hatred for Greil's family. To really make the point, the author has him quote Sephiroth, of all people. His motivations in canon were [[{{Understatement}} slightly more complex than that.]]
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** [[InsultBackfire "For your information, there were COUNTLESS innocents on board the Death Star!"]]
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** Ilyana going berserk after someone burns the food tent, for how over the top her reaction is.
