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* SeasonalRot: The main thread tying most of the stories together after the midpoint, Mindmistress hunting down Bloodlust, wrap up in one of the last chapters. After that climax is reached, the story simply limps along without much purpose any longer until it goes out with a whimper as Al grew disinterested in working on the webcomic any longer and left the last story unfinished. The fact he based it off of Greek mythology and was running out of myths to adapt might have also had something to do with it.
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* CompleteMonster: [[WouldHurtAChild Les Kidman]] is a pedophile and {{serial killer}} who rapes and kills little girls to suit his depraved appetites. After murdering three children, he's hired by his wealthy employer Cromwell Lyons (a friend of Kidman's late father) to kill his mentally handicapped granddaughter Lorelei, whom he considers a weak link in his family dynasty. Kidman stabs Lorelei's dog to death, but is thankfully stopped just in time by Lorelei's father from harming her. When Kidman is released from prison 20 years later, he immediately returns to his old ways. When the superheroine Mindmistress arrives to stop him after he kills his latest victim, he tries to [[CrowbarCombatant beat her to death with a crowbar]].
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* CompleteMonster: [[WouldHurtAChild Les Kidman]] is a pedophile and {{serial killer}} SerialKiller who rapes and kills little girls to suit his depraved appetites. After murdering three children, he's hired by his wealthy employer Cromwell Lyons (a Lyons, a friend of Kidman's late father) father, to kill his mentally handicapped granddaughter Lorelei, whom he considers a weak link in his family dynasty. Kidman stabs Lorelei's dog to death, but is thankfully stopped just in time by Lorelei's father from harming her. When Kidman is released from prison 20 years later, he immediately returns to his old ways. When the superheroine Mindmistress arrives to stop him after he kills his latest victim, he tries to [[CrowbarCombatant beat her to death with a crowbar]].
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* CompleteMonster: Les Kidman is a [[WouldHurtAChild pedophile]] and {{serial killer}} who rapes and kills little girls to suit his depraved appetites. After murdering three children, he's hired by his wealthy employer Cromwell Lyons (a friend of Kidman's late father) to kill his mentally handicapped granddaughter Lorelei, whom he considers a weak link in his family dynasty. Kidman stabs Lorelei's dog to death, but is thankfully stopped just in time by Lorelei's father from harming her. When Kidman is released from prison 20 years later, he immediately returns to his old ways. When the superheroine Mindmistress arrives to stop him after he kills his latest victim, he tries to [[CrowbarCombatant beat her to death with a crowbar]].
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* CompleteMonster: Les Kidman is a [[WouldHurtAChild pedophile]] Les Kidman]] is a pedophile and {{serial killer}} who rapes and kills little girls to suit his depraved appetites. After murdering three children, he's hired by his wealthy employer Cromwell Lyons (a friend of Kidman's late father) to kill his mentally handicapped granddaughter Lorelei, whom he considers a weak link in his family dynasty. Kidman stabs Lorelei's dog to death, but is thankfully stopped just in time by Lorelei's father from harming her. When Kidman is released from prison 20 years later, he immediately returns to his old ways. When the superheroine Mindmistress arrives to stop him after he kills his latest victim, he tries to [[CrowbarCombatant beat her to death with a crowbar]].
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* CompleteMonster: Les Kidman is a pedophile and {{serial killer}} who rapes and kills little girls to suit his depraved appetites. After murdering three children, he's hired by his wealthy employer Cromwell Lyons (a friend of Kidman's late father) to kill his mentally handicapped granddaughter Lorelei, whom he considers a weak link in his family dynasty. Kidman stabs Lorelei's dog to death, but is thankfully stopped just in time by Lorelei's father from harming her. When Kidman is released from prison 20 years later, he immediately returns to his old ways. When the superheroine Mindmistress arrives to stop him after he kills his latest victim, he tries to beat her to death with a crowbar.
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* CompleteMonster: Les Kidman is a pedophile [[WouldHurtAChild pedophile]] and {{serial killer}} who rapes and kills little girls to suit his depraved appetites. After murdering three children, he's hired by his wealthy employer Cromwell Lyons (a friend of Kidman's late father) to kill his mentally handicapped granddaughter Lorelei, whom he considers a weak link in his family dynasty. Kidman stabs Lorelei's dog to death, but is thankfully stopped just in time by Lorelei's father from harming her. When Kidman is released from prison 20 years later, he immediately returns to his old ways. When the superheroine Mindmistress arrives to stop him after he kills his latest victim, he tries to [[CrowbarCombatant beat her to death with a crowbar.crowbar]].
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* CompleteMonster: Lolerei's grandfather ([[PosthumousCharacter who appears only in retrospections]]) hired Les Kidman, a pedophile and murderer, as a part of a plan in which he was supposed to kill her, because Lolerei is mentally challenged and her grandfather considered it ''a disgrace to the family name''.
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* CompleteMonster: Lolerei's grandfather ([[PosthumousCharacter who appears only in retrospections]]) hired Les Kidman, Kidman is a pedophile and murderer, as a part {{serial killer}} who rapes and kills little girls to suit his depraved appetites. After murdering three children, he's hired by his wealthy employer Cromwell Lyons (a friend of a plan in which he was supposed Kidman's late father) to kill her, because Lolerei is his mentally challenged and her grandfather considered it ''a disgrace to the handicapped granddaughter Lorelei, whom he considers a weak link in his family name''.dynasty. Kidman stabs Lorelei's dog to death, but is thankfully stopped just in time by Lorelei's father from harming her. When Kidman is released from prison 20 years later, he immediately returns to his old ways. When the superheroine Mindmistress arrives to stop him after he kills his latest victim, he tries to beat her to death with a crowbar.
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* CompleteMonster: Les Kidman, Ezekiel's father. Bloodlust is a bit of this, as well.
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* CompleteMonster: CompleteMonster: Lolerei's grandfather ([[PosthumousCharacter who appears only in retrospections]]) hired Les Kidman, Ezekiel's father. Bloodlust a pedophile and murderer, as a part of a plan in which he was supposed to kill her, because Lolerei is a bit of this, as well.mentally challenged and her grandfather considered it ''a disgrace to the family name''.
