Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
moved to the sequel series’ YMMV page.
Deleted line(s) 19 (click to see context) :
** [[spoiler: Hakatri's resurrection by Utuk'ku's sorcerors]] at the end of ''Empire of Grass''.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 19 (click to see context) from:
** [[spoiler: Hakatri's resurrection by Utuk'ku's sorcerors]] at the end of ''Empire of Grass'', second book of the sequel trilogy.
to:
** [[spoiler: Hakatri's resurrection by Utuk'ku's sorcerors]] at the end of ''Empire of Grass'', second book of the sequel trilogy.Grass''.
Changed line(s) 24,26 (click to see context) from:
** On the villains' side, there's Elias himself, who is tricked into the whole EvilPlan out of [[spoiler:grief over his dead wife]];
** and poor Guthwulf -- as much of a JerkAss as he is to begin with, he doesn't deserve to be {{Mind Rape}}d by Sorrow and blinded by Pryrates.
** same goes for Cadrach despite all the mess he helped stir up.
** and poor Guthwulf -- as much of a JerkAss as he is to begin with, he doesn't deserve to be {{Mind Rape}}d by Sorrow and blinded by Pryrates.
** same goes for Cadrach despite all the mess he helped stir up.
to:
** On the villains' side, there's Elias himself, who is tricked into the whole EvilPlan out of [[spoiler:grief over his dead wife]];
wife]].
**and poor Guthwulf -- as much of a JerkAss as he is to begin with, he doesn't deserve to be {{Mind Rape}}d by Sorrow and blinded by Pryrates.
**same goes for Cadrach despite all the mess he helped stir up.
**
**
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 5,6 (click to see context) from:
** An ominous, threatening character is introduced, and Miriamelle is duly frightened by him into following him to his master's office. When she gets there, Streáwe, his master, is much friendlier than anticipated:
--->'''Miriamelle:''' If your intensions were honorable then why did you invite us here under threat of knives?\\
--->'''Miriamelle:''' If your intensions were honorable then why did you invite us here under threat of knives?\\
to:
** An ominous, threatening character is introduced, and Miriamelle Miriamele is duly frightened by him into following him to his master's office. When she gets there, Streáwe, his master, is much friendlier than anticipated:
--->'''Miriamelle:''' --->'''Miriamele:''' If your intensions were honorable then why did you invite us here under threat of knives?\\
Changed line(s) 8 (click to see context) from:
'''Miriamelle:''' Certainly he did. Are you meaning he doesn't?\\
to:
Changed line(s) 10 (click to see context) from:
'''Miriamelle:''' What does Avi Stetto mean?\\
to:
Changed line(s) 27 (click to see context) from:
** Maegwyn and Leleth in particular seem to have been screwed over by a cruel deity just so they can [[spoiler:sacrifice their lives to give Simon the strength to return to his body from near death]].
to:
** Maegwyn Maegwin and Leleth in particular seem to have been screwed over by a cruel deity just so they can [[spoiler:sacrifice their lives to give Simon the strength to return to his body from near death]].
