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11th May '13 12:45:25 PM DA

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Trying to be consistent with the spoilers.

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* ShowDontTell: The natural consequences of the {{Infodump}}s. There's a lot of background information that would have been better in a flashback. Some examples include Lady Ho-Oh's StartOfDarkness and Mewtwo's first encounter with Deoxys - thanks to the {{Infodump}}s, they're reduced to OffstageVillainy.
* StrangledByTheRedString: Latias and [[spoiler: the Ghost King's]] relationship is the most complained about aspect of the story. From the very beginning of the story, Latias [[spoiler:has been dreaming about marrying the Ghost King, even though she didn't know what he even looked like. Later on, she forgives the him for razing her hometown and murdering everyone in it in a childish fit of rage, because two out of the hundreds of thousands of innocent dead said they forgive him. And then Latias marries the damn guy!]] Many readers were not at all satisfied with the story's explanation [[spoiler:and especially not the tacked-on revelation that Kyogre secretly made the Ghost King do it at the very end]], and consider this a Wall Banger.

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9th May '13 9:47:36 PM DA

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8th May '13 3:19:17 PM DA

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