History YMMV / FirstTrySeries

1st May '13 10:23:18 PM CaellachTigerEye
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* BetterThanCanon: Many reviewers regard the First Try series better and more cohesive than the original series.
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* BetterThanCanon: Many reviewers regard the First Try series better and more cohesive than the original series. Especially ''Team Tetsuo''. Further helped by the fact that Lucillia is [[CanonWelding very good at rationalising even the majority of contradictions the canonical series presents]] in her FF-works.

* BetterThanCanon: Many reviewers regard ** It's not "Fridge" anymore - in Chapter 4 of ''Shippuden'', Sakura notes how much less competent the First Try series better and more cohesive younger ninja recruits are than even her own peers, but because the original series.curriculum isn't ''that'' different from her own time as an Academy student (only over 3 years ago), she hasn't realised that it's the cause of decaying standards

* {{Jossed}}: When ''First Try: Shippuden'' was started, Lucillia interpreted Tobi as [[spoiler: an ousted Uchiha whose wife and children were killed by his clan for being foreign-born and illegimate.]] Seeing Tobi is actually [[spoiler: Obito Uchiha]], Lucillia intends to rewrite FT:S to fit TheReveal, but she doesn't want to abandon the plot about the Uchiha Clan [[spoiler:murdering illegitimate children]] - Itachi even references the practice when talking to Kisame in ''Team Tetsuo''. Whether she will write in an OriginalCharacter to substitute said interpretation of Tobi, however, remains to be seen.
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* {{Jossed}}: When ''First Try: Shippuden'' was started, Lucillia interpreted Tobi as [[spoiler: an ousted Uchiha whose wife and children were killed by his clan for being foreign-born and illegimate.]] Seeing Tobi is actually [[spoiler: Obito Uchiha]], Lucillia intends to rewrite FT:S to fit TheReveal, but she doesn't want to abandon the plot about the Uchiha Clan [[spoiler:murdering illegitimate children]] - Itachi even references the practice when talking to Kisame in ''Team Tetsuo''. Whether she will write in an OriginalCharacter Tetsuo''. ** It has since been revealed that Tobi is [[spoiler:a name which ''multiple'' Uchiha who follow Madara take up, hiding under the same mask with the pretence of being one person rather than multiple. Besides Obito, there is only one Tobi left - a much older man who lost his extended family due to substitute said interpretation the Uchiha Clan murdering them, for which he paid them back tenfold (literally, as a he took at ''least'' ten Uchiha lives for each of Tobi, however, remains to be seen.the loved ones they killed).]]
26th Jan '13 9:41:16 PM konekootome
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* FridgeHorror: In ''Team Tetsuo'', Hiruzen discovered that the Academy was being sabotaged when Naruto and his team were reviewing their history. Which means that the sabotage still continues from ''Team 7'' to ''Shippuden'' and won't be found out until it's too late.
27th Dec '12 5:18:48 PM ninjadude853
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* {{Tearjerker}}: In FT:S, when gambling takes over Satoshi's life and Naruto tries to hold an invention, but fails.
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* {{Tearjerker}}: In FT:S, when gambling takes over Satoshi's life and Naruto tries to hold an invention, intervention, but fails.
16th Dec '12 6:22:00 AM CaellachTigerEye
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16th Dec '12 6:21:57 AM CaellachTigerEye
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Kakashi promised to become Naruto's sensei, but was distant to him because Naruto looks like his parents. He becomes less distant and possessive when someone else gets the position.
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Kakashi promised to become Naruto's sensei, but was distant to him because Naruto looks like his parents. He becomes less distant and possessive (and more possessive) when someone else gets the position. This ACI recurrs in several of Lucillia's fanfics, too.
16th Dec '12 6:20:17 AM CaellachTigerEye
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* {{Jossed}}: When ''First Try: Shippuden'' was started, Tobi was interpreted as [[spoiler: an ousted Uchiha whose wife and children were killed by his clan for being foreign-born and illegimate.]] Seeing Tobi is actually [[spoiler: Obito Uchiha]], Lucillia intends to rewrite FT:S to fit TheReveal, but she's not letting that plot [[spoiler:about Uchiha killing illegitimate children]] go, and Itachi even references the practice when talking to Kisame in ''Team Tetsuo''. Whether she will write in an OriginalCharacter to substitute said interpretation of Tobi, however, remains to be seen.
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* {{Jossed}}: When ''First Try: Shippuden'' was started, Tobi was Lucillia interpreted Tobi as [[spoiler: an ousted Uchiha whose wife and children were killed by his clan for being foreign-born and illegimate.]] Seeing Tobi is actually [[spoiler: Obito Uchiha]], Lucillia intends to rewrite FT:S to fit TheReveal, but she's not letting that she doesn't want to abandon the plot [[spoiler:about about the Uchiha killing Clan [[spoiler:murdering illegitimate children]] go, and - Itachi even references the practice when talking to Kisame in ''Team Tetsuo''. Whether she will write in an OriginalCharacter to substitute said interpretation of Tobi, however, remains to be seen.
5th Dec '12 5:39:54 AM GhostOfAGeek
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Line thingie. :U
* {{Tearjerker}}: In FT:S, when gambling takes over Satoshi's life and Naruto tries to hold an invention, but fails.
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* {{Tearjerker}}: In FT:S, when gambling takes over Satoshi's life and Naruto tries to hold an invention, but fails.fails. ----
21st Nov '12 10:10:03 PM koneko_otome
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* BetterThanCanon: Many reviewers regard the First Try series better and more cohesive than the original series.
17th Nov '12 10:15:18 AM koneko_otome
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* GrowingTheBeard: The original "First Try" was a well-constructed story, but suffers partially from lack of focus on team relations and being over very quickly (the side stories do a good job of remedying this). "First Try: Team 7" improves by being longer and having more focus on these faults. However, the fandom appears to be in universal agreement that "Team Tetsuo" is where the series truly exhibits beard growth - a proper break from TheStationsOfTheCanon, CharacterDevelopment galore, original plotlines and themes, and arguably an even better story than the primary "First Try" story plot (it certainly seems to be the most popular). Many fans consider it part of the Main Series even though by label it's only a Spin-Off. * {{Jossed}}: When "First Try: Shippuden" was started, Tobi was interpreted as [[spoiler: an ousted Uchiha whose wife and children were killed by his clan for being foreign-born and illegimate.]] Seeing Tobi is actually [[spoiler: Obito Uchiha]], Lucillia intends to rewrite FT:S to fit TheReveal, but she's not letting that plot [[spoiler:about Uchiha killing illegitimate children]] go, and Itachi even references the practice when talking to Kisame in "Team Tetsuo". Whether she will write in an OriginalCharacter to substitute said interpretation of Tobi, however, remains to be seen. ** It should be noted that Lucillia implements OrwellianRetcon when it suits her, especially if she can edit the plot without damaging her overall story. For instance, the original "First Try" was written before TheReveal that Tobi ''wasn't'' Madara came out - this necessitated the editing of a scene which explicitly identified the two as being the same individual (though she waited until TheReveal of who he actually is to do so).
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* GrowingTheBeard: The original "First Try" ''First Try'' was a well-constructed story, but suffers partially from lack of focus on team relations and being over very quickly (the side stories do a good job of remedying this). "First ''First Try: Team 7" 7'' improves by being longer and having more focus on these faults. However, the fandom appears to be in universal agreement that "Team Tetsuo" ''Team Tetsuo'' is where the series truly exhibits beard growth - a proper break from TheStationsOfTheCanon, CharacterDevelopment galore, original plotlines and themes, and arguably an even better story than the primary "First Try" ''First Try'' story plot (it certainly seems to be the most popular). Many fans consider it part of the Main Series even though by label it's only a Spin-Off. * {{Jossed}}: When "First ''First Try: Shippuden" Shippuden'' was started, Tobi was interpreted as [[spoiler: an ousted Uchiha whose wife and children were killed by his clan for being foreign-born and illegimate.]] Seeing Tobi is actually [[spoiler: Obito Uchiha]], Lucillia intends to rewrite FT:S to fit TheReveal, but she's not letting that plot [[spoiler:about Uchiha killing illegitimate children]] go, and Itachi even references the practice when talking to Kisame in "Team Tetsuo".''Team Tetsuo''. Whether she will write in an OriginalCharacter to substitute said interpretation of Tobi, however, remains to be seen. ** It should be noted that Lucillia implements OrwellianRetcon when it suits her, especially if she can edit the plot without damaging her overall story. For instance, the original "First Try" ''First Try'' was written before TheReveal that Tobi ''wasn't'' Madara came out - this necessitated the editing of a scene which explicitly identified the two as being the same individual (though she waited until TheReveal of who he actually is to do so).
14th Nov '12 1:32:36 AM CaellachTigerEye
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Oops - wrong Trope!
** It should be noted that Lucillia implements OrwellianEditor when it suits her, especially if she can edit the plot without damaging her overall story. For instance, the original "First Try" was written before TheReveal that Tobi ''wasn't'' Madara came out - this necessitated the editing of a scene which explicitly identified the two as being the same individual (though she waited until TheReveal of who he actually is to do so).
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** It should be noted that Lucillia implements OrwellianEditor OrwellianRetcon when it suits her, especially if she can edit the plot without damaging her overall story. For instance, the original "First Try" was written before TheReveal that Tobi ''wasn't'' Madara came out - this necessitated the editing of a scene which explicitly identified the two as being the same individual (though she waited until TheReveal of who he actually is to do so).
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