History YMMV / FirstTrySeries

15th Jun '16 4:00:04 PM Valiona
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** Some reviewers do this with Tetsuo, too, primarily how he goes about teaching Sakura and Sasuke in Team Tetsuo. Is he a teacher who gives them the lessons they should have learned in the academy, or [[DrillSergeantNasty is his teaching style]] overly harsh to the point of being counterproductive, if not intentionally cruel? When Sakura almost [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere goes AWOL]], thereby ending her ninja career and ruining her life, is it mostly her fault for her lack of discipline (and her mother's for spoiling her), or does Tetsuo share a fair portion of the blame[[note]]Some of Tetsuo's detractors point out that Naruto was the one who ultimately talked her down, and conclude that Tetsuo isn't any good at holding the team together[[/note]] for forcing her to go on a two-month camping trip that he knew she wasn't prepared for? Does Tetsuo care about Sakura and Sasuke, or does he see them as a means to an end to help Naruto become a Chunin, to the point where it's detrimental to the two of them individually and the team as a whole? (The fact that he once saw Naruto in a similar way can be seen as proof that he doesn't see anything wrong with seeing his subordinates this way, and/or [[TookALevelInKindness that he can warm up to them]])
6th Mar '16 9:05:31 PM CaellachTigerEye
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* BetterThanCanon: Many reviewers regard the First Try series better and more cohesive than the original series. Especially ''[[EvenBetterSpinOff Team Tetsuo]]''. Further helped by the fact that Lucillia is [[CanonWelding very good at rationalising even the majority of contradictions the canonical series presents]] in her FF-works.

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* BetterThanCanon: Many reviewers regard the First Try series better and more cohesive than the original series. Especially ''[[EvenBetterSpinOff ''[[MorePopularSpinOff Team Tetsuo]]''. Further helped by the fact that Lucillia is [[CanonWelding very good at rationalising even the majority of contradictions the canonical series presents]] in her FF-works.



* EvenBetterSpinOff: ''Team Tetsuo'' is largely considered a more interesting and well-written story than the main FT Series - rather than following TheStationsOfTheCanon of the manga's Part 1 (with mostly characterisation differences), it creates new plotlines whole-cloth and the plot goes gloriously OffTheRails; Tetsuo remaining Naruto's teacher with Kakashi as TheLancer also enables both characters to broaden their horizons, while Naruto's teammates Satoshi and Suzume aren't as OutOfFocus; and minor characters like [[OcStandIn Sakura's parents]], [[AdaptationExpansion Zabuza's fellow revolutionaries]], and [[TheBully Hibachi]] get larger roles in the story's subplots, thus furthering the world-building and overall scope of the plot.



* MagnificentBastard: Danzo, who turns Barako's gossip campaign against his grandson against her by telling nothing but the truth.

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* MagnificentBastard: Danzo, who turns Barako's gossip campaign against his grandson around against her ''her'', by telling nothing but the truth.truth.
* MorePopularSpinOff: ''Team Tetsuo'' is largely considered a more interesting and well-written story than the main FT Series - rather than following TheStationsOfTheCanon of the manga's Part 1 (with mostly characterisation differences), it creates new plotlines whole-cloth and the plot goes gloriously OffTheRails; Tetsuo remaining Naruto's teacher with Kakashi as TheLancer also enables both characters to broaden their horizons, while Naruto's teammates Satoshi and Suzume aren't as OutOfFocus; and minor characters like [[OcStandIn Sakura's parents]], [[AdaptationExpansion Zabuza's fellow revolutionaries]], and [[TheBully Hibachi]] get larger roles in the story's subplots, thus furthering the world-building and overall scope of the plot.
6th Mar '16 9:03:31 PM CaellachTigerEye
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* BetterThanCanon: Many reviewers regard the First Try series better and more cohesive than the original series. Especially ''[[SuperiorSpinOff Team Tetsuo]]''. Further helped by the fact that Lucillia is [[CanonWelding very good at rationalising even the majority of contradictions the canonical series presents]] in her FF-works.

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* BetterThanCanon: Many reviewers regard the First Try series better and more cohesive than the original series. Especially ''[[SuperiorSpinOff ''[[EvenBetterSpinOff Team Tetsuo]]''. Further helped by the fact that Lucillia is [[CanonWelding very good at rationalising even the majority of contradictions the canonical series presents]] in her FF-works.



* EvenBetterSpinOff: ''Team Tetsuo'' is largely considered a more interesting and well-written story than the main FT Series - rather than following TheStationsOfTheCanon of the manga's Part 1 (with mostly characterisation differences), it creates new plotlines whole-cloth and the plot goes gloriously OffTheRails; Tetsuo remaining Naruto's teacher with Kakashi as TheLancer also enables both characters to broaden their horizons, while Naruto's teammates Satoshi and Suzume aren't as OutOfFocus; and minor characters like [[OcStandIn Sakura's parents]], [[AdaptationExpansion Zabuza's fellow revolutionaries]], and [[TheBully Hibachi]] get larger roles in the story's subplots, thus furthering the world-building and overall scope of the plot.



* SuperiorSpinOff: ''Team Tetsuo'' is largely considered a more interesting and well-written story than the main FT Series - rather than following TheStationsOfTheCanon of the manga's Part 1 (with mostly characterisation differences), it creates new plotlines whole-cloth and the plot goes gloriously OffTheRails; Tetsuo remaining Naruto's teacher with Kakashi as TheLancer also enables both characters to broaden their horizons, while Naruto's teammates Satoshi and Suzume aren't as OutOfFocus; and minor characters like [[OcStandIn Sakura's parents]], [[AdaptationExpansion Zabuza's fellow revolutionaries]], and [[TheBully Hibachi]] get larger roles in the story's subplots which further the world-building.
6th Mar '16 9:00:35 PM CaellachTigerEye
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* BetterThanCanon: Many reviewers regard the First Try series better and more cohesive than the original series. Especially ''Team Tetsuo''. Further helped by the fact that Lucillia is [[CanonWelding very good at rationalising even the majority of contradictions the canonical series presents]] in her FF-works.

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* BetterThanCanon: Many reviewers regard the First Try series better and more cohesive than the original series. Especially ''Team Tetsuo''.''[[SuperiorSpinOff Team Tetsuo]]''. Further helped by the fact that Lucillia is [[CanonWelding very good at rationalising even the majority of contradictions the canonical series presents]] in her FF-works.


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* SuperiorSpinOff: ''Team Tetsuo'' is largely considered a more interesting and well-written story than the main FT Series - rather than following TheStationsOfTheCanon of the manga's Part 1 (with mostly characterisation differences), it creates new plotlines whole-cloth and the plot goes gloriously OffTheRails; Tetsuo remaining Naruto's teacher with Kakashi as TheLancer also enables both characters to broaden their horizons, while Naruto's teammates Satoshi and Suzume aren't as OutOfFocus; and minor characters like [[OcStandIn Sakura's parents]], [[AdaptationExpansion Zabuza's fellow revolutionaries]], and [[TheBully Hibachi]] get larger roles in the story's subplots which further the world-building.
1st May '13 10:23:18 PM CaellachTigerEye
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* BetterThanCanon: Many reviewers regard the First Try series better and more cohesive than the original series.

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* BetterThanCanon: Many reviewers regard the First Try series better and more cohesive than the original series. Especially ''Team Tetsuo''. Further helped by the fact that Lucillia is [[CanonWelding very good at rationalising even the majority of contradictions the canonical series presents]] in her FF-works.



** It's not "Fridge" anymore - in Chapter 4 of ''Shippuden'', Sakura notes how much less competent the younger ninja recruits are than even her own peers, but because the curriculum isn't ''that'' different from her own time as an Academy student (only over 3 years ago), she hasn't realised that it's the cause of decaying standards



* {{Jossed}}: When ''First Try: Shippuden'' was started, Lucillia interpreted Tobi as [[spoiler: an ousted Uchiha whose wife and children were killed by his clan for being foreign-born and illegimate.]] Seeing Tobi is actually [[spoiler: Obito Uchiha]], Lucillia intends to rewrite FT:S to fit TheReveal, but she doesn't want to abandon the plot about the Uchiha Clan [[spoiler:murdering illegitimate children]] - Itachi even references the practice when talking to Kisame in ''Team Tetsuo''. Whether she will write in an OriginalCharacter to substitute said interpretation of Tobi, however, remains to be seen.

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* {{Jossed}}: When ''First Try: Shippuden'' was started, Lucillia interpreted Tobi as [[spoiler: an ousted Uchiha whose wife and children were killed by his clan for being foreign-born and illegimate.]] Seeing Tobi is actually [[spoiler: Obito Uchiha]], Lucillia intends to rewrite FT:S to fit TheReveal, but she doesn't want to abandon the plot about the Uchiha Clan [[spoiler:murdering illegitimate children]] - Itachi even references the practice when talking to Kisame in ''Team Tetsuo''. Whether she will write in an OriginalCharacter Tetsuo''.
** It has since been revealed that Tobi is [[spoiler:a name which ''multiple'' Uchiha who follow Madara take up, hiding under the same mask with the pretence of being one person rather than multiple. Besides Obito, there is only one Tobi left - a much older man who lost his extended family due
to substitute said interpretation the Uchiha Clan murdering them, for which he paid them back tenfold (literally, as a he took at ''least'' ten Uchiha lives for each of Tobi, however, remains to be seen.the loved ones they killed).]]
26th Jan '13 9:41:16 PM konekootome
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* FridgeHorror: In ''Team Tetsuo'', Hiruzen discovered that the Academy was being sabotaged when Naruto and his team were reviewing their history. Which means that the sabotage still continues from ''Team 7'' to ''Shippuden'' and won't be found out until it's too late.
27th Dec '12 5:18:48 PM ninjadude853
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* {{Tearjerker}}: In FT:S, when gambling takes over Satoshi's life and Naruto tries to hold an invention, but fails.

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* {{Tearjerker}}: In FT:S, when gambling takes over Satoshi's life and Naruto tries to hold an invention, intervention, but fails.
16th Dec '12 6:22:00 AM CaellachTigerEye
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16th Dec '12 6:21:57 AM CaellachTigerEye
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Kakashi promised to become Naruto's sensei, but was distant to him because Naruto looks like his parents. He becomes less distant and possessive when someone else gets the position.

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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Kakashi promised to become Naruto's sensei, but was distant to him because Naruto looks like his parents. He becomes less distant and possessive (and more possessive) when someone else gets the position. This ACI recurrs in several of Lucillia's fanfics, too.
16th Dec '12 6:20:17 AM CaellachTigerEye
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* {{Jossed}}: When ''First Try: Shippuden'' was started, Tobi was interpreted as [[spoiler: an ousted Uchiha whose wife and children were killed by his clan for being foreign-born and illegimate.]] Seeing Tobi is actually [[spoiler: Obito Uchiha]], Lucillia intends to rewrite FT:S to fit TheReveal, but she's not letting that plot [[spoiler:about Uchiha killing illegitimate children]] go, and Itachi even references the practice when talking to Kisame in ''Team Tetsuo''. Whether she will write in an OriginalCharacter to substitute said interpretation of Tobi, however, remains to be seen.

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* {{Jossed}}: When ''First Try: Shippuden'' was started, Tobi was Lucillia interpreted Tobi as [[spoiler: an ousted Uchiha whose wife and children were killed by his clan for being foreign-born and illegimate.]] Seeing Tobi is actually [[spoiler: Obito Uchiha]], Lucillia intends to rewrite FT:S to fit TheReveal, but she's not letting that she doesn't want to abandon the plot [[spoiler:about about the Uchiha killing Clan [[spoiler:murdering illegitimate children]] go, and - Itachi even references the practice when talking to Kisame in ''Team Tetsuo''. Whether she will write in an OriginalCharacter to substitute said interpretation of Tobi, however, remains to be seen.
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