History YMMV / FateZeroSense

3rd Jun '15 4:03:11 AM Theokal3
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* DeaderThanDisco: When the fic first came out, it was actually well-liked for being the incarnation of CrazyAwesome in fanfictions. The sequel, however, has been less appreciated, and since then people have started to notice the fic's flaws, particularly [[TheWorfEffect the poor treatment received by]] [[ButtMonkey Saber]]. Notably, writer The Infamous Man (who has improved since then) aknowledges the fic's flaws, and regards it as an OldShame.
23rd Mar '15 10:44:42 PM nombretomado
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** [[spoiler:Caster]]'s death in the sequel. A CallBack to [[spoiler:[[FateZero Zero Lancer]]'s DyingCurse.]]
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** [[spoiler:Caster]]'s death in the sequel. A CallBack to [[spoiler:[[FateZero [[spoiler:[[LightNovel/FateZero Zero Lancer]]'s DyingCurse.]]
24th Feb '15 2:23:07 PM thezogg
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* JumpingTheShark: ''Zero Sense'' had a lot of problems, but the Infamous Man himseld admits that everything fell apart in the sequel.
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* JumpingTheShark: ''Zero Sense'' had a lot of problems, but the Infamous Man himseld himself admits that everything fell apart in the sequel.
24th Feb '15 2:22:12 PM thezogg
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* JumpingTheShark: ''Zero Sense'' had a lot of problems, but the Infamous Man himseld admits that everything fell apart in the sequel.

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* NeverLiveItDown: The Infamous Man has greatly improved as a writer since this story and sees it as an OldShame, but since it spawned legions of even worse fics, he's been stuck with this as his main legacy.
17th Sep '14 7:25:27 AM Theokal3
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* CryForTheDevil: [[spoiler: Caster Sasuke Uchiha, who was summoned from an AlternateUniverse where he did kill Naruto, as well as many other Leaf Ninja, before [[CycleOfRevenge Hinata killed him to avenge Naruto.]] In his last moments, he laments to Archer how he never got to kill Itachi, making his whole vengeance in vain, and how in the end [[HeWhoFightsMonsters he was no better than his brother]].]]
2nd Sep '14 8:43:52 PM MagBas
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* UnfortunateImplication: some fans felt like Sola-Ui's affection for Lancer (who in this fic is ''a teenager'') sounded more like attraction than maternal affection, giving him some kind of pedophile subtext. It doesn't help that in canon, Sola ''did'' fall in love with Lancer (who was an adult then). The Infamous Man denied such subtext however, and insisted that their relationship is purely mother/son-like. ** Its possible that Lancer dating Fuji in the sequel was meant to reassure readers about this.
8th May '14 7:09:01 PM Skritz
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*FridgeBrilliance: So why is [[spoiler:Kamina]] replacing Iskander as Rider? [[spoiler: Both are Epic LargeHam playing a certain mentor/big brother to someone who just doesn't see his own potential. Both led an army solely on their charisma. Both kept chasing after the dream of something no one was sure existed and ultimately both died while chasing that dream without feeling any regrets.]]
27th Jul '13 5:15:25 PM thezogg
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** Sola [[spoiler:killing Kayneth. While he ''was'' a JerkAss, the fact that Sola murders him after he gave her his Command Seals and that she murders him ''willingly'' (no curse that excuses her craziness) without any remorse whatsoever doesn't make her [[{{Understatement}} terribly sympathetic]].]}
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** Sola [[spoiler:killing Kayneth. While he ''was'' a JerkAss, the fact that Sola murders him after he gave her his Command Seals and that she murders him ''willingly'' (no curse that excuses her craziness) without any remorse whatsoever doesn't make her [[{{Understatement}} terribly sympathetic]].]}]]
27th Jul '13 5:14:56 PM thezogg
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** Sola [[spoiler:killing Kayneth. While he ''was'' a JerkAss, the fact that Sola murders him after he gave her his Command Seals and that she murders him ''willingly'' (no curse that excuses her craziness) without any remorse whatsoever doesn't make her [[{{Understatement}} terribly sympathetic]].]]
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** Sola [[spoiler:killing Kayneth. While he ''was'' a JerkAss, the fact that Sola murders him after he gave her his Command Seals and that she murders him ''willingly'' (no curse that excuses her craziness) without any remorse whatsoever doesn't make her [[{{Understatement}} terribly sympathetic]].]]]} ** Kirei and Wade stopped being funny when they killed [[spoiler: [[TheWoobie Illya]]]]

** Sola [[spoiler:killing Kayneth. While he ''was'' [[spoiler: Illya's]] final thoughts are absolutely ''heartbreaking'': ''"Was I really like a JerkAss, flame [[spoiler: Berserker]]? Was I really beautiful before I burned out?"'' then TIM drives the fact that Sola murders him after he gave knife in even deeper with her his Command Seals internally begging her dead mother and that father to show up and save her as she murders him ''willingly'' (no curse that excuses her craziness) without any remorse whatsoever doesn't make her [[{{Understatement}} terribly sympathetic]].]]dies.

** Poor, poor [[LockedOutOfTheLoop Aoi.]]
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** Poor, poor [[LockedOutOfTheLoop Aoi.]] ** Illya trumps them ALL by a long shot, made especially poignant [[spoiler: as she dies.]]
7th Jul '13 8:32:05 AM StFan
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Kirei and Assassin, to the point they ended up being BreakoutCharacter{{s}}.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Kirei and Assassin, to the point they ended up being BreakoutCharacter{{s}}.{{Breakout Character}}s.
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