Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 29 (click to see context) from:
* DesecratingTheDead: The overkill the guard goes through. Getting his head bashed in was bad enough, but then his body was mangled by a drill and what was left of him was used as makeshift escape rope. And the worst part? Some of these actions were ''[[AchievementsInIgnorance by accident]]''. At the very least, his head getting cut off and put in a pumpkin was the first prisoner's weird way of giving DueToTheDead, but even then he later cuddles it and was seriously considering eating its makeshift coffin. (Our hero is...out there, to say the least.)
to:
* DesecratingTheDead: The overkill the guard goes through. Getting his head bashed in was bad enough, but then his body was mangled by a drill and what was left of him was used as makeshift escape rope. And the worst part? Some of these actions were ''[[AchievementsInIgnorance by accident]]''. At the very least, his head getting cut off and put in a pumpkin was the first prisoner's weird way of giving DueToTheDead, but even then he later cuddles it and was seriously considering eating its makeshift coffin. (Our hero is...out there, to say the least.)
Changed line(s) 31 (click to see context) from:
* DownerEnding: Averted thanks to a quick press of the ResetButton.
to:
* DownerEnding: Averted thanks The first route abruptly ends with the last living character killing himself out of despair of losing his partner. Thanks to a quick press of the ResetButton.ResetButton however, it doesn't last.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ShoutOut: On the Gangbunch forums, the adventure was called ''[[VideoGame/EscapeFromMonkeyIsland Escape from Jail Island]]''.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Deleted line(s) 28,31 (click to see context) :
* ADateWithRosiePalms: The main prisoner suddenly feels the need after messing around with a drill.
--> All these thoughts of drilling and penetration have given you a serious hankering for some quality time with HUNK RUMP magazine.\\
'''> Continue to enjoy Hunk Rump.'''\\
''([[SexyDiscretionShot We are now in control of the other guy.]])''
--> All these thoughts of drilling and penetration have given you a serious hankering for some quality time with HUNK RUMP magazine.\\
'''> Continue to enjoy Hunk Rump.'''\\
''([[SexyDiscretionShot We are now in control of the other guy.]])''
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* GoToSleepEnding: At the end of the second volume, the pony crawls into the elves' bed and catches some Zs.
Changed line(s) 62 (click to see context) from:
--> ''"I'm sorry, I don't think I can do that with all future input from betelgeuse."''[[labelnote:*]]Betelgeuse was one of the players of the original forum game, who evidently was disruptive.[[/labelnote]]
to:
--> ''"I'm sorry, I don't think I can do that with all future input from betelgeuse."''[[labelnote:*]]Betelgeuse "''[[note]]Betelgeuse was one of the players of the original forum game, who evidently was disruptive.[[/labelnote]][[/note]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 14 (click to see context) from:
* AccidentalIncantation: In the reset route, the protagonist is revealed to have runes he can't understand tattooed onto his stomach. Despite having no idea what they're for, he reads them out loud and manages to summon an elf.
to:
* AccidentalIncantation: In the reset second route, the protagonist first prisoner is revealed to have runes he can't understand tattooed onto his stomach. Despite having no idea what they're for, he reads them out loud and manages to summon an elf.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AccidentalIncantation: In the reset route, the protagonist is revealed to have runes he can't understand tattooed onto his stomach. Despite having no idea what they're for, he reads them out loud and manages to summon an elf.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* EverybodyDiesEnding: All the introduced characters in the first route, up to and including the first prisoner, wind up dead by the end.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Deleted line(s) 63 (click to see context) :
* KillEmAll: All the introduced characters in the first route, up to and including the first prisoner, wind up dead by the end.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 73 (click to see context) from:
* MinimalistCast: There's only 10 characters in the story, major or otherwise (the 3 prisoners, the 3 children, the 2 elves, the guard, and the pony). While this makes sense considering it's a smaller story, it can be a bit jarring compared to ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth'''s and especially ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}''[='=]s LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters.
to:
* MinimalistCast: There's only 10 characters in the story, major or otherwise (the 3 prisoners, the 3 children, the 2 elves, the guard, and the pony). While this makes sense considering it's a smaller story, it can be a bit jarring compared to ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth'''s and especially ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}''[='=]s LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters.numerous characters.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 110 (click to see context) from:
'''[[YMMV/{{Jailbreak}} > Look at subjective tropes.]]'''\\
to:
'''[[YMMV/{{Jailbreak}} > Look at subjective tropes.audience reactions.]]'''\\
