History Webcomic / HowIBecameYours

20th Jun '16 9:56:37 AM AnonFangeekGirl
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** And suffers no other symptoms?

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** And suffers no other symptoms?When Katara heals Azula from her initial poisoning, she leaves Azula's ninja mask on.
12th Jun '16 7:41:07 AM Valiona
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* JustBetweenYouAndMe: Mai and Sho freely volunteer information, such how Mai poisoned Azula and Katara, without any reason or provocation.

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* JustBetweenYouAndMe: Mai and Sho freely volunteer information, information to their enemies, such how Mai poisoned Azula and Katara, without any reason or provocation.



* OffscreenBreakup: Sokka and Ty Lee. Early on, Sokka compares the way Katara feels about Zuko to the way he ''used to'' feel about Suki. At the party in Chapter 2, Ty Lee mentions in passing that it's a shame they broke up, and Katara mentions that "long distance relationships never work out."



* RedemptionEqualsSex
* RedemptionInTheRain

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* RedemptionEqualsSex
RedemptionEqualsSex: Azula, especially considering that [[spoiler:she's carrying Sokka's child when Mai hits her with a knife]].
* RedemptionInTheRainRedemptionInTheRain: Azula's first date with Sokka, an early step on her road to redemption, takes place in the rain.



* [[spoiler:SurprisePregnancy: Azula, of ALL PEOPLE in chapter 5. Toph figures it out that she's three months in with her Earth-shattering Bending skills and tells Sokka with predictable results.]]

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* [[spoiler:SurprisePregnancy: Azula, SurprisePregnancy: [[spoiler:Azula, of ALL PEOPLE in chapter 5. Toph figures it out that she's three months in with her Earth-shattering Bending skills and tells Sokka with predictable results.]]



** [[spoiler:Ursa]] completely vanishes after the battle with Mai and Sho with no explanation of where of she's gone.
9th Jun '16 2:45:56 PM Beacon80
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* AltText: The tumblr rehost has amusing comments in each strip's tags.


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** After finding an injured woman dressed as an assassin, the gang decide not to unmask her.


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** Especially noticeable with Toph's dress during the ball, which is barely high enough to cover her nipples.


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* PlotHole: Zuko and Katara each put a mark on the other's chest during their affair. This is apparently a Fire Nation tradition, which only brings up the question of how Mai never noticed, and why she didn't insist on trading marks with him herself. Plus these are only visible when they are first introduced, despite Zuko's WalkingShirtlessScene and Katara [[ImpossiblyLowNeckline never wearing a dress that would cover it]].
5th Jun '16 9:15:01 AM AnonFangeekGirl
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** Also, her ninja costume from her introduction. It's dark and has a mask, but it exposes enough of her pearly-white skin that she'd be highly noticeable at night.



*** Yes, but she still kept her trademark hair loopies, whereas HIBY!Katara didn't.



* MalignedMixedMarriage: Used so ubiquitously to the point of absurdity.

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* MalignedMixedMarriage: Used so ubiquitously to the point of absurdity. A Fire Nation royal not being wanted to marry a Water Tribeswoman is understandable, given the nations were at war not very long ago, but why would anyone protest the marriage of an Earth Kingdom girl to an Air Nomad, especially when said Air Nomad is the ''Avatar''?



* MeaningfulName: "Azula" is theorized to mean "dragon" in this fic, missing the point that it's most likely a reference to her blue fire ("Azul" means "blue"), as well as, in universe, being named after Azulong.

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* MeaningfulName: "Azula" is theorized to mean "dragon" in this fic, missing the point that it's most likely a reference to her blue fire ("Azul" means "blue"), as well as, in universe, being named after Azulong.Azulon.
3rd Jun '16 11:27:01 AM AnonFangeekGirl
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* ButNotTooForeign: HIBY supposedly takes place in Avatar's Far-East inspired world, but aside from a few token nods to the setting, it seems to take place more in renaissance-era France. Most of the female cast wear European-style dresses (with the exception of Mai and possibly Toph), and the architecture is pretty obviously copy-pasted from European castles.

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* ButNotTooForeign: HIBY supposedly takes place in Avatar's Far-East inspired world, but aside from a few token nods to the setting, it seems to take place more in renaissance-era France. Most of the female cast wear European-style dresses (with the exception of Mai and possibly sometimes Toph), and the architecture is pretty obviously copy-pasted from European castles.
30th May '16 12:36:54 PM AnonFangeekGirl
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** Azula's EasyAmnesia is a case of Artistic License- Psychology.
30th May '16 12:30:05 PM AnonFangeekGirl
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* TheBeautifulElite: All of the heroes have high social rank and are very beautiful.


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* IdleRich: All the protagonists.
29th May '16 11:49:56 AM AnonFangeekGirl
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* AlwaysSpring: It's spring in flashbacks, it's spring during the main story, and it stays spring throughout.
29th May '16 11:48:45 AM AnonFangeekGirl
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* AlwaysSpring: It's spring in flashbacks, it's spring during the main story, and it stays spring throughout.
28th May '16 11:05:06 AM AnonFangeekGirl
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* And suffers no other symptoms?

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* ** And suffers no other symptoms?
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