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* SpiritAdvisor: [[spoiler: When by his lonesome in a tunnel, Mace is suddenly approached by an ethereal being, heavily implied to be one of the Spirits other characters bring up, and tells him his power is the key to saving the world and where to find the means to unlock it. According to extra information at the ends of each ''Dreamkeepers'' book, this is something the Spirits where said to have done before in the time where powers weren't outlawed, directing Dreamkeepers to go on a "pilgrimage" - it would seem that Mace is one such Dreamkeeper.]]
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* SpiritAdvisor: [[spoiler: When by his lonesome in a tunnel, Mace is suddenly approached by an ethereal being, heavily implied to be one of the Spirits other characters bring up, and tells him his power is the key to saving the world and where to find the means to unlock it. According to extra information at the ends of each ''Dreamkeepers'' book, this is something the Spirits where were said to have done before in the time where powers weren't outlawed, directing Dreamkeepers to go on a "pilgrimage" - it would seem that Mace is one such Dreamkeeper.]]
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* SleazyPolitician: Most of them, it seems. Some politicians in the Prelude comment, that the Viscount's policies will soon make it so, that no one else will be able to be elected in his place, and the only way they'll be able to retain power is, by sucking up to him. He's still Viscount by the time of the graphic novels, so...
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* SleazyPolitician: Most of them, it seems. Some politicians in the Prelude comment, that the Viscount's policies will soon make it so, that no one else will be able to be elected in his place, and the only way they'll be able to retain power is, is by sucking up to him. He's still Viscount by the time of the graphic novels, so...so it seems he was successful, but it does appear there are new elections being held, and that the Viscount ''needs'' to run if he wants to stay in charge.
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* SpiritAdvisor: [[spoiler: When by his lonesome in a tunnel, Mace is suddenly approached by an ethereal being, heavily implied to be one of the Spirits other characters bring up, and tells him his power is the key to saving the world and where to find the means to unlock it. According to extra information at the ends of each ''Dreamkeepers'' book, this is something the Spirits where said to have done before in the time where powers weren't outlawed, directing Dreamkeepers to go on a "pilgrimage" - it would seem that Mace is one such Dreamkeeper.]]
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* MsFanservice: Tinsel walks around in nothing but lingerie most of the time.
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* MsFanservice: Tinsel On the villains' sides, Tinsel, who walks around in nothing but lingerie most of the time.time. On the heroes, the Indigo Twins, who work as strippers and wear revealing attire.
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* OurAngelsAreDifferent: When thought about, Dreamkeepers -a sprawling variety of different humanoid mix-and-match animals - are essentially angels, or more accurately ''guardian'' angels, as their very lives unknowingly prevent Nightmares from terrorizing humans in their sleep. Their Powers are indicated by them generating halos after all. This would make Dark Dreamkeepers, those working with the Nightmares, in essence fallen angels.
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* ElectiveMonarchy: In Andurana the position of Viscount is popularly elected rather than hereditary or appointed like in real life. The history also notes a period in the city-state's history where it was ruled by a king whose title was passed among the "High Houses" prior to the democratic revolution.
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* ElectiveMonarchy: In Andurana the position of Viscount is popularly elected rather than hereditary or appointed like in real life. The history also notes a period in the city-state's history where it was ruled by a king whose title was passed among the "High Houses" prior to the democratic revolution. Prelude comic mentions that Viscount Calah seeks to enact laws that would do away with democratic elections and make him the ruler for life. Given that he's still in charge by the events of main comic, one can safely assume that he succeeded.
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* ObstructiveBureaucrat: The government of Anduruna has outlawed the use of the special Powers that all dreamkeepers have in order to keep the peace. Unfortunately, this also leaves them defenseless against the Nightmares, who just so happen to be quite forgotten by the populace and ''quite'' ready for their vengeance…
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* ObstructiveBureaucrat: The government of Anduruna has outlawed the use of the special Powers that all dreamkeepers Dreamkeepers have in order to keep the peace. Unfortunately, this also leaves them defenseless against the Nightmares, who just so happen to be quite forgotten by the populace and ''quite'' ready for their vengeance…vengeance… Given that it's eventually revealed that some of the key government figures are Dark Dreamkeepers (Dreamkeepers who allied themselves with the Nightmares), this appears to be on purpose in order to make sure there's as little resistance as possible for Nightmares' eventual takeover.
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%% * BadassCrew: See FiveManBand below.
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%% * BadassCrew: See FiveManBand Five Man Band below.
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* RecruitTeenagersWithAttitude: All the members of the FiveManBand are under eighteen.
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* RecruitTeenagersWithAttitude: All the members of the FiveManBand TheTeam are under eighteen.
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* SwallowedWhole: A giant Nightmare does this to Lilith in Volume 2, fortunately her life transfer power activates and not only kills it from the inside, but weakens its' flesh enough that she simply falls out through its' stomach.
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* SwallowedWhole: A giant Nightmare does this to Lilith in Volume 2, fortunately her life transfer power activates and not only kills it from the inside, but weakens its' its flesh enough that she simply falls out through its' its stomach.
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* NeverBringAKnifeToAGunFight: Despite an effective opening attack, the street gang of power-using criminals is still taken down fairly easily by the professional task force with [[WhyDontYouJustShootHim guns]].
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* RealityEnsues: Despite an effective opening attack, the street gang of power-using criminals is still taken down fairly easily by the professional task force with [[WhyDontYouJustShootHim guns]].
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** [[spoiler:Jeneviv]] is one of Lilith's best friends in the Prelude comic. She dies via sacrifice in the opening of Volume 1.
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** [[spoiler:Jeneviv]] is one of Lilith's best friends in the Prelude comic. She dies via nightmarish ritual sacrifice in the opening of Volume 1.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: There used to be a radar around Volume 1 before David went into business for himself. As of Volume 2, the radar just gave up. (In Volume 3, it ran away screaming.)
** "I'm invited to one of Dad and Tinsel's pool parties?!!" "Err...no. Not ever."
** Counselor Tinsel is able to push through any initiative she wants.
** The Indigos are the best distraction one could possibly want, for a variety of reasons.
--> "Dude! ''Hot chicks'' want '''''beads!'''''"
** The fantasies of Woods and Miss Muliebral in Prelude's garden story arc. Robust companionship indeed!
--> "Surely there must be some way I can repay you!" "Yeah hold on, I've got a list".
** Volume 3 features a strip joint as a setting. Though that might be taking [[RefugeInAudacity a different approach to things.]]
*** Also, the members of the Neon Knives gang, particularly Vox, are prone to incredibly bad language.
** "I'm invited to one of Dad and Tinsel's pool parties?!!" "Err...no. Not ever."
** Counselor Tinsel is able to push through any initiative she wants.
** The Indigos are the best distraction one could possibly want, for a variety of reasons.
--> "Dude! ''Hot chicks'' want '''''beads!'''''"
** The fantasies of Woods and Miss Muliebral in Prelude's garden story arc. Robust companionship indeed!
--> "Surely there must be some way I can repay you!" "Yeah hold on, I've got a list".
** Volume 3 features a strip joint as a setting. Though that might be taking [[RefugeInAudacity a different approach to things.]]
*** Also, the members of the Neon Knives gang, particularly Vox, are prone to incredibly bad language.
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* TheQuisling: Dark Dreamkeepers like Ravat and Tinsel, who work with the Nightmares for their own gain.
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* BadassBookworm: Lilith
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* BadassBookworm: LilithLilith is turning into one pretty quickly.
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* BigBad: Void
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* BigBad: VoidVoid is the biggest and most powerful Nightmare seen so far.
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* RhymesOnADime: Tendril speaks in creepy, gore-ridden rhyme. Lilith manages to distract him by offering some constructive criticism, which gets her close enough to pluck out his eyes.
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* SwallowedWhole: A giant Nightmare does this to Lilith in Volume 2, fortunately her life transfer power activates and not only kills it from the inside, but weakens its' flesh enough that she simply falls out through its' stomach.
