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->Remember, these are children. Aim low.
*** However, Amy really isn't keen on shooting up [[spoiler:a bunch of kids.]] Dave is able to use a fleeing Shadow Man's portal to jump back in time to himself twenty minutes prior to stop it by [[spoiler:summoning a giant meteor to destroy the school after they manage to evacuate it.]]
*** However, Amy really isn't keen on shooting up [[spoiler:a bunch of kids.]] Dave is able to use a fleeing Shadow Man's portal to jump back in time to himself twenty minutes prior to stop it by [[spoiler:summoning a giant meteor to destroy the school after they manage to evacuate it.]]
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: ''John and Dave and the Temple of X'al'naa'thuthuthu'', the prototype of the book. Still featured spiders, Falconer, an infected zombie cop named Frank, and them, with several large differences.
** The zombies don't mutate. Much. They are, however, bulletproof, super-human, scream in a thousand languages unknown to man (and scream loud enough to knock anyone in a mile radius out), and, if killed, are retrieved to [[spoiler:birth more spiders.]]
** "Them" are vaguely beneficial - one shows Dave the location of [[spoiler:Franky's corpse, which is set to hatch a thousand spiders in the school]] and tells the trio that human will is the only thing that can stop the outbreak. They, however, [[spoiler:do drive Detective Falconer to suicide, albeit only because he was infected and dosed with Soy Sauce.]]
** [[spoiler:The Shadow Men]] have a much larger role by being the ones behind the outbreak and possessing several people. Also, here, it's outright stated the [[spoiler:Shadow Men took Amy's hand in the first place.]]
** The site of the mall from the first book [[spoiler:turns out to house a gigantic stone tower that's only visible to soy sauce users.]]
** The spiders [[spoiler:break out and infect an entire elementary]], which would have lead to John using this line:
->Remember, these are children. Aim low.
*** However, Amy really isn't keen on shooting up [[spoiler:a bunch of kids.]] Dave is able to use a fleeing Shadow Man's portal to jump back in time to himself twenty minutes prior to stop it by [[spoiler:summoning a giant meteor to destroy the school after they manage to evacuate it.]]
** Falconer [[spoiler:commits suicide after learning he's infected.]]
** The zombies don't mutate. Much. They are, however, bulletproof, super-human, scream in a thousand languages unknown to man (and scream loud enough to knock anyone in a mile radius out), and, if killed, are retrieved to [[spoiler:birth more spiders.]]
** "Them" are vaguely beneficial - one shows Dave the location of [[spoiler:Franky's corpse, which is set to hatch a thousand spiders in the school]] and tells the trio that human will is the only thing that can stop the outbreak. They, however, [[spoiler:do drive Detective Falconer to suicide, albeit only because he was infected and dosed with Soy Sauce.]]
** [[spoiler:The Shadow Men]] have a much larger role by being the ones behind the outbreak and possessing several people. Also, here, it's outright stated the [[spoiler:Shadow Men took Amy's hand in the first place.]]
** The site of the mall from the first book [[spoiler:turns out to house a gigantic stone tower that's only visible to soy sauce users.]]
** The spiders [[spoiler:break out and infect an entire elementary]], which would have lead to John using this line:
->Remember, these are children. Aim low.
*** However, Amy really isn't keen on shooting up [[spoiler:a bunch of kids.]] Dave is able to use a fleeing Shadow Man's portal to jump back in time to himself twenty minutes prior to stop it by [[spoiler:summoning a giant meteor to destroy the school after they manage to evacuate it.]]
** Falconer [[spoiler:commits suicide after learning he's infected.]]
