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* Near the end of episode 19, when Jail broadcasts footage of [[PoweredByAForsakenChild what's happening to Vivio]], leaving Nanoha in [[AdultFear absolute horror]]. Counts also count as NightmareFuel.
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* Near the end of episode 19, when Jail broadcasts footage of [[PoweredByAForsakenChild what's happening to Vivio]], leaving Nanoha in [[AdultFear absolute horror]].horror. Counts also count as NightmareFuel.
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Capitalization was fixed from TearJerker.Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Striker S to TearJerker.Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Strikers. Null edit to update page.
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** And speaking of Vivio, her scene where she's tortured by Quattro in Episode 18 is both chilling and depressing.
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* Liberally interspersed with NightmareFuel and [[HolyShitQuotient HSQ]] in [[WhamEpisode Episode 17]].
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* Liberally interspersed with NightmareFuel and [[HolyShitQuotient HSQ]] ShockingMoments in [[WhamEpisode Episode 17]].
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* Nanoha's NearDeathExperience in the flashback from episode 9. Made even more heart-wrenching when they focus on Nanoha [[spoiler:as she tries to expedite her own recovery: struggling to stand, then ''falling face-first onto the floor and trying to crawl to her feet'' while in obvious agony...]] then Shamal says that at the time, they thought [[spoiler:her injuries might end her career and possibly even cripple her for life]].
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* Nanoha's NearDeathExperience in the flashback from episode 9. Made even more heart-wrenching when they focus on Nanoha [[spoiler:as she tries to expedite her own recovery: struggling to stand, then ''falling falling face-first onto the floor and trying desperately to crawl to her feet'' ''crawl'' while in obvious agony...]] then Shamal says that at the time, they thought [[spoiler:her injuries might end her career and possibly even cripple her for life]].
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** Subaru's HeroicBSOD after [[spoiler:she fails to prevent her sister's kidnapping]] and her UnstoppableRage wears off. Her devices destroyed, her barrier jacket shredded, her body heavily damaged ([[spoiler:to [[RoboticReveal reveal her cybernetic components]]]]), she collapses on the ground in wails of inconsolable grief. It's ''heartbreaking'', and all the more so because this is the most [[ThePollyanna preternaturally sweet]] [[GenkiGirl and bubbly character]] in the series that we're seeing, utterly broken.
** The flashback from episode 17 where [[spoiler: Erio is told that who he thought were his family, weren't – and is taken away from them]].
** The flashback from episode 17 where [[spoiler: Erio is told that who he thought were his family, weren't – and is taken away from them]].
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** Subaru's HeroicBSOD after [[spoiler:she fails to prevent her sister's kidnapping]] and her UnstoppableRage wears off. Her devices destroyed, her barrier jacket shredded, her body heavily damaged ([[spoiler:to [[RoboticReveal reveal her cybernetic components]]]]), she collapses on the ground in wails of inconsolable grief. It's ''heartbreaking'', and all the more so because this is the most [[ThePollyanna preternaturally sweet]] [[GenkiGirl and bubbly character]] in the series that we're seeing, seeing utterly broken.
** The flashbackfrom episode 17 where [[spoiler: Erio is told that who he thought were his family, weren't – and is taken away from them]].
** The flashback
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* Nanoha's NearDeathExperience in the flashback from episode 9. Made even more heart-wrenching when [[spoiler: they focus entirely on Nanoha as she tries to go expedite her own recovery, being in a lot of pain while trying to stand, then Shamal states at that time, her injuries may end her career and possibly cripple her for life]].
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* Nanoha's NearDeathExperience in the flashback from episode 9. Made even more heart-wrenching when [[spoiler: they focus entirely on Nanoha as [[spoiler:as she tries to go expedite her own recovery, being in a lot of pain while trying recovery: struggling to stand, then ''falling face-first onto the floor and trying to crawl to her feet'' while in obvious agony...]] then Shamal states at says that at the time, her they thought [[spoiler:her injuries may might end her career and possibly even cripple her for life]].
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* Liberally interspersed with NightmareFuel and HolyShitQuotient in [[WhamEpisode Episode 17]].
** Subaru's HeroicBSOD after [[spoiler:she fails to prevent her sister's kidnapping]] and her UnstoppableRage fades. Her devices destroyed, her barrier jacket shredded, her body heavily damaged ([[spoiler:to [[RoboticReveal reveal her cybernetic components]]]]), she collapses on the ground in wails of inconsolable grief. It's ''heartbreaking'', and all the more so because this is the most [[ThePollyanna preternaturally sweet and bubbly character]] in the series that we're seeing utterly broken.
** The flashback from episode 17 where [[spoiler: Erio is told that who he thought were his family weren't and is taken away from them]].
** Subaru's HeroicBSOD after [[spoiler:she fails to prevent her sister's kidnapping]] and her UnstoppableRage fades. Her devices destroyed, her barrier jacket shredded, her body heavily damaged ([[spoiler:to [[RoboticReveal reveal her cybernetic components]]]]), she collapses on the ground in wails of inconsolable grief. It's ''heartbreaking'', and all the more so because this is the most [[ThePollyanna preternaturally sweet and bubbly character]] in the series that we're seeing utterly broken.
** The flashback from episode 17 where [[spoiler: Erio is told that who he thought were his family weren't and is taken away from them]].
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* Liberally interspersed with NightmareFuel and HolyShitQuotient [[HolyShitQuotient HSQ]] in [[WhamEpisode Episode 17]].
** Subaru's HeroicBSOD after [[spoiler:she fails to prevent her sister's kidnapping]] and her UnstoppableRagefades.wears off. Her devices destroyed, her barrier jacket shredded, her body heavily damaged ([[spoiler:to [[RoboticReveal reveal her cybernetic components]]]]), she collapses on the ground in wails of inconsolable grief. It's ''heartbreaking'', and all the more so because this is the most [[ThePollyanna preternaturally sweet sweet]] [[GenkiGirl and bubbly character]] in the series that we're seeing seeing, utterly broken.
** The flashback from episode 17 where [[spoiler: Erio is told that who he thought were hisfamily family, weren't – and is taken away from them]].
** Subaru's HeroicBSOD after [[spoiler:she fails to prevent her sister's kidnapping]] and her UnstoppableRage
** The flashback from episode 17 where [[spoiler: Erio is told that who he thought were his
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* The flashback from episode 17 where [[spoiler: Erio is told that who he thought were his family weren't and is taken away from them]].
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* Liberally interspersed with NightmareFuel and HolyShitQuotient in [[WhamEpisode Episode 17]].
** Subaru's HeroicBSOD after [[spoiler:she fails to prevent her sister's kidnapping]] and her UnstoppableRage fades. Her devices destroyed, her barrier jacket shredded, her body heavily damaged ([[spoiler:to [[RoboticReveal reveal her cybernetic components]]]]), she collapses on the ground in wails of inconsolable grief. It's ''heartbreaking'', and all the more so because this is the most [[ThePollyanna preternaturally sweet and bubbly character]] in the series that we're seeing utterly broken.
** The flashback from episode 17 where [[spoiler: Erio is told that who he thought were his family weren't and is taken away fromthem]].them]].
** Caro crying over the injured and unconscious bodies of [[spoiler:Erio and Fried]] while, overhead, a fleet of gadget drones is destroying [[spoiler:Riot Force 6 HQ]]. Then she unleashes her [[GodzillaThreshold true power]] for the first time – while sobbing "please don't destroy our home!". Remember that Caro was banished from her tribe as a small child, and spent much of her life moving around from one place to another, constantly rejected and unwanted. Riot Force 6 is one of the only true homes, with friends and family around her, that she's ever known... and now [[spoiler:they're being destroyed in front of her eyes]].
** Subaru's HeroicBSOD after [[spoiler:she fails to prevent her sister's kidnapping]] and her UnstoppableRage fades. Her devices destroyed, her barrier jacket shredded, her body heavily damaged ([[spoiler:to [[RoboticReveal reveal her cybernetic components]]]]), she collapses on the ground in wails of inconsolable grief. It's ''heartbreaking'', and all the more so because this is the most [[ThePollyanna preternaturally sweet and bubbly character]] in the series that we're seeing utterly broken.
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** Caro crying over the injured and unconscious bodies of [[spoiler:Erio and Fried]] while, overhead, a fleet of gadget drones is destroying [[spoiler:Riot Force 6 HQ]]. Then she unleashes her [[GodzillaThreshold true power]] for the first time – while sobbing "please don't destroy our home!". Remember that Caro was banished from her tribe as a small child, and spent much of her life moving around from one place to another, constantly rejected and unwanted. Riot Force 6 is one of the only true homes, with friends and family around her, that she's ever known... and now [[spoiler:they're being destroyed in front of her eyes]].
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* Subaru's HeroicBSOD after [[spoiler:she fails to prevent her sister's kidnapping]].
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* The scene in episode 25 with Signum and Zest.
* In episode 20, where Nanoha and Vita give a speech about the upcoming battle to the forwards.
* The flashback from episode 17 where [[spoiler: Erio is told that who he thought were his family weren't and is taken away from them]].
* In episode 20, where Nanoha and Vita give a speech about the upcoming battle to the forwards.
* The flashback from episode 17 where [[spoiler: Erio is told that who he thought were his family weren't and is taken away from them]].
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* Nanoha's NearDeathExperience in the flashback from episode 9. Made even more heart wrenching when [[spoiler: they focus entirely on Nanoha as she tries to go expedite her own recovery, being in a lot of pain while trying to stand, then Shamal states at that time, her injuries may end her career and possibly cripple her for life]].
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* Speaking of that, Teana's breakdown at the end of episode 8, when we see just how deeply scarred she is by the death of her big brother (the [[PromotionToParent only family she had left]]) and the horrible things that were then said about him and their family name. After pushing herself to dangerous levels in training, the plan she and Subaru came up with and worked so hard on is foiled by Nanoha with little effort. Then, when Nanoha tries to lecture her, the poor girl finally breaks and tries to open fire on Nanoha. As she's charging up her attack, she's screaming and sobbing that she ''needs'' to get stronger, no matter the cost to herself, because she can't take losing anyone else she cares about.
* Nanoha's NearDeathExperience in the flashback from episode 9. Made even moreheart wrenching heart-wrenching when [[spoiler: they focus entirely on Nanoha as she tries to go expedite her own recovery, being in a lot of pain while trying to stand, then Shamal states at that time, her injuries may end her career and possibly cripple her for life]].
* Nanoha's NearDeathExperience in the flashback from episode 9. Made even more
* The flashback from episode 17 where [[spoiler: Erio is told that who he thought were his family weren't and is taken away from them]].
* Subaru's HeroicBSOD after [[spoiler:she fails to prevent her sister's kidnapping]].
* In episode 20, where Nanoha and Vita give a speech about the upcoming battle to the Forwards.
* Four words: "[[spoiler:[[YoureNotMyFather You're not my mama]]!]]" Nanoha is clearly on the edge of tears after hearing it.
* Four words: "[[spoiler:[[YoureNotMyFather You're not my mama]]!]]" Nanoha is clearly on the edge of tears after hearing it.
* The scene in episode 25 with Signum and Zest.
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* Four words: "[[spoiler: [[YoureNotMyFather You're not my mama]]!]]" Nanoha is clearly on the edge of tears after hearing it.
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* Four words: "[[spoiler: [[YoureNotMyFather "[[spoiler:[[YoureNotMyFather You're not my mama]]!]]" Nanoha is clearly on the edge of tears after hearing it.it.
* Subaru's HeroicBSOD after [[spoiler:she fails to prevent her sister's kidnapping]].
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* Four words: "[[spoiler: [[YoureNotMyFather You're not my mama]]!]]" Nanoha is clearly on the edge of tears after hearing it.
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** And then it cuts to Vivio StrappedToAnOperatingTable, desperately struggling, and screaming for Nanoha to save her while Jail talks about how he's going to make her his masterpiece. [[ScreamDiscretionShot The last thing we hear before the episode ends]] is her crying "Mama!".
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** And then it cuts to Vivio StrappedToAnOperatingTable, desperately struggling, and screaming for Nanoha to save her while Jail talks about how he's going to make her his masterpiece. [[ScreamDiscretionShot The last thing we hear before the episode ends]] is her crying "Mama!"."[[IWantMyMommy Mama!]]".
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* In the second ending aequence you see Nanoha juxtaposed with her younger self. There's a certain melancholy to seeing the optimistic little girl grabbing her older self's hand before fading away.
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* In the second ending aequence sequence you see Nanoha juxtaposed with her younger self. There's a certain melancholy to seeing the optimistic little girl grabbing her older self's hand before fading away.
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** And then it cuts to Vivio StrappedToAnOperatingTable, desperately struggling, and screaming for Nanoha to save her while Jail talks about how he's going to make her his masterpiece. The last thing we hear before the episode ends is her crying "Mama!".
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** And then it cuts to Vivio StrappedToAnOperatingTable, desperately struggling, and screaming for Nanoha to save her while Jail talks about how he's going to make her his masterpiece. [[ScreamDiscretionShot The last thing we hear before the episode ends ends]] is her crying "Mama!".
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* Hayate, while holding a near-dead, bloody Vita with a shattered device:
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* Vita collapsing after she seemingly fails to destroy the Saint Cradle's engine. Although it quickly turns into an incredibly {{SugarWiki/heartwarming| Moments}} and {{SugarWiki/awesome| moments}} moment when it's revealed that she succeeded.
-->'''Vita:''' It's no good. I couldn't protect them. Hayate, everyone, I'm sorry.
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-->'''Vita:''' It's no good. I couldn't protect them. Hayate, everyone, I'm sorry.
* Hayate, while holding a near-dead, bloody Vita with a shattered