History TakeThat / Fanfic

17th Sep '16 3:27:01 PM Theriocephalus
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* In FanFic/PrinceStaghornsKnownWorld, [[https://www.fimfiction.net/group/199698/the-known-world/thread/271866/locations-countries-if-you-can-call-this-useless-jag-of-land-one-tricornucopia the Kingdom of Tricornucopia]], home of the amphibious tricorns, is one to FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn itself. Tricornucopia’s immortal Grand Ruler Celesto styles himself as a living god and “rightful master of all things under heaven”, ruling with absolute power over a country that presents itself as the greatest of nations, defended by a grandiose Star Fleet. In reality, Tricornucopia’s an isolationist North Korea-esque dictatorship centered on Celesto’s cult of personality, the country itself a useless jag of swampland on the coast of the Badlands, home to nothing of any interest (not even the weird fauna found everywhere else in the world) and with no imports or exports. Celesto is a coward and a bully, and both he and his country are complete non-entities in world politics (although Equestria maintains an embassy to help oppressed Tricornucopians flee their country), and Star Fleet is just Celesto’s most blindly loyal and ruthless soldiers. To add insult to injury, tricorns as a species are descending into nonsapience.
10th Sep '16 10:56:14 AM ZimFan89
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** During the chaos of the first book's FinalBattle, Dumbledore says that if it weren't for the presence of civilians, he'd let the rampaging demons currently destroying the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tate_Modern Tate Modern]] finish the job, considering it a service to British art and culture.
4th Sep '16 3:17:49 PM nombretomado
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* The fic ''New Champion Evangelion'' is one long truly {{Facepalm}}-inducing TakeThat against Shinji as a character, intended to show [[FixFic what would happen if]] a "[[GodModeSue MANLY NON]] [[JerkSue PUSSY guy]]" took his place. A more specific example when Ramiel (which is never named) is described as "A HUGE BLOCKY THING IT SEEMD KIND OF LIKE A REFRENCE TO THAT [[TwoThousandOneASpaceOdyssey SHITTY MOVIE]] FROM THA 60S THAT WAS REALLY FUCKING BORING I THINK IT WAS DIRECTDED BY THAT GUY [[Creator/StanleyKubrick CUBICROCK]] OR SOMETUING"

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* The fic ''New Champion Evangelion'' is one long truly {{Facepalm}}-inducing TakeThat against Shinji as a character, intended to show [[FixFic what would happen if]] a "[[GodModeSue MANLY NON]] [[JerkSue PUSSY guy]]" took his place. A more specific example when Ramiel (which is never named) is described as "A HUGE BLOCKY THING IT SEEMD KIND OF LIKE A REFRENCE TO THAT [[TwoThousandOneASpaceOdyssey [[Film/TwoThousandOneASpaceOdyssey SHITTY MOVIE]] FROM THA 60S THAT WAS REALLY FUCKING BORING I THINK IT WAS DIRECTDED BY THAT GUY [[Creator/StanleyKubrick CUBICROCK]] OR SOMETUING"
1st Sep '16 6:47:50 AM HappyMan
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** Like ''FanFic/TheWorldsGreatestChuninExamTeam'' above, there's another one to the infamous ninth OVA in which Naruto is banned from using Sage Mode in the Chunin Exam. Before the last phase of the Chunin Exam begins, Jiraiya proceeds to ban not just Sage Mode, but Bloodline Limits, specialized clan techniques, summons, Chakra Gates, animal companions, poisons, weapons and tools other than kunai and shuriken, and bijuu powers, for the sake of having a "fair fight". After the initial shock, Jiraiya reveals he was just joking, and that only a retard who doesn't get the true meaning of the Chunin Exam (a war simulation between villages) would do that.

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** Like ''FanFic/TheWorldsGreatestChuninExamTeam'' above, below, there's another one to the infamous ninth OVA in which Naruto is banned from using Sage Mode in the Chunin Exam. Before the last phase of the Chunin Exam begins, Jiraiya proceeds to ban not just Sage Mode, but Bloodline Limits, specialized clan techniques, summons, Chakra Gates, animal companions, poisons, weapons and tools other than kunai and shuriken, and bijuu powers, for the sake of having a "fair fight". After the initial shock, Jiraiya reveals he was just joking, and that only a retard who doesn't get the true meaning of the Chunin Exam (a war simulation between villages) would do that.


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** On top of the possibility of banning Bloodlines, Tsunade mentions that the Sharingan is way more overpowered than Sage Mode, as it gives its user [[NewPowersAsThePlotDemands new powers whenever the user needs them]].
31st Aug '16 8:34:30 AM HappyMan
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* ''Fanfc/NewChance'' has LOTS of them, but worth mention is an omake that makes extensive use of BlandNameProduct to point out all the plot holes and incosistencies in the manga that many fans complain about.

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* ''Fanfc/NewChance'' ''Fanfic/NewChance'' has LOTS of them, but worth mention is an omake that makes extensive use of BlandNameProduct to point out all the plot holes and incosistencies in the manga that many fans complain about.
31st Aug '16 7:37:58 AM HappyMan
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** Like ''FanFic/TheWorldsGreatestChuninExamTeam'' above, there's another one to the infamous ninth OVA in which Naruto is banned from using Sage Mode in the Chunin Exam. Before the last phase of the Chunin Exam begins, Jiraiya proceeds to ban not just Sage Mode, but Bloodline Limits, specialized clan techniques, summons, Chakra Gates, animal companions, poisons, weapons and tools other than kunai and shuriken, and bijuu powers, for the sake of having a "fair fight". After the initial shock, Jiraiya reveals he was just joking, and that only a retard who doesn't get the true meaning of the Chunin Exam (a war simulation between villages) would do that.


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** There's also another one against the "Naruto retakes the Chunin Exam, but end up fighting surprisingly powerful opponents" FandomSpecificPlot. The story builds up a certain team from Kiri as a threat, who are more powerful than they look, and want to kill Naruto in revenge for Minato killing their parents during the Third Shinobi War. When they finally are about to fight, they reveal themselves and how powerful they are...only to be defeated by Killer B (one of Naruto's teammates) in less than fifteen seconds in a very anticlimatic way. Even if they were more powerful than the average genin, they had no chance to defeat an S-class ninja, much less three of them. To drive the point further, the author mentioned in a note at the end of the chapter how much he hates this FandomSpecificPlot as well as [[GodModeSue superpowerful OCs]], and the fact that he created these characters in an incredibly lazy way: he used a japanese random name generator to choose their names, as well as writing "Naruto OC" on Google Image Search to choose their appearance.
31st Aug '16 7:19:41 AM HappyMan
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** When Naruto learns that [[ItMakesSeenseInContext they made a(n admittedly campy) superhero show based on Shino]], Naruto wonders if he could convince the same producers to make a series about him, based on the data he has on the original timeliene...but discards the idea, guessing that [[SpotlightStealingSquad the series would end up completely focusing on the Uchihas.]]

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** When Naruto learns that [[ItMakesSeenseInContext [[ItMakesSenseInContext they made a(n admittedly campy) superhero show based on Shino]], Naruto wonders if he could convince the same producers to make a series about him, based on the data he has on the original timeliene...but discards the idea, guessing that [[SpotlightStealingSquad the series would end up completely focusing on the Uchihas.]]
31st Aug '16 7:19:07 AM HappyMan
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* ''Fanfc/New Chance'' has LOTS of them, but worth mention is an omake that makes extensive use of BlandNameProduct to point out all the plot holes and incosistencies in the manga that many fans complain about.

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* ''Fanfc/New Chance'' ''Fanfc/NewChance'' has LOTS of them, but worth mention is an omake that makes extensive use of BlandNameProduct to point out all the plot holes and incosistencies in the manga that many fans complain about.
31st Aug '16 7:18:38 AM HappyMan
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* An omake in ''New Chance'' takes multiple shots on the number of {{BrokenAesop}}s and other such complaints fans have about Naruto's story.

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* An omake in ''New ''Fanfc/New Chance'' takes multiple shots on has LOTS of them, but worth mention is an omake that makes extensive use of BlandNameProduct to point out all the number of {{BrokenAesop}}s plot holes and other such complaints incosistencies in the manga that many fans have about complain about.
** There is one against Jiraiya when he's introduced, with Minato beating him for neglecting his duties as
Naruto's story.godfather and not taking care of him all those years, as well as the poor training he gave Naruto during the timeskip in the original timeline.
** Kushina goes to great lengths (up to threatening to ''castrate'' the Hokage (Jiraiya) and Iruka) to make sure Naruto doesn't end up in Team 7 again. She considers Team 7 from the original timeline "an utter disaster".
** Also, when Naruto returns to Konoha after playing a big part in repelling the Iwa-Oto invasion, hefinds the villagers outside and laud him as a hero. Kushina notes that this scene [[LampshadeHanging is similar to when Naruto defeated Pain in the original timeline]], except that "there is no Sakura congratulating Naruto with a punch while the girl who always believed in him has to watch in the background."
** When Naruto learns that [[ItMakesSeenseInContext they made a(n admittedly campy) superhero show based on Shino]], Naruto wonders if he could convince the same producers to make a series about him, based on the data he has on the original timeliene...but discards the idea, guessing that [[SpotlightStealingSquad the series would end up completely focusing on the Uchihas.]]
22nd Aug '16 10:13:54 AM Theriocephalus
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** After several rude comments bragging that the Godzilla from ''Film/{{Godzilla 2014}}'' would make mincemeat of the fic's version of the grown up Godzilla Junior and demanding Tarbtano replace the fic's version with the 2014 one, Tarbtano wrote a semi-canon blog of the MirrorUniverse's 2014 version losing to the MirrorUniverse's Godzilla Junior. Though to soften the blow to the 2014 creature itself, as Tarb's gripe wasn't with it but its FanDumb, the 2014 Godzilla did put up a good fight and the bought ended in a logical way.

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** After several rude comments bragging that the Godzilla from ''Film/{{Godzilla 2014}}'' would make mincemeat of the fic's version of the grown up Godzilla Junior and demanding Tarbtano replace the fic's version with the 2014 one, Tarbtano wrote a semi-canon blog of the MirrorUniverse's 2014 version losing to the MirrorUniverse's Godzilla Junior. Though to soften the blow to the 2014 creature itself, as Tarb's gripe wasn't with it but its FanDumb, the 2014 Godzilla did put up a good fight and the bought bout ended in a logical way.
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