History ShownTheirWork / FanFiction

14th Feb '17 3:19:03 PM dmcreif
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* ''Fanfic/{{Vigil}}'' goes to some lengths explaining how plasma weaponry from ''Videogame/XCOMEnemyUnknown'' operates and how it interacts with ''Franchise/MassEffect'''s kinetic barriers, including the important point that plasma, being a state of matter, has mass and is thus affected by gravity. Furthermore, because thermal energy can only be transmitted through a vacuum by radiation instead of more efficient methods like convection or conduction, plasma that doesn't hit something in space is largely ineffective, especially when ships have heat-resistant hulls. As a result, kinetic barriers prove highly effective against plasma. This caused quite a few angry reviews from readers who insisted that plasma was just another form of energy and should ignore kinetic barriers altogether.

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* ''Fanfic/{{Vigil}}'' goes to some lengths explaining how plasma weaponry from ''Videogame/XCOMEnemyUnknown'' operates and how it interacts with ''Franchise/MassEffect'''s kinetic barriers, including the important point that plasma, being a state of matter, has mass and is thus affected by gravity. Furthermore, because thermal energy can only be transmitted through a vacuum by radiation instead of more efficient methods like convection or conduction, plasma that doesn't hit something in space is largely ineffective, especially when ships have heat-resistant hulls. As a result, kinetic barriers prove highly effective against plasma. This caused quite a few angry reviews from readers who insisted that plasma was just another form of energy and should ignore kinetic barriers altogether.altogether.
* The ''Series/Daredevil2015'' two-part fanfic ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/series/280353 Marci Stahl is Better Than You]]'' does something very few works involving blind people do, and acknowledges that Braille has a number of weird contractions that don't translate well into written English; not just used to combine two words, but also to condense common words into a few Braille dots (and primarily prepositions). It is the discovery of such contractions in the dossier on Fisk that leads Marci to suspect Matt is the Devil of Hell's Kitchen.
12th Dec '16 6:16:24 PM Doug86
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* ''Fanfic/BringerOfDeath'' is first a ''DragonballZ'' fic, and second an attempt to [[DoingInTheWizard plausibly explain the physics of DBZ.]] The result is an epic story that appeals to fans [[WillingSuspensionOfDisbelief unwilling to suspend their disbelief]] in poorly-explained spaceship mechanics, etc.

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* ''Fanfic/BringerOfDeath'' is first a ''DragonballZ'' ''Anime/DragonballZ'' fic, and second an attempt to [[DoingInTheWizard plausibly explain the physics of DBZ.]] DBZ]]. The result is an epic story that appeals to fans [[WillingSuspensionOfDisbelief unwilling to suspend their disbelief]] in poorly-explained spaceship mechanics, etc.
5th Nov '16 1:27:44 PM Minni128
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**From Chapter 18, this is played with. According to the note, she tried to do as much research as she could on the subject of adoption and child custody in Japan, however, she didn't turn up much anything, so she had to "wing it" for the plotline but, if she obtains more info, she'd update her note with her sources. In Satsuki's case, this is a bit more overt, as "takatsubo" is an actual condition, generally caused by a sudden shock of emotional stress.
18th Oct '16 8:42:49 PM Zaptech
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* ''Fanfic/{{Vigil}}'' goes to some lengths explaining how plasma weaponry from ''Videogame/XCOMEnemyUnknown'' operates and how it interacts with ''Franchise/MassEffect'''s kinetic barriers, including the important points that plasma, being a state of matter, has mass and is thus affected by gravity. Furthermore, because thermal energy can only be transmitted through a vacuum by radiation instead of more efficient methods like convection or conduction, plasma that doesn't hit something in space is largely ineffective, especially when ships have heat-resistant hulls. As a result, kinetic barriers prove highly effective against plasma.

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* ''Fanfic/{{Vigil}}'' goes to some lengths explaining how plasma weaponry from ''Videogame/XCOMEnemyUnknown'' operates and how it interacts with ''Franchise/MassEffect'''s kinetic barriers, including the important points point that plasma, being a state of matter, has mass and is thus affected by gravity. Furthermore, because thermal energy can only be transmitted through a vacuum by radiation instead of more efficient methods like convection or conduction, plasma that doesn't hit something in space is largely ineffective, especially when ships have heat-resistant hulls. As a result, kinetic barriers prove highly effective against plasma. This caused quite a few angry reviews from readers who insisted that plasma was just another form of energy and should ignore kinetic barriers altogether.
18th Oct '16 8:41:30 PM Zaptech
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* This was probably accidental but ''FanFic/TheCrimsonGarment'' is pretty accurate with what can be the effects of prolonged abuse in terms of Satsuki's psyche, considering the fact that she associates touch with domination, not being able to tell love from manipulation, and is quite afraid of her mother, along with blaming herself for the abuse.

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* This was probably accidental but ''FanFic/TheCrimsonGarment'' is pretty accurate with what can be the effects of prolonged abuse in terms of Satsuki's psyche, considering the fact that she associates touch with domination, not being able to tell love from manipulation, and is quite afraid of her mother, along with blaming herself for the abuse.abuse.
* ''Fanfic/{{Vigil}}'' goes to some lengths explaining how plasma weaponry from ''Videogame/XCOMEnemyUnknown'' operates and how it interacts with ''Franchise/MassEffect'''s kinetic barriers, including the important points that plasma, being a state of matter, has mass and is thus affected by gravity. Furthermore, because thermal energy can only be transmitted through a vacuum by radiation instead of more efficient methods like convection or conduction, plasma that doesn't hit something in space is largely ineffective, especially when ships have heat-resistant hulls. As a result, kinetic barriers prove highly effective against plasma.
28th Aug '16 6:39:41 PM Minni128
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** To be more specific, the older Ryuuko is, the less they can actually reclaim what was lost to [[spoiler:abuse, neglect, and severe isolation]] like Genie, who was about 12 or 13 when she was rescued), however, at least, she's learned language due to living around it, even if she didn't have normal human interaction (like Oxana, who lived around dogs but otherwise not away from other humans).

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** To be more specific, the older Ryuuko is, the less they can actually reclaim what was lost to [[spoiler:abuse, neglect, and severe isolation]] like Genie, who was about 12 or 13 when she was rescued), however, at least, she's learned language due to living around it, even if she didn't have normal human interaction (like Oxana, who lived around dogs but otherwise not away from other humans).humans).
*This was probably accidental but ''FanFic/TheCrimsonGarment'' is pretty accurate with what can be the effects of prolonged abuse in terms of Satsuki's psyche, considering the fact that she associates touch with domination, not being able to tell love from manipulation, and is quite afraid of her mother, along with blaming herself for the abuse.
28th Aug '16 12:24:55 PM Minni128
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** Also, as per said note, she does mention how she did research on Japan's legal systems in regards to [[spoiler: rape and sexual assault]], mentioning a few outlines on what's considered resistance against the attacker (i.e fighting back physically vs saying "No") and whether or not if the victim knew the attacker, even linking to her sources, one of which details someone else's experiences.

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** Also, as per in said note, she does mention how she did research on Japan's legal systems in regards to [[spoiler: rape and sexual assault]], mentioning a few outlines on what's considered resistance against the attacker (i.e fighting back physically vs saying "No") and and what whether or not if the victim knew the attacker, attacker meant to the case and the police asking Satsuki questions about Ryuuko prior to what happened to her and after, even linking to her sources, one of which details someone else's experiences.experiences (which did involve similar questions that Satsuki was asked).
28th Aug '16 12:08:23 PM Minni128
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** Also, as per said note, she does mention how she did research on Japan's legal systems in regards to [[spoiler: rape and sexual assault]], mentioning a few outlines on what's considered resistance against the attacker (i.e fighting back physically vs saying "No") and whether or not if the victim knew the attacker, even linking to her sources.
** In terms of Ryuuko, being kidnapped, held captive, and [[spoiler: raped (subsequently being four times impregnated, carrying two babies to term and miscarrying two)]] for four years can and, a good chunk of the time, do have near irreversible effects on the psyche, however, they might not be to the effect of Ryuuko's. Likewise, what her captors and accomplices did to her could have lasting physical repercussions, as well as psychological ones, as its mentioned that she might need a reconstruction of her private parts and female organs because of the damage she took, along with having a four times fractured pelvis.

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** Also, as per said note, she does mention how she did research on Japan's legal systems in regards to [[spoiler: rape and sexual assault]], mentioning a few outlines on what's considered resistance against the attacker (i.e fighting back physically vs saying "No") and whether or not if the victim knew the attacker, even linking to her sources.
sources, one of which details someone else's experiences.
** In terms of Ryuuko, being kidnapped, held captive, and [[spoiler: raped (subsequently being four times impregnated, carrying two babies to term and miscarrying two)]] for four years can and, a good chunk of the time, do have near irreversible effects on the psyche, however, they might not be to the effect of Ryuuko's. Likewise, what her captors and accomplices did to her could have lasting physical repercussions, as well as psychological ones, as its mentioned that she might need a reconstruction of her private parts and female organs because of the damage she took, along with having a four times her pelvis fractured pelvis.many times.
28th Aug '16 11:53:07 AM Minni128
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** In terms of Ryuuko, being kidnapped, held captive, and [[spoiler: raped (subsequently being four times impregnated, carrying two babies to term and miscarrying two)]] for four years can and, a good chunk of the time, do have near irreversible effects on the psyche, however, they might not be to the effect of Ryuuko's.

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**Also, as per said note, she does mention how she did research on Japan's legal systems in regards to [[spoiler: rape and sexual assault]], mentioning a few outlines on what's considered resistance against the attacker (i.e fighting back physically vs saying "No") and whether or not if the victim knew the attacker, even linking to her sources.
** In terms of Ryuuko, being kidnapped, held captive, and [[spoiler: raped (subsequently being four times impregnated, carrying two babies to term and miscarrying two)]] for four years can and, a good chunk of the time, do have near irreversible effects on the psyche, however, they might not be to the effect of Ryuuko's. Likewise, what her captors and accomplices did to her could have lasting physical repercussions, as well as psychological ones, as its mentioned that she might need a reconstruction of her private parts and female organs because of the damage she took, along with having a four times fractured pelvis.
28th Aug '16 10:10:58 AM Minni128
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** In terms of Ryuuko, being kidnapped, held captive, and [[spoiler: raped (subsequently being four times impregnated (carrying two babies to term and miscarrying two)]] for four years can and, a good chunk of the time, do have near irreversible effects on the psyche, however, they might not be to the effect of Ryuuko's.

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** In terms of Ryuuko, being kidnapped, held captive, and [[spoiler: raped (subsequently being four times impregnated (carrying impregnated, carrying two babies to term and miscarrying two)]] for four years can and, a good chunk of the time, do have near irreversible effects on the psyche, however, they might not be to the effect of Ryuuko's.
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