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1st Dec '16 2:34:10 PM ewolf2015
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* @/{{Ewolf2015}}:[[http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/Kaiego-Episode-1-Pilot-648898564]]: basically speaking, it's a pilot for cartoon series based on an old RP I did back in the day. It follows the story of young boy named john arciere, a guy with a cynical viewpoint on life, who ends up becoming the new bearer of a magical bracelet. note: I'm done with it now, finally.

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* @/{{Ewolf2015}}:[[http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/Kaiego-Episode-1-Pilot-648898564]]: com/art/Kaiego-Episode-1-Pilot-648898564 second draft or not.]]: basically speaking, it's a pilot for cartoon series based on an old RP I did back in the day. It follows the story of young boy named john arciere, a guy with a cynical viewpoint on life, who ends up becoming the new bearer of a magical bracelet. note: I'm done with it now, finally.
1st Dec '16 2:33:38 PM ewolf2015
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* @/{{Ewolf2015}} : [[http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/ep1-outline-629361470 early draft]] [[http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/Kaiego-Episode-1-Pilot-wip-635574408 revised version]]: basically speaking, it's a pilot for cartoon series based on an old RP I did back in the day. It follows the story of young boy named john arciere, a guy with a cynical viewpoint on life, who ends up becoming the new bearer of a magical bracelet.
1st Dec '16 2:33:15 PM ewolf2015
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* @/{{Ewolf2015}}:[[http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/Kaiego-Episode-1-Pilot-648898564]]: basically speaking, it's a pilot for cartoon series based on an old RP I did back in the day. It follows the story of young boy named john arciere, a guy with a cynical viewpoint on life, who ends up becoming the new bearer of a magical bracelet. note: I'm done with it now, finally.
19th Nov '16 7:42:13 PM Sugarp1e1
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* @/{{Sugarp1e1}} : [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/TwentyFourDS 24 DS]]: I cut one of the prologues and rewrote the remaining one. To be honest, I think I need to be handheld through this considering I keep hitting Writer's Blocks. I just want to know if people would actually read my story instead of just giving up on the first page.

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* %%* @/{{Sugarp1e1}} : [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/TwentyFourDS 24 DS]]: I cut one of the prologues and rewrote the remaining one. To be honest, I think I need to be handheld through this considering I keep hitting Writer's Blocks. I just want to know if people would actually read my story instead of just giving up on the first page.
13th Nov '16 4:46:23 AM InigoMontoya
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* @/{{Sugarp1e1}} : [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/TwentyFourDS 24 DS]]: I cut one of the prologues and rewrote the remaining one. To be honest, I think I need to be handheld through this considering I keep hitting Writer's Blocks. I just want to know if people would actually read my story instead of just giving up on the first page.

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* @/{{Sugarp1e1}} : [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/TwentyFourDS 24 DS]]: I cut one of the prologues and rewrote the remaining one. To be honest, I think I need to be handheld through this considering I keep hitting Writer's Blocks. I just want to know if people would actually read my story instead of just giving up on the first page.




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* @/{{InigoMontoya}} : Unnamed project set in an all-girl school featuring two characters named Jane and Alex. Previously reviewed, but needs more work.
* @/{{Sugarp1e1}} : [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/TwentyFourDS 24 DS]]: I cut one of the prologues and rewrote the remaining one. To be honest, I think I need to be handheld through this considering I keep hitting Writer's Blocks. I just want to know if people would actually read my story instead of just giving up on the first page.
10th Nov '16 12:02:08 AM TheAphid
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* @/TheAphid : Am I allowed to ask for feedback on [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/ProjectChimeraTheAtticHypothesis fanfic]]? I, personally, feel like I'm doing a good job with this one... but it's slow to gain followers. And one of them unfollowed the other day. Any WordCruft I've missed? The plot is, essentially, a group of scientists created genetic recombinations of Pokemon DNA, called Chimeras. One day, a group of Chimeras escapes and begins fighting against their former masters.
3rd Nov '16 5:31:16 PM ewolf2015
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* @/{{Ewolf2015}} : [[http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/ep1-outline-629361470 early draft]] [[http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/Kaiego-Episode-1-Pilot-wip-635574408 revised version]]: basically speaking, it's a pilot for cartoon series based on an old RP I did back in the day. It follows the story of young boy named john arciere, a guy with a viewpoint on life, who ends up becoming the new bearer of a magical bracelet.

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* @/{{Ewolf2015}} : [[http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/ep1-outline-629361470 early draft]] [[http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/Kaiego-Episode-1-Pilot-wip-635574408 revised version]]: basically speaking, it's a pilot for cartoon series based on an old RP I did back in the day. It follows the story of young boy named john arciere, a guy with a cynical viewpoint on life, who ends up becoming the new bearer of a magical bracelet.
3rd Nov '16 4:53:43 PM CrystalGlacia
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* @/{{Ewolf20}} : {{http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/ep1-outline-629361470 early draft}} {{http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/Kaiego-Episode-1-Pilot-wip-635574408 revised version}}: basically speaking, it's a pilot for cartoon series based on an old RP I did back in the day. It follows the story of young boy named john arciere, a guy with a viewpoint on life, who ends up becoming the new bearer of a magical bracelet.

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* @/{{Ewolf20}} @/{{Ewolf2015}} : {{http://ewolf20.[[http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/ep1-outline-629361470 early draft}} {{http://ewolf20.draft]] [[http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/Kaiego-Episode-1-Pilot-wip-635574408 revised version}}: version]]: basically speaking, it's a pilot for cartoon series based on an old RP I did back in the day. It follows the story of young boy named john arciere, a guy with a viewpoint on life, who ends up becoming the new bearer of a magical bracelet.
3rd Nov '16 4:53:05 PM CrystalGlacia
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%%* @/{{MapleSamurai}} : [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12112078/1/The-Seven-Autobots The Seven Autobots]]: A FusionFic taking the plot of Film/SevenSamurai and placing it in the {{Franchise/Transformers}} multiverse. Currently has the first chapter uploaded, and I'm looking for feedback so I can improve the story as I continue it.
%%* @/{{Sugarp1e1}} : [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/TwentyFourDS 24 DS]]: I cut one of the prologues and rewrote the remaining one. To be honest, I think I need to be handheld through this considering I keep hitting Writer's Blocks. I just want to know if people would actually read my story instead of just giving up on the first page.
%%* @/{{Ewolf20}} : {{http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/ep1-outline-629361470 early draft}} {{http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/Kaiego-Episode-1-Pilot-wip-635574408 revised version}}: basically speaking, it's a pilot for cartoon series based on an old RP I did back in the day. It follows the story of young boy named john arciere, a guy with a viewpoint on life, who ends up becoming the new bearer of a magical bracelet.

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%%* @/{{MapleSamurai}} : [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12112078/1/The-Seven-Autobots The Seven Autobots]]: A FusionFic taking the plot of Film/SevenSamurai and placing it in the {{Franchise/Transformers}} multiverse. Currently has the first chapter uploaded, and I'm looking for feedback so I can improve the story as I continue it.
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* @/{{Sugarp1e1}} : [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/TwentyFourDS 24 DS]]: I cut one of the prologues and rewrote the remaining one. To be honest, I think I need to be handheld through this considering I keep hitting Writer's Blocks. I just want to know if people would actually read my story instead of just giving up on the first page.
%%* * @/{{Ewolf20}} : {{http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/ep1-outline-629361470 early draft}} {{http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/Kaiego-Episode-1-Pilot-wip-635574408 revised version}}: basically speaking, it's a pilot for cartoon series based on an old RP I did back in the day. It follows the story of young boy named john arciere, a guy with a viewpoint on life, who ends up becoming the new bearer of a magical bracelet.
2nd Nov '16 1:22:03 PM ewolf2015
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%%* @/{{Ewolf20}} : {{http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/ep1-outline-629361470 early draft}} {{http://ewolf20.deviantart.com/art/Kaiego-Episode-1-Pilot-wip-635574408 revised version}}: basically speaking, it's a pilot for cartoon series based on an old RP I did back in the day. It follows the story of young boy named john arciere, a guy with a viewpoint on life, who ends up becoming the new bearer of a magical bracelet.
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