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* DeadlyRemoteControlToy: The Warden uses remote-controlled torpedoes on wheels called "Iron Lizards" to keep his prisoners in check, sending these vehicles to pursue and blow up any prisoners who attempts a getaway.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: The Warden eventually ends up getting chased by one of the land sharks, thanks to Fujiko having enough time to secretly sneak one of his hairs in it.
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In the middle of Africa is an odd prison; prisoners roam the grounds freely, out of cells waiting our their sentence while guards relax and slack off. In the midst of this prison, the Warden makes continuing advances towards a certain prison, one Fujiko Mine. Taking refuge in her cell, she continues to spurn him. His attempts to woo her are interrupted with word that a prisoner, due to be executed tomorrow, has escaped. The Warden returns to his office and releases a sinister looking missle-on-wheels he calls a "land shark", chucking how some of the prisoners can't understand this is the fate they meet if they try to escape. The land shark zooms out of the prison and out into the African wilds.
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In the middle of Africa is an odd prison; prisoners roam the grounds freely, out of cells waiting our their sentence while guards relax and slack off. In the midst of this prison, the Warden makes continuing advances towards a certain prison, prisoner, one Fujiko Mine. Taking refuge in her cell, she continues to spurn him. His attempts to woo her are interrupted with word that a prisoner, due to be executed tomorrow, has escaped. The Warden returns to his office and releases a sinister looking missle-on-wheels he calls a "land shark", chucking how some of the prisoners can't understand this is the fate they meet if they try to escape. The land shark zooms out of the prison and out into the African wilds.
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* ShoutOut: References to ''Film/{{Jaws}}'' abound during the boat escape sequence. The name for the shark is an ''[[Series/SaturdayNightLive]]'' reference.
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* ShoutOut: References to ''Film/{{Jaws}}'' abound during the boat escape sequence. The name for the shark is an ''[[Series/SaturdayNightLive]]'' ''Series/SaturdayNightLive'' reference.
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* ShoutOut: References to ''Film/{{Jaws}}'' abound during the boat escape sequence.
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* ShoutOut: References to ''Film/{{Jaws}}'' abound during the boat escape sequence. The name for the shark is an ''[[Series/SaturdayNightLive]]'' reference.
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'''"The Coming of the Killer Iron Lizards"'''[[hottip:*:必殺鉄トカゲ見参 (''Hissatsu Tetsu-tokage Kenzan'')]], released in English as '''"Lair of the Land-Shark"'''. Released in 2004 by Geneon on ''Volume 5: Mission Irresistible''.
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'''"The Coming of the Killer Iron Lizards"'''[[hottip:*:必殺鉄トカゲ見参 Lizards"'''[[note]]必殺鉄トカゲ見参 (''Hissatsu Tetsu-tokage Kenzan'')]], Kenzan'')[[/note]], released in English as '''"Lair of the Land-Shark"'''. Released in 2004 by Geneon on ''Volume 5: Mission Irresistible''.
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'''"The Coming of the Killer Iron Lizards"'''[[note]]必殺鉄トカゲ見参 (Hissatsu Tetsu-tokage Kenzan)[[/note]], released in English as '''"Lair of the Land-Shark"'''. Released in 2004 by Geneon on ''Volume 5: Mission Irresistible''.
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'''"The Coming of the Killer Iron Lizards"'''[[note]]必殺鉄トカゲ見参 (Hissatsu Lizards"'''[[hottip:*:必殺鉄トカゲ見参 (''Hissatsu Tetsu-tokage Kenzan)[[/note]], Kenzan'')]], released in English as '''"Lair of the Land-Shark"'''. Released in 2004 by Geneon on ''Volume 5: Mission Irresistible''.
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'''"The Coming of the Killer Iron Lizards"'''[[hottip:*:必殺鉄トカゲ見参 (Hissatsu Tetsu-tokage Kenzan)]], released in English as '''"Lair of the Land-Shark"'''. Released in 2004 by Geneon on ''Volume 5: Mission Irresistible''.
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'''"The Coming of the Killer Iron Lizards"'''[[hottip:*:必殺鉄トカゲ見参 Lizards"'''[[note]]必殺鉄トカゲ見参 (Hissatsu Tetsu-tokage Kenzan)]], Kenzan)[[/note]], released in English as '''"Lair of the Land-Shark"'''. Released in 2004 by Geneon on ''Volume 5: Mission Irresistible''.
* ComedicUnderwearExposure: Reluctantly, for one of Lupin's plans.
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* ISeeLondon: Reluctantly, for one of Lupin's plans.
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'''"The Coming of the Killer Iron Lizards"'''[[hottip:*:必殺鉄トカゲ見参 (Hissatsu Tokage Kenzan)]], released in English as '''"Lair of the Land-Shark"'''. Released in 2004 by Geneon on ''Volume 5: Mission Irresistible''.
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'''"The Coming of the Killer Iron Lizards"'''[[hottip:*:必殺鉄トカゲ見参 (Hissatsu Tokage Tetsu-tokage Kenzan)]], released in English as '''"Lair of the Land-Shark"'''. Released in 2004 by Geneon on ''Volume 5: Mission Irresistible''.
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'''"The Coming of the Killer Iron Lizards"''', released in English as '''"Lair of the Land-Shark"'''. Released in 2004 by Geneon on ''Volume 5: Mission Irresistible''.
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'''"The Coming of the Killer Iron Lizards"''', Lizards"'''[[hottip:*:必殺鉄トカゲ見参 (Hissatsu Tokage Kenzan)]], released in English as '''"Lair of the Land-Shark"'''. Released in 2004 by Geneon on ''Volume 5: Mission Irresistible''.
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"The Coming of the Killer Iron Lizards", released in English as "Lair of the Land-Shark". Released in 2004 by Geneon on ''Volume 5: Mission Irresistible''.
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"The Coming of the Killer Iron Lizards", released in English as "Lair of the Land-Shark"
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"The Coming of the Killer Iron Lizards", released in English as "Lair of the Land-Shark"
Land-Shark". Released in 2004 by Geneon on ''Volume 5: Mission Irresistible''.
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* ArcNumber: Lupin's inmate number is naturally "3333".
** Also a GeniusBonus; Goemon gets "3335"; the first character in his first name is "go", which means "five".
** Also a GeniusBonus; Goemon gets "3335"; the first character in his first name is "go", which means "five".
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* ArcNumber: Lupin's inmate number is naturally "3333".
**"3333". Also a GeniusBonus; Goemon gets "3335"; the first character in his first name is "go", which means "five".
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* TrickBullet: Bullets are set off exploding by another bullet!
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* TrickBullet: Bullets are set off exploding by another bullet!bullet!
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