History Quotes / TheBigDamnKiss

23rd May '16 8:36:10 AM Monolaf317
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14th May '16 4:32:55 PM Monolaf317
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[[LemonyNarrator It's so fucking cliché.]] But she feels it. She feels sparks. Her stomach is doing backflips. ''I'm kissing her! I'm finally kissing her! Fuck...I'm kissing her.'' Her eyes widen, and she tries to detach herself from Brittnay. She tried. Only then does she notice hands on the sides of her face. ''She's kissing me back. Brittnay Matthews is kissing me back!''\\

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[[LemonyNarrator It's so fucking cliché.]] But she feels it. She feels sparks. Her stomach is doing backflips. ''I'm kissing her! I'm finally kissing her! Fuck...[[RuleOfThree I'm kissing her.'' ]]'' Her eyes widen, and she tries to detach herself from Brittnay. She tried. Only then does she notice hands on the sides of her face. ''She's kissing me back. Brittnay Matthews is kissing me back!''\\
13th May '16 7:13:53 PM Monolaf317
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[[LemonyNarrator It's so fucking cliché.]] But she feels it. She feels sparks. Her stomach is doing backflips. ''I'm kissing her! I'm finally kissing her! Fuck...I'm kissing her.'' Her eyes widen, and she tries to detach herself from Brittnay. She ''tried''. Only then does she notice hands on the sides of her face. ''She's kissing me back. Brittnay Matthews is kissing me back!''\\

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[[LemonyNarrator It's so fucking cliché.]] But she feels it. She feels sparks. Her stomach is doing backflips. ''I'm kissing her! I'm finally kissing her! Fuck...I'm kissing her.'' Her eyes widen, and she tries to detach herself from Brittnay. She ''tried''.tried. Only then does she notice hands on the sides of her face. ''She's kissing me back. Brittnay Matthews is kissing me back!''\\
12th May '16 7:50:39 PM Monolaf317
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Before the brunette can stop herself, she leans forwrd and closes her eyes.\\

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Before the brunette can stop herself, she leans forwrd forward and closes her eyes.\\
11th May '16 2:38:14 PM Monolaf317
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->''Just do it! Her lips are right there. Lean in a little and...''\\

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->''Just ->Only then does she feel a pair of eyes on her. Honey brown locks with baby blue. The younger girl girl chews her bottom lip nervously.\\
''Just
do it! Her lips are right there. Lean in a little and...''\\
11th May '16 2:35:29 PM Monolaf317
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[[LemonyNarrator It's so fucking cliche.]] But she feels it. She feels sparks. Her stomach is doing backflips. ''I'm kissing her! I'm finally kissing her! Fuck...I'm kissing her.'' Her eyes widen, and she tries to detach herself from Brittnay. She ''tried''. Only then does she notice hands on the sides of her face. ''She's kissing me back. Brittnay Matthews is kissing me back!''\\

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[[LemonyNarrator It's so fucking cliche.cliché.]] But she feels it. She feels sparks. Her stomach is doing backflips. ''I'm kissing her! I'm finally kissing her! Fuck...I'm kissing her.'' Her eyes widen, and she tries to detach herself from Brittnay. She ''tried''. Only then does she notice hands on the sides of her face. ''She's kissing me back. Brittnay Matthews is kissing me back!''\\
10th May '16 7:56:53 PM Monolaf317
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-->-- ''WebAnimation/TheMostPopularGirlsInSchool'' fanfiction, Mackenzie's [=POV=], [[https://www.wattpad.com/67839484-date-mpgis-my-girl/page/3 Date]]

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-->-- ''WebAnimation/TheMostPopularGirlsInSchool'' fanfiction, partly Mackenzie's [=POV=], [[https://www.wattpad.com/67839484-date-mpgis-my-girl/page/3 Date]]
10th May '16 7:55:59 PM Monolaf317
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->''Just do it! Her lips are right there. Lean in a little and...''\\
Before the brunette can stop herself, she leans forwrd and closes her eyes.\\
[[LemonyNarrator It's so fucking cliche.]] But she feels it. She feels sparks. Her stomach is doing backflips. ''I'm kissing her! I'm finally kissing her! Fuck...I'm kissing her.'' Her eyes widen, and she tries to detach herself from Brittnay. She ''tried''. Only then does she notice hands on the sides of her face. ''She's kissing me back. Brittnay Matthews is kissing me back!''\\
She feels a tongue trail it's way on the lips. She closes her eyes once more. She can taste mint and and cherry lip gloss.\\
Oxygen deprived, they part.
-->-- ''WebAnimation/TheMostPopularGirlsInSchool'' fanfiction, Mackenzie's [=POV=], [[https://www.wattpad.com/67839484-date-mpgis-my-girl/page/3 Date]]
3rd May '16 11:34:09 AM Tron80
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->Her rosy lips parted, and she closed her eyes as she descended on him.\\
Shinji had waited for this moment for so long. He had always been torn by his feelings towards her. In the darker days of the fight with the Angels he couldn't bear to be with her. Asuka had become so hostile, so angry. Everything she said was an insult, all she did was hurt him. He hadn't known if he could live with her. It was the most painful time he could recall. But he'd come to identify with her and her pain.\\
It was not, he realized, that he was there for her. It was simply that he was hers. That he belonged to her—all of him. He always had, ever since meeting her.\\
Their lips met gently, with nothing more than a caress, but that was enough for Shinji to feel a shockwave of electricity flowing through him. The sensation flooded her every cell, and ate its way into his being. It became almost like a tangible thing and he opened himself to it.\\
Never had he shared such an intimate bond with another human being. Never felt this way about anyone.\\
Faced which such heartfelt comfort, Shinji caved in and submitted to her, his body relaxing instinctively under her kiss.\\
The smell of her hair surrounded him, and her taste poured into him. He looked deep within himself, down into the very core of who he was, and realized he was starving for her. His mind became a blur where all he could make out was the warm sensation in his mouth as they worked their lips against each other.\\
It was not their first kiss, but it was the first time it felt right. Before Asuka had teased and goaded him into kissing her, even bringing up his dead mother. Then she had held his nose and pinched it until he turned blue while kissing him. It had not been entirely unpleasant, just strange. Now it was different.\\
Asuka intoxicated him as he pressed harder against her lips, feeling them quiver and part further, relishing more of her taste. He was drunk with it.\\
In this moment, only the two of them existed in the world.\\
Had he not needed to breathe, Shinji would have kissed Asuka forever. Just as he had said he would be with her forever. But that was not to be. When the kiss finally broke they both gasped for air, and locked eyes with each other again.
-->-- ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionGenocide''
4th Sep '15 12:16:37 AM MachRider1985
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-->--'''Shinji''' and '''Asuka''', ''Fanfic/LastChildOFKrypton: Redux'', ''chapter 8''

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-->--'''Shinji''' and '''Asuka''', ''Fanfic/LastChildOFKrypton: ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton: Redux'', ''chapter 8''
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