-> She had become in [[EvilMentor my]] mind, if not daughter, then student, protégé. I had grown both fond and proud of her. She was ever-curious, ever-learning. Writing new [[MindControlMagic songs]] that made the children do things – tear the wings from butterflies, snarl like wild dogs, hold hands and disappear off into the forest without a thought. Children were the hardest to enthrall, and yet they would do anything for her. They practically begged.
-> (...)
-> She played, and the children turned, mouths pressing together, such soft, tiny mouths. Perfect rosebuds. She played and their small bodies moved together, removed the air between them.
-> “Stop!” I had to push her off my lap so hard that her music flared and then faltered.
-> “But…” She pushed her lip out, near tears. Her mole slid, as though it was melting against her skin.
-> I took a softer tone. I didn’t mean to scare her. I didn’t mean to scare myself.
-> “You can’t make people do those things,” I said. “There is a line, a line of… ” Of what? I didn’t know.
-->-- ''Trill'', a short [[http://www.amazon.com/Lure-Dangerous-Women-Shanna-Germain-ebook/dp/B008P1228O story]] by Shanna Germain

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-> [[ImpossibleThief She]] scanned the canyon floor and quickly found what she was looking for, an ancient dwelling carved into the cliff face by the mysterious Anasazi a millennia ago. Carmen had initially scouted Eagle Rock, but ultimately ruled it out; it was considered sacred to the Hopi people and a superstitious part of her was still inclined to give Native American holy sites a wide birth. If it were within Carmen's power, she would have taken the entire 270 mile long canyon to add to her collection of Natural Wonders of the World. But such a feat of engineering would have been beyond even what Sara at her most brilliant could manage. Besides, damaging an entire ecosystem did not sit well with her [[ChaoticNeutral unique]] moral code. The cliff dwelling at Nankoweap Creek seemed like a fine compromise.
-->-- ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/699404 Canyon]]'', a ''CarmenSandiego'' fanfic

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-->-- ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/699404 Canyon]]'', a ''CarmenSandiego'' fanfic

-> She had become in [[EvilMentor my]] mind, if not daughter, then student, protégé. I had grown both fond and proud of her. She was ever-curious, ever-learning. Writing new songs that made the children do things – tear the wings from butterflies, snarl like wild dogs, hold hands and disappear off into the forest without a thought. Children were the hardest to enthrall, and yet they would do anything for her. They practically begged.
-> (...)
-> She played, and the children turned, mouths pressing together, such soft, tiny mouths. Perfect rosebuds. She played and their small bodies moved together, removed the air between them.
-> “Stop!” I had to push her off my lap so hard that her music flared and then faltered.
-> “But…” She pushed her lip out, near tears. Her mole slid, as though it was melting against her skin.
-> I took a softer tone. I didn’t mean to scare her. I didn’t mean to scare myself.
-> “You can’t make people do those things,” I said. “There is a line, a line of… ” Of what? I didn’t know.
-->-- ''Trill'', a short [[http://www.amazon.com/Lure-Dangerous-Women-Shanna-Germain-ebook/dp/B008P1228O story]] by Shanna Germain

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