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** Dark Blood is a KnightTemplar or HeroWithAnFInGood who holds basically the same ideals as the heroes, but is willing to cross line his companions would find unthinkable in pursuit of those ideals. The heroes keep him around because both he's genuinely dedicated to the cause and so they can discourage him from crossing those lines.
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** Dark Blood is a KnightTemplar or HeroWithAnFInGood who holds basically the same ideals as the heroes, but is willing to cross line lines his companions would find unthinkable in pursuit of those ideals. The heroes keep him around because both he's genuinely dedicated to the cause and so they can discourage him from crossing those lines.
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** Dark Blood is a KnightTemplar or HeroWithAnFInGood who holds basically the same ideals as the heroes, but is willing to cross line his companions would find unthinkable in pursuit of those ideals. The heroes keep him around because both he's genuinely dedicated to the cause and so they can discourage him from crossing those lines.
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** Dark Blood is a laugh inducing, mustache twirling, damsel kidnapping, dynamite abusing, DastardlyWhiplash!...who stands next to shining armor paragons of kitten-rescuing.
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** Dark Blood is a laugh inducing, mustache twirling, damsel kidnapping, dynamite abusing, DastardlyWhiplash!... who stands next to shining armor paragons of kitten-rescuing.
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** 6.) Dark Blood also has some experience with his own evil traits to help the team deal with theirs, which already aren't as bad, agreeing that they shouldn't have to be brought down to even his level.
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* '''Enforced''':"Audiences like a HeroicComedicSociopath character so we'll have an evil member of TheTeam."
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* '''Enforced''':"Audiences '''Enforced''': “Audiences like a HeroicComedicSociopath character so we'll have an evil member of TheTeam."
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* '''Enforced''':
** "Audiences like a HeroicComedicSociopath character so we'll have an evil member of TheTeam."
** "Audiences like a HeroicComedicSociopath character so we'll have an evil member of TheTeam."
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* '''Enforced''':
** "Audiences'''Enforced''':"Audiences like a HeroicComedicSociopath character so we'll have an evil member of TheTeam."
** "Audiences
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** The Author wanted an AntiHero but went ''too'' overboard on the “Anti-“ part.
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** In a team full of LawfulGood heroes, Dark Blood is a ChaoticNeutral.
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* '''Enforced''': "Audiences like a HeroicComedicSociopath character so we'll have an evil member of TheTeam."
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** "Audiences like a HeroicComedicSociopath character so we'll have an evil member of TheTeam.""
** The Author wanted an AntiHero but went ''too'' overboard on the “Anti-“ part.
** "Audiences like a HeroicComedicSociopath character so we'll have an evil member of TheTeam.
** The Author wanted an AntiHero but went ''too'' overboard on the “Anti-“ part.
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** [[RuleOfThree Dark Blood]], who is [[invoked]]NeutralEvil, [[TakeAThirdOption would rather]] join the NeutralGood heroes than joining one of the [[ChaoticEvil two]] [[LawfulEvil evils]] in the BigBadEnsemble.
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** [[RuleOfThree Dark Blood]], Blood, who is is]] [[invoked]]NeutralEvil, [[TakeAThirdOption would rather]] join the NeutralGood heroes than joining one of the [[ChaoticEvil two]] [[LawfulEvil evils]] in the BigBadEnsemble.
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** Dark Blood is a HarmlessVillain-type and his "evil deeds" are all PokeThePoodle.
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** Dark Blood is a HarmlessVillain-type and his "evil deeds" "[[DesignatedEvil evil deeds]]" are all PokeThePoodle.