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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice is just an innocent little church girl, but [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu she defeats the serial killer]] [[ApocalypseHow who wiped out most humans]].
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice is just an innocent little church girl, but [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu she defeats punches out the serial killer]] [[ApocalypseHow who wiped out most humans]].just about every human but her]].
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** Alice becomes as bad as the monster who [[FallenHero made her this way]].
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** Alice becomes as bad as the monster who [[FallenHero made her this way]].as bad]] as the killer.
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** One of the other characters turns out to be NotQuiteDead.
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** One of the other characters turns out to be NotQuiteDead.
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** Alice winds up mistaken for a mass murder when the police arrive.
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** Alice winds up mistaken for a mass murder murderer when the police arrive.
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** Alice is a GenreSavvy HardDrinkingPartyGirl. She knows girls like her don't last too long in horror, so she dyes her hair dark, buys conservative clothing and becomes the group's mother.
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** Alice Brittany is a GenreSavvy HardDrinkingPartyGirl. She knows girls like her don't last too long in horror, so she dyes her hair dark, buys conservative clothing clothing, and becomes the group's mother.
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* '''Defied''': The killer knows that slashers usually leave girls like Alice last, so he targets her first on purpose. The rest of the party is rattled by this.
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** The killer knows that slashers usually leave girls like Alice last, so he targets her first on purpose. The rest of the party is rattled bythis.this.
** The group knows that girls like Alice are left for last, so they turn on her to lessen her chances of survival.
** The killer knows that slashers usually leave girls like Alice last, so he targets her first on purpose. The rest of the party is rattled by
** The group knows that girls like Alice are left for last, so they turn on her to lessen her chances of survival.
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** Alice [[TheKillerInMe is the killer]].
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** Alice is not as innocent or pure as she would like you to think she is. (i.e. Alice [[TheKillerInMe is the killer]].killer]] or [[AlphaBitch a bitch in disguise]])
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** Alice avoids the trappings of the classic final girl (i.e. does drugs, has sex, ect), but she is still the last one to face the killer at the end.
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** Alice is a CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass HotScientist, who [[GuileHero uses her smart strategies as advantages]].
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** Alice is a CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass HotScientist, scientist, who [[GuileHero uses her smart strategies as advantages]].
