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We should probably go with "dog" rather than "dragon"
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* '''Straight''': Rydia has a pet dragon, Torch, that growls when Baron Veli comes around.
* '''Exaggerated''': Rydia has a pet dragon, Torch, that burns anyone to a crisp who has a hostile thought about its owner.
* '''Exaggerated''': Rydia has a pet dragon, Torch, that burns anyone to a crisp who has a hostile thought about its owner.
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* '''Straight''': Rydia has a pet dragon, pitbull, Torch, that growls when Baron Veli comes around.
* '''Exaggerated''':Rydia has a pet dragon, Torch, that burns Torch mauls anyone to a crisp who has a hostile thought about its his owner.
* '''Exaggerated''':
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** Rydia has a pet dragon, Torch, that refuses to acknowledge and generally snubs Baron Veli.
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** Rydia has a pet dragon, Torch, that Torch refuses to acknowledge and generally snubs Baron Veli.
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** But then Torch is suddenly hostile to the villain.
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** But then Torch is suddenly becomes hostile to towards the villain.
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* '''Enforced''': "We need to show evil how Baron Veli is to the viewers. Have Rydia's dragon detect his evil."
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* '''Enforced''': "We need to show evil how Baron Veli is to the viewers. Have Rydia's dragon dog detect his evil."
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** The dog is a police/military dog trained to recognize suspicious people and guard their handlers against them.
