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** Alice's academic efforts were not merely discouraged but actively sabotaged by her [[AntiEducationMama dysfunctionally anti-intellectual family]]. She managed to make it out but is [[TheChainOfHarm over-correcting with her own offspring]].
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** Damian, a former classmate of Alice's back in high school, resents her for having better grades than him. He notices her son Bryan having a hard time because of her pressure and acts like a [[CorruptTheCutie supportive father figure to sway him to his side]] and spite Alice.
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** Damian, a former classmate of Alice's back in high school, resents her for having better grades than him. He notices her son Bryan having a hard time because of her pressure and acts like a [[CorruptTheCutie supportive father figure to sway him to his side]] side and spite Alice.
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** Damian held a grudge against Alice for having better grades than him. He notices her son Bryan having a hard time because of her pressure and acts like a supportive father figure to sway him to his side and spite Alice.
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** Damian held Damian, a grudge against Alice former classmate of Alice's back in high school, resents her for having better grades than him. He notices her son Bryan having a hard time because of her pressure and acts like a [[CorruptTheCutie supportive father figure to sway him to his side side]] and spite Alice.
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* '''Exploited''': Alice's business partner, David, kills her and frames Bryan, claiming that she abused him until he snapped.
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** Alice's business partner, David, kills her and frames Bryan, claiming that she abused him until hesnapped.snapped.
** Damian held a grudge against Alice for having better grades than him. He notices her son Bryan having a hard time because of her pressure and acts like a supportive father figure to sway him to his side and spite Alice.
** Alice's business partner, David, kills her and frames Bryan, claiming that she abused him until he
** Damian held a grudge against Alice for having better grades than him. He notices her son Bryan having a hard time because of her pressure and acts like a supportive father figure to sway him to his side and spite Alice.
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** Bryan joins a new crowd and snaps- into an ExtravertedNerd.
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* '''Enforced''': "We've got our FiveManBand for this shonen series all squared away. We just need this one character to have some limiting factor that would prevent him from going on missions ... wait, I've got it. Let's make it to where his mother is one of those pushy school types."
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* '''Enforced''': "We've got our FiveManBand team for this shonen series all squared away. We just need this one character to have some limiting factor that would prevent him one of the heroes from going on missions ...missions... wait, I've got it. Let's make it to where his mother is one of those pushy school types. I'm sure the audience would find the show more relatable."
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** Bryan joins a new crowd and snaps- into an ExtravertedNerd
** Bryan has large welts and cuts all over him, and tends to rub a specific one whenever he's asked a question in school. His weight also fluctuates regularly, and the teachers know when he's having trouble Focusing is when he's skinny.
** Bryan has large welts and cuts all over him, and tends to rub a specific one whenever he's asked a question in school. His weight also fluctuates regularly, and the teachers know when he's having trouble Focusing is when he's skinny.
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** Bryan joins a new crowd and snaps- into an ExtravertedNerd
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** Bryan has large welts and cuts all over him, and tends to rub a specific one whenever he's asked a question in school. His weight also fluctuates regularly, and the teachers know when he's having troubleFocusing focusing is when he's skinny.
** Bryan has large welts and cuts all over him, and tends to rub a specific one whenever he's asked a question in school. His weight also fluctuates regularly, and the teachers know when he's having trouble
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* '''Exploited''': ???Alice's business partner, David, kills her and frames Bryan, claiming that she abused him until he snapped.
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** Bryan's teacher Carol offers to give Bryan a passing grade on any test if he sleeps with her.
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** Alice's efforts do help Bryan become a success, but after focusing so much on hard work for so long, he becomes a MarriedToTheJob {{Workaholic}} who never gives her [[IWantGrandkids grandkids]].
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** Alice's efforts do help Bryan become a success, but after focusing so much on hard work for so long, he becomes a MarriedToTheJob {{Workaholic}} who never gives her [[IWantGrandkids grandkids]].grandkids]] and spends time with her.
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** Bryan starts cheating his way through school to ease off Alice's pressure. When the school caught him, he was expelled and banned from going to other schools, destroying all of Alice's hopes for a better future for him.
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** Alice flunked school when she was Bob's age and it ruined her life. Now she desperately wants to make sure he doesn't repeat her mistakes.
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** Alice flunked school when she was Bob's Bryan's age and it ruined her life. Now she desperately wants to make sure he doesn't repeat her mistakes.
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** Alice flunked school when she was Bob's age and it ruined her life. Now she desperately wants to make sure he doesn't repeat her mistakes.
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** Bryan does his best to graduate high school and college at the top 0f his grade so that Alice will stop nagging him, then he will promptly stop talking to her once he is done with his education.
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** Bryan does his best to graduate high school and college at the top 0f of his grade so that Alice will stop nagging him, then he will promptly stop talking to her once he is done with his education.
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** Bryan graduates at the top of his class through high school, college, university, even through his doctorate. It's when it's time to put his education to use that Alice discovers her son has absolutely no idea how to function outside of school, making him unemployable and permanently dependent on her.
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** Bryan joins a new crowd and snaps- into an ExtrovertedNerd
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** Bryan does his best to graduate high school and college at the top if his grade so Alice will stop nagging him, then promptly stop talking to her once he is done with his education.
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** Bryan does his best to graduate high school and college at the top if 0f his grade so that Alice will stop nagging him, then he will promptly stop talking to her once he is done with his education.
