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* '''Parodied''': Bob steals Alan's pencil, which causes Claire to go on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Bob steals Alan's pencil, which causes Claire to go on aRoaringRampageOfRevenge.RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
** Claire spills her milk, which causes her to lose all hope.
** Bob steals Alan's pencil, which causes Claire to go on a
** Claire spills her milk, which causes her to lose all hope.
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* '''Played For Horror''': Alan served as Claire's MoralityChain, constantly stepping in to keep her worst impulses in check and prevent her from doing something rash. Bob ends up realizing too late that Alan was the one thing keeping Claire from butchering people, and in her despair-fueled rage, she [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown brutally maims Bob, almost killing him]], all while she alternates between CryLaughing and a DeathWail. All her teammates can do is watch, horrified at what's transpiring and unsure if they should intervene.
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* '''Played For Horror''': Alan served as Claire's MoralityChain, constantly stepping in to keep her worst impulses in check and prevent her from doing something rash. Bob ends up realizing too late that Alan was the one thing keeping Claire from butchering people, and in her despair-fueled rage, she [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown brutally maims Bob, almost killing him]], him]] (or even actually doing him in and PummelingTheCorpse right after), all while she alternates between CryLaughing and a DeathWail. All her teammates can do is watch, horrified at what's transpiring and unsure if they should intervene.
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* '''Played For Horror''': Alan served as Claire's MoralityChain, constantly stepping in to keep her worst impulses in check and prevent her from doing something rash. Bob ends up realizing too late that Alan was the one thing keeping Claire from butchering people, and in her despair-fueled rage, she [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown brutally maims Bob, almost killing him]], all while she alternates between CryLaughing and a DeathWail. All her teammates can do is watch, horrified at what's transpiring and unsure if they should intervene.
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** All of Claire's friends and family die, on the same day she loses her house and her ability to walk. She'll never be able to dance again.
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** All of Claire's friends and family die, on the same day she loses her house and her ability to walk. She'll never be able to dance again.She becomes morbidly depressed.
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* '''Enforced''': CreatorBreakdown.
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* '''Enforced''': CreatorBreakdown.'''Enforced''':
** CreatorBreakdown.
** RuleOfDrama.
** TrueArtIsAngsty.
** CreatorBreakdown.
** RuleOfDrama.
** TrueArtIsAngsty.
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fixed typo. yeah, i'm that kind of person.
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* '''Parodied''': Bob steals Alan's pencil, which causes Claire to go RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
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* '''Parodied''': Bob steals Alan's pencil, which causes Claire to go on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
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** Break the cutie
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** Break the cutieBreakTheCutie
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* '''Justified''': Fate has dealt Claire a losing hand. It's natural to feel that things will never get better.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Fate has dealt Claire a losing hand. It's natural to feel that things will never getbetter.better.
** Claire found out that the cause (religious, political or otherwise) that she dedicated her entire life to was built on lies.
** Claire was already having a hard time. Alan's death was just the last straw that broke the camel's back.
** Fate has dealt Claire a losing hand. It's natural to feel that things will never get
** Claire found out that the cause (religious, political or otherwise) that she dedicated her entire life to was built on lies.
** Claire was already having a hard time. Alan's death was just the last straw that broke the camel's back.
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* '''Implied''':
** Claire is shown to go through a traumatic experience, and even after a six-month TimeSkip she's still not feeling any better.
** Claire goes through a traumatic event, and despite not seeming like she's not healing, her browsing history shows she's suffering from suicidal thoughts.
** Claire is shown to go through a traumatic experience, and even after a six-month TimeSkip she's still not feeling any better.
** Claire goes through a traumatic event, and despite not seeming like she's not healing, her browsing history shows she's suffering from suicidal thoughts.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Claire completely gives up on life and abandons all hope as a result of a long TraumaCongaLine, and from there, she will either [[DrivenToSuicide commit suicide]], [[GoMadFromTheIsolation alienate herself and go insane]], or has a FaceHeelTurn and crosses the MoralEventHorizon.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Claire completely gives up on life and abandons all hope as a result of a long TraumaCongaLine, and from there, she will either [[DrivenToSuicide commit suicide]], [[GoMadFromTheIsolation alienate herself and go insane]], or has a FaceHeelTurn and crosses the MoralEventHorizon.MoralEventHorizon and commits RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
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* '''Discussed''': "Ever since Alice got killed, Claire's not done anything but sit there, and she barely eats!"
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* '''Discussed''': "Ever since Alice Alan got killed, his sister Claire's not done anything but sit there, and she barely eats!"
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** After murdering Bob as a cold-blooded revenge, [[VengeanceFeelsEmpty Claire has become a former shell of herself]].
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** After murdering Bob as a cold-blooded revenge, [[VengeanceFeelsEmpty Claire has become a former shell of herself]].her former self]].
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* '''Straight''': Bob kills Alice, which causes her sister Claire to lose all hope.
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* '''Straight''': Bob kills Alice, Alan, which causes her his sister Claire to lose all hope.
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** The death of Alice motivates Claire to live life to the fullest.
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** The death of Alice Alan motivates Claire to live life to the fullest.
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* '''Subverted''': DarkestHour - Claire starts to lose all hope after Bob kills Alice, but gets better.
* '''Double Subverted''': ...except [[StepfordSmiler it was all an act]], and she really has crossed the DespairEventHorizon.
* '''Parodied''': Bob steals Alice's pencil, which causes Claire to make a FaceHeelTurn and become an OmnicidalManiac.
* '''Double Subverted''': ...except [[StepfordSmiler it was all an act]], and she really has crossed the DespairEventHorizon.
* '''Parodied''': Bob steals Alice's pencil, which causes Claire to make a FaceHeelTurn and become an OmnicidalManiac.
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** DarkestHour - Claire starts to lose all hope after Bob killsAlice, Alan, but gets better.
** Claire gets on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge and murders Bob for avenging her brother.
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** ...except [[StepfordSmiler it was all an act]], and she really has crossed the DespairEventHorizon.
** After murdering Bob as a cold-blooded revenge, [[VengeanceFeelsEmpty Claire has become a former shell of herself]].
* '''Parodied''': Bob stealsAlice's Alan's pencil, which causes Claire to make a FaceHeelTurn and become an OmnicidalManiac.go RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
** DarkestHour - Claire starts to lose all hope after Bob kills
** Claire gets on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge and murders Bob for avenging her brother.
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** ...except [[StepfordSmiler it was all an act]], and she really has crossed the DespairEventHorizon.
** After murdering Bob as a cold-blooded revenge, [[VengeanceFeelsEmpty Claire has become a former shell of herself]].
* '''Parodied''': Bob steals
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* '''Downplayed''': HeroicBSOD
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* '''Downplayed''': HeroicBSOD'''Downplayed''':
** HeroicBSOD
** Claire becomes a KnightInSourArmor.
** HeroicBSOD
** Claire becomes a KnightInSourArmor.
