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--->[[BoisterousBruiser Pi]][[TrueCompanions ke]]: [[ThisIsGonnaSuck Ah shit]]. INeedAFreakingDrink after this, wanna come with me Dirk?\\
Dirk: Sure.
Dirk: Sure.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The heroes live [[CrapsackWorld in a place]] where using some poor beast as a cover for an escape is common and so have rigged a balista with trusted friends or mercenaries to kill the dragon when it inevitably shows up. The revelations shock them to the core but the dragon dies with barely a whimper due to proper planning.
* '''Reconstructed''': General Jade knows about the ballista and sends a DualBoss dragon to attack that team before they can fire it.
* '''Reconstructed''': General Jade knows about the ballista and sends a DualBoss dragon to attack that team before they can fire it.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The heroes live [[CrapsackWorld in a place]] where using some poor beast as a cover for an escape is common and so have rigged a balista ballista with trusted friends or mercenaries to kill the dragon when it inevitably shows up. The revelations shock them to the core but the dragon dies with barely a whimper due to proper planning.
* '''Reconstructed''': General Jade knows about the ballista and sends a DualBoss dragon to attack that team before they can fire it. However, both are killed by [[TheBrute Claidheamh]], who was hired by Emperor Evulz to take down ''every'' person after the Flare Prism, who promptly challenges the gang to a fight.
* '''Reconstructed''': General Jade knows about the ballista and sends a DualBoss dragon to attack that team before they can fire it. However, both are killed by [[TheBrute Claidheamh]], who was hired by Emperor Evulz to take down ''every'' person after the Flare Prism, who promptly challenges the gang to a fight.
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--->[[BoisterousBruiser Pi]][[TrueCompanions ke]]: [[ThisIsGonnaSuck Ah shit]]. INeedAFreakingDrink after this, wanna come with me Dirk?\\
Dirk: Sure.
Dirk: Sure.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheHero Dirk]] and [[PlayerParty his friends]] just retrieved the last [[MineralMacGuffin Flare Prism]], which they've been told hold the key to defeating Emperor Evulz... but surprise! [[TheDragon General Drake]] was just using them as his personal MacGuffinDeliveryService! He overpowers [[SquishyWizard Velvet]] when she tries to stop him, and takes off with her and the Flare Prisms, leaving behind one of his pet dragons to finish the heroes off. Cue BossBattle.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheHero Dirk]] and [[PlayerParty his friends]] just retrieved the last [[MineralMacGuffin Flare Prism]], which they've been told hold the key to defeating Emperor Evulz... but surprise! [[TheDragon General Drake]] Jade]] was just using them as his personal MacGuffinDeliveryService! He overpowers [[SquishyWizard Velvet]] when she tries to stop him, and takes off with her and the Flare Prisms, leaving behind one of his pet dragons to finish the heroes off. Cue BossBattle.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheHero Dirk]] and [[PlayerParty his friends]] just retrieved the last [[MineralMacGuffin Flare Prism]], which they've been told hold the key to defeating Emperor Evulz... but surprise! [[TheDragon General Jade]] was just using them as his personal MacGuffinDeliveryService! He overpowers [[SquishyWizard Velvet]] when she tries to stop him, and takes off with her and the Flare Prisms, leaving behind one of his pet dragons to finish the heroes off. Cue BossBattle.
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* '''Straight''': [[TheHero Dirk]] and [[PlayerParty his friends]] just retrieved the last [[MineralMacGuffin Flare Prism]], which they've been told hold the key to defeating Emperor Evulz... but surprise! [[TheDragon General Jade]] Drake]] was just using them as his personal MacGuffinDeliveryService! He overpowers [[SquishyWizard Velvet]] when she tries to stop him, and takes off with her and the Flare Prisms, leaving behind one of his pet dragons to finish the heroes off. Cue BossBattle.
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** "We have to make that PlayerPunch from earlier count, but having the BigBad FinalBoss himself be responsible for it wouldn't work; lets [[ItsPersonalWithTheDragon make it personal with the Dragon]]."
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** "We have to make that PlayerPunch from earlier count, but having the BigBad FinalBoss himself be responsible for it wouldn't work; lets let's [[ItsPersonalWithTheDragon make it personal with the Dragon]]."
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** "We have to make that GutPunch from earlier count, but having the BigBad FinalBoss himself be responsible for it wouldn't work; lets [[ItsPersonalWithTheDragon make it personal with the Dragon]]."
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** "We have to make that GutPunch PlayerPunch from earlier count, but having the BigBad FinalBoss himself be responsible for it wouldn't work; lets [[ItsPersonalWithTheDragon make it personal with the Dragon]]."
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* '''Enforced''': "That was a long cutscene. The players are probably itching for a fight".
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** "That was a long cutscene. The players are probably itching for afight".fight".
** "We have to make that GutPunch from earlier count, but having the BigBad FinalBoss himself be responsible for it wouldn't work; lets [[ItsPersonalWithTheDragon make it personal with the Dragon]]."
** "That was a long cutscene. The players are probably itching for a
** "We have to make that GutPunch from earlier count, but having the BigBad FinalBoss himself be responsible for it wouldn't work; lets [[ItsPersonalWithTheDragon make it personal with the Dragon]]."
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* '''Downplayed''': General Jade just swipes the Flare Prisms and leaves the dragon behind without making any plot reveals.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** General Jade just swipes the Flare Prisms and leaves the dragon behind without making any plotreveals.reveals.
** General Jade was merely a [[ThresholdGuardians Threshold Guardian]] [[BrokenBridge that held off Dirk and company from the Flare Prism]] for a large chunk of the first act.
** General Jade just swipes the Flare Prisms and leaves the dragon behind without making any plot
** General Jade was merely a [[ThresholdGuardians Threshold Guardian]] [[BrokenBridge that held off Dirk and company from the Flare Prism]] for a large chunk of the first act.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???General Jade just swipes the Flare Prisms and leaves the dragon behind without making any plot reveals.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The heroes live [[CrapsackWorld in a place]] where using some poor beast as a cover for an escape is common and so have rigged a balista with trusted friends or mercenaries to kill the dragon when it inevitably shows up. The revelations shock them to the core but the dragon dies with barely a whimper due to proper planning.
* '''Reconstructed''': General Jade knows about the ballista and sends a DualBoss dragon to attack that team before they can fire it.
* '''Reconstructed''': General Jade knows about the ballista and sends a DualBoss dragon to attack that team before they can fire it.
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* '''Enforced''': "That was a long cutscene. The players are probably itching for a fight."
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* '''Enforced''': "That was a long cutscene. The players are probably itching for a fight."fight".
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* '''Conversed''': "You see, the problem with climax bosses is that you have to rewatch the cutscene every time you die."
* '''Played For Laughs:''' Jade's speech revealing everything is interrupted by a GiantSpaceFleaFromNowhere crashing onto the scene. It immediately attacks the heroes; Jade is clearly surprised, but decides to just go with it.
* '''Played For Drama:''' Jade revels in the grief and chaos of his revelations and then drops the [[DramaBomb Drama Bomb of changing Velvet, the Big Bad's daughter into her primal form: the]] [[BossBattle dragon!]] Blitz, who was secretly in love with her, refuses to fight and is [[RedemptionEqualsDeath killed shielding the others.]]
* '''Played For Laughs:''' Jade's speech revealing everything is interrupted by a GiantSpaceFleaFromNowhere crashing onto the scene. It immediately attacks the heroes; Jade is clearly surprised, but decides to just go with it.
* '''Played For Drama:''' Jade revels in the grief and chaos of his revelations and then drops the [[DramaBomb Drama Bomb of changing Velvet, the Big Bad's daughter into her primal form: the]] [[BossBattle dragon!]] Blitz, who was secretly in love with her, refuses to fight and is [[RedemptionEqualsDeath killed shielding the others.]]
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* '''Conversed''': "You see, the problem with climax bosses is that you have to rewatch the cutscene every time you die."
die".
* '''Deconstructed''': The heroes live [[CrapsackWorld in a place]] where using some poor beast as a cover for an escape is common and so have rigged a balista with trusted friends or mercenaries to kill the dragon when it inevitably shows up. The revelations shock them to the core but the dragon dies with barely a whimper due to proper planning.
* '''Reconstructed''': General Jade knows about the ballista and sends a DualBoss dragon to attack that team before they can fire it.
* '''Played ForLaughs:''' Laughs''': Jade's speech revealing everything is interrupted by a GiantSpaceFleaFromNowhere crashing onto the scene. It immediately attacks the heroes; Jade is clearly surprised, but decides to just go with it.
* '''Played ForDrama:''' Drama''': Jade revels in the grief and chaos of his revelations and then drops the [[DramaBomb Drama Bomb of changing Velvet, the Big Bad's daughter into her primal form: the]] [[BossBattle dragon!]] Blitz, who was secretly in love with her, refuses to fight and is [[RedemptionEqualsDeath killed shielding the others.]]
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* '''Deconstructed''': The heroes live [[CrapsackWorld in a place]] where using some poor beast as a cover for an escape is common and so have rigged a balista with trusted friends or mercenaries to kill the dragon when it inevitably shows up. The revelations shock them to the core but the dragon dies with barely a whimper due to proper planning.
* '''Reconstructed''': General Jade knows about the ballista and sends a DualBoss dragon to attack that team before they can fire it.
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** A boss that comes as a total surprise in the middle of a part of the game where nothing important is happening.
* '''Subverted''': General Jade's pet dragon, despite being huge and fearsome, goes down in 2 hits.
* '''Double Subverted''': ... after which, it reveals its true, death-dealing form!
* '''Parodied''': Jade ''tries'' to give his big DramaBomb speech, but Dirk and his friends keep attacking him and won't let him finish. Finally, he gives up in disgust, summons his dragons so he can escape, and slinks off complaining about his big moment being ruined.
* '''Deconstructed''': The heroes live [[CrapsackWorld in a place]] where using some poor beast as a cover for an escape is common and so have rigged a balista with trusted friends or mercenaries to kill the dragon when it inevitably shows up. The revelations shock them to the core but the dragon dies with barley a whimper due to proper planning.
* '''Subverted''': General Jade's pet dragon, despite being huge and fearsome, goes down in 2 hits.
* '''Double Subverted''': ... after which, it reveals its true, death-dealing form!
* '''Parodied''': Jade ''tries'' to give his big DramaBomb speech, but Dirk and his friends keep attacking him and won't let him finish. Finally, he gives up in disgust, summons his dragons so he can escape, and slinks off complaining about his big moment being ruined.
* '''Deconstructed''': The heroes live [[CrapsackWorld in a place]] where using some poor beast as a cover for an escape is common and so have rigged a balista with trusted friends or mercenaries to kill the dragon when it inevitably shows up. The revelations shock them to the core but the dragon dies with barley a whimper due to proper planning.
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** [[GiantSpaceFleaFromNowhere A boss that comes as a total surprise in the middle of a part of the game where nothing important is happening.
happening.]]
* '''Subverted''': [[ZeroEffortBoss General Jade's pet dragon, despite being huge and fearsome, goes down in 2hits.
hits.]]
* '''DoubleSubverted''': ... Subverted''': [[TurnsRed ... after which, it reveals its true, death-dealing form!
form!]]
* '''Parodied''': Jade ''tries'' to give his big DramaBomb speech, [[ShutUpHannibal but Dirk and his friends keep attacking him and won't let himfinish.finish]]. Finally, he gives up in disgust, summons his dragons so he can escape, and slinks off complaining about his big moment being ruined.
* '''Deconstructed''': The heroes live [[CrapsackWorld in a place]] where using some poor beast as a cover for an escape is common and so have rigged a balista with trusted friends or mercenaries to kill the dragon when it inevitably shows up. The revelations shock them to the core but the dragon dies withbarley barely a whimper due to proper planning.
* '''Subverted''': [[ZeroEffortBoss General Jade's pet dragon, despite being huge and fearsome, goes down in 2
* '''Double
* '''Parodied''': Jade ''tries'' to give his big DramaBomb speech, [[ShutUpHannibal but Dirk and his friends keep attacking him and won't let him
* '''Deconstructed''': The heroes live [[CrapsackWorld in a place]] where using some poor beast as a cover for an escape is common and so have rigged a balista with trusted friends or mercenaries to kill the dragon when it inevitably shows up. The revelations shock them to the core but the dragon dies with
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
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* '''Invoked''': The heroes taunt General Jade into leaving behind her pet dragon so they can cut down her forces before she retreats.
* '''Defied''': The heroes attack General Jade before she can reveal anything
* '''Defied''': The heroes attack General Jade before she can reveal anything
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* '''Invoked''': The heroes taunt General Jade into leaving behind her his pet dragon so they can cut down her his forces before she he retreats.
* '''Defied''': The heroes attack General Jade beforeshe he can reveal anything
* '''Defied''': The heroes attack General Jade before
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* '''Played For Drama:''' Jade revels in the grief and chaos of her revelations and then drops the [[DramaBomb Drama Bomb of changing Velvet, the Big Bad's daughter into her primal form: the]] [[BossBattle dragon!]] Blitz, who was secretly in love with her, refuses to fight and is [[RedemptionEqualsDeath killed shielding the others.]]
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* '''Played For Drama:''' Jade revels in the grief and chaos of her his revelations and then drops the [[DramaBomb Drama Bomb of changing Velvet, the Big Bad's daughter into her primal form: the]] [[BossBattle dragon!]] Blitz, who was secretly in love with her, refuses to fight and is [[RedemptionEqualsDeath killed shielding the others.]]
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* '''Justified''': General Jade herself turns out to be the major boss battle.
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* '''Justified''': General Jade herself himself turns out to be the major boss battle.
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* '''Defied''': The hero's attack General Jade before she can reveal anything
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* '''Defied''': The hero's heroes attack General Jade before she can reveal anything
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* '''Lampshaded''': Jade says offhandedly that, now that Dirk & Co. are off guard due to such a dramatic revelation, its the perfect time to call forth his dragons.
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* '''Lampshaded''': Jade says offhandedly that, now that Dirk & Co. are off guard due to such a dramatic revelation, its the perfect time to call forth his dragons.pet dragon.
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* '''Lampshaded''': ???
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* '''Lampshaded''': ???Jade says offhandedly that, now that Dirk & Co. are off guard due to such a dramatic revelation, its the perfect time to call forth his dragons.
