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** Joe shows up in a few episodes as the hero's friend's roommate. Turns out he's been working for the BigBad all along.
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** Joe shows up in a few episodes as the hero's friend's roommate. Turns out he's been [[TheMole working for for]] the BigBad all along.
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** Beth is an pilot-certified, chemistry major who counterfeits money and engages in con games in her spare time. She owns an antique sword and has the C.E.O. of Heroic Industries as an uncle. Everything in the story is solved by her many coincidental talents and possessions
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** Beth is an pilot-certified, a pilot-certified chemistry major who counterfeits money and engages in con games in her spare time. She owns an antique sword and has the C.E.O. of Heroic Industries as an uncle. Everything in the story is solved by her many coincidental talents and possessionspossessions.
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** A character seen many times in the background, never named and never mentioned turns out to be the TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVillain.
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** A character seen many times in the background, but never named and never mentioned mentioned, turns out to be the TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVillain.
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** Beth is the hero's personal pilot, she was taking the test in order to prevent having her license revoked for flying the hero's jet without the right certification.
** Joe's villainy began when he saw the hero at one of his roommate's parties and became deeply envious of his charm and powers, despite not knowing him personally.
** Joe's villainy began when he saw the hero at one of his roommate's parties and became deeply envious of his charm and powers, despite not knowing him personally.
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** Beth is the hero's personal pilot, pilot- she was taking the test in order to prevent having her license revoked for flying the hero's jet without the right certification.
** Joe's villainy began when he saw the hero at one of his roommate's parties and became deeply envious ofhis their charm and powers, despite not knowing him them personally.
** Joe's villainy began when he saw the hero at one of his roommate's parties and became deeply envious of
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** DecoyProtagonist
** DiscOneFinalBoss
** DiscOneFinalBoss
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** DecoyProtagonist
DecoyProtagonist.
**DiscOneFinalBossDiscOneFinalBoss.
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** The hero finds notes around his friend's apartment, in the roommate's handwriting, which allude to villainy, but it turns out that this was planted by the villain, and Joe really is unimportant.
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** The hero finds notes around his friend's apartment, in the roommate's handwriting, which allude to villainy, but it turns out that this was planted by the villain, BigBad, and Joe really is unimportant.
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** The hero meets Beth and keeps her in mind, the villain escapes in a submarine, but Beth knows enough to pilot a military jet armed with depth charges.
** At least, that's what Joe wants the hero to think...
* '''Parodied''': Beth talks about her ability to light on fire any person with a name starting with a vowel. The villain's plane burst into flames the moment she is reminded his middle name is "Owen"
* '''Zig Zagged''': Beth mentions early on in the story that she's learning to fly, but when the hero asks her to pilot an airplane in pursuit, she explains that she's only licensed for helicopters. However, she does have a friend visiting from Brazil who's qualified to fly the plane, and since Beth happens to be fluent in Portuguese, she is able to translate for the hero. Later on, at the villain's base, it turns out that the villain is in possession of a number of heavily armed military-grade helicopters, but Beth discovers that the villain designed and manufactured the helicopters himself, deliberately making the controls so that anyone not trained specifically for his model of helicopter would be unable to fly it. However, given her previous experience with helicopters, she comes up with a method that would disable the helicopters without being immediately apparent that they'd been sabotaged, so that when the villain finally discovers that his helicopters no longer work, it will be too late to fix things.
** At least, that's what Joe wants the hero to think...
* '''Parodied''': Beth talks about her ability to light on fire any person with a name starting with a vowel. The villain's plane burst into flames the moment she is reminded his middle name is "Owen"
* '''Zig Zagged''': Beth mentions early on in the story that she's learning to fly, but when the hero asks her to pilot an airplane in pursuit, she explains that she's only licensed for helicopters. However, she does have a friend visiting from Brazil who's qualified to fly the plane, and since Beth happens to be fluent in Portuguese, she is able to translate for the hero. Later on, at the villain's base, it turns out that the villain is in possession of a number of heavily armed military-grade helicopters, but Beth discovers that the villain designed and manufactured the helicopters himself, deliberately making the controls so that anyone not trained specifically for his model of helicopter would be unable to fly it. However, given her previous experience with helicopters, she comes up with a method that would disable the helicopters without being immediately apparent that they'd been sabotaged, so that when the villain finally discovers that his helicopters no longer work, it will be too late to fix things.
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** The hero meets Beth and keeps her in mind, the villain escapes in a submarine, but Beth knows enough to pilot a military jet armed with depth charges.
** At least, that's what Joe wants the hero tothink...
think... because he’s actually an {{undercover cop|reveal}} pursuing the BigBad.
* '''Parodied''': Beth talks about her ability to light on fire any person with a name starting with a vowel. The villain's planeburst bursts into flames the moment she is reminded his their middle name is "Owen"
"Owen".
* '''Zig Zagged''': Beth mentions early on in the story that she's learning to fly, but when the hero asks her to pilot an airplane in pursuit, she explains that she's only licensed for helicopters. However, she does have a friend visiting from Brazil who's qualified to fly the plane, and since Beth happens to be fluent in Portuguese, she is able to translate for the hero. Later on, at the villain's base, it turns out that the villain is in possession of a number of heavily armed military-grade helicopters, but Beth discovers that the villain personally designed and manufactured thehelicopters himself, helicopters, [[GenreSavvy deliberately making the controls so that anyone not trained specifically for his their model of helicopter would be unable to fly it. it]]. However, given her previous experience with helicopters, she comes up with a method that would disable the helicopters without being immediately apparent that they'd been sabotaged, so that when the villain finally discovers that his their helicopters no longer work, it will be too late to fix things.
** At least, that's what Joe wants the hero to
* '''Parodied''': Beth talks about her ability to light on fire any person with a name starting with a vowel. The villain's plane
* '''Zig Zagged''': Beth mentions early on in the story that she's learning to fly, but when the hero asks her to pilot an airplane in pursuit, she explains that she's only licensed for helicopters. However, she does have a friend visiting from Brazil who's qualified to fly the plane, and since Beth happens to be fluent in Portuguese, she is able to translate for the hero. Later on, at the villain's base, it turns out that the villain is in possession of a number of heavily armed military-grade helicopters, but Beth discovers that the villain personally designed and manufactured the
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* '''Lampshaded''': The villain has retreated to his airship hideout; "Hey, didn't we just meet a pilot a few days ago? What a coincidence!"
* '''Invoked''': Beth, working with the villain, makes sure to "accidentally" meet the hero a few days before the villain escapes by plane, so that she can trap the hero when he goes to her for help.
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Defied''': The hero remembers that Beth mentioned her small-jet certification, but decides not to ask her to pilot a plane in pursuit--he is unsure whether Beth can be trusted, or he is simply unwilling to put a civilian in danger by involving them in his struggle.
* '''Invoked''': Beth, working with the villain, makes sure to "accidentally" meet the hero a few days before the villain escapes by plane, so that she can trap the hero when he goes to her for help.
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Defied''': The hero remembers that Beth mentioned her small-jet certification, but decides not to ask her to pilot a plane in pursuit--he is unsure whether Beth can be trusted, or he is simply unwilling to put a civilian in danger by involving them in his struggle.
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* '''Lampshaded''': The villain has retreated to his their airship hideout; hideout: "Hey, didn't we just meet a pilot a few days ago? What a coincidence!"
* '''Invoked''': Beth, [[TheMole working with thevillain, villain]], makes sure to "accidentally" meet the hero a few days before the villain escapes by plane, so that she can trap the hero when he goes to her for help.
* '''Exploited''':???
The villain tries to make sure the hero forgets about Beth in any way possible.
* '''Defied''': The hero remembers that Beth mentioned her small-jet certification, but decides not to ask her to pilot a plane in pursuit--he is unsure whether Beth can be trusted,or and/or he is simply unwilling to put a civilian in danger by involving them in his struggle.
* '''Invoked''': Beth, [[TheMole working with the
* '''Exploited''':
* '''Defied''': The hero remembers that Beth mentioned her small-jet certification, but decides not to ask her to pilot a plane in pursuit--he is unsure whether Beth can be trusted,
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* '''Reconstructed''': Beth may not be a good pilot, but she can get her instructor to fly them both.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Beth may not be a good pilot, but she can get her instructor to fly themboth.both.
** Thankfully, Joe reveals he was actually an {{undercover cop|reveal}} who was able to capture the villain with the help of Bob, who learns to trust people again.
** Beth may not be a good pilot, but she can get her instructor to fly them
** Thankfully, Joe reveals he was actually an {{undercover cop|reveal}} who was able to capture the villain with the help of Bob, who learns to trust people again.
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** Even more Exaggerated: A character seen many times in the background, never named and never mentioned turns out o be the TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVillain
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** Even more Exaggerated: A character seen many times in the background, never named and never mentioned turns out o to be the TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVillainGreaterScopeVillain.
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that seen many times on background, never named and never metioned turns out TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVillain
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that A character seen many times on in the background, never named and never metioned mentioned turns out o be the TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVillain
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** [[ChekhovsArmy Chekhov's Army]].
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** [[ChekhovsArmy Chekhov's Army]].ChekhovsArmy.
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that seen many times on background, never named and metioned turns out TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVillain
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that seen many times on background, never named and never metioned turns out TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVillain
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that seen many times on background,never named and metioned turns out TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVillain
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that seen many times on background,never background, never named and metioned turns out TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVillain
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that seen many times on background and never named turns out TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVilian
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that seen many times on background and never background,never named and metioned turns out TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVilianGreaterScopeVillain
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that seen many times on background and never named turns out TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVillian
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that seen many times on background and never named turns out TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVillianGreaterScopeVilian
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that seen many times on background and never named turs out [TheManBehindTheMan]
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that seen many times on background and never named turs turns out [TheManBehindTheMan]TheManBehindTheMan or GreaterScopeVillian
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that seen many times on background and never named turs out [[TheManBehindTheMan The Man Behind The Man
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that seen many times on background and never named turs out [[TheManBehindTheMan The Man Behind The Man
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** Even more Exaggerated: Charcter that seen many times on background and never named turs out [[TheManBehindTheMan The Man Behind The Man
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** Our hero meets Beth, who makes small talk about taking her small-jet pilot certification. When the villain escapes at the airfield in his jet, our hero flags her down on the runway and they follow the villain.
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** Our hero meets Beth, who makes small talk about taking her small-jet pilot certification. When the villain escapes at the airfield in his jet, our hero [[AlwaysKnowAPilot flags her down on the runway and they follow the villain.villain]].
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???'''Downplayed''':
** Joe helps with the hero's SecretIdentity and/or agrees to handle their [[PlotDevice plot devices]] and AppliedPhlebotinum while they're off adventuring. It turns out he's a spy working for the BigBad and is [[TheMole telling him about the hero's progress behind their back]].
** Beth is a known friend of the hero's who can sell the hero some {{Unobtainium}} or [[OneManArmy just enough weapons to take down an entire enemy base]] when they need it most.
** Joe helps with the hero's SecretIdentity and/or agrees to handle their [[PlotDevice plot devices]] and AppliedPhlebotinum while they're off adventuring. It turns out he's a spy working for the BigBad and is [[TheMole telling him about the hero's progress behind their back]].
** Beth is a known friend of the hero's who can sell the hero some {{Unobtainium}} or [[OneManArmy just enough weapons to take down an entire enemy base]] when they need it most.
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** Beth is an pilot-certified, chemistry major who counterfeits money and engages in con games in her spare time. She owns an antique sword and has the C.E.O. of Heroic Industries as an uncle. Everything in the story is solved by her many coincidental talents and possessions
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** Beth is an pilot-certified, chemistry major who counterfeits money and engages in con games in her spare time. She owns an antique sword and has the C.E.O. of Heroic Industries as an uncle. Everything in the story is solved by her many coincidental talents and possessions possessions
* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''':
** Because no one expected to need a pilot, Beth wasn't brought along on the mission.
** After realizing that someone as unimportant-seeming as Joe had turned out to be such a formidable enemy, Bob becomes paranoid and suspicious around everyone whom he doesn't know well.
* '''Reconstructed''': Beth may not be a good pilot, but she can get her instructor to fly them both.
** Because no one expected to need a pilot, Beth wasn't brought along on the mission.
** After realizing that someone as unimportant-seeming as Joe had turned out to be such a formidable enemy, Bob becomes paranoid and suspicious around everyone whom he doesn't know well.
* '''Reconstructed''': Beth may not be a good pilot, but she can get her instructor to fly them both.
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* '''Averted''': Beth's usefulness as a pilot is a major part of the plot from the beginning, as the villain's plan involves a military prototype jet.
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* '''Averted''': Beth's usefulness as a pilot is a major part of the plot from the beginning, as the villain's plan involves a military prototype jet.
* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Discussed''': "When you're dealing with a guy who has an airship, it's smart to keep around someone who knows how to fly."
* '''Conversed''': "I'll bet Beth's piloting skills come in handy later."
* '''Conversed''': "I'll bet Beth's piloting skills come in handy later."
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* '''Discussed''': "When you're dealing with a guy who has an airship, it's smart to keep around someone who knows how to fly."
fly".
* '''Conversed''': "I'll bet Beth's piloting skills come in handylater."later".
* '''Deconstructed''':
** Because no one expected to need a pilot, Beth wasn't brought along on the mission.
** After realizing that someone as unimportant-seeming as Joe had turned out to be such a formidable enemy, Bob becomes paranoid and suspicious around everyone whom he doesn't know well.
* '''Reconstructed''': Beth may not be a good pilot, but she can get her instructor to fly them both.
* '''Conversed''': "I'll bet Beth's piloting skills come in handy
* '''Deconstructed''':
** Because no one expected to need a pilot, Beth wasn't brought along on the mission.
** After realizing that someone as unimportant-seeming as Joe had turned out to be such a formidable enemy, Bob becomes paranoid and suspicious around everyone whom he doesn't know well.
* '''Reconstructed''': Beth may not be a good pilot, but she can get her instructor to fly them both.
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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* '''Straight''': Our hero meets Beth, who makes small talk about taking her small-jet pilot certification. When the villain escapes at the airfield in his jet, our hero flags her down on the runway and they follow the villain.
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* '''Straight''': '''Straight''':
** Our hero meets Beth, who makes small talk about taking her small-jet pilot certification. When the villain escapes at the airfield in his jet, our hero flags her down on the runway and they follow the villain.
** Our hero meets Beth, who makes small talk about taking her small-jet pilot certification. When the villain escapes at the airfield in his jet, our hero flags her down on the runway and they follow the villain.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Beth is an pilot-certified, chemistry major who counterfeits money and engages in con games in her spare time. She owns an antique sword and has the C.E.O. of Heroic Industries as an uncle. Everything in the story is solved by her many coincidental talents and possessions
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Beth is an pilot-certified, chemistry major who counterfeits money and engages in con games in her spare time. She owns an antique sword and has the C.E.O. of Heroic Industries as an uncle. Everything in the story is solved by her many coincidental talents and possessions
** Beth is an pilot-certified, chemistry major who counterfeits money and engages in con games in her spare time. She owns an antique sword and has the C.E.O. of Heroic Industries as an uncle. Everything in the story is solved by her many coincidental talents and possessions
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* '''Justified''': Beth is the hero's personal pilot, she was taking the test in order to prevent having her license revoked for flying the hero's jet without the right certification.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Beth is the hero's personal pilot, she was taking the test in order to prevent having her license revoked for flying the hero's jet without the right certification.
** Beth is the hero's personal pilot, she was taking the test in order to prevent having her license revoked for flying the hero's jet without the right certification.
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* '''Inverted''': DecoyProtagonist
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** DecoyProtagonist
** DecoyProtagonist
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* '''Subverted''': The hero meets Beth and keeps her in mind in case he needs a ride. The villain escapes in a submarine.
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** The hero meets Beth and keeps her in mind in case he needs a ride. The villain escapes in a submarine.
** The hero meets Beth and keeps her in mind in case he needs a ride. The villain escapes in a submarine.
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* '''Double Subverted''': The hero meets Beth and keeps her in mind, the villain escapes in a submarine, but Beth knows enough to pilot a military jet armed with depth charges.
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* '''Double Subverted''': Subverted''':
** The hero meets Beth and keeps her in mind, the villain escapes in a submarine, but Beth knows enough to pilot a military jet armed with depth charges.
** The hero meets Beth and keeps her in mind, the villain escapes in a submarine, but Beth knows enough to pilot a military jet armed with depth charges.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Because no one expected to need a pilot, Beth wasn't brought along on the mission.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** Because no one expected to need a pilot, Beth wasn't brought along on the mission.
** Because no one expected to need a pilot, Beth wasn't brought along on the mission.
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* '''Inverted''': Beth isn't introduced until after she takes down the villain's plane.
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* '''Inverted''': DecoyProtagonist
** Beth isn't introduced until after she takes down the villain's plane.
** Beth isn't introduced until after she takes down the villain's plane.
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* Joe shows up in a few episodes as the hero's friend's roommate. Turns out he's been working for the BigBad all along.
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* '''Conversed''': "I'll bet Beth's piloting skills come in handy later."
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* '''Conversed''': "I'll bet Beth's piloting skills come in handy later.""
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