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** Lisa heard that Marcy is a very weak mage, and fails to realize that "weak mage" means can blow a city instead of a planet.
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** Lisa heard that Marcy is a very weak mage, and fails to realize that "weak mage" means can blow up a city instead of a planet.
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** Lisa kept on trying to provoke Mary but always ended up in making herself look weak and pathetic. Marcy can take her off with almost no effort but she was so unimpressed by them that she doesn't bother finding reasons to do so.
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** Lisa kept on trying to provoke Mary Marcy but always ended up in making herself look weak and pathetic. Marcy can take her off with almost no effort but she was so unimpressed by them that she doesn't bother finding reasons to do so.
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** Lisa thinks that Marcy, for all of her powers, [[GlassCannon is only human]] and so if she strikes hard and fast enough she'll be able to remove her as a threat.
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** Marcy can use her powers as Destructo-Woman to vaporize Lisa and the surrounding 500 miles of countryside in one fell swoop… [[HenshinHero if she transforms]]. If Lisa is ([[BoomHeadshot literally]]) quicker on the draw, Marcy is screwed.
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** That is why she has begun to walk around transformed as Destructo-Woman 15-8/7 (with the eight hours she needs to sleep barricaded in her fortress-like home surrounded by minions who can hold off any potential attackers long enough for her to wake up and deal with them). Lisa's a high school bully without the resources of a Chairperson of the Joint Chiefs of Staff, so any plans to bully Marcy that are not "strike from anonymity" are going to lead to a bloodbath.
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** Lisa has heard rumors that Marcy is a witch, but she scoffs them and continues bullying her.
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** Lisa has heard rumors that Marcy is a witch, but she scoffs at them and continues bullying her.
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** The story takes place in a mundane setting, let’s just say high school. In short, Lisa picks on a completely normal person.
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Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
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** Marcy has that UncannyValley aura around her.
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** Marcy has that UncannyValley creepy aura around her.
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Is there a trope for being super agressive so they don't get you first? aside from jerkass woobie maybe?
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** Lisa is actually scared shitless of Marcy, and picks on her specifically to break her spirit and project the illusion of strength in the hopes she'll leave her alone. Without this bluff she's nothing to Marcy and she knows it, but "there's no reason Marcy needs to know that!"
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** Lisa is actually [[AngerBornOfWorry scared shitless of Marcy, Marcy,]] and picks on her specifically to [[DoUntoOthersBeforeTheyDoUntoUs break her spirit and project the illusion of strength strength]] in the hopes she'll leave her alone. be too browbeaten to oppose her. Without this bluff she's nothing to Marcy and she knows it, but "there's no reason it. Of course, [[EvilCannotComprehendGood she's unable to realise]] that her [[SelfFulfillingProphecy desperate aggression may be what gets Marcy needs to know that!"snap.]]
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** Lisa is actually scared shitless of Marcy, and picks on her specifically to break her spirit and project the illusion of strength in the hopes she'll leave her alone. Without this bluff she's nothing to Marcy and she knows it, but "there's no reason Marcy needs to know that!"
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** [[WhatanIdiot When Lisa is expected to keep the all mighty Marcy alone, since she can destroy the whole universe in one attack, she instead makes fun of her without holding back. The end result was the death of the universe.]]
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** [[WhatanIdiot When Lisa is expected to keep the all mighty Marcy alone, since she can destroy the whole universe in one attack, she instead makes fun of her without holding back. The end result was the death of the universe.]]
