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** Every single time the Ghost shows up and screams.
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** The nights Arthur spent in Eel Marsh House.
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** The nights Arthur spent in Eel Marsh House.House, alone with the ghost.
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* Jennet has complete power [[spoiler:over the children she controls and drives to suicide]]. While the JumpScare of the movies may seem cheesy to some, the way the solicitor's daughter just stands and stares as she ''[[spoiler: immolates herself]] certainly wasn't''.
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* Jennet has complete power [[spoiler:over over the children she controls and drives to suicide]]. suicide. While the JumpScare of the movies may seem cheesy to some, the way the solicitor's daughter just stands and stares as she ''[[spoiler: immolates herself]] ''immolates herself'' certainly wasn't''.''wasn't''.
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** The final line of the play invokes FridgeHorror. [[spoiler: It indicates the Woman in Black's ghost was really in the performance, and the actor's daughter is next...]]
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** The final line of the play invokes FridgeHorror. [[spoiler: It indicates the Woman in Black's ghost was really in the performance, and the actor's daughter is next...]]
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* When two of a trio of siblings rush pleading for Arthur's help, their sibling had been compelled by the witch to drink lye. When Arthur asks the chd if she is okay, she violently coughs up blood in his face and drops dead right there.
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* When two of a trio of siblings rush pleading for Arthur's help, their sibling had been compelled by the witch to drink lye. When Arthur asks the chd child if she is okay, she violently coughs up blood in his face and drops dead right there.
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* When two of a trio of siblings rush pleading for Arthur's help, their sibling had been compelled by the witch to drink lye. When Arthur asks the chd if she is okay, she violently coughs up blood in his face and drops dead right there.
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*There is something unspeakably terrifying about that rocking chair.
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* Jennet has complete power [[spoiler:over the children she controls and drives to suicide]]. While the JumpScare of the movies may seem cheesy, cheesy to some, the way the solicitor's daughter just stands and stares as she ''[[spoiler: immolates herself]] certainly wasn't''.
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* Jennet has complete power [[spoiler:over the children she controls and drives to suicide]], suicide]]. While the JumpScare of the movies may seem cheesy, the way the solicitor's daughter just stands and stares as she ''[[spoiler: immolates herself]] certainly wasn't''.
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** The nights Arthur spent in Eel Marsh House Arthur spent. House.
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** Every single time you hear the rocking chair and music box, you know something terrible is going to happen...
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** Every single time you hear the rocking chair and music box, you know something terrible is going to happen...happen...
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** Every single time you [[HellIsThatNoise hear]] the rocking chair and music box, you know something terrible is going to happen...
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** Every single time you [[HellIsThatNoise hear]] hear the rocking chair and music box, you know something terrible is going to happen...
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** The final line of the play invokes FridgeHorror. [[spoiler: It indicates the Woman in Black's ghost was really in the performance, and the actor's daughter is next...]]
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** The nights in Eel Marsh House Arthur spent.
** Every single time you [[HellIsThatNoise hear]] the rocking chair and music box, you know something terrible is going to happen...
** The nights in Eel Marsh House Arthur spent.
** Every single time you [[HellIsThatNoise hear]] the rocking chair and music box, you know something terrible is going to happen...
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* Jennet has complete power [[spoiler:over the children she controls and drives to suicide]], the JumpScare of the movies may seem cheesy, the way the solicitor's daughter just stands and stares as she ''[[spoiler: immolates herself]] certainly wasn't''.wasn't''.
* The stage play has plenty, but here are some moments:
** The dream sequence the Lawyer goes through.
** The first time we hear the coach crashing.
** The Lawyer and Spider, his dog, nearly dying near the marsh.
** The final line of the play invokes FridgeHorror. [[spoiler: It indicates the Woman in Black's ghost was really in the performance, and the actor's daughter is next...]]
* The stage play has plenty, but here are some moments:
** The dream sequence the Lawyer goes through.
** The first time we hear the coach crashing.
** The Lawyer and Spider, his dog, nearly dying near the marsh.
** The final line of the play invokes FridgeHorror. [[spoiler: It indicates the Woman in Black's ghost was really in the performance, and the actor's daughter is next...]]
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