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** And then [[spoiler:it's revealed that Shining is [[ForWantOfANail the nail between the main timeline and]] [[BadFuture Dark World]]. If it gets him...]]
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** And then [[spoiler:it's revealed that Shining is [[ForWantOfANail the nail between the main timeline and]] and [[BadFuture Dark World]]. If it gets him...]]
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* [[spoiler:The fact that [[GeneralRipper Lone Ranger]] even ''exists''. Even taking into account the fact that he's obviously insane, (maybe since Discord's brief reign, maybe before) and [[InsaneTrollLogic thinks that the best way to proect Equestria was to allow Chrysalis and her forces into the capitol]], the fact that there's a pony even willing to ''consider'' genocide, let alone '''''endorse it''''' is frightening beyond measure]].
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* [[spoiler:The fact that [[GeneralRipper Lone Ranger]] even ''exists''. Even taking into account the fact that he's obviously insane, (maybe since Discord's brief reign, maybe before) and [[InsaneTrollLogic thinks that the best way to proect protect Equestria was to allow Chrysalis and her forces into the capitol]], the fact that there's a pony even willing to ''consider'' genocide, let alone '''''endorse it''''' is frightening beyond measure]].
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*** [[spoiler:The mere presence of the Shadows of Existence causes Applejack to have visions of [[PrimalFear Primal Fears]]. For a few fleeting moments she is in the body of a horse with a broken leg being put down by her human owner, a filly among many other fillies committing genocide against another pony race, and a little girl in a pit with a giant bag of vicious animals tearing their way out.]]
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*** It was worse in Mimic's case as kicking something a thousand times at the speed of sound that is capable of resisting such pummeling in the first place resulted in her breaking her own leg and one of her golden horseshoes. SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome has never been that scary.
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*** It was worse in Mimic's case as kicking something a thousand times at the speed of sound that is capable of resisting such pummeling in the first place resulted in her breaking her own leg and one of her golden horseshoes. SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome has never been that scary.
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** Nightmare Manacle is definitely on par with, if not worse, than Granfalloon in the [[IncrediblyLamePun nightmare fuel]] department. She [[BodyHorror chains ponies together in pairs, binding them together and]] ''[[AndIMustScream forcing them to share each other's thoughts and pain.]]''
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** Nightmare Manacle is definitely on par with, if not worse, than Granfalloon in the [[IncrediblyLamePun [[{{Pun}} nightmare fuel]] department. She [[BodyHorror chains ponies together in pairs, binding them together and]] ''[[AndIMustScream forcing them to share each other's thoughts and pain.]]''
