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* Considering ''VideoGame/{{Overwatch}}'' setting about heroes, some characters really fit the bill more than others. Those that stand out include:
** Tracer, a beamingly cheerful British pilot who totes a dual gun and perpetually cheerful, always constantly positive and fighting for common good in the world, with her motto being "The world could use more heroes." Helping things are the fact that she can reverse time and reappear in a place several seconds before her. Bonus points for being unashamedly lesbian and not being discriminated for it, making more lesbian people feel more awed by her.
** Lucio, a funky Brazilian DJ who doubles as a freedom fighter and struck against a corrupt corporate from harming his people, becoming famous for that and spreads the good message of unity and freedom. He's loved by a lot of people, very social (except against anyone from that corporate) and his music, helped with his tools, can either heal people or stimulate them to move faster.
** D.Va, a 19-year-old South Korean GamerChick who is an undefeated ''VideoGame/{{Starcraft}}'' pro, being conscripted by her nation's military in order to fight off giant robots that invaded her country, never losing optimism despite the horrors she went through and in fact streams her battles to lift her people's spirits and in battle, likes to pepper gaming jargon in battles, and also doubles as a celebrity.
** Tracer, a beamingly cheerful British pilot who totes a dual gun and perpetually cheerful, always constantly positive and fighting for common good in the world, with her motto being "The world could use more heroes." Helping things are the fact that she can reverse time and reappear in a place several seconds before her. Bonus points for being unashamedly lesbian and not being discriminated for it, making more lesbian people feel more awed by her.
** Lucio, a funky Brazilian DJ who doubles as a freedom fighter and struck against a corrupt corporate from harming his people, becoming famous for that and spreads the good message of unity and freedom. He's loved by a lot of people, very social (except against anyone from that corporate) and his music, helped with his tools, can either heal people or stimulate them to move faster.
** D.Va, a 19-year-old South Korean GamerChick who is an undefeated ''VideoGame/{{Starcraft}}'' pro, being conscripted by her nation's military in order to fight off giant robots that invaded her country, never losing optimism despite the horrors she went through and in fact streams her battles to lift her people's spirits and in battle, likes to pepper gaming jargon in battles, and also doubles as a celebrity.
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* Considering ''VideoGame/{{Overwatch}}'' ''VideoGame/{{Overwatch}}''[='=]s setting about heroes, some characters really fit the bill more than others. Those that stand out include:
** Tracer, a beamingly cheerful British pilot who totes a dual gun andperpetually cheerful, always is constantly positive and fighting for common good in the world, with her motto being "The world could use more heroes." Helping things are the fact It helps that she can reverse time and reappear in a place several seconds before her. Bonus points for being unashamedly lesbian and not being discriminated for it, making more lesbian people feel more awed by her.
** Lucio, a funky Brazilian DJ who doubles as a freedom fighterand who struck against a the corrupt corporate from Vishkar corporation that was harming his people, thereby becoming famous for that and spreads spreading the good message of unity and freedom. He's loved by a lot of people, very social (except against anyone from that corporate) Vishkar) and his music, helped with his tools, can either heal people or stimulate them to move faster.
** D.Va, a 19-year-old South Korean GamerChick whois was an undefeated ''VideoGame/{{Starcraft}}'' pro, pro before being conscripted by her nation's military in order to fight off an invasion of giant robots that invaded her country, roboats, and who never losing loses optimism despite the horrors she went through and in fact through. She streams her battles to lift her people's spirits and in battle, likes to pepper gaming jargon in battles, and she also doubles as a celebrity.
** Tracer, a beamingly cheerful British pilot who totes a dual gun and
** Lucio, a funky Brazilian DJ who doubles as a freedom fighter
** D.Va, a 19-year-old South Korean GamerChick who
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* ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' has Kurosaki Ichigo. A teenager who is an excellent student and beats the bullies in the face at the same time, skips school, gets more and more strength and fantastic super-powers, practically free from adults and meets many [[MsFanservice hot girls]]. Besides, he's based on Goku as many others {{Shonen}} [[StockShonenHero protagonists]] and has practically all of his good qualities. Who doesn't want to be him?
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* ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' has Kurosaki Ichigo. A teenager who is an excellent student and beats the bullies in the face at the same time, skips school, gets more and more strength and fantastic super-powers, practically free from adults and meets many [[MsFanservice hot girls]]. Besides, he's based on Goku as many others other {{Shonen}} [[StockShonenHero protagonists]] and has practically all of his good qualities. Who doesn't want to be him?
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* ''WesternAnimation/AdventuresOfSonicTheHedgehog'': Sonic in an [[TheAce ace]] of a superhero who always wins against the bad guys, usually very easily. He's powerful, clever, and the fastest thing alive, as well as being [[ChickMagnet very popular with girls]] and a [[FamedInStory world-famous celebrity]] who's [[LovedByAll loved and respected by everyone]]. To drive the point home, Sonic's sidekick, Tails, idolizes him and talks a lot about how cool he is.
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* ''WesternAnimation/AdventuresOfSonicTheHedgehog'': Sonic in is an [[TheAce ace]] of a superhero who always wins against the bad guys, usually very easily. He's powerful, clever, and the fastest thing alive, as well as being [[ChickMagnet very popular with girls]] and a [[FamedInStory world-famous celebrity]] who's [[LovedByAll loved and respected by everyone]]. To drive the point home, Sonic's sidekick, Tails, idolizes him and talks a lot about how cool he is.
