History Literature / TheSundering

10th Jun '17 10:36:23 AM FretfulKennel
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* BodyguardBetrayal: Tanaros was second in command to King Roscus Altorus, who seduced his wife and fathered a child on her. Tanaros killed his wife and leige both. Centuries later, when the descendants of Altorus are discussing this, naturally only Tanaros' betrayal is remembered.

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* BodyguardBetrayal: Tanaros was second in command to King Roscus Altorus, who seduced his wife and fathered a child on her. Tanaros killed his wife and leige both. Centuries later, when the descendants of Altorus are discussing this, naturally only Tanaros' betrayal is remembered. Which makes sense, as murder is more memorable then adultery.
10th Jun '17 8:33:58 AM Radhil
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** Malthus' Company for the Fellowship of the Ring, complete with archer, ranger, knight, wizard, and {{hobbits}}, and questing for the PlotCoupon while the armies run off to war.


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* ForgedByTheGods:
** Not deliberately but accidentally forged, The Godslayer is a dagger formed by the cracking of the Souma - as though it sensed the Shapers were about to kill each other and responded to their desires. It's the only weapon that can kill Shapers, and Satoris has managed to hold onto it after being stabbed in the leg with it. Most of the wars on Satoris over the millenia are attempts to overwhelm him, retrieve Godslayer, and finally use it on him.
** The Spear of Light, the Helm of Shadows, and the Arrow of Fire, three weapons shaped by Haomane and given to his Counselers. Satoris is wounded by them, but in the end two Counselers die, the Spear broken and the Arrow lost, and the Helm claimed by Satoris for his own use.


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* HungryJungle: The kidnapping decoy party that's supposed to report to Lilias ends up stuck in an oppressive delta marsh and runs afoul of Malthus, quicksand, reptiles, madness (the tracker starts rambling they have to get to the center to get out), and finally, the dragon hiding in the center. The only survivor to get out was one guy taken captive by Malthus.


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* OnlyTheChosenMayWield: Only the Bearer of the Yarru-Yami can carry the Water of Life from the center of the desert. Literally - it's infinitely heavy for any other person.


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* PlotCoupon: The Water of Life. Satoris stuck the Godslayer in a font of eternal flame so he could stop worrying about armies coming for it, as any mortal would be burned to ash. So Malthus' Company need the Water to extinguish it, and [[OnlyTheChosenMayWield the bearer]] to carry it. It also gets them past the dwarves test to get the Arrow of Fire back.


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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: The Were have supported Satoris in the past, and the Grey Dam, Ushahin's foster mother, is eager to avenge her lost family against the Altorus line by suicidally attacking the wedding party. Once the memories and title of the Gray Dam pass to another, though, the new leader has no interest in war, and withdraws support from Lilias. This is the ''first'' item to go wrong in the dark-side plans, and fits the prophecy to boot.


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* SwordOfPlotAdvancement: The Godslayer, the only weapon that can kill Satoris for sure, and the strongest source of magic on this continent besides, so Satoris has held on to it and protected it. Endlessly pursued by pretty much everyone not on his side, so Satoris finally built a fortress around it and stuck it in a font of endless fire besides, so only he can reach and use it.
9th Jun '17 11:33:58 AM Radhil
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* ChildByRape: Ushahin Dreamspinner.

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* ChildByRape: Ushahin Dreamspinner.Dreamspinner, the child of a human lord who forced himself on an Ellyl lady that was part of a visiting embassy.



%%* EvilOverlord: Deconstructed.

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%%* * EvilOverlord: Deconstructed.{{Deconstructed}}. Satoris is a dark lord, and has called the outcast, the wounded, the wronged and bitter, and all of the mistreated races of the earth to his side. His alliances and power base are based on friendship, respect, and honor, however. If he operated through domination and fear, he'd have far less strength and no allies at all.



* HalfHumanHybrid: Ushahin Dreamspinner is the result of the rape of an Ellyl woman by a human man.

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* HalfHumanHybrid: Ushahin Dreamspinner is the result of the rape of an Ellyl woman by a human man.man, and was reviled by both his families. He is notably misshapen, although how much is due to mixed heritage and how much was being beaten to the edge of death is an open question. Cerelinde is deeply afraid her and Aracus' children will be similar, and clings to the belief that it was because Ushahin was a product of lust and not love.



* InterspeciesAdoption: After the Ellylon refused him at birth, his human family neglected him, and finally some random strangers beat him to a broken pulp, a nameless HalfHumanHybrid child crawled into the forest to die. He was found by the Grey Dam of the Were, taken in and cared for, and given the name Ushahin.



* MoralDissonance: "We can either hunt you all down and exterminate you to the last one, or we can leave you in peace - as long as you never have any more babies." This is the choice forced by the "hero" onto a race who have dealt with the BigBad in the past (under a different leader) and have now washed their hands of any more involvement.

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* MoralDissonance: MoralDissonance:
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"We can either hunt you all down and exterminate you to the last one, or we can leave you in peace - as long as you never have any more babies." This is the choice forced by the "hero" onto a race who have dealt with the BigBad in the past (under a different leader) and have now washed their hands of any more involvement.involvement.
** Lilias, Sorceress of the East, founded her own nation to guarantee her own freedom. She also likes pretty and young servants for her court, and isn't above some mind control for a select few that were more pretty and less willing, rationalizing that she at least provides a good pension when they're released.



* OurWerewolvesAreDifferent: The Were are a race of wild wolf-men that are fond of the hunt. Not shapeshifters, and some small magics related to death, but otherwise fit most of the classic werewolf image.



** Satoris created his own Trio of Tanaros, Ushahin, and Vorax, as a dark mirror of Haomane's Counselers.

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** Satoris created his own Trio of Tanaros, Ushahin, and Vorax, as a dark mirror of Haomane's Counselers.Counselers, and their areas of responsibility as general, spymaster/mage, and logistics fall into CombatDiplomacyStealth as well.


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* SelectiveObliviousness: Cerelinde, particularly when she's first kidnapped and confronted with the lack of evil in all the "evil" things around her, brings up any number of battles or ruins or deaths to justify her hatreds. She is surprised to be constantly called on it by Tanaros, having ignored or rationalized away any light-side attacks as "Because of Satoris," an excuse so quickly and often repeated even she starts to doubt it.
9th Jun '17 6:04:24 AM Radhil
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%%* CaptainErsatz: Nearly every character.



* CrossingTheDesert: Malthus is occupied early on with fulfilling the "unknown is known" portion of the prophecy, setting off into the vast unmapped desert created when Haomane burned Satoris with the sun.
* DamselInDistress: The dark-side plan is to invoke this situation for a preemptive strike. Cerelinde is kidnapped from her own wedding, but a false trail leads the light-side to believe a different dark-side nation to blame. Haomane's Allies will rally and attack that nation, putting them in perfect position to get attacked from both sides and end the war long before the Allies or their prophecy get any steam going.



* {{Expy}}: Many characters and elements are drawn from [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings Tolkien]], although due to the PerspectiveFlip, most dark-side characters are new.
** Malthus, as the last light-side wizard, is very clearly Gandalf, and the closest to CaptainErsatz we get.
** Satoris is a sympathetic version of Sauron.
** The Soumanie, gems of light and power, are described much like the Silmaril.
** Cerelinde, of an immortal elf-like race and marrying a mortal, is a substitute Arwen.
** Aracus Altorus, human king of a long-lost kingdom, for Aragorn, although as he's already a leader among men, draws from Boromir as well.
** Lilias as a sorceress and distant Satoris ally ends up playing the role Saruman does in the plot, although her origins and motives are different.



* OrcusOnHisThrone: Justified, since Satoris has been wounded for millennia and is not as powerful as he once was.

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* OrcusOnHisThrone: Justified, OrcusOnHisThrone:
** Justified for Satoris,
since Satoris he has been wounded and bleeding for millennia millennia, and is not as powerful as he once was.was.
** Also applies to Haomane, who is never actually seen at all, but has allies and a wizard acting on his behalf.



* PowerTrio: Tanaros, Vorax, and Ushahin. Malthus, Dergail, and Ardreth used to be this before the last two died.

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* PowerTrio: Tanaros, Vorax, and Ushahin. PowerTrio:
** Haomane sent his Counselers (wizards),
Malthus, Dergail, and Ardreth used Ardreth, each with a holy weapon, to be this before arrange the last two died.attempted war against Satoris. Two of them died, leaving only Malthus in the current age.
** Satoris created his own Trio of Tanaros, Ushahin, and Vorax, as a dark mirror of Haomane's Counselers.
* {{Pride}}: Haomane is blinded by his own pride, leading to his refusal of Satoris' Gift and the war, or so Satoris believes.


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* ThenLetMeBeEvil: Satoris doesn't know if conquering the whole of Urulat would be wise or would be enough to stand up to Haomane. After millenia of being a target and a victim, none of his fellow Shapers crossing the sea to support him, with Haomane's Allies gearing up for war, again, and trying to invoke the prophecy that fortells Satoris' end, he tells Tanaros he's more than willing to find out.


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* WeddingSmashers: Cerelinde of the Ellylon and Aracus Altorus fall in love and plan to get married, finally kickstarting the prophecy of Satoris' fall. Naturally, Tanaros and a disguised squad break it up with lethal force and steal the bride.
8th Jun '17 11:14:36 AM Radhil
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* BodyguardBetrayal: Tanaros was second in command to King Roscus Altorus, who seduced his wife and fathered a child on her. Tanaros killed his wife and leige both. Centuries later, when the descendants of Altorus are discussing this, naturally only Tanaros' betrayal is remembered.



* IfICantHaveYou: Tanaros to his unfaithful wife.

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* IfICantHaveYou: Tanaros to his unfaithful wife.wife, strangling her with his bare hands. He killed her lover, his king, as well, but couldn't bring himself to kill their child.
8th Jun '17 8:36:45 AM Radhil
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* BadMoonRising: A red star starts rising in the western sky the day the light-side starts fulfilling the prophecy. Satoris and company believe it comes from the Shapers across the sea as a herald of war. Cerelinde and company believe Satoris put it there (he's west of everyone else) as a herald of war.
8th Jun '17 5:27:15 AM Radhil
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* BerserkButton: Do not blame Satoris for the Sundering, especially not to his face. He doesn't take it well.



* MisplacedRetribution: The world mythology reads like this, as Haomane blames Satoris' gift for destroying his vision, and destroying most of his children the Ellyl. Arahlia's humans did much of the destroying however, and despite seeking Satoris' gift for her chosen race, she is not blamed for breaking the balance, and Haomane chooses destroying Satoris rather than accepting his gift for the Ellyl.

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* MisplacedRetribution: MisplacedRetribution:
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The world mythology reads like this, as Haomane blames Satoris' gift for destroying his vision, and destroying most of his children the Ellyl. Arahlia's humans did much of the destroying however, and despite seeking Satoris' gift for her chosen race, she is not blamed for breaking the balance, and Haomane chooses destroying Satoris rather than accepting his gift for the Ellyl.Ellyl.
** Satoris is named the Sunderer by the mortal races of the light-side, but Haomane actually performed the Sundering, splitting the Shaper's home from the rest of the earth to prevent Satoris from winning their first battle.
** This extends to much of the Shaper War - Haomane's and Satoris' disagreement had immediate consequences on their source of power that they appear equally responsible for, yet the first physical blow was another Shaper stabbing Satoris. Despite quite a lot of defending himself (though his hands aren't exactly clean), Satoris is blamed for starting the whole thing.
8th Jun '17 4:59:33 AM Radhil
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%%* DarkIsNotEvil

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%%* DarkIsNotEvil* DarkIsNotEvil:
** Satoris is a dark lord over a shadowy land completely shrouded with clouds and mists... because Haomane once bent the sun to burn Satoris to a crisp, blackening his skin until it refused to heal, and he'd rather not allow that avenue of attack again.
** The Fjelltroll are massive ugly brutes that are shown creating beautiful detailed sculpture using just their hands and claws to work and shape the stone. A lot of them work for Satoris simply because he's often kind to them.
** Satoris' home, the vale of Gorgantum, is a twisted place as a side-effect of Satoris' presence that he cannot help. His unhealable wound constantly bleeds ichor, and it's been bleeding out of him so long the earth is infused and dead from it (blocking the sun probably didn't help either). Strange new life is adapting to the ichor-earth though, and Satoris keeps a garden.
7th Jun '17 12:59:35 PM Radhil
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* SexIsEvil: The rift between Shapers is based on this. Satoris' gift to the world was the Quickening - basically sex, passion, and procreation - which he gave to many races, and was asked to give to humanity, Arahlia's children. Humanity made war on the Ellyl, Haomane's children, and Haomane blamed Satoris' gift, refusing to accept it for the Ellyl and demanded Satoris remove it from humans. Satroris' refusal started the war. There are still references to "the Sunderer's Gift" by the light-side as though it were a poison.

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* SexIsEvil: The rift between Shapers is based on this. Satoris' gift to the world was the Quickening - basically sex, passion, and procreation - which he gave to many races, and was asked to give to humanity, Arahlia's children. Humanity made war on the Ellyl, Haomane's children, and Haomane blamed Satoris' gift, refusing to accept it for the Ellyl and demanded demanding Satoris remove it from humans. Satroris' Satoris' refusal started the war.Shaper War. There are still references to "the Sunderer's Gift" by the light-side as though it were a poison.
7th Jun '17 12:39:56 PM Radhil
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* HumansAreSpecial: {{Invoked}}. Haomane and Arahlia shared the gifts of thought and love between Ellyl and Humans, making them semi-equals, even though the Ellylon were ageless. Then Arahlia sought Satoris' Quickening for humans as well, since Humans weren't ageless, and with all three gifts humanity ended up far outnumbering the Ellylon or any other race.



* MisplacedRetribution: The world mythology reads like this, as Haomane blames Satoris' gift for destroying his vision, and destroying most of his children the Ellyl. Arahlia's humans did much of the destroying however, and despite seeking Satoris' gift for her chosen race, she is not blamed for breaking the balance, and Haomane chooses destroying Satoris rather than accepting his gift for the Ellyl.



%%* PiecesOfGod

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%%* PiecesOfGod* PiecesOfGod: The Shapers and the dragons were birthed from the dying of the world-god Uru-alat, and the world itself is named after him and considered to be his corpse. Each of the Shapers' gifts are drawn from Uru-alat - Haomane was born from his head and represents the mind, Arahlia from the chest and representing heart, Satoris from the loins and standing for sex and the body.



* SexIsEvil: The rift between Shapers is based on this. Satoris' contribution to the world was the gift of Quickening to humanity - basically sex, passion, and procreation - which he planned to give to all races. Haomane viewed this as interfering with his chosen races, elves and humans, and a corruption of his vision, starting the war. There are still references to "the Sunderer's Gift" by the light-side as though it were a poison.

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* SexIsEvil: The rift between Shapers is based on this. Satoris' contribution gift to the world was the gift of Quickening to humanity - basically sex, passion, and procreation - which he planned gave to many races, and was asked to give to all races. humanity, Arahlia's children. Humanity made war on the Ellyl, Haomane's children, and Haomane viewed this as interfering with his chosen races, elves blamed Satoris' gift, refusing to accept it for the Ellyl and humans, and a corruption of his vision, starting demanded Satoris remove it from humans. Satroris' refusal started the war. There are still references to "the Sunderer's Gift" by the light-side as though it were a poison.
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