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''The Serial Murders'' is a novella in Creator/KimNewman's Literature/DiogenesClub series, featuring OccultDetective Richard Jeperson.
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''The Serial Murders'' is a novella in Creator/KimNewman's Literature/DiogenesClub ''Literature/DiogenesClub'' series, featuring OccultDetective Richard Jeperson.
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* LegitimateBusinessmensSocialClub: Discussed. The villain introduces Richard to a couple of really obvious Legitimate Businessmen, present to bid on using the villain's powers for assassination. Jeperson quips that the men must be "olive oil salesmen", referencing the legitimate business of the Corleones in ''Film/TheGodfather''. They appreciate the joke, but the villain -- who is neither as smart nor as cultured as he thinks he is -- is lost.
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* TotallyNotACriminalFront: Discussed. The villain introduces Richard to a couple of really obvious fronts, present to bid on using the villain's powers for assassination. Jeperson quips that the men must be "olive oil salesmen", referencing the "legitimate business" of the Corleones in ''Film/TheGodfather''. They appreciate the joke, but the villain -- who is neither as smart nor as cultured as he thinks he is -- is lost.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: The two mafioso who show up at the AuctionOfEvil actually chuckle when Richard identifies them as "[[Film/TheGodfather olive oil salesman]]." Squires, an uncultured idiot with pretensions above his station, is utterly lost, however.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: The two mafioso who show up at the AuctionOfEvil actually chuckle when Richard identifies them as "[[Film/TheGodfather olive oil salesman]]." Squires, an uncultured idiot with pretensions above his station, misses the reference and is utterly lost, lost however.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: The two mafioso who show up at the AuctionOfEvil actually chuckle when Richard identifies them as "[[Film/TheGodfather olive oil salesman]]." Squires, an uncultured idiot with pretensions above his station, is utterly lost, however.
