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* {{Doppelmerger}}: Kahlil arrives in a version of Basawar where his counterpart is dead. He finds and merges with the bones of said counterpart.
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* [=[strike]Love[/strike]=] [[LoveMakesYouEvil Grief Makes You Evil]]: [[spoiler:When Ravishan died, John sank all of northern Basawar in the sea. But then he pulled himself together and began to rebuild the world. Laurie, however, mourning for her husband and child and ruined life, became a true monster, and never recovered.]] Love on the other hand is a great force for good.
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* [=[strike]Love[/strike]=] [[LoveMakesYouEvil Grief Makes You Evil]]: [[spoiler:When Ravishan died, John sank all of northern Basawar in the sea. But then he pulled himself together and began to rebuild the world. Laurie, however, mourning for her husband and child and ruined life, became a true monster, and never recovered.]] Love on the other hand is a great force for good.
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* TheCavalry: Kahlirash’im warrior-priests arriving in [[spoiler:Gisa, to the aid of a crowd of townspeople attempting to stop rashan’im soldiers from taking away prisoners accused of witchcraft.]] Not a DeusExMachina because the reason for their arrival has been set up in the previous chapter: [[spoiler:Hann’yu wrote to everyone he could think of, including the kahlirash’im, about what the Payshmura were doing to prisoners; [[{{Foreshadowing}} he’s heard expressing the hope that someone paid attention.]]]]\\
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Also, the Rifter, a one-man (or -god) army, [[spoiler:breaking the siege of Vundomu]].
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* TheCavalry: Kahlirash’im warrior-priests arriving in [[spoiler:Gisa, to the aid of a crowd of townspeople attempting to stop rashan’im soldiers from taking away prisoners accused of witchcraft.]] Not a DeusExMachina because the reason for their arrival has been set up in the previous chapter: [[spoiler:Hann’yu wrote to everyone he could think of, including the kahlirash’im, about what the Payshmura were doing to prisoners; [[{{Foreshadowing}} he’s heard expressing the hope that someone paid attention.]]]]\\
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]]]] Also, the Rifter, a one-man (or -god) army, [[spoiler:breaking the siege of Vundomu]].
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* VowOfCelibacy: Required for everyone with a role in the Payshmura. It is depicted as a bad thing. All of the most positive characters who are priests secretly break the rule.
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* VowOfCelibacy: Required for everyone with a role in the Payshmura. It is depicted as a bad thing. All Most of the most positive characters who are priests secretly break the rule.rule, whereas the negative ones are severe about it.
