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* StylisticSuck: From what's shared of ''[=MotoKops=] 2200'', it's rather painfully a merchandise driven cartoon of the 1990s. Audrey in particular isn't fond of Cassie Styles as the only female member of the team, and she outright can't believe someone was paid to think up "Rooty Toot."
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* StylisticSuck: From what's shared of ''[=MotoKops=] 2200'', it's rather painfully a merchandise driven MerchandiseDriven cartoon of the 1990s. Audrey in particular isn't fond of Cassie Styles as the only female member of the team, and she outright can't believe someone was paid to think up "Rooty Toot."
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Tak is defeated, but in the end, Audrey and Seth both end up dead. However, their spirits wind up in the real-life version of Audrey's happy place, and one of the letters in the end of the book is from a witness who has heard the tales of the occasionally visible ghosts of a woman and a young boy.]]
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* SiblingSwitchSquick: Thanks to the alternate universe, the Carver family from one version of the story reverts who are siblings and who is married. In other words, David and Kirsten/Pie would be brother and sister in ''Desperation'', and their parents Ellen and Ralph, but in ''The Regulators'', they're married, with Ellen and Ralph as their children.
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Audrey confesses to her journal that Tak gives off waves of hate and emotional energy which make her feel crazy; the only relief she has found is locking herself in the bathroom and masturbating. (This seems similar to the effect of the ''[[HappyFunBall can tahs]]'' in the alternate universe of ''Literature/{{Desperation}}'', which drive people to give in to their basest urges.)
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* MasturbationMeansSexualFrustration: Audrey confesses to her journal that Tak gives off waves of hate and emotional energy which make her feel crazy; the only relief she has found is locking herself in the bathroom and masturbating. (This seems similar to the effect of the ''[[HappyFunBall can tahs]]'' in the alternate universe of ''Literature/{{Desperation}}'', which drive people to give in to their basest urges.)
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Jim Reed shoots himself after accidentally shooting Collie Entregian.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Jim Reed shoots himself after accidentally shooting Collie Entregian.Entregian, after being egged on by Tak.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[Spoiler: Jim Reed shoots himself after accidentally shooting Collie Entregian.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[Spoiler: Jim [[spoiler:Jim Reed shoots himself after accidentally shooting Collie Entregian.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: Jim Reed shoots himself after accidentally shooting. Collie Entregian
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[Spoiler: Jim Reed shoots himself after accidentally shooting. shooting Collie EntregianEntregian.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: Jim Reed shoots himself after accidentally shooting. Collie Entregian
