History Literature / TheLegendOfRahAndTheMuggles

24th Aug '16 1:06:42 PM VAIAZ
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** Yur declares that the light of the fireflies will keep Zyn on the island of Dezra forever. The lifespan of a firefly is two months, so in practice the Muggles have accomplished nothing.

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** Yur declares that the light of the fireflies will keep Zyn on the island of Dezra forever. The lifespan of a firefly is two months, so in practice the Muggles have accomplished nothing.nothing by storming the island.
12th May '16 11:41:24 AM VAIAZ
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* DescriptionPorn: Stouffer apparently feels the urge to descrive ''everything'' in the finest detail, expecting that the readers would care about it.

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* DescriptionPorn: Stouffer apparently feels the urge to descrive ''everything'' in the finest detail, expecting isn't aware that the readers would children 6 to 12 years old (the target audience) don't care about it.overly long and elaborate descriptions of ''everything''.
6th May '16 10:59:43 AM VAIAZ
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* DescriptionPorn: Stouffer apparently believes that readers are ''required'' to know ''every single minimal detail'' of everything she describes.

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* DescriptionPorn: Stouffer apparently believes feels the urge to descrive ''everything'' in the finest detail, expecting that the readers are ''required'' to know ''every single minimal detail'' of everything she describes.would care about it.
6th May '16 7:39:04 AM VAIAZ
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* DescriptionPorn: Stouffer apparently believes that readers are ''required'' to know ''every single minimal detail'' of everything she describes.
4th May '16 11:01:15 AM VAIAZ
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: This book features a type of moss called "Bordonian Moss", which has purple flowers. Moss is not a flowering plant.

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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: ArtisticLicenseBiology:
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This book features a type of moss called "Bordonian Moss", which has purple flowers. Moss is not a flowering plant.plant.
** Yur declares that the light of the fireflies will keep Zyn on the island of Dezra forever. The lifespan of a firefly is two months, so in practice the Muggles have accomplished nothing.
1st May '16 10:46:32 PM VAIAZ
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* InformedAttribute: The Character Glossary describes things that the characters are never shown doing or being in the story, and sometimes the entries contradict what's already established in the previous chapters.


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* ShowDontTell: One of the book's main problems. Qualities of characters are stated, but never actually shown.
** In a particular example, it is stated that Zyn has become jealous and is losing all of his self-esteem, and that he and Rah were very close until now. Stouffer doesn't actually describe how and why it happens, and what part of his personality is losing. This also cements Zyn's status as DesignatedVillain.
22nd Apr '16 10:13:44 AM VAIAZ
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* OrphanedEtimology: After the "Thirty Year War", all knowledge of the world is lost. Then how do the characters remember well about Shakespeare, Pachelbel Canon D, the Indians, French Language and Chinese Lanterns?

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* OrphanedEtimology: OrphanedEtymology: After the "Thirty Year War", all knowledge of the world is lost. Then how do the characters remember well about Shakespeare, Pachelbel Canon D, the Indians, French Language and Chinese Lanterns?
28th Mar '16 10:42:48 AM arisboch
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Simply put, ''Rah and the Muggles'' is to children's literature what ''Literature/TheEyeOfArgon'' is to swords and sorcery, minus the [[SoBadItsGood unintentional hilarity]]. For a chapter-by-chapter breakdown of the story, [[http://www.magespace.net/mugrev.html this link]] should tell you just about all you need to know. If you want to know more, see Tropers/ZeldaQueen's [[http://zelda-queen.livejournal.com/29637.html more detailed dissection.]] [[SchmuckBait Or you could buy the book.]]

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Simply put, ''Rah and the Muggles'' is to children's literature what ''Literature/TheEyeOfArgon'' is to swords and sorcery, minus the [[SoBadItsGood unintentional hilarity]]. For a chapter-by-chapter breakdown of the story, [[http://www.magespace.net/mugrev.html this link]] should tell you just about all you need to know. If you want to know more, see Tropers/ZeldaQueen's [[http://zelda-queen.livejournal.com/29637.html more detailed dissection.]] [[SchmuckBait Or you could buy the book.]]book]] or [[DigitalPiracyIsOkay download a pirate copy of it]].
9th Mar '16 1:55:36 AM VAIAZ
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* OrphanedEtimology: After the "Thirty Year War", all knowledge of the world is lost. Then how do the characters remember well about Shakespeare, Pachelbel Canon D, the Indians, French Language and Chinese Lanterns?
20th Jan '16 1:53:37 PM VAIAZ
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* DidntDoTheBloodyResearch: The word "Bugger" is uttered quite often in the book. Apparently Stouffer was not aware that it's a very offensive word in both British and Australian english.

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* DidntDoTheBloodyResearch: DidNotDoTheBloodyResearch: The word "Bugger" is uttered quite often in the book. Apparently Stouffer was not aware that it's a very offensive word in both British and Australian english.
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