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* WeaponOfChoice
** For Valerin, a mace.
** For Luther, a sword.
** For Callista, knives.
** For Drea, a spear.
** For Valerin, a mace.
** For Luther, a sword.
** For Callista, knives.
** For Drea, a spear.
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* AsianFoxSpirit: Deirdre is not technically this, but she certainly gives off this vibe when she has her fox tail [[spoiler: which contributes to her downfall as it provides a convenient anchor point for the rope she gets bound with]].
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* {{Kitsune}}: Deirdre is not technically this, but she certainly gives off this vibe when she has her fox tail [[spoiler: which contributes to her downfall as it provides a convenient anchor point for the rope she gets bound with]].
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* KnifeNut: Callista
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Enough so that the cast needs to rotate from chapter to chapter to give everyone some focus, with new characters being introduced almost every chapter.
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Enough so that the cast needs to rotate from chapter to chapter to give everyone some focus, with new characters being introduced almost every chapter.
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The protagonists include: Valerin, a mace-wielding mercenary woman. Avory, a sorceress. Deirdre, a girl that can take on the characteristics and abilities of animals. Zirena, a seer. Callista, a smuggler and thief. Annalae, a witch with a shadow minion at her command. Drea, the wielder of an enchanted spear.
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The protagonists include: Valerin, a mace-wielding mercenary woman. Avory, a sorceress. Deirdre, a girl that can take on the characteristics and abilities of animals. Zirena, a seer. Callista, a smuggler and thief. Annalae, a witch with a shadow minion at her command. Drea, the wielder of an enchanted spear.
spear. Elina, a scholar with untapped magical power.
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* {{Kitsune]]: Deirdre is not technically this, but she certainly gives off this vibe when she has her fox tail [[spoiler: which contributes to her downfall as it provides a convenient anchor point for the rope she gets bound with]].
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* {{Kitsune]]: {{Kitsune}}: Deirdre is not technically this, but she certainly gives off this vibe when she has her fox tail [[spoiler: which contributes to her downfall as it provides a convenient anchor point for the rope she gets bound with]].
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* FantasticLightSource: Runemotes, small will-o-the-wisp-like entities.
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* FantasticLightSource: Runemotes, small will-o-the-wisp-like WillOTheWisp-like entities.
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* TheNudifier: Runemotes. Small willow wisp like creatures that will burn away a patch of clothing each time they swoop in and strike a victim. They tend to work as a swarm, quickly overwhelming their prey.
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* TheNudifier: Runemotes. Small willow wisp like WillOTheWisp-like creatures that will burn away a patch of clothing each time they swoop in and strike a victim. They tend to work as a swarm, quickly overwhelming their prey.
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# [[http://faile35.deviantart.com/gallery/256842#/d32ak97 Rats in the Cellar]]
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# [[http://faile35.deviantart.com/gallery/256842#/d32ak97 Rats in the Cellar]]Cellar]] and [[http://faile35.deviantart.com/art/Rats-Revision-Page01-335412112 Rats Revision]] an updated version including a written story with each image and improved artwork.
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# A Web of Memory (To Be Release)
# Bookbinding (To Be Released)
# Bookbinding (To Be Released)
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# [[http://faile35.deviantart.com/art/Bookbinding-Page01-343580244 Bookbinding]]
# A Web of Memory (To BeRelease)
# Bookbinding (To BeReleased)
# A Web of Memory (To Be
# Bookbinding (To Be
* CurbStompBattle: Once the heroines get in trouble it tends to be pretty one-sided, though admittedly the odds are usually impossible to begin with...
* CurbStompCushion: ...though they put up a good fight, even if it only prolongs the inevitable.
* CurbStompCushion: ...though they put up a good fight, even if it only prolongs the inevitable.
* DarkActionGirl: Callista, definitely. Her CurbStompBattle with [[spoiler: Deirdre]] shows this most clearly.
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Albert and Callista are genuinely fond of each other.
* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: [[spoiler: The heroines, without exception, are going to end up captured and helpless]].
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* FantasticLightSource: Runemotes, small willow wisp-like entities.
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* FantasticLightSource: Runemotes, small willow wisp-like will-o-the-wisp-like entities.
* GulliverTieDown: A variation; the gremlins don't actually stake their victims to the floor, and the victim is usually awake and struggling at the time, but the principle of using rope and numbers to subdue a much larger victim still stands.
* InescapableNet: [[spoiler: Annalae]] gets caught in one. Justified as it's a magical construct that automatically tightens and seals itself into a coccoon.
* {{Kitsune]]: Deirdre is not technically this, but she certainly gives off this vibe when she has her fox tail [[spoiler: which contributes to her downfall as it provides a convenient anchor point for the rope she gets bound with]].
* {{Kitsune]]: Deirdre is not technically this, but she certainly gives off this vibe when she has her fox tail [[spoiler: which contributes to her downfall as it provides a convenient anchor point for the rope she gets bound with]].
* OhCrap: The default expression of many heroines as their situation worsens.
* OverTheShoulderCarry: Happens as often as you'd expect in a series with such a heavy focus on kidnapping.
* PornWithPlot: The story gets increasingly detailed as the author refines his craft, yet the main focus is always on the ways in which the various attractive women end up getting in trouble.
* PornWithPlot: The story gets increasingly detailed as the author refines his craft, yet the main focus is always on the ways in which the various attractive women end up getting in trouble.
* SchmuckBait: It turns out a lot of [[BigBad big bad's]] schemes are exactly this.
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* SchmuckBait: It turns out a lot of [[BigBad big bad's]] schemes are exactly this.
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* SchmuckBait: It turns out ShamefulStrip: [[spoiler: Every single heroine]] ends up going through this.
* SwallowedWhole: [[spoiler: Poor Drea]] ends her chapter sliding down alot of [[BigBad big bad's]] schemes are exactly this.snake's throat.
* SwallowedWhole: [[spoiler: Poor Drea]] ends her chapter sliding down a
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* IncrediblyLamePun: Each and every chapter title. Crosses into DoubleEntendre.
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* PunBasedTitle: Each and every chapter title. Crosses into DoubleEntendre.
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* BadassAbnormal: There's Jervil, Annalae, and Deirdre. ''Do not'' pick a fight with these people. Just... just don't.
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* AlternateDVDCommentary: The comment feature on deviantart has been known to generate the {{Rifftrax}} effect. Some of the things readers have to say can be hilarious.
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* AlternateDVDCommentary: The comment feature on deviantart Website/DeviantArt has been known to generate the {{Rifftrax}} Podcast/RiffTrax effect. Some of the things readers have to say can be hilarious.
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The story begins with a waitress working at the Fair Harvest Inn, named Anna, goes missing after her employer Albert Fiskerne sent her down to retrieve more supplies from the cellar. After she didn't return, Albert went down to fetch her and found that she's disappeared altogether and the only clue is a large hole in the cellar wall that hadn't been there before. So the innkeeper calls on Luther Vandermoor, a local guardsman, for assistance. So he hires a [[ActionGirl woman mercenary]] by the name of Valerin to properly investigate the disappearance. From there, [[ItGotWorse things get worse]]. Much, ''much'' worse.
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The story begins with a waitress working at the Fair Harvest Inn, named Anna, goes missing after her employer Albert Fiskerne sent her down to retrieve more supplies from the cellar. After she didn't return, Albert went down to fetch her and found that she's disappeared altogether and the only clue is a large hole in the cellar wall that hadn't been there before. So the innkeeper calls on Luther Vandermoor, a local guardsman, for assistance. So he hires a [[ActionGirl woman mercenary]] by the name of Valerin to properly investigate the disappearance. From there, [[ItGotWorse things get worse]]. Much, ''much'' worse.\n
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** To quote one of the readers: ''"It's amazing the villains haven't just paid him to keep doing what he's doing."''
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*AffablyEvil: Jervil. Sure, he might be a creepy ratman demon spawn, but damn if he doesn't act like he's catering to guests come over for tea at all times.
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* CardCarryingVillain: Jervil. He's a creepy ratman who dresses like Emperor Palpatine from ''Star Wars'', for crying out loud!
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: High Lady Drea Aliandis.
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General Tropes for the entire series]]
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* AlternateDVDCommentary: The comment feature on deviantart has been known to generate the {{Rifftrax}} effect. Some of the things readers have to say can be hilarious.
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* HumiliationCong: [[spoiler: Does being stripped, caged, and being treated like an animal count?]]
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* HumiliationCong: HumiliationConga: [[spoiler: Does being stripped, caged, and being treated like an animal count?]]
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* HumiliationCong: [[spoiler: Does being stripped, caged, and being treated like an animal count?]]
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* YouHaveOutLivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Jervil, to ''both'' Callista and Annalae.]]
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** It's also a dark place complete with a big, labyrinch-like place and long, daunting halls and dark corners where ''anything'' could be waiting for you.
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** It's also a dark place complete with a big, labyrinch-like place and labyrinch-like, long, daunting halls and dark corners where ''anything'' could be waiting for you.
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* HypercompetentSidekick: A few. There's Elina, to High Lady Drea. She's a BadassBookworm sorceress that's good with both magic and in a close-quarters fight. Then there's Callista and Annalae, to Jervil.
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* AllThereInTheManual: The author is dedicated entire journal entries on his deviant page, further explaining the plot and the setting of this series.
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* AllThereInTheManual: The author is has dedicated entire journal entries on his deviant page, further explaining the plot and the setting of this series.
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The protagonists include: Valerin, a mace-wielding mercenary woman. Avory, a sorceress. Deirdre, a girl that can take on the characteristics and abilities of animals. Zirena, a seer. Callista, a smuggle and thief. Annalae, a witch with a shadow minion at her command. Drea, the wielder of an enchanted spear.
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The protagonists include: Valerin, a mace-wielding mercenary woman. Avory, a sorceress. Deirdre, a girl that can take on the characteristics and abilities of animals. Zirena, a seer. Callista, a smuggle smuggler and thief. Annalae, a witch with a shadow minion at her command. Drea, the wielder of an enchanted spear.
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** [[spooiler: It also doubles as a TortureCellar]].
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** [[spooiler: [[spoiler: It also doubles as a TortureCellar]].
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** [[It also doubles as a TortureCellar]].
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** [[It [[spooiler: It also doubles as a TortureCellar]].
