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* WeaponOfChoice: The Baker Rifle. The Rifle along with the green uniform is a highly visible weapon and symbol that separates a Rifleman from the common soldier armed with muskets.
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** As noted near the end of the book, the story of his epic adventure was not pieced together - in universe - until he was old and senile from officers' and soldiers' war and personal diaries and the occasional fireside tale, and common soldiers of that era neither received nor expected distinction.
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** As noted near the end of the book, the story of his epic adventure was not pieced together - in universe - until he was old and senile senile, from officers' and soldiers' war and personal diaries and the occasional fireside tale, and common tale. Common soldiers of that era neither received nor expected distinction.
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** As noted near the end of the book, the stories of his epic adventure was not pieced together - in universe - until he was old and senile from officers' and soldiers' war and personal diaries and the occasional fireside tale, and common soldiers of that era neither received nor expected distinction.
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** As noted near the end of the book, the stories story of his epic adventure was not pieced together - in universe - until he was old and senile from officers' and soldiers' war and personal diaries and the occasional fireside tale, and common soldiers of that era neither received nor expected distinction.
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** As noted near the end of the book, the stories of his epic adventure was not pieced together - in universe - until he was old and senile from officers' war and personal diaries and the occasional fireside tale, and common soldiers of that era neither received nor expected distinction.
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** As noted near the end of the book, the stories of his epic adventure was not pieced together - in universe - until he was old and senile from officers' and soldiers' war and personal diaries and the occasional fireside tale, and common soldiers of that era neither received nor expected distinction.
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* DudeWheresMyRespect: A remarkable aversion, despite several actions more than worthy of the Victoria Cross in later times. All Rifleman Dodd wanted is to rejoin his unit, and do his duty.
** That is indeed all he got, instead of the depressing and actually risked alternative of getting shot by his own side as a deserter, in recognition of his maintenance of his equipment, and coming up to the patrols smiling which is not what deserters do.
** As noted near the end of the book, the stories of his epic adventure was not pieced together - in universe - until he was old and senile from officers' war and personal diaries and the occasional fireside tale, and common soldiers of that era neither received nor expected distinction.
** That is indeed all he got, instead of the depressing and actually risked alternative of getting shot by his own side as a deserter, in recognition of his maintenance of his equipment, and coming up to the patrols smiling which is not what deserters do.
** As noted near the end of the book, the stories of his epic adventure was not pieced together - in universe - until he was old and senile from officers' war and personal diaries and the occasional fireside tale, and common soldiers of that era neither received nor expected distinction.
