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* ManInWhite: Danilo and Archbishop Argile, a white [[PantheraAwesome tiger]] and [[TheMarvelousDeer stag]], respectively.
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* AllJustADream: [[spoiler: Subverted: Danilo most likely did genuinely travel back in time to France, as he has a chapel built in his name and brought into existence Luke (the implied descendent of Luc).]]
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* AllJustADream: [[spoiler: Subverted: [[spoiler:Subverted: Danilo most likely did genuinely travel back in time to France, as he has a chapel built in his name and brought into existence Luke (the implied descendent of Luc).]]
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* CorruptChurch: The catholic church, not being a huge surprise since this is an LGBT story set in medieval France. That said, Catholicism itself is not at all treated negatively, with Luc being a sincere catholic, [[spoiler:and in the end Danilo becomes a saint to the rescued gay men]].
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* CorruptChurch: The catholic church, Catholic Church, not being a huge surprise since this is an LGBT story set in medieval France. That said, Catholicism itself is not at all treated negatively, with Luc being a sincere catholic, Catholic, [[spoiler:and in the end Danilo becomes a saint to the rescued gay men]].
* {{Jerkass}}:
** The prisoner who goes almost instantly from treating Danilo as a saint for feeding him, to insulting him as an abomination for being gay.
** Bertrand, a BoomerangBigot of an innkeeper who constantly insults Luc for being gay and eventually sells him out to the Church, despite having previously accepted sexual favors from Luc to help pay for Danilo's stay. [[LaserGuidedKarma Danilo brings his homosexual activities to the Church's attention in retribution.]]
** The prisoner who goes almost instantly from treating Danilo as a saint for feeding him, to insulting him as an abomination for being gay.
** Bertrand, a BoomerangBigot of an innkeeper who constantly insults Luc for being gay and eventually sells him out to the Church, despite having previously accepted sexual favors from Luc to help pay for Danilo's stay. [[LaserGuidedKarma Danilo brings his homosexual activities to the Church's attention in retribution.]]
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* LightIsGood: Played with, subverted and reconstructed. Danilo is a white tiger, but he starts off as a self-loathing, frankly bigoted person, [[spoiler:though by the end he grows out of it, and even becomes a downright saint figure to the gay men he saved]]. The medieval Catholic Church sees white furred individuals as especially sacred and divine, [[spoiler:but that doesn't save Danilo from being persecuted by them]]. Archbishop Argile is a classical case of LightIsNotGood, being a white furred church official that is absolutely corrupt and vile.
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* LightIsGood: Played with, subverted and reconstructed. Danilo is a white tiger, but he starts off as a self-loathing, frankly bigoted person, [[spoiler:though by the end he grows out of it, and even becomes a downright saint figure to the gay men he saved]]. The medieval Catholic Church sees white furred white-furred individuals as especially sacred and divine, [[spoiler:but that doesn't save Danilo from being persecuted by them]]. Archbishop Argile is a classical case of LightIsNotGood, being a white furred church official that is absolutely corrupt and vile.
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Another anthropomorphic web novel by acclaimed author Creator/KyellGold, connected to his Literature/OutOfPosition series (and, consequently, to the Forrester series as a whole, including Literature/DangerousSpirits).
In France, young bisexual [[PantheraAwesome white tiger]] Danilo just receives news of his cousin's {{coming out story}}. Already bullied for being an anglophone in a french speaking country, this obviously doesn't go well for him. Already unconfortable with his attraction to men and uncaring about LGBT struggles, Danilo gets pissed off at his cousin for nonwittingly causing him to be mocked, and almost decides to cut ties with his friend Taye, a mouse who loves him and who he, too, is somewhat attracted to.
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* ArmouredClosetGay: Danilo, who is at first unconfortable with his bisexuality and obviously tries to keep it a secret in medieval France, [[spoiler:and Archbishop Argile, who has become a downright sociopathic monster because of this, raping convicted gay men behind doors just before they're executed.]]
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* ArmouredClosetGay: Danilo, who is at first unconfortable uncomfortable with his bisexuality and obviously tries to keep it a secret in medieval France, [[spoiler:and Archbishop Argile, who has become a downright sociopathic monster because of this, raping convicted gay men behind doors just before they're executed.]]
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* IdenticalGrandson: Several of Danilo's friends evidently had ancestors in Tigue, and they resemble eachother so much that Danilo mistakes them for the other on first meeting them.
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* IdenticalGrandson: Several of Danilo's friends evidently had ancestors in Tigue, and they resemble eachother each other so much that Danilo mistakes them for the other on first meeting them.
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Divided into 66 parts, the novel's chapters were posted from June 2013 to February 2014. You can read it on Kyell's FurAffinity page or on [[http://kyellgold.com/wpblog/camouflage-by-kyell-gold/ his website]].
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Divided into 66 parts, the novel's chapters were posted from June 2013 to February 2014. You can read it on Kyell's FurAffinity [=FurAffinity=] page or on [[http://kyellgold.com/wpblog/camouflage-by-kyell-gold/ his website]].
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* AllJustADream: [[spoiler:[[OrWasItADream Ostensibly]] [[RealAfterAll subverted]]: Danilo most likely did genuinely travel back in time to France, as he has a chapel built in his name and brought into existence Luke (the implied descendent of Luc).]]
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* AllJustADream: [[spoiler:[[OrWasItADream Ostensibly]] [[RealAfterAll subverted]]: [[spoiler: Subverted: Danilo most likely did genuinely travel back in time to France, as he has a chapel built in his name and brought into existence Luke (the implied descendent of Luc).]]
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* UsefulNotes/FurryFandom: As might be expected from Kyell Gold.
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* TheSociopath: Argile. Besides being a moral blackhole with no legitimately likeable traits, he also bears several diagnostic traits of psychopathy.
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* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler:Argile never pays for his heinous deeds, beyond Luc not being killed and fading from historical records.]]
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* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler:Argile never pays for his heinous deeds, beyond Luc not being killed and fading from historical records. On the other side, later research by Danilo indicates that the Archbishop died within the year.]]
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* {{Gayngst}}: At the beginning of the story, Danilo is about as internally homophobic as a bi teen in France gets. Then he gets shoved into medieval France, and his problems only get worse. [[spoiler:Thankfully, his tribulations help him overcome this]]l.
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* {{Gayngst}}: At the beginning of the story, Danilo is about as internally homophobic as a bi teen in France gets. Then he gets shoved into medieval France, and his problems only get worse. [[spoiler:Thankfully, his tribulations help him overcome this]]l.this]].
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* GroinAttack: [[spoiler:The story contains a first-person account of being ''castrated''.]]
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* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler:Argile never pays for his heinous deeds, beyond Luc not being killed and fading from historical reccords.]]
* KnightTemplar: Most of the Catholic Church, being presented as people whose idea of "peace and morality" is all about cruel punishment towards people who truly don't deserve it. Argile initially presents himself as a zealous persecutor, but it quickly becomes appearent that his motives are more selfish.
* KnightTemplar: Most of the Catholic Church, being presented as people whose idea of "peace and morality" is all about cruel punishment towards people who truly don't deserve it. Argile initially presents himself as a zealous persecutor, but it quickly becomes appearent that his motives are more selfish.
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* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler:Argile never pays for his heinous deeds, beyond Luc not being killed and fading from historical reccords.records.]]
* KnightTemplar: Most of the Catholic Church, being presented as people whose idea of "peace and morality" is all about cruel punishment towards people who truly don't deserve it. Argile initially presents himself as a zealous persecutor, but it quickly becomesappearent apparent that his motives are more selfish.selfish.
* IdenticalGrandson: Several of Danilo's friends evidently had ancestors in Tigue, and they resemble eachother so much that Danilo mistakes them for the other on first meeting them.
* KnightTemplar: Most of the Catholic Church, being presented as people whose idea of "peace and morality" is all about cruel punishment towards people who truly don't deserve it. Argile initially presents himself as a zealous persecutor, but it quickly becomes
* IdenticalGrandson: Several of Danilo's friends evidently had ancestors in Tigue, and they resemble eachother so much that Danilo mistakes them for the other on first meeting them.
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* [[ManInWhite Furs In White]]: Danilo and Archbishop Argile, a white [[PantheraAwesome tiger]] and [[TheMarvelousDeer stag]], respectively.
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* MessianicArchetype: [[spoiler:By the end of the story, Danilo's actions lead him to be remembered as an aspect of ''Jesus himself'' to the gay men he rescued, and his activism surely may make him this to the people of today]].
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* MessianicArchetype: [[spoiler:By the end of the story, Danilo's actions lead him to be remembered as an aspect of ''Jesus himself'' to the gay men he rescued, and his activism surely may make him this to the people of today]].today]].
* WhiteHairBlackHeart: Argile is a white coloured stag, but very much a sick bastard.
* WhiteHairBlackHeart: Argile is a white coloured stag, but very much a sick bastard.
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Divided into 66 parts, the novel's chapters were posted from June 2013 to February 2014. You can read it on Kyell's FurAffinity page or on [[KyellGold.com his website's]] blog section.
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Divided into 66 parts, the novel's chapters were posted from June 2013 to February 2014. You can read it on Kyell's FurAffinity page or on [[KyellGold.com [[http://kyellgold.com/wpblog/camouflage-by-kyell-gold/ his website's]] blog section.
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Divided into 66 chapters, parts, the novel's chapters were posted from June 2013 to February 2014. You can read it on Kyell's FurAffinity page.
page or on [[KyellGold.com his website's]] blog section.
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If something goes without saying then it needn\'t be mentioned at all. Straight Gay (presumably referring to Danilo) in this case being an unnecessary distinction already presented by Armored Closet Gay.
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* BoomerangBigot: [[spoiler:Argile, being closetted homophobe as he is]]. By extension, [[spoiler:possibly Cobb]].
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* BoomerangBigot: [[spoiler:Argile, being closetted closeted homophobe as he is]]. By extension, [[spoiler:possibly Cobb]].
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* TheDungAges: You're not in the least spared from medieval France's horrid hyegienic conditions, brutality and ignorance.
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* TheDungAges: You're not in the least spared from medieval France's horrid hyegienic hygienic conditions, brutality and ignorance.
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* FurryFandom: No freaking duh!As might be expected from Kyell Gold.
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* MessianicArchetype: [[spoiler:By the end of the story, Danilo's actions lead him to be remembered as an aspect of ''Jesus himself'' to the gay men he rescued, and his activism surely may make him this to the people of today]].
* StraightGay: Goes without saying.
* StraightGay: Goes without saying.
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* MessianicArchetype: [[spoiler:By the end of the story, Danilo's actions lead him to be remembered as an aspect of ''Jesus himself'' to the gay men he rescued, and his activism surely may make him this to the people of today]].
* StraightGay: Goes without saying.today]].
* StraightGay: Goes without saying.
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* KnightTemplar: Most of the Catholic Church, being presented as people whose idea of "peace and morality" is all about cruel punishment towards people who truly don't deserve it. Argile initially presents himself as a zealous persecutor, but it quickly becomes appearent that his motives are more selfish.
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* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler:Argile never pays for his heinous deeds, beyond Luc not being killed and fading from historical reccords.]]
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* BoomerangBigot: [[spoiler:Argile, being closetted homophobe as he is]]. By extension, [[spoiler:possibly Cobb]].
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* TheMarvelousDeer: Subverted to hell and back. Argile, whose pelt is white and thus considered a holy man, is nothing short of a sociopathic monster. Cobb, the other deer character (and implied to be Argile's descendent/reincarnation), is just a petty bully.
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* MessianicArchetype: [[spoiler:By the end of the story, Danilo's actions lead him to be remembered as an aspect of ''Jesus himself'' to the gay men he rescued, and his activism surely may make him this to the people of today]].today]].
* StraightGay: Goes without saying.
* StraightGay: Goes without saying.
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* AllJustADream: [[spoiler:[[MayBeMagicMayBeMundane Ostensibly]] [[OrWasItADream subverted]]: Danilo most likely did genuinely travel back in time to France, as he has a chapel built in his name.]]
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* AllJustADream: [[spoiler:[[MayBeMagicMayBeMundane [[spoiler:[[OrWasItADream Ostensibly]] [[OrWasItADream [[RealAfterAll subverted]]: Danilo most likely did genuinely travel back in time to France, as he has a chapel built in his name.name and brought into existence Luke (the implied descendent of Luc).]]
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* AllJustADream: [[spoiler:[[MayBeMagicMayBeMundane Ostensibly]] [[OrWasItADream subverted]]: Danilo most likely did genuinely travel back in time to France, as he has a chapel built in his name.]]
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* TheDungAges: You're not in the least spared from medieval France's horrid hyegienic conditions, brutality and ignorance.
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* {{Gaynst}}: At the beginning of the story, Danilo is about as internally homophobic as a bi teen in France gets. Then he gets shoved into medieval France, and his problems only get worse. [[spoiler:Thankfully, his tribulations help him overcome this]]l.
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* {{Gaynst}}: {{Gayngst}}: At the beginning of the story, Danilo is about as internally homophobic as a bi teen in France gets. Then he gets shoved into medieval France, and his problems only get worse. [[spoiler:Thankfully, his tribulations help him overcome this]]l.
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Divided into 66 chapters, the novel's chapters were posted from June 2013 to February 2014. You can read it on Kyell's FurAffinity page.
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Divided into 66 chapters, the novel's chapters were posted from June 2013 to February 2014. You can read it on Kyell's FurAffinity page.page.
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* ArmouredClosetGay: Danilo, who is at first unconfortable with his bisexuality and obviously tries to keep it a secret in medieval France, [[spoiler:and Archbishop Argile, who has become a downright sociopathic monster because of this, raping convicted gay men behind doors just before they're executed.]]
* CorruptChurch: The catholic church, not being a huge surprise since this is an LGBT story set in medieval France. That said, Catholicism itself is not at all treated negatively, with Luc being a sincere catholic, [[spoiler:and in the end Danilo becomes a saint to the rescued gay men]].
* {{Gaynst}}: At the beginning of the story, Danilo is about as internally homophobic as a bi teen in France gets. Then he gets shoved into medieval France, and his problems only get worse. [[spoiler:Thankfully, his tribulations help him overcome this]]l.
* FurryFandom: No freaking duh!
* LightIsGood: Played with, subverted and reconstructed. Danilo is a white tiger, but he starts off as a self-loathing, frankly bigoted person, [[spoiler:though by the end he grows out of it, and even becomes a downright saint figure to the gay men he saved]]. The medieval Catholic Church sees white furred individuals as especially sacred and divine, [[spoiler:but that doesn't save Danilo from being persecuted by them]]. Archbishop Argile is a classical case of LightIsNotGood, being a white furred church official that is absolutely corrupt and vile.
* [[ManInWhite Furs In White]]: Danilo and Archbishop Argile, a white [[PantheraAwesome tiger]] and [[TheMarvelousDeer stag]], respectively.
* MessianicArchetype: [[spoiler:By the end of the story, Danilo's actions lead him to be remembered as an aspect of ''Jesus himself'' to the gay men he rescued, and his activism surely may make him this to the people of today]].
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* ArmouredClosetGay: Danilo, who is at first unconfortable with his bisexuality and obviously tries to keep it a secret in medieval France, [[spoiler:and Archbishop Argile, who has become a downright sociopathic monster because of this, raping convicted gay men behind doors just before they're executed.]]
* CorruptChurch: The catholic church, not being a huge surprise since this is an LGBT story set in medieval France. That said, Catholicism itself is not at all treated negatively, with Luc being a sincere catholic, [[spoiler:and in the end Danilo becomes a saint to the rescued gay men]].
* {{Gaynst}}: At the beginning of the story, Danilo is about as internally homophobic as a bi teen in France gets. Then he gets shoved into medieval France, and his problems only get worse. [[spoiler:Thankfully, his tribulations help him overcome this]]l.
* FurryFandom: No freaking duh!
* LightIsGood: Played with, subverted and reconstructed. Danilo is a white tiger, but he starts off as a self-loathing, frankly bigoted person, [[spoiler:though by the end he grows out of it, and even becomes a downright saint figure to the gay men he saved]]. The medieval Catholic Church sees white furred individuals as especially sacred and divine, [[spoiler:but that doesn't save Danilo from being persecuted by them]]. Archbishop Argile is a classical case of LightIsNotGood, being a white furred church official that is absolutely corrupt and vile.
* [[ManInWhite Furs In White]]: Danilo and Archbishop Argile, a white [[PantheraAwesome tiger]] and [[TheMarvelousDeer stag]], respectively.
* MessianicArchetype: [[spoiler:By the end of the story, Danilo's actions lead him to be remembered as an aspect of ''Jesus himself'' to the gay men he rescued, and his activism surely may make him this to the people of today]].
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Another anthropomorphic web novel by acclaimed author Creator/KyellGold, connected to his Literature/OutOfPosition series (and, consequently, to the Forrester series as a whole, including Literature/DangerousSpirits).
In France, young bisexual [[PantheraAwesome white tiger]] Danilo just receives news of his cousin's {{coming out story}}. Already bullied for being an anglophone in a french speaking country, this obviously doesn't go well for him. Already unconfortable with his attraction to men and uncaring about LGBT struggles, Danilo gets pissed off at his cousin for nonwittingly causing him to be mocked, and almost decides to cut ties with his friend Taye, a mouse who loves him and who he, too, is somewhat attracted to.
Then his cellphone falls into the Saone, and as the river floods over, Danilo wakes up back in time in 1508 A.D.. Thrust into the [[TheDungAges brutal, disgusting medieval environment]], Danilo is forced to confront a dangerously homophobic world. The race is on for him to return home, and to save Luc, a gay otter condemned for his sexuality.
Divided into 66 chapters, the novel's chapters were posted from June 2013 to February 2014. You can read it on Kyell's FurAffinity page.
In France, young bisexual [[PantheraAwesome white tiger]] Danilo just receives news of his cousin's {{coming out story}}. Already bullied for being an anglophone in a french speaking country, this obviously doesn't go well for him. Already unconfortable with his attraction to men and uncaring about LGBT struggles, Danilo gets pissed off at his cousin for nonwittingly causing him to be mocked, and almost decides to cut ties with his friend Taye, a mouse who loves him and who he, too, is somewhat attracted to.
Then his cellphone falls into the Saone, and as the river floods over, Danilo wakes up back in time in 1508 A.D.. Thrust into the [[TheDungAges brutal, disgusting medieval environment]], Danilo is forced to confront a dangerously homophobic world. The race is on for him to return home, and to save Luc, a gay otter condemned for his sexuality.
Divided into 66 chapters, the novel's chapters were posted from June 2013 to February 2014. You can read it on Kyell's FurAffinity page.
