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* LetMeTellYouAStory: Ygritte tells Jon about Bael the Bard's song. [[spoiler:It is ''very'' reminiscent of the [[EpilepticTrees fan theory]] about Jon's parents.]]
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* LetMeTellYouAStory: LeastIsFirst: During the Battle of the Blackwater, the besieged forces draw back inside the defenses fearing that their own side has set the battlefield ablaze with [[GreekFire wildfire, (a magically enhanced, virtually undousable flame)]]. This lets the forces attacking them get right up to the gates and start trying to batter them down. The soldiers, even the BloodKnight leading them, (who, by the way, got half his face burned off as a kid) refuse to go back and fight. At this point, Tyrion, who has Dwarfism, rides up and tries to get the soldiers to go back into the fight. They refuse. Tyrion then goes to lead the attack himself, shouting at the tough guy soldiers "They say I'm half a man. What does that make the lot of you?" True to form, that shames enough of them into fighting that they make a difference in the tide of battle.
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** Ygritte tells Jon about Bael the Bard's song. [[spoiler:It is ''very'' reminiscent of the [[EpilepticTrees fan theory]] about Jon's parents.]]
* LetMeTellYouAStory:
** Ygritte tells Jon about Bael the Bard's song. [[spoiler:It is ''very'' reminiscent of the [[EpilepticTrees fan theory]] about Jon's parents.]]
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* LameRhymeDodge: When Arya Stark gets into a fight while travelling undercover with recruits for the Night's Watch, she looses her head and screams "Winterfell!" her home castle as a battle cry. When another boy mentions this to her friend [[SecretKeeper Gendry]] claims all she was "Go to Hell!" and warns Arya to say the same thing if asked.
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* LameRhymeDodge: When Arya Stark gets into a fight while travelling undercover with recruits for the Night's Watch, she looses loses her head in the heat of battle and screams "Winterfell!" "Winterfell!", the name of her home castle castle, as a battle cry. When another boy mentions this to her friend [[SecretKeeper Gendry]] Gendry]], he claims all she was "Go to Hell!" and later warns Arya to say the same thing if asked.
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* LameRhymeDodge: When Arya Stark gets into a fight while travelling undercover with recruits for the Night's Watch, she looses her head and screams "Winterfell!" her home castle as a battle cry. When another boy mentions this to her friend [[SecretKeeper Gendry]] claims all she was "Go to Hell!" and warns Arya to say the same thing if asked.
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* HillbillyIncest: Craster is the MedievalEuropeanFantasy version of a hillbilly. He's the bastard son of a member of the Night's Watch and a Wildling woman, but he's part of neither Westerosi nor Wildling society. He lives in an isolated, rundown shack in the middle of the forest with his BigScrewedUpFamily. He has 19 "wives" because for generations he has been marrying his daughters, siring more children on them, and keeping the daughters and leaving his sons to die of exposure or be taken by ice zombies.
-->'''Sam:''' Dolorous Edd says Craster's a terrible savage. He marries his daughters and obeys no laws but those he makes himself.
-->'''Sam:''' Dolorous Edd says Craster's a terrible savage. He marries his daughters and obeys no laws but those he makes himself.
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* Catelyn Stark follows the negotiations between the kings on the march and the tidings at Riverrun.
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* Theon Greyjoy and Bran Stark narrate the events on the Iron Islands and the North.
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* Jon Snow and Daenerys Targaryen continue to give us glimpses beyond the Wall and across the sea respectively.
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* Theon Greyjoy and narrates the events in the Iron Islands.
* Bran Stark narrate the eventson the Iron Islands and the North.
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* Jon Snowand shows us what's happening beyond the Wall.
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: [[spoiler:Theon]] takes a castle with a tiny number of men through a cunning ruse. Looting the place and taking hostages would have been a great coup, but instead he tries to hold it with a few raiders.
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** [[spoiler:Theon]] takes a castle with a tiny number of men through a cunning ruse. Looting the place and taking hostages would have been a great coup, but instead he tries to hold it with a few raiders.
** [[spoiler:Theon]] takes a castle with a tiny number of men through a cunning ruse. Looting the place and taking hostages would have been a great coup, but instead he tries to hold it with a few raiders.
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-->'''Catelyn''': Listen to yourselves! If you were sons of mine, I would bang your heads together and lock you in a bedchamber until you remembered that you were brothers.
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-->'''Cersei''': Gods be good. I'm starting to believe that ''Robert'' was the clever one.
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** When Cersei sees Renly's knights participating in tournaments at camp, she dismisses them as "knights of summer" who know nothing of war.
** Theon says, "This is no game, Bran," when [[spoiler:announcing that he's taken over Winterfell.]] Ironically, ''Theon'' is the one who failed to take the situation seriously enough.
** When Cersei sees Renly's knights participating in tournaments at camp, she dismisses them as "knights of summer" who know nothing of war.
** Theon says, "This is no game, Bran," when [[spoiler:announcing that he's taken over Winterfell.]] Ironically, ''Theon'' is the one who failed to take the situation seriously enough.
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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: When Cersei threatens to kill Shae (or who she thinks is Shae) if her sons come to harm, Tyrion protests he wouldn't hurt his nephews.
-->'''Tyrion''': What sort of man do you take me for?\\
'''Cersei''': A small and twisted one.
-->'''Tyrion''': What sort of man do you take me for?\\
'''Cersei''': A small and twisted one.
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* WhatWouldXDo: Tyrion wonders how his brother Jaime would react when Cersei supposedly takes Shae hostage, but realizes Jaime's normal approach of killing whoever in his way wouldn't work for Tyrion, so he instead considers what his father Tywin would do.
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* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: Shae, when talking about Lollys, notes, "She sleeps and she eats. Sometimes she falls asleep while she's eating."
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** [[spoiler:Renly's death by Stannis' shadow. Though this depends on your view of Stannis and Renly.]]
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** [[spoiler:Renly's death by Stannis' shadow. Though this depends on your view shadow results in most of Stannis and Renly.Renly's forces going over to Stannis' side, enabling him to go from an underdog to the greatest threat to King's Landing.]]
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* FlowerMotif: Blue winter roses appear several times
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** Daenerys sees a vision about her father Aerys, completely gone mad, who is ranting ''Let him [Robert] be king over charred bones and cooked meat.'' [[spoiler:In ''Literature/AStormOfSwords'', Jaime tells us he was planning to burn the city with wildfire, and that's why Jaime killed him. She also sees the Red Wedding, and possibly Quentyn Martell.]]
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** Daenerys sees a vision about her father Aerys, completely gone mad, who is ranting ''Let him [Robert] be king over charred bones and cooked meat.'' [[spoiler:In In ''Literature/AStormOfSwords'', Jaime [[spoiler:Jaime tells us he was planning to burn the city with wildfire, and that's why Jaime killed him. She also sees the Red Wedding, and possibly Quentyn Martell.]]
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* HiddenDisdainReveal: More like Hidden wanting you dead reveal, as Tyrion and Cersei's relationship has always been a hostile one, but Cersei finally reveals to Tyrion during their dinner together that she does want him dead, admitting that she has thought of slitting his throat more than once, and only stopped because Jaime would never forgive her for that. This reveal, and Cersei's holding of and threat to harm Alayaya, and Tyrion's own threat to harm Tommen if anything happens to her despite not meaning it, is what pushes their relation beyong the point of no return and truly make [[SelfFulfillingProphecy Tyrion Cersei's enemy.]]
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* HiddenDisdainReveal: More like Hidden wanting "wanting you dead dead" reveal, as Tyrion and Cersei's relationship has always been a hostile one, but Cersei finally reveals to Tyrion during their dinner together that she does want him dead, admitting that she has thought of slitting his throat more than once, and only stopped because Jaime would never forgive her for that. This reveal, and Cersei's holding of and threat to harm Alayaya, and Tyrion's own threat to harm Tommen if anything happens to her despite not meaning it, is what pushes their relation beyong the point of no return and truly make [[SelfFulfillingProphecy Tyrion Cersei's enemy.]]
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* HiddenDisdainReveal: More like Hidden wanting you dead reveal, as Tyrion and Cersei's relationship has always been a hostile one, but Cersei finally reveals to Tyrion during their dinner together that she does want him dead, admitting that she has thought of slitting his throat more than once, and only stopped because Jaime would never forgive her for that. This reveal, and Cersei's holding of and threat to harm Alayaya, and Tyrion's own threat to harm Tommen if anything happens to her despite not meaning it, is what pushes their relation beyong the point of no return and truly make [[SelfFulfillingProphecy Tyrion Cersei's enemy.]]
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* TheQuest: At the end of the book [[spoiler:Bran and his FiveManBand run to The Wall to find the Three-Eyed Crow.]]
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* TheQuest: At the end of the book [[spoiler:Bran and his FiveManBand team run to The Wall to find the Three-Eyed Crow.]]
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* CruelMercy: Played with. Sansa, not wanting Joffrey to have Ser Dontos murdered for showing up drunk and half-naked to his nameday joust, plants the idea that it would be crueler to strip him of his knighthood and for him to live as a fool rather than having him executed.
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* CruelMercy: Played with. Sansa, not wanting Joffrey to have Ser Dontos murdered for showing up drunk and half-naked to his nameday joust, plants the idea that it would be crueler to strip him of his knighthood and for him to live as a fool rather than having him executed. While it appeals to Joffrey's sadism (aided by some quick BS about it being unlucky to kill somsone on your nameday), Dontos himself is very grateful to be spared.
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* LetMeTellYouAStory: Ygritte tells Jon about Bael the Bard's song. [[spoiler:It is ''very'' reminiscent of the [[EpilepticTrees fan theory]] about Jon Snow's parents.]]
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* LetMeTellYouAStory: Ygritte tells Jon about Bael the Bard's song. [[spoiler:It is ''very'' reminiscent of the [[EpilepticTrees fan theory]] about Jon Snow's Jon's parents.]]
* LittlePeopleAreSurreal: Before entering the House of the Undying where she witnesses numerous bizarre visions, Dany is given a glass of shade-of-the-evening to drink by the tiniest dwarf she has ever seen.
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-->'''Cersei:''' Robert wanted to be loved. My brother Tyrion has the same disease. Do you want to be loved, Sansa?
-->'''Sansa:''' Everyone wants to be loved.
-->'''Cersei:''' I see flowering hasn’t made you any brighter. Sansa, permit me to share a bit of womanly wisdom with you on this very special day. Love is poison. A sweet poison, yes, but it will kill you all the same.
-->'''Sansa:''' Everyone wants to be loved.
-->'''Cersei:''' I see flowering hasn’t made you any brighter. Sansa, permit me to share a bit of womanly wisdom with you on this very special day. Love is poison. A sweet poison, yes, but it will kill you all the same.
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'''Sansa:''' Everyone wants to be
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'''Cersei:''' I see flowering hasn’t made you any brighter. Sansa, permit me to share a bit of womanly wisdom with you on this very special day. Love is poison. A sweet poison, yes, but it will kill you all the same.
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* RuinsForRuinsSake: While traveling in the red wastes, Daenerys' ''khalasar'' comes across the ruins of an ancient city, which they name Vaes Tolorro (Dothraki for "city of bones"). Though long abandoned, it has a well filled with fresh water, an orchard full of fruit trees, and shade from the desert sun.
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* RuinsForRuinsSake: While traveling in the red wastes, Daenerys' ''khalasar'' comes across the ruins of an ancient city, which they name Vaes Tolorro (Dothraki for "city of bones"). Though long abandoned, it has a well filled with fresh clean water, an orchard full of fruit trees, and shade from the desert sun.sun, and enough grass to sustain a small herd of horses.
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* RuinsForRuinsSake: While traveling in the red wastes, Daenerys' ''khalasar'' comes across the ruins of an ancient city, which they name Vaes Tolorro (Dothraki for "city of bones"). Though long abandoned, it has a well, well filled with fresh water, an orchard full of fruit trees, and shade from the desert sun.
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-->'''Tyrion''': [[SarcasmMode Sweet Cersei, always striving to make the smallfolk love us]].
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* RevealingCoverup: When the Small Council is discussing Stannis' letter that declares Cersei's children to be bastards and himself to be the rightful king, she suggests that anyone heard speaking of incest or calling Joffrey a bastard should be beheaded. [[ProfessionalButtKisser Pycelle agrees]], but Tyrion replies with:
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* RevealingCoverup: When the Small Council is discussing Stannis' letter that declares Cersei's children to be bastards and himself to be the rightful king, she suggests that anyone heard speaking of incest or calling Joffrey a bastard should be beheaded.[[TongueTrauma should have their tongue cut out]]. [[ProfessionalButtKisser Pycelle agrees]], but Tyrion replies with:
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* VillainousDemotivator: When Tyrion gathers a collection of blacksmiths, wanting to hire them to [[spoiler: forge a chain across the harbour to impede Stannis's fleet]], the blacksmiths mention that Cersei has hired them to make weapons and armour for her soldiers, and threatened any smith who doesn't meet their quota will get their hands crushed on their own anvil. An exasperated Tyrion insists he won't let Cersei go through with it.
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* VillainousDemotivator: When Tyrion gathers commands a collection of blacksmiths, wanting to hire them blacksmiths to [[spoiler: forge a chain across the harbour to impede Stannis's fleet]], the blacksmiths mention that Cersei has hired them to make weapons and armour for her soldiers, and threatened any smith who doesn't meet their quota will get their hands crushed on their own anvil. An exasperated Tyrion insists he won't let Cersei go through with it.
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** Stannis tells Catelyn that he brought his suspicions Joffrey and his siblings were illegitimate to Jon Arryn specifically to avoid this; Robert would have dismissed such accusations coming from Stannis as an attempt to advance himself up the line of succesion, but would be more inclined to trust the word of his old mentor and ParentalSubstitute Jon.
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** Stannis tells Catelyn that he brought his suspicions Joffrey and his siblings were illegitimate to Jon Arryn specifically to avoid this; Robert would have dismissed such accusations coming from Stannis as an attempt to advance himself up the line of succesion, succession, but he would be more inclined to trust the word of his old mentor and ParentalSubstitute Jon.