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Judging from the unabridged page, this only seems to apply to superpowers. I also did some more trimming, though I'm still working on conciseness.
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A braggart who has the skills/powers to back up their ego.
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They know they have superpowers, and [[{{Pride}} they have the ego to show]].
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I specified that the character in question's Pride is due to their superpowers (which is stated in the unabridged version), the original description seem to imply they can arrogant due to being powerful without having superpowers. (I hope I worded that well lol.)
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They know they're powerful, and [[{{Pride}} they have the ego to show]].
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They know they're powerful, they have superpowers, and [[{{Pride}} they have the ego to show]].
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-->[-I know that [[SmugSuper page]] is strong, but damn they're arrogant!-]
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-->[-I know that the [[SmugSuper page]] unabridged version]] is strong, but damn they're arrogant!-]
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They knows they're powerful, and [[{{Pride}} he has the ego to show]].
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They knows know they're powerful, and [[{{Pride}} he has they have the ego to show]].
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-->[-I know that [[SmugSuper page]] is strong, but damn he's arrogant!-]
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-->[-I know that [[SmugSuper page]] is strong, but damn he's they're arrogant!-]
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He knows he's powerful, and [[{{Pride}} he has the ego to show]].
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[-I know that [[SmugSuper page]] is strong, but damn he's arrogant!-]
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He knows he's powerful, and he has the ego to show.
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He knows he's powerful, and [[{{Pride}} he has the ego to show.show]].
