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The key point is to have it start off sensibly. This one doesn't quite. How is the laconic version a trunk? It's the smallest one of the bunch, save for the analysis page, which simply says "Click the edit button to start this new page''. That thing on the end was like a big painting with a big splotchy mark on it where the painter's brush slipped. The artist gets angry with himself and auctions off the piece. It then gets bought by a Cloud Cuckoo Lander private collecter who mistook it for avant-garde piece hangs it up on the wall of and it hangs there in the museum, gathering dust and people's confused stares, like most other avant-garde art and now I'm sounding like Yahtzee.
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Ellipses are a lousy way to impart information.
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