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''[[Film/ANewHope StarWars]]'' except the emperor is a space ghost living on the moon.

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''[[Film/ANewHope StarWars]]'' Star Wars]]'' except the emperor is a space ghost living on the moon.
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modified Laconic entry to shift focus on Cecil\'s primary action(\"walk\" sounded too specific and mundane) and to eliminate the reference to \"hell\"(which gave it too much importance considering that it isn\'t an actual place in the game, imo) and also to add weight to the \"saving the world\" part(instead of it being somewhat of an afterthought); it still feels too long for my tastes, but an epic game is hard to condense efficiently, so feel free to modify further or revert if you want. BTW: I resisted the urge to simply say \"A long Knight\'s Journey into day\", lol.


A knight walks a long hard road out of hell to redeem himself and save the world in the process.

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A An errant knight walks a long hard road out of hell to redeem renounces his former ways and helps both himself and save his friends, with the ultimate fates of the world and the moon in the process.balance.
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-->[-Go to the [[FinalFantasyIV Unabridged Article]]. It's not half as bad as the [[ThatOneLevel Sealed Cave.]]-]

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-->[-Go to the [[FinalFantasyIV [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyIV Unabridged Article]]. It's not half as bad as the [[ThatOneLevel Sealed Cave.]]-]

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A knight changes professions to save the world.

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A knight changes professions walks a long hard road out of hell to redeem himself and save the world.world in the process.

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--->[-Go to the [[FinalFantasyIV Unabridged Article]]. It's not half as bad as the [[ThatOneLevel Sealed Cave.]]-]
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