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If your audience doesn't care about the characters, they wouldn't care less about the story.
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If your audience doesn't care about the characters, they wouldn't won't care less about the story.
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Isn't "would care less" incorrect usage? It suggests that the audience still cares when this sentence is suggesting they don't care at all.
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If your audience doesn't care about the characters, they would care less about the story.
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If your audience doesn't care about the characters, they would wouldn't care less about the story.
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If your audience doesn't care about your characters, they won't care about your story.
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If your audience doesn't care about your the characters, they won't would care less about your the story.
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-->[-...but they may care enough to read [[EightDeadlyWords the full article]] explaining why-]
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-->[-...but they may care enough to read [[EightDeadlyWords the full article]] unabridged version]] explaining why-]why.-]
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The Audience has no interests in the fate or exploits of the characters.
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