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-->"Rheinhardt! I forgive you!" She cried, in a voice full if incongruous happiness. "I forgive me! I forgive us both!"
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-->"Rheinhardt! I forgive you!" She cried, in a voice full if of incongruous happiness. "I forgive me! I forgive us both!"
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* After Eric has been killed and Bella has accepted Duke Sebastian's proposal she gets a visit from her father and stepmother. Her stepmother takes Bella aside and asks her if either Sebastian or Eric had been unchivalrous toward her. She even threatens to do something horrible to them if they have, Eric being dead is no obstacle for her. Pretty sweet in a world where stepmothers are evil by default thanks to the Tradition.
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* After Eric [[spoiler: Eric]] has been killed and [[spoiler: Bella has accepted Duke Sebastian's proposal proposal]], she gets a visit from her father and stepmother. Her stepmother takes Bella aside and asks her if either Sebastian or Eric had been unchivalrous toward her. She even threatens to do something horrible to them if they have, [[spoiler: Eric being dead dead]] is no obstacle for her. Pretty sweet in a world where stepmothers are evil by default thanks to the Tradition.
** There's a small Foreshadowing of this when Bella realizes that the Tradition had been meddling with her relationship with her stepmother BUT because Bella was such a control freak in maintaining her father's household (helped that Bella was 13 when her father remarried), the stepmother and Bella were able to have a polite though distant and slightly chilly relationship at the very least and Bella could have a genuinely loving, caring relationship with her stepsisters. Bella then feels genuinely remorseful for having discounted her stepmother for all those years.
** There's a small Foreshadowing of this when Bella realizes that the Tradition had been meddling with her relationship with her stepmother BUT because Bella was such a control freak in maintaining her father's household (helped that Bella was 13 when her father remarried), the stepmother and Bella were able to have a polite though distant and slightly chilly relationship at the very least and Bella could have a genuinely loving, caring relationship with her stepsisters. Bella then feels genuinely remorseful for having discounted her stepmother for all those years.
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* Luna sacrificing herself to save Siegfried from being killed and using her freely given life blood to heal Leopold. A tearjerker from the comic relief.
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* [[HeroicSacrifice Luna sacrificing herself to save Siegfried from being killed and using her freely given life blood to heal Leopold. Leopold.]] A tearjerker from the comic relief.
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* After Eric has been killed and Bella has accepted Duke Sebastian's proposal she gets a visit from her father and stepmother. Her stepmother takes Bella aside and asks her if either Sebastian or Eric had been unchivalrous toward her. She even threatens to do something horrible to them if they have, Eric being dead is no obstacle for her. Pretty sweet in a world where stepmothers are evil.
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* After Eric has been killed and Bella has accepted Duke Sebastian's proposal she gets a visit from her father and stepmother. Her stepmother takes Bella aside and asks her if either Sebastian or Eric had been unchivalrous toward her. She even threatens to do something horrible to them if they have, Eric being dead is no obstacle for her. Pretty sweet in a world where stepmothers are evil.
evil by default thanks to the Tradition.
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[[WMG: The Sleeping Beauty]]
* Luna sacrificing herself to save Siegfried from being killed and using her freely given life blood to heal Leopold. A tearjerker from the comic relief.
* Earlier Leopold promises to help Siegfried escape from his Doom, even if he has to get some wench drunk and put her in a circle of fire.
* Luna sacrificing herself to save Siegfried from being killed and using her freely given life blood to heal Leopold. A tearjerker from the comic relief.
* Earlier Leopold promises to help Siegfried escape from his Doom, even if he has to get some wench drunk and put her in a circle of fire.
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-->In that moment the sky opened, and glory came.
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-->In that moment the sky opened, and glory came.came.
[[WMG: Beauty and the Werewolf]]
* After Eric has been killed and Bella has accepted Duke Sebastian's proposal she gets a visit from her father and stepmother. Her stepmother takes Bella aside and asks her if either Sebastian or Eric had been unchivalrous toward her. She even threatens to do something horrible to them if they have, Eric being dead is no obstacle for her. Pretty sweet in a world where stepmothers are evil.
* Bella and Sebastian finding out that his old servants were staunchly loyal to him and never left.
[[WMG: Beauty and the Werewolf]]
* After Eric has been killed and Bella has accepted Duke Sebastian's proposal she gets a visit from her father and stepmother. Her stepmother takes Bella aside and asks her if either Sebastian or Eric had been unchivalrous toward her. She even threatens to do something horrible to them if they have, Eric being dead is no obstacle for her. Pretty sweet in a world where stepmothers are evil.
* Bella and Sebastian finding out that his old servants were staunchly loyal to him and never left.
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* Guiliette the Willi getting her redemption.
--->"Rheinhardt! I forgive you!" She cried, in a voice full if incongruous happiness. "I forgive me! I forgive us both!"
--->In that moment the sky opened, and glory came.
--->"Rheinhardt! I forgive you!" She cried, in a voice full if incongruous happiness. "I forgive me! I forgive us both!"
--->In that moment the sky opened, and glory came.
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* Guiliette the Willi Wili getting her redemption.
--->"Rheinhardt! -->"Rheinhardt! I forgive you!" She cried, in a voice full if incongruous happiness. "I forgive me! I forgive us both!"
--->In -->In that moment the sky opened, and glory came.
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-->"Rheinhardt! I forgive you!" She cried, in a voice full if incongruous happiness. "I forgive me! I forgive us both!"
In that moment the sky opened, and glory came.
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Guiliette the Willi getting her redemption.
"Rheinhardt! I forgive you!" She cried, in a voice full if incongruous happiness. "I forgive me! I forgive us both!"
"Rheinhardt! I forgive you!" She cried, in a voice full if incongruous happiness. "I forgive me! I forgive us both!"
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[[WMG: Fortune's Fool]]
* Guiliette the Willi getting her redemption.
"Rheinhardt! -->"Rheinhardt! I forgive you!" She cried, in a voice full if incongruous happiness. "I forgive me! I forgive us both!"
* Guiliette the Willi getting her redemption.
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Guiliette the Willi getting her redemtion.
''Rheinhardt! I forgive you!'' She cried, in a voice full if incongruous happiness. "I forgive me! I forgive us both!"
''Rheinhardt! I forgive you!'' She cried, in a voice full if incongruous happiness. "I forgive me! I forgive us both!"
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Guiliette the Willi getting her redemtion.
''Rheinhardt!redemption.
"Rheinhardt! I forgiveyou!'' you!" She cried, in a voice full if incongruous happiness. "I forgive me! I forgive us both!"
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Guiliette the Willi getting her redemtion.
''Rheinhardt! I forgive you!'' She cried, in a voice full if incongruous happiness. "I forgive me! I forgive us both!"
In that moment the sky opened, and glory came.
''Rheinhardt! I forgive you!'' She cried, in a voice full if incongruous happiness. "I forgive me! I forgive us both!"
In that moment the sky opened, and glory came.
