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* Billy trying to get Harry out of his Grave Peril induced funk at the start of the story.
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* Billy trying to get Harry out of his Grave Peril ''Grave Peril'' induced funk at the start of the story.
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* Harry and Murphy have an especially sweet and close relationship here, with what she went through in the previous book making her more vulnerable, and Harry swearing that he won't let anything like it happen again.
** Also, Murphy letting Harry put a defensive charm on her. Not that she has any reason to doubt him, but she's so scarred from her previous experiences that seeing an approaching spell is almost enough to break her. One would expect her to be too shaken to allow any spell on her, but she lets Harry do it without any exitation. It speaks volumes about how much she trusts him.
** Also, Murphy letting Harry put a defensive charm on her. Not that she has any reason to doubt him, but she's so scarred from her previous experiences that seeing an approaching spell is almost enough to break her. One would expect her to be too shaken to allow any spell on her, but she lets Harry do it without any exitation. It speaks volumes about how much she trusts him.
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* Harry and Murphy have an especially sweet and close relationship here, with what she went through in the previous book book, making her more vulnerable, and Harry swearing that he won't let anything like it happen again.
** Harry deciding to let Murphy in on the secret of the White Council and the Laws, explaining a lot of his actions during the previous books.
** Also, Murphy letting Harry put a defensive charm on her. Not that she has any reason to doubt him, but she's so scarred from her previous experiences that seeing an approaching spell is almost enough to break her. One would expect her to be too shaken to allow any spell on her, but she lets Harry do it without anyexitation.hesitation. It speaks volumes about how much she trusts him.
** Harry deciding to let Murphy in on the secret of the White Council and the Laws, explaining a lot of his actions during the previous books.
** Also, Murphy letting Harry put a defensive charm on her. Not that she has any reason to doubt him, but she's so scarred from her previous experiences that seeing an approaching spell is almost enough to break her. One would expect her to be too shaken to allow any spell on her, but she lets Harry do it without any
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* The fire forged friendship between Fix, Meryl and Lily. Even Ace was, in a way, trying to keep his remaining friends safe.
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* The fire forged friendship between Fix, Meryl and Lily. Even Ace was, in a way, trying to keep his remaining friends safe.safe.
* Lily deciding to repay Harry for saving her life by having the brownies clean his apartment every day. Given he's been a wreck for weeks on end, it says quite a lot for him to have clean living quarters.
* Billy inviting Harry to their D&D sessions.
* Lily deciding to repay Harry for saving her life by having the brownies clean his apartment every day. Given he's been a wreck for weeks on end, it says quite a lot for him to have clean living quarters.
* Billy inviting Harry to their D&D sessions.
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* ''It was [[spoiler: Meryl. [[HeroicSacrifice She'd Chosen.]]]]''
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* The late Summer Knight Ronald Reuel taking the four Winter changelings under his protection to guard them from Fae politics and the general nasty side effects of being connected to the Courts.It's implied that he was a parental substitute, as suggested by the framed photo of their having fun in Disney Land.
* The fire forged friendship between Fix, Meryl and Lily. Even Ace was, in a way, trying to keep his remaining friends safe.
* The late Summer Knight Ronald Reuel taking the four Winter changelings under his protection to guard them from Fae politics and the general nasty side effects of being connected to the Courts.It's implied that he was a parental substitute, as suggested by the framed photo of their having fun in Disney Land.
* The fire forged friendship between Fix, Meryl and Lily. Even Ace was, in a way, trying to keep his remaining friends safe.
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* While it's unsurprising that Ebenezar backs Harry, it's heartwarming to see Listens-to-Wind and Martha Liberty, as well as (it's implied) a significant number of the White Council, supporting him in his decision. Ebenezar also believes that Simon would've backed Harry as well, which would have been especially heartwarming, given that Harry is part of Simon's MasterApprenticeChain.
* Despite being Langtry's choice, Schneider turns down the opportunity to serve on the Senior Council, no small honour, in favour of Ebenezar.
* Despite being Langtry's choice, Schneider turns down the opportunity to serve on the Senior Council, no small honour, in favour of Ebenezar.
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* Harry finding out [[spoiler: Elaine]] is alive, and didn't betray him willingly. [[spoiler: Doubles down when she binds him at the climax, but uses a binding and an out-of-character attitude to tip him off to a way out.]]
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** Also, Murphy letting Harry put a defensive charm on her. Not that she has any reason to doubt him, but she's so scarred from her previous experiences that seeing an approaching spell is almost enough to break her. One would expect her to be too shaken to allow any spell on her, but she lets Harry do it without any exitation. It speaks volumes about how much she trusts him.
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* ''It was [[spoiler: Meryl. [[HeroicSacrifice She'd Chosen.]]''
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* Harry and Murphy have an especially sweet and close relationship here, with what she went through in the previous book making her more vulnerable, and Harry swearing that he won't let anything like it happen again.
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* Harry and Murphy have an especially sweet and close relationship here, with what she went through in the previous book making her more vulnerable, and Harry swearing that he won't let anything like it happen again.again.
* Fix attacking [[spoiler: Lloyd Slate, the Winter Knight, who had terrorized him and his friends for years,]] just because he hurt [[spoiler: Meryl]].
* ''It was [[spoiler: Meryl. [[HeroicSacrifice She'd Chosen.]]''
* Fix attacking [[spoiler: Lloyd Slate, the Winter Knight, who had terrorized him and his friends for years,]] just because he hurt [[spoiler: Meryl]].
* ''It was [[spoiler: Meryl. [[HeroicSacrifice She'd Chosen.]]''
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