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* Art goes back to Miami and finds that his sister founded a shelter for disabled kids, in memory of his brother.
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* Art goes back to Miami and finds that his sister founded a shelter for disabled kids, in memory of his brother.brother.
* There's moment in which Art locks himself in his room in despair after not dying on Virmire. Tali ends up hacking the door open, and Art spills his entire real history to Tali, who listens (with some disbelief at first). One YouAreNotAlone speech later, and Art ends up crying against her shoulder.
* There's moment in which Art locks himself in his room in despair after not dying on Virmire. Tali ends up hacking the door open, and Art spills his entire real history to Tali, who listens (with some disbelief at first). One YouAreNotAlone speech later, and Art ends up crying against her shoulder.
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* Art finds a memorial to his brother when he goes back to Miami.
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* Art finds a memorial to his brother when he goes back to Miami.Miami and finds that his sister founded a shelter for disabled kids, in memory of his brother.
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* Tropers/HerrWozzeck re-writing a lot of Mass Vexations 3 counts as this as well, showing that he can take constructive criticism to heart.
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* Tropers/HerrWozzeck re-writing a lot of Mass Vexations 3 counts as this as well, showing that he can take constructive criticism to heart.heart.
* Art finds a memorial to his brother when he goes back to Miami.
* Art finds a memorial to his brother when he goes back to Miami.
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* HerrWozzeck re-writing a lot of Mass Vexations 3 counts as this as well, showing that he can take constructive criticism to heart.
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* HerrWozzeck Tropers/HerrWozzeck re-writing a lot of Mass Vexations 3 counts as this as well, showing that he can take constructive criticism to heart.
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* Art plays counsellor to a random asari on the Citadel. He ends up convincing her not to commit suicide, gives her enough money to go somewhere else, and starts a chain of events that saves a number of lives. He didn't have a clue who she was, he just did it because it seemed like a good idea.
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* Art plays counsellor to a random asari on the Citadel. He ends up convincing her not to commit suicide, gives her enough money to go somewhere else, and starts a chain of events that saves a number of lives. He didn't have a clue who she was, he just did it because it seemed like a good idea.idea.
* HerrWozzeck re-writing a lot of Mass Vexations 3 counts as this as well, showing that he can take constructive criticism to heart.
* HerrWozzeck re-writing a lot of Mass Vexations 3 counts as this as well, showing that he can take constructive criticism to heart.
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* Art and Tali confessing their love for one another certainly counts.
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* Art and Tali confessing their love for one another certainly counts.counts.
* Art plays counsellor to a random asari on the Citadel. He ends up convincing her not to commit suicide, gives her enough money to go somewhere else, and starts a chain of events that saves a number of lives. He didn't have a clue who she was, he just did it because it seemed like a good idea.
* Art plays counsellor to a random asari on the Citadel. He ends up convincing her not to commit suicide, gives her enough money to go somewhere else, and starts a chain of events that saves a number of lives. He didn't have a clue who she was, he just did it because it seemed like a good idea.
